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It nt an easy task trying to update wit an android fone base on hw it consume megabytes.I think I need to find out if my guy as subscribe cos he promise to b back once he subscribe.

Am loving d story more n more n am sure Richard wil succor to d existence of God.Tosin Bucknor is a living testimony n she could testify to d glory cos she was a victim yet she survived it.

AM LOVING EVERY BIT OF DIS STORY N I HOPE TO C D BEST OF U.FOLLOWING U LIKE KILODE.

THANK GOD U AR BACK N ALSO IN A BETTER SHAPE.WENT TRU D FIRST UPDATE N I REALISE IT WIL B A SUCCESS.DONT ASK ME IF I AV A SPIRIT TALKING TO ME,IT JUST EXPECTED OF ME TO C ANODA MOUTH WATERING BEAUTIFUL N CAPTIVATING STORY DAT WIL GRAP D FRONT PAGE WIT EASE.KEEP UP D GOOD WORK BRO N DONT FORGET WE ALL ARE BEHIND U,COME RAIN OR SHINE.

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On this special day,
i wish you all the very best, all
the joy you can ever have and
may you be blessed abundantly
today, tomorrow and the days
to come! May you have a
fantastic birthday and many
more to come... HAPPY
BIRTHDAY TRYPA!!!!!!

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PrinceAdepoju: Hmmm.
thepatriot prophesied this.

but, that word is kinda harsh sir.
You're not wrong though.


###just passing.

Av I said anything wrong?Just calling ha attention to something she could av done earlier.

Nancydearie: Seconded". T-Dan really has to work on his grammar. He still has a long way to go in improving his writing skills but he is trying. He is good but he has to work on his vocabs. I know that writing a story is not an easy task but u really have to improve

Y ar u just doing d correction wen u could av done it earlier?U allowed a novice do d leading y u follow.Besides I tot u were so close to him on dis forum,dont kw y u ar just correcting him wen u could av called his attention earlier.

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Temitope Daniel

DIDNT LIKE AISHAT FROM D SCRATCH BUT HA NEW LEAF AS REALLY CHANGE MY DESCRIPTION ABOUT HA.TEAM AISHAT N HAKEEM COS DIER LOVE IS REALLY GENUINE N NT DESPERATION.NICE WORK@TDAN.

Happiness is within. It has
nothing to do with how
much applause you get or
how many people praise
you. Happiness comes
when you believe that you
have done something truly
meaningful.I guess d happiness is in u cos ur stories as been a turning point for majority.

Tomison n Tofunmi didnt remember some guys were dere@d swimming pool listening to their conversation.D guys wil only hold Hakeem to ransom cos of wt dey heard from d t's.Job well done Tdan.

Orlolahdey: Nice one bro... I joined nairaland today all because of ur stories...keep it up dearie

Welcome to d one big family.Ur contribution wil b of help in every aspect of dis thread.

Nice update Tdan,but u sti need to watch ur use of english n error like account instead of accountant.All d same u ar getting better n eventually u wil b d best.

Tytylorpe: Oh my God....,pls who 'll save Hakeem nw... I wish 1 of his friend come bk in tym or Azeezat shld come n return his phone bk 2 him because he must nt dead.

try to fix ur typo error cos I kw it was a mistake.

Abbey2580: Tee'Dan! I've never been disappointed reading ur work, i just do imagine ur sense of imagination and composition, av nt seen dz type before. Now you're writing a story based on muslim stuff and u write it as if you're a muslim... quoting qurans, you're really the best!

**Ghost mode deactivated**

I LOVE UR WORKS!

That is y he is d best.

