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LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 5:59pm On May 03, 2013
EPISODE 8 (contd.)
Before I could give him a reply, Fabianus let out a chuckle and said;

'Van, you are funny. You are not David and Gustavus is certainly not Golaiath. He is way stronger and more powerful.'

Honestly, I don't know why my mouth always fall open when I'm surprised. Yes that's exactly what happened as my mouth just fall open like gate wey no get gateman.

'You are surprised, eh? You shouldn't be my friend,' Fabianus remarked 'Remember I told you I have the Sage's power. I read minds too.'

'Ok. Where exactly is Gustavus now?' I asked weakly, trying my best to mask my confusion, surprise and fear.

'Errm... He is in the Distein forest,' Fabianus replied 'Let me show you a picture of him,' he added as he rose from his seat and walked to a shelf stuffed with books to get the picture.

He came back and handed me a small book with the picture of a beast-like giant (or is it a giant-like beast) bowing to a short, stocky man dressed in red and black on it.

'Who is this man?' I asked, pointing to the short man in the picture.

'You mean you don't know him?' Fabianus asked, looking very surprised 'Haven't you read the scroll the Sage gave you?'

'No, I haven't. I can't read Latin,' I replied.

'Ok. I'll give the english version of the scroll,' Fabianus said 'Back to that man in the picture. Well, his name is Justus.'

... Walahi! I don tire for all these 'us' wey dey end these people names o...

'He is a very powerful sorcerer and he is our biggest enemy,' Fabianus continued 'Right now, I think he is in Distein too, building up his immortal army.'

'Immortal whaaaat?'

'Immortal army, yes. He's planning to destroy Casvillé with it. That is why we need your help but we must first retrieve the black sword of the gods because without it you have no power at all.'

'Where is the black sword now?' I asked.

'The sword is in Carzëf, we will go there maybe next week to get the sword back because we must make sure it doesn't fall into the wrong hands,' Fabianus answered.

He stood up, signalling the end of our little meeting. I stood up too and we shook hands.

'Here is the english version of that scroll with you. It contains all the information you will need,' Fabianus said, as he gave me the new scroll.

'Thanks,' I muttered and started to make my way towards the door.

'Wait Van,' Fabianus called 'Here is something else you will be needing.'

I collected the thing, it was a book; Sun Tzu's The Art of War.

______________

I returned to my room to find the King, the Queen, the Knights and the Noblemen there.

... Kai! Wetin be dis? Another bad news ko?...

'O Athanasius. We hath waited long for thee. The company art ready. Let us go,' the King said.

... Which kain greeting be dis na?...

'Where are we going?' I asked.

'To Austieres. A jousting tournament wilt be held thiter in thy honour,' the King replied.

... Jousting tournament? Wtf does that mean?...

To be continued...

Happy birthday ENEZEsmiley
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 4:40pm On May 03, 2013
Tovot: look at the time now,and no update!then u want people to comment ehn?
No vex my bro, I will soon update. Make sure u comment when I post the update. Thankssmiley
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 12:48pm On May 03, 2013
Eneze1: good, please update oo and use it as a birthday gift to me
I'll do just that, btw happy birthday, many happy returnssmiley.
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 11:25pm On May 02, 2013
[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate]You no go update now o, later you go say make I comment...[/quote].
Wait till tomorrow na, I dey too busy to update today.... Buh make sure say u comment wen i update o or else Talmud things go happengrin.
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 9:10pm On May 02, 2013
Eneze1: nice story line really enjoying it, please when are you going to update now, am really anxious
Thanks my sister. I was too busy to update today. I will update tomorrow, God willingsmiley.
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 10:26pm On May 01, 2013
oyestephen: Van this update is short angry
I know it's short. Ayam working on a lengthy update. No vex my brosmiley.
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 10:24pm On May 01, 2013
[quote author=frank3.16]Good, now ensure u continue. Enjoyin it[/quote]Thanks sir. It's a great honour to have you reading my worksmiley.
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 10:23pm On May 01, 2013
Ice4jez: u neva finish one u dey tell use about another one.i bow for u oh.bro thank but i can fit read watin go make me vex.but all in all u get talent
Thanks my brosmiley
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 3:10pm On May 01, 2013
Here is the link to the short story i dey try write. Help me check am===> www.nairaland.com/1274123/vans-jamb-experience-short-story:).
LiteratureRe: The Religion by VanTee20(m): 2:56pm On May 01, 2013
barag: vantee u never complete ur own story u dey here dey do editor for another man own if i catch u..... Frank u too much followin u all d way
Ah oga barag no vex. I go try complete am soongringringrin.
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 1:35pm On May 01, 2013
fflamingo: I owe you six pence buh ur update self get as he be
No mind me. I'm thinking of getting a laptop, my kpalasa fone no dey help matters.
LiteratureRe: Attai... The Sh.it Maker ( A Short Story ) by VanTee20(m): 7:30am On May 01, 2013
Lwkmd. Your own don finish for d skul be dat osmiley.
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 7:27am On May 01, 2013
Damex333: I don comment o.
Thank you sirsmiley
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 7:20pm On Apr 30, 2013
[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate]No comment for now[/quote]Oga foxy, why u dey do me like dis na? & you know wetin i fit do for you o.
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 7:02pm On Apr 30, 2013
EPISODE 8
Some minutes later, I was ushered into the king's chambers. I had changed my school uniform to a buba and sokoto I found in Stan's bag, but I still made sure I put the "serpent of the gods" around my neck o. That is was Casville had turned me to; tie on top buba.

The King was already engaged in a conversation with someone before I got there. When they saw me, they stopped and welcomed me profusely.

'Athanasius, Hither art Fabianus, the chief priest of our land,' the King said, after the exchange of pleasantries.

