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EPISODE 8 (contd.) Before I could give him a reply, Fabianus let out a chuckle and said; 'Van, you are funny. You are not David and Gustavus is certainly not Golaiath. He is way stronger and more powerful.' Honestly, I don't know why my mouth always fall open when I'm surprised. Yes that's exactly what happened as my mouth just fall open like gate wey no get gateman. 'You are surprised, eh? You shouldn't be my friend,' Fabianus remarked 'Remember I told you I have the Sage's power. I read minds too.' 'Ok. Where exactly is Gustavus now?' I asked weakly, trying my best to mask my confusion, surprise and fear. 'Errm... He is in the Distein forest,' Fabianus replied 'Let me show you a picture of him,' he added as he rose from his seat and walked to a shelf stuffed with books to get the picture. He came back and handed me a small book with the picture of a beast-like giant (or is it a giant-like beast) bowing to a short, stocky man dressed in red and black on it. 'Who is this man?' I asked, pointing to the short man in the picture. 'You mean you don't know him?' Fabianus asked, looking very surprised 'Haven't you read the scroll the Sage gave you?' 'No, I haven't. I can't read Latin,' I replied. 'Ok. I'll give the english version of the scroll,' Fabianus said 'Back to that man in the picture. Well, his name is Justus.' ... Walahi! I don tire for all these 'us' wey dey end these people names o... 'He is a very powerful sorcerer and he is our biggest enemy,' Fabianus continued 'Right now, I think he is in Distein too, building up his immortal army.' 'Immortal whaaaat?' 'Immortal army, yes. He's planning to destroy Casvillé with it. That is why we need your help but we must first retrieve the black sword of the gods because without it you have no power at all.' 'Where is the black sword now?' I asked. 'The sword is in Carzëf, we will go there maybe next week to get the sword back because we must make sure it doesn't fall into the wrong hands,' Fabianus answered. He stood up, signalling the end of our little meeting. I stood up too and we shook hands. 'Here is the english version of that scroll with you. It contains all the information you will need,' Fabianus said, as he gave me the new scroll. 'Thanks,' I muttered and started to make my way towards the door. 'Wait Van,' Fabianus called 'Here is something else you will be needing.' I collected the thing, it was a book; Sun Tzu's The Art of War. ______________ I returned to my room to find the King, the Queen, the Knights and the Noblemen there. ... Kai! Wetin be dis? Another bad news ko?... 'O Athanasius. We hath waited long for thee. The company art ready. Let us go,' the King said. ... Which kain greeting be dis na?... 'Where are we going?' I asked. 'To Austieres. A jousting tournament wilt be held thiter in thy honour,' the King replied. ... Jousting tournament? Wtf does that mean?... To be continued... Happy birthday ENEZE ![]() |
Tovot: look at the time now,and no update!then u want people to comment ehn?No vex my bro, I will soon update. Make sure u comment when I post the update. Thanks ![]() |
Eneze1: good, please update oo and use it as a birthday gift to meI'll do just that, btw happy birthday, many happy returns . |
[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate]You no go update now o, later you go say make I comment...[/quote]. Wait till tomorrow na, I dey too busy to update today.... Buh make sure say u comment wen i update o or else Talmud things go happen . |
Eneze1: nice story line really enjoying it, please when are you going to update now, am really anxiousThanks my sister. I was too busy to update today. I will update tomorrow, God willing . |
oyestephen: Van this update is shortI know it's short. Ayam working on a lengthy update. No vex my bro . |
[quote author=frank3.16]Good, now ensure u continue. Enjoyin it[/quote]Thanks sir. It's a great honour to have you reading my work . |
Ice4jez: u neva finish one u dey tell use about another one.i bow for u oh.bro thank but i can fit read watin go make me vex.but all in all u get talentThanks my bro ![]() |
Here is the link to the short story i dey try write. Help me check am===> www.nairaland.com/1274123/vans-jamb-experience-short-story:). |
barag: vantee u never complete ur own story u dey here dey do editor for another man own if i catch u..... Frank u too much followin u all d wayAh oga barag no vex. I go try complete am soon ![]() ![]() . |
fflamingo: I owe you six pence buh ur update self get as he beNo mind me. I'm thinking of getting a laptop, my kpalasa fone no dey help matters. |
Lwkmd. Your own don finish for d skul be dat o . |
Damex333: I don comment o.Thank you sir ![]() |
[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate]No comment for now[/quote]Oga foxy, why u dey do me like dis na? & you know wetin i fit do for you o. |