Aishat is a lunatic n she deserve to b move to Yaba left where ha mates belong.I dont just understand y Hakeem keep enduring d pain of falling in lust,cos to me it called madness n it wont yield any gud fruit.As for me oooo,Hakeem must nt end up with Aishat cos he doesn't deserve such matreatment from d one he claim to love.Job well done Tdan.

heemah: @Tipiflexy, u dnt av to qoute the whole update....
i honestly wish Hakeem will fall in luv wv Azeezat, and fgt bou Aishat..she rly nids to learn her lesson d ard way..fnks for d update T.dan..buh dt was too shooooort. #olivertwist#

Didnt u c my apology message?av already apologize cos it was a mistake.

SORRY GUY FOR QUOTING D WHOLE UPDATE,AV DONE IT BEFORE REALISING MY MISTAKE.HOPE I WONT B CRUCIFY BY MY FELLOW NAIRALANDERS?

TemitopeDaniel: EPISODE FOUR.

    Hakeem picked up his mobile phone and dialed Azeezat's mobile number. He glimpsed at his sister and smiled, hoping the plan would work out. But in real sense, Hakeem wouldn't give up on Aishat. He had already fallen so deep into the pit that a day without Aishat wasn't a complete day. He had hoped the plan wouldn't backfire.

    Azeezat who had been discussing with Moyo about Hakeem grinned immediately she saw his name as the caller. She raised her phone and showed Moyo that it was Hakeem.

    Moyo also smiled and winked as she awaited her to pick up the call. Azeezat picked up the call and made up a different voice, making it cooler and sexier. "Azeezat, it's Hakeem." She heard from the other end.

    "I know dear, how are you?" She winked at Moyo and smiled.

    "I'm good. Please I don't know if you are less busy, can you join me at Aroma Foods?" He enquired.

    "Aroma.. along Iwo road right?" She enquired.

    "Sure, there." Hakeem replied.

    "Alright, give me some minutes, I'll be there." She replied and stood up.

    She ended the call and winked at her friend again. "He just called, he is sure not a bastard.." she sat back.

    "Where are you now going to?" Moyo enquired.

    "He said I should come and meet him at Aroma Foods, I think I should go." She replied smiling.

    "You still love the guy that much?" She asked, dropping the glass cup of juice.

    "Ah! Hakeem..." she said the name slowly, giving herself thought of the pasts. "Anyways, you should go quickly, I have to go and check on my boo likewise." She winked and stood up.

    "So, you're leaving already?" She grinned as she asked intentionally. "Won't I leave when you wanna go and meet Hakeem."

    "Anyways, wait and let me dress up so we can leave together." She stood and rushed in while Azeezat sat back.

*******

    Hakeem had ordered for fried rice for his sister and himself. He was eating and gisting his sister about Aishat when he remembered he ought to ask her what bothered him earlier. "Who told you about Aishat and I?"

    "It was your friend, Hastrup." She beamed.

    "I knew it! Anyways, its Azeezat we're waiting for and I pray we meet Aishat there." He said casually as he took a spoon of rice.

    "She should be there and If possible you should even kiss Azeezat before her." She grinned.

    "Halimat! Taqwa(fear Allah) I can't do that and you know that I'm not that kind of guy and besides it's just a game and I love Aishat." He replied.

    "See brother, don't show her love oh, don't call her, no chatting! Leave her to her own, she'll be the one coming back to beg you." Halimat said.

    "But I don't think this will be easy because I really love her." He dropped his spoon and gave her a long look.

    "Bro Hakeem, you better let's do this and get it into her skull. I don't know why you even love her.."

    "Halimat stop! I don't just like those words. I don't only like her but really love her. This is not an issue of criticizing her but trying to change her."

   "Don't take it personal." Halimat smiled.

    Just then, Azeezat walked in slowly, looking around to locate where Hakeem was. She finally saw him and walked up to him with a smile. "Hakeem!" She sat on the empty chair beside him and greeted Halimat.

    "You've grown girl!" Hakeem grinned as he stared at her.

    "You've grown boy!" She imitated him and smiled.

    "Nice to meet you again, but I have to take you somewhere." He stood and picked his phone.

   "Where again? Is this not... em... Halimat?" She pointed to Halimat and smiled.