I shook hands with Fabianus and appraised him, he looked incredibly young. How did he even become the chief priest sef? He seems to be in his late teens or early twenties.

He looked vaguely familiar too, like I had seen him before, but I don't remember ever hearing the name Fabianus before.

'Fabianus, thou wilt go now with Athanasius to thy study to discuss the battle plans with him,' the King said to the silver haired chief priest.

... Battle bawo? Shey dis King dey madt neh? Abi na Igboh im smoke...

'Yes Sire,' Fabianus replied and then beckoned to me to follow him. I did, admist my confusion and surprise.

We got to his study after a few minutes walk. The study was so stuffed full of books that we barely had space to sit.

As soon as we got sitted, Fabianus cleared his throat and spoke with an expansive smile on his lips;

'Van, speak your mind, there are no prying eyes and ears around.'

My wide open mouth must have given away my surprise, for he grinned and said;

'Oh! You are surprised that I know your name, hunh? Well, I have the Sage's powers too. I'm actually his son. I can even speak Yoruba for you.'

...Sage's son? No wonder... This Casville people too get jazz o...

'OK. Let's start from here,' he started, as he raked his hands through his blonde hair. 'Do you know why you were chosen to save the people of Casville?'

'Not really, but the Sage told me that it's my destiny,' I answered.

'That's true. It's your destiny, only you can wield the black sword of the gods which will be used to kill Gustavus, the giant,' Fabianus explained.

... Yeepa! Giant ke? I be like David for these people eyes?...

To be continued...
Abeg make una drop una commentssmiley.
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LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 6:28pm On Apr 30, 2013
I'm back my people. No vex say I neva update since o. Oya take this one and please drop una comments.

EPISODE 7(contd.)

I sat still on the bed. I was trying to make senses out of my conversation with Stan.

... Will I really die here in Casville? How will I die? What will kill me?...

I suddenly remembered the scroll. Yes! The fat scroll. The Sage had said that It contained all the important things I need to know.

I sprang up from the bed and walked to where I had dropped the scroll. I picked it up and gently unfolded it.

Damn! I couldn't even read a word. It was written in conc. Latin. I must find a translator for this one o.

Just then three men, Micus and two guards, walked in.

'Athanasius, hast thou forgotten thy appointment with our lord, the King?' Micus asked.

'Gosh! I have forgotten,' I said 'Let me change this my soiled shirt. I'll be with you in a second.

EPISODE 8 is loading...
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LiteratureRe: The Religion by VanTee20(m): 12:18pm On Apr 30, 2013
Try ke? You over try jor. Ride on sir, nothing do yousmiley.
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SportsRe: CRUSADE! CRUSADE!! CRUSADE!!! ( Very Funny--- Please Read And Comment ) by VanTee20(m): 9:26am On Apr 30, 2013
[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate]GOne are the days men... The giant is already dead, we are just gonna bury them today... So says Apostlic Robben grin[/quote]gringringrin.
SportsRe: CRUSADE! CRUSADE!! CRUSADE!!! ( Very Funny--- Please Read And Comment ) by VanTee20(m): 9:19am On Apr 30, 2013
Buhahahahaha. But to talk true, the two giants no go fit die together o. One go survive, so says the spirit in mesmiley.
LiteratureRe: Removed by VanTee20(op): 8:18am On Apr 30, 2013
[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate]undecided undecided[/quote]What na? U nor even comment on dis one wey I write.;(;(;(
LiteratureRe: The Religion by VanTee20(m): 8:13am On Apr 30, 2013
Damex333: oga frank no mind dat ancient roman guy call van, him write jamb, im no wan give us update. I go write letter 2 oga dibu now,if u dont update@van
My bro, nor let us derail oga frank's sense making thread. I go try update my tori todaysmileysmileysmiley.
LiteratureRe: Removed by VanTee20(op): 8:07am On Apr 30, 2013
Marian17: *In Tina's voice* You are not serious o. How can you leave us waiting at the saviour's thread? Come and update before i vex jor. Btw you try for dis one toosmiley.
Thanks my sister, I go update the story soon.
LiteratureRe: Removed by VanTee20(op):
cheesy
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LiteratureRe: The Religion by VanTee20(m): 11:21pm On Apr 29, 2013
[quote author=frank3.16]thanx... but i still de vex for u, what happpen to ur own update? i hope u will post something tonight[/quote]No vex my oga, I go try post the update tomorrow, my head still dey hot for that exam wey I write.smiley
LiteratureRemoved by VanTee20(op):
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LiteratureRe: The Religion by VanTee20(m): 10:42pm On Apr 29, 2013
You are doing a great job Mr. Frank. I just hope you won't mind editing the very few typhos in the first post, like author for arthur, religion for relgion etal. Anyways I dey follow you like twitter. Keep the good work up sir.smileysmileysmiley
EducationRe: Jambites: How Was Your JAMB-UTME Exam? by VanTee20(m): 7:52pm On Apr 28, 2013
Evestar200: I didnt thump print cuz there was no machine in my center
Like seriously? May God help you o.
EducationRe: Jambites: How Was Your JAMB-UTME Exam? by VanTee20(m): 7:21pm On Apr 28, 2013
This Jamb make sense, d only tin b say d time too short, especially 4 person wey dey write maths, physics & chemistry. Most of those questions weren't too tough but the time just too short. I go pass sha, I know that 4 sure.
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 5:53pm On Apr 26, 2013
[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate]Owk.. I don comment[/quote]Which comment? I no see am jor. See, you must comment o.....you know say you were d one wey call for me to write this episode.
LiteratureRe: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(op): 10:50am On Apr 26, 2013
Oops! Sorry ma'am

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