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laykorn:
Tiffany, this post had my eyes swelled up with tears. I read one of your stories the day I joined Nairaland and since have been following you around. The fact that you made me complete my own story doesn't help matters at all.

But, stopping the story is the best for now. And Tiffany, if ever you decide to post any of your stories again, or even complete this, always remember to do a google search of your posts from time to time to catch the criminals before they post too much of your stories. I do that for every post of my amateur story.

I remember once that a plaigarist was caught and the pressure was made to be so much on him that he created an alternate account to beg desperately for forgiveness. I think that was last year. But now, we're talking of 5 or 6 criminals. Anybody who has not written one will not understand why this brings tears to my eyes.

Remember to give me a mention if you ever decide to complete this or decide to start a new story.

I'll miss your posts, big sister.
Ayamlaykorn

Hy dear, longest of time, hope you are good? I don't think I will ever post any of my work on Nairaland again but will let you know when I start writing again.
So you finally finished your story? Wow congratulations, how can I read it? Can you pleasse give me the links to that facebook page you saw my work on? Thanks

crislyn:
Awww..this is sad. After almost a month of absence I came back now to meet this. I'm going to miss u Tiffanyj. What those people are doing is not right.

Seriously dear, I had no choice but to put the story on hold. How are you doing?

omorttee4u:
I came accross this story recently and have read other two. Just this couldn't finish reading it. Because of the so called plagiarsm .I think Seun should do something about this..so many people have been discouraged from posting their talent on here . I really don't blame them. They have to protect their work too.

Seun too should understand that, there are a lot of trafic brought into this Literature section. When good writters have been discouraged. You lose literature fans of Nairaland.

I suggest ,you build a code on Literature section that will never let anybody copy or even paste on Nairalan Literature section. I believe , this will protect your Nairaland fans and be confidence to post their talent here.

When Tiff. You are just a good writter. Wish yoou success on you endeavour.

Thanks, Sir,for reading my stories and I'm so glad you found them interesting. Seun should think about what you said.

Marynneka:
Tiffanyj dear don't worry God will fight for you. Hw re you doing? It been a while my dear.

I'm doing great, just a bit busy these days. How are you doing, ma?

Calmdove:
Am inviting you guys to come and read dis story :candy,Tiffanyj,prettydiva89,Dgty7, flakkydagirl, Esixlove, kingphilip,bibie01,faithomoh24, uzolexis, teewai3 and nairaland 5&6 "zyzxx and toykathy" i will be glad if you respond to the invitation

thanks for inviting me, dear.

thronekid:
Thanks cutie. Omo see blushing. Lol, blacks dy blush? As for Ade's mum, she's financially bouyant, all thanks to her going out with men of high level, we cnt call it prostitution buh maybe .... Wil do, fill in d gap for me o, hope i'm cleared?
Once again, thankx sweetie!

prostitution is prostitution, after all, she claims she gives out her body for money. Infact why is she not taking responsibilities for her action? For Godsake the woman have two eyes, ears, arms, hands and legs is prostitution the only work to put food on her table? Why is she living a flamboyant life when she can actually cut her expenses, get a decent job and take care of her self and son?
Again, I think the woman was foolish to have brought her 'lover' home when she knew she has a teenager at home. What moral lesson is she giving him? Believe you me, thronekid, no son will want his mother doing what Ade's mum is doing. I'm just astonish that Ade saw nothing wrong with his mother sleeping around all in the name of providing for him.

Thronekid, you are doing great, and I love you for this but I can't help but to notice that you rushed a particular scene. That scene in which Ade's mum explained to him why she commited fornication. She said she was forced, how? And why? I thought she is doing great financially? Please elaborate on that scene. Best of luck on your exams

Omololamide:
tiff dear, how re u doing.... just checking up on u. tc

I'm doing great, thank you. So how are you doing?

uzolexis:
Tiffanyj, I sent a request to that checkoutiyke's sweg group and he accepted, i went through his page and realised that he published "the reluctant bride" and "a man to call her own". I was shocked, cause i also saw on his wall,some Jesus is this and that(what i'm trying to say is he claims to be a christian). I gave him a piece of my mind and told him he will pay. I don't care if he blocks me but some lawyers need to make money on this guy's head real soon, and use him as a scape goat.

Uzo, maybe you made a mistake, maybe you wanted to write post and you wrote published, surely, no sane man will publish another person's sweat. Leme contact u sef

Harjibolar01, thanks for inviting me. Daughterzion, I'm so amaze that a secondary student is writing this, and I must say that you are doing a great job, keep it up my dear. Now my observations,
1. You didn't chapter your work. Please endeavor to do that. Its important you do it.
2. Mrs Dan and Lilian are proper noun. Every first letter of a proper known should be written in capital letter. You sometimes forget this rule. Take note of this.
3. Now, I have a question for you, how old is Lilian? Be specific.
4. Your second to the last update, the phone conversation between Lilian, Jude and Leo, why not write them using quotation marks. Thats how to write a prose. Always insert your characters' conversation in quotation mark, never forget this'.
5. You are rushing the story, why is it so. A writer must follow the storyline in sequential order.
6. You need to build suspense. It makes your readers ask for more.
7. The last update, Lilian's aunty invited her to a wedding, later, you said they were going to a party. Modify that.
Lastly, are you an art student or a science student?