EPISODE 8 Some minutes later, I was ushered into the king's chambers. I had changed my school uniform to a buba and sokoto I found in Stan's bag, but I still made sure I put the "serpent of the gods" around my neck o. That is was Casville had turned me to; tie on top buba. The King was already engaged in a conversation with someone before I got there. When they saw me, they stopped and welcomed me profusely. 'Athanasius, Hither art Fabianus, the chief priest of our land,' the King said, after the exchange of pleasantries. I shook hands with Fabianus and appraised him, he looked incredibly young. How did he even become the chief priest sef? He seems to be in his late teens or early twenties. He looked vaguely familiar too, like I had seen him before, but I don't remember ever hearing the name Fabianus before. 'Fabianus, thou wilt go now with Athanasius to thy study to discuss the battle plans with him,' the King said to the silver haired chief priest. ... Battle bawo? Shey dis King dey madt neh? Abi na Igboh im smoke... 'Yes Sire,' Fabianus replied and then beckoned to me to follow him. I did, admist my confusion and surprise. We got to his study after a few minutes walk. The study was so stuffed full of books that we barely had space to sit. As soon as we got sitted, Fabianus cleared his throat and spoke with an expansive smile on his lips; 'Van, speak your mind, there are no prying eyes and ears around.' My wide open mouth must have given away my surprise, for he grinned and said; 'Oh! You are surprised that I know your name, hunh? Well, I have the Sage's powers too. I'm actually his son. I can even speak Yoruba for you.' ...Sage's son? No wonder... This Casville people too get jazz o... 'OK. Let's start from here,' he started, as he raked his hands through his blonde hair. 'Do you know why you were chosen to save the people of Casville?' 'Not really, but the Sage told me that it's my destiny,' I answered. 'That's true. It's your destiny, only you can wield the black sword of the gods which will be used to kill Gustavus, the giant,' Fabianus explained. ... Yeepa! Giant ke? I be like David for these people eyes?... To be continued... Abeg make una drop una comments . |
I'm back my people. No vex say I neva update since o. Oya take this one and please drop una comments. EPISODE 7(contd.) I sat still on the bed. I was trying to make senses out of my conversation with Stan. ... Will I really die here in Casville? How will I die? What will kill me?... I suddenly remembered the scroll. Yes! The fat scroll. The Sage had said that It contained all the important things I need to know. I sprang up from the bed and walked to where I had dropped the scroll. I picked it up and gently unfolded it. Damn! I couldn't even read a word. It was written in conc. Latin. I must find a translator for this one o. Just then three men, Micus and two guards, walked in. 'Athanasius, hast thou forgotten thy appointment with our lord, the King?' Micus asked. 'Gosh! I have forgotten,' I said 'Let me change this my soiled shirt. I'll be with you in a second. EPISODE 8 is loading... |
Try ke? You over try jor. Ride on sir, nothing do you . |
[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate]GOne are the days men... The giant is already dead, we are just gonna bury them today... So says Apostlic Robben [/quote]![]() ![]() . |
Buhahahahaha. But to talk true, the two giants no go fit die together o. One go survive, so says the spirit in me . |
[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate] [/quote]What na? U nor even comment on dis one wey I write.;(;(;( |
Damex333: oga frank no mind dat ancient roman guy call van, him write jamb, im no wan give us update. I go write letter 2 oga dibu now,if u dont update@vanMy bro, nor let us derail oga frank's sense making thread. I go try update my tori today ![]() ![]() . |
Marian17: *In Tina's voice* You are not serious o. How can you leave us waiting at the saviour's thread? Come and update before i vex jor. Btw you try for dis one tooThanks my sister, I go update the story soon. |
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[quote author=frank3.16]thanx... but i still de vex for u, what happpen to ur own update? i hope u will post something tonight[/quote]No vex my oga, I go try post the update tomorrow, my head still dey hot for that exam wey I write. ![]() |
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You are doing a great job Mr. Frank. I just hope you won't mind editing the very few typhos in the first post, like author for arthur, religion for relgion etal. Anyways I dey follow you like twitter. Keep the good work up sir. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Evestar200: I didnt thump print cuz there was no machine in my centerLike seriously? May God help you o. |
This Jamb make sense, d only tin b say d time too short, especially 4 person wey dey write maths, physics & chemistry. Most of those questions weren't too tough but the time just too short. I go pass sha, I know that 4 sure. |
[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate]Owk.. I don comment[/quote]Which comment? I no see am jor. See, you must comment o.....you know say you were d one wey call for me to write this episode. |
Oops! Sorry ma'am |
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