    "Yeah," Halimat replied and grinned.

    "Wao! You've also grown, how fast time flies..." she pulled her cheeks and stood up.

    "Thanks sister." Halimat smiled.

    "We should leave now because time isn't our friend." Hakeem uttered as he held his car ket with his right hand.

    "Alright, aren't you going with us?" Azeezat asked Halimat.

    "Yeah, I don't think I'm needed." She smiled.

    "Let's go.." Hakeem walked out.

*******

HASTRUP AND UTHMAN got back home at the same time, both looked frustrated and confused. Hastrup couldn't help himself thinking about what his father could have done to Aminat's that could have caused that hatred. He had been trying to link events together but none clicked.

    He knew his father, he wasn't a bad man that could have dome something bad because he was the one that did preach to him about doing bad things. He could vivdly remember the verse of the Quran his father told him to memorize, Say to My servants that they should (only) say those things that are best: for Satan doth
sow dissensions among them: for Satan is to man an avowed enemy. (The Noble Quran,
17:53)

"Uthman, how far now?" He shook him.

"See guy, I no dey at all, I was finished by Shukurat today, only God knows who told her about the pregnancy issue." He replied.

"That mean not only you was finished, I was also finished by Aminat's father. I don't know what I've done but he sent me away." Hastrup clapped his hands together.

"This is too bad, I really know nothing about this useless allegation!" Uthman hissed.

******

    FIDELITY PALACE.

    Aishat was sitting before Malik with smiles on her face as Hakeem walked in. He had told Azeezat that he wished to hold her hand as they walked in though it might be wrong religiously.

    That was what Azeezat had always wished too since she met him again. She waz smiling, who cared about religion anyways?

    Both walked in as planned, Azeezat had been feeling glad that lines were falling in plesant places for her as they walked in. Hakeem had already sighted Aishat's car outside so he was glad mission would be fulfilled successfully.

   
    Aishat looked around, trying to get the exact place she was until he saw him before Malik smiling and Malik was also laughing with her. He felt like disappearing but could sight an empty set beside Aishat's set and pulled Azeezat along with him.

    As Aishat was smiling, she rose her head to see those walking toward them and saw Hakeem and Azeezat. She lost control as she saw them holding hands, was she dreaming or was it a reality?
   

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Changing Aishat is nt an option cos she wil cause more harms dan gud.Pray she wont do something stupid in d next update.

TemitopeDaniel: Morning bosses, update coming soon...

Waiting patiently

Oga ooooo,mo ri emo lagege.Wt definition would I give to dis friendship btw Aishat n Hakeem?lost or love?A o ri iru eleyi ni a nfi deruba oloro.ABEGI TDAN RIDE ON,CNT WAIT TO C D NEXT ACTION.THIS IS JUST D BEGINNING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wasnt aware u av started a new story,u could av notify me tru watsapp@tdan.I think d story is gonna b an interesting one.Following!!!!

GLORY B TO ALMIGHTY GOD FOR DIS INSPIRING,MOTIVATING,AWESOME N MIND BLOWING STORY,MAY GOD BLESS D READERS N D AMAZING WRITER.I MYSELF AS STORY TO TELL CONCERNING SS OOOO,SHE SUFFERED A LOT N I PERTAKE IN IT AS A FAITHFUL BF BUT IT DIDNT END WELL OOOO,PRAY NT TO EXPERIENCE SUCH RELATIONSHIP AGAIN COS I NEVA AD REST OF MIND AS A BF NT TO TALK OF BECOMING A FUTURE HUSBAND.THANKS FOR MAKING IT CLEARER TO PEOPLE@TDAN N DONT STOP IN D SPREAD AGAINST SUCH RELATIONSHIP.

STELLA IS AA NT AS,AS IT WAS SAID 7YRS AGO.I CNT WAIT TO READ HA REACTION N WT NEXT.TDAN U B CORRECT GUY OOOOOOOO