That is it;suspense! Yeah, this is very much more better. Suspense is what makes readers stick to stories. You are really doing great, sorry my comment came late, I'm sort of busy with some private matters. Just ride on, I will always be here to read your updates, although I might be a bit late, sometimes.

I heard my name, and so, I answered. Please give me time to read this work

Oga chistar, whats stoping you from updating na?

thronekid:
Firstly, i'm glad you took your time to correct my errors and air your views. Sincerely, i'm glad you did.
Now to the questions:
1. Lizabeth's dad according to her mum eloped with his secretary shortlx after her birth.
2. Although Jenny and Ade were cousins, the relationship actually took place irrespective of their ties. We might blame it on their young age then.
Also,as regard jenny's re-surfacing, you'l just relax and watch.
3. Ade's mum is wealthy as we knw already but her work? That's one of the exciting suspense.
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. Now, i'l endeavour to introduce suspence,reduce the story's frequent flash-backs and plan the story sequentially.
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. Once again, thankz sweetie!

Goodmorning to you, thanks for taking your time to explain things for me. I now get it

thronekid:
Been long o cutie, hope nthn z wrng?

so so sorry sir, I took long to comment. Just like d9ty7 and others said, you were rushing the story at first and left out important information-description, but I'm glad you're working on these flaws.
I observed something very important that you've left out. Suspence is an important ingredient in writing and your work lack it. Every reader want an update that will make them yarn for more, something to always wish you will update five times in a day. You need to build up suspense in your work for it is what makes readers ask for more.
Again, I observed that you use the flashback method in narating your story but you are over doing it. Why not take your time, organize your plot and narrate it in sequencial order instead of rushing it through flashback?
Furthermore, I might have missed something but if not, what happened to Lizabeth's father. I can't remember you saying anything about him. Is he alive or dead?
I thought you wrote that Jenny is Ade's aunty's daughter? If that is the case, they are cousins. Is it possible that he dated his cousins? You pictured her as a girl who was sexually abused, what really happened or will you re-introduce her as the story unfold and tell us more about her character?
You really are doing great, just know that you've got a follower for I shall follow this story to the end. It's your first story and you are simply amazing.
Oh, and again, where does Ade mother work? Is she so wealthy as to give a seventeen year old five thousand naira to spend for a day?

nanakwame14:
such an amazing story, even tho u lost it, good job Miss Tiff

please can i have your email

ayanicomfortambrose@gmail.com
thanks for reading my story

Goodmorning to you all. Thanks for the encouragement, I really appreciate you guys. Just realised that my stories are being posted in different threads, facebook and blogs and plagiarists are not helping matters. When I try to have a talk with them, they quickly shut me out. The few I met in facebook blocked me from even sending them a message.
I hate to say this but I've lost the zeal and therefore, I'm stopping this work indefinately. I might complete it, I might not but one thing is certain, Some readers wanted Shan's Story and I will be using this opportunity to write it but I won't post it here. For now, I will be around, reading others' stories and enjoying myself.
I'm gonna miss you guys so much because I'm so use to posting and reading your comments. Heemah, how is the clarion call going?

We are waiting for that update oga, ride on.

UkBaby1:
The guy i'm talking abt is called Checkoutiyke's sweg

This is another guy. Hmm

Last week, a very good friend told me that someone is posting my stories on facebook. She was kind enough to give me the name of the group, it is called 'fact on love and is owned by one Babalola Babatunde Innocent. Unfortunately for me, it is a secret group and only members can view it and its contents. Again, that good friend of mine, convince the guy to add me up as his facebook friend which he did. Babalola Babatunde Innocent sent me a friend request which I accepted. I then told him to add me to his secret group, he did and I got access to it and I saw my stories. I asked him a question; where is he copying the stories? His readers began attacking me, calling me an attention seeker. I told them to allow him answer my question.
The guy hastily removed me from the group and I have no access to it. Now tell me, at first, I vow to not complete the story but changed my mind due to my readers. Ukbaby 1 , i don't know if its the same guy we are talking about or another. Uzolexis, this is the disadvantage of posting your work on a social media.

Bhummieluv:
Sup tiff? Ɣ☺ΰ didn't reply my messaqes aqain,hope ŊO̶̷̩̥̊͡ prob bttw tnx 4 d update

I sent you a mail day before yesterday. Check your mail

So sorry i'm just making an update. Uzolexis, I will post what happend between me and and a guy posting my work on facebook later. For now, goodmorning to you all

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Updates coming later, by God's grace. Goodmorning

Shaxee, happy new year, so sorri I couldn't answer your question. I had been so busy lately but I can see that D9ty7 has answered you.

Wishing this wonderful house a very happy new year!

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D9ty7

Update on the way