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Christianity Etc › Re: Dressing Modestly Pays by WriterX(m): 10:36pm On Oct 09, 2023
Kobojunkie:
Jesus Christ asked His followers to teach ONLY the Gospel and His Gospel alone. His Gospel includes no mention of modest dressing or anything of the sort. So why do you associate what your pastors and mogs instruct you to do with that which Jesus Christ said? undecided
I have no quarrel with you nor seek to jusitfy my opinions for your acceptance, goodnight and stay blessed.
Christianity Etc › Re: Dressing Modestly Pays by WriterX(m): 10:17pm On Oct 09, 2023
FarmTech:
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So in a nutshell you're saying that we shud not judge immodest dresses? Aren't u aware that their conscious have been polluted by Satan? So why shudnt they be corrected?

Iron sharpens iron. No one knows it all that's why u shud be open to constructive criticism.
We are not asked to judge people in general rather to teach with love and wisdom, pray and seek the mercy and compassion of God upon them and us as well.

Matthew 7:2
Family › Re: Nudity In Front Of Children.. Right Or Wrong ,? by WriterX(m): 3:56pm On Oct 08, 2023
I would suggest irrespective of going around nude or not. Kindly give educate on sex and gender education . dont go around kids hoping they will figure it out plus at 12years i think that sort of thing should stop. My 1 cent.
Family › Re: What Is The Common Regret People Have As They Get Older? by WriterX(m): 1:18pm On Oct 08, 2023
Zonefree:
As a young man coming up, don't waste your youthful age loving a Nigerian girl or even try to force her to love you. They are not created to LOVE.
Don't say that
Christianity Etc › Re: I Lose Interest In Going To Church And I Don't Know Why. by WriterX(m): 12:01pm On Oct 08, 2023
TheBillyonaire:
With a copy of your holy book, social media app and GPTs, I still wonder why anyone goes out somewhere to listen to some other dudes telling them things they can simply research with their phones.
Going to Church isn't about one ability or level of spirituality or understanding of the word. For someone like myself I was faced with this dilemma until I realized a few things, I stopped and decided I was better off on YouTube and streaming and social medias services but I was wrong, reading the acts of the apostles made me realize so much about what we refer to as the body of the Christ.

You are a big part of the body of Christ, here are reasons I think may help you understand the need why you should join a church. For me I realized getting to church kept me strong and made me feel encouraged, remember as a body we function together, we are a family.


https://www.churchofjesuschrist.org/comeuntochrist/uk/community/6-reasons-why-to-go-to-church#:~:text=Worshipping%20God%20is%20a%20commandment,God%20and%20give%20Him%20thanks.
Christianity Etc › Re: Dressing Modestly Pays by WriterX(m): 9:58am On Oct 08, 2023
In all of this dressing thing, I see this, the intent of the dresser matters for me in my views.


There is something the apostle Paul talked about. In Romans 14:12-15

Therefore let us stop passing judgment on one another. Instead, make up your mind not to put any stumbling block or obstacle in your brother's way.
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As one who is in the Lord Jesus, I am fully convinced that no food [2] is unclean in itself. But if anyone regards something as unclean, then for him it is unclean.
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If your brother is distressed because of what you eat, you are no longer acting in love. Do not by your eating destroy your brother for whom Christ died.
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Do not allow what you consider good to be spoken of as evil.

I consider this too in clothing, for me it is simple, the intent of the person who is wearing the clothes matter, why are you wearing it? Are you trying to get the attention of someone(s) cause this is where it becomes dangerous? Is a show of sexual appeal seduction? Again the society has really stretched the line on this. The bible says it is not what goes inside of us but what comes out.... so when you wear what you wear, what are your thought, is it a oh this dress is nice on me and everyone is going to love it or oh Jim must fall for this..all the guys must hear am! Lol

How we as Christians view things matter , verse 15 adds more , would what you are wearing discomfort a fellow believer, would it make you feel odd in a fellowship of other believers, would you be comfortable been with your Christ like brothers and sisters.

16. Reiterates your belief , we can only defend what is good and right when we know and do what is good and right.

In the end, i don't judge people base on their dressing, rather than judge people's dressing base on religious doctrine , lets do better .
Foreign Affairs › Re: Gaza will Be Reduced To rubbles, Leave Now - Netanyahu tells residents by WriterX(m): 9:38am On Oct 08, 2023
This will eventually turn out to be a war between religions. And countries will begin to take side. May the good lord protect his children. Amen.
Literature › Re: 3-days "AI Prompting And Its Effectiveness" Workshop WRITING BOOKS 101 by WriterX(op): 9:27am On Oct 08, 2023
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Literature › Re: 3-days "AI Prompting And Its Effectiveness" Workshop WRITING BOOKS 101 by WriterX(op): 9:25am On Oct 08, 2023
UNDERSTANDING THE IMPORTANCE OF PROMPTING IN STORY WRITING PART 2 RESULT USING CHATGPT


USER: PROMPTING


CHATGPT: **Title:** *A Love Beyond Time*

Once upon a time, in a quaint village embraced by rolling hills, lived a boy named Oliver. His heart was as vast as the horizon, and his dreams danced with the possibilities of life. It was said that Oliver believed in magic, love, and the extraordinary.

One day, beneath the flowering cherry trees in the village square, Oliver glimpsed a sight that made his heart skip a beat. There, in the soft glow of the sun, sat Eliza. Her eyes sparkled like stars, and her laughter, a melody that serenaded the very birds. Oliver fell in love that very moment.

With a newfound courage, Oliver approached Eliza. Words flowed like a serene river between them. They spoke of dreams, secrets, and the warmth of their hearts. Days turned into weeks, and weeks into months. Love blossomed between them like wildflowers in spring.

Their love story was a tapestry of simple pleasures. They picnicked by the glistening river, danced beneath the moon's tender gaze, and whispered sweet promises beneath the ancient oak. The village, witnessing the purity of their love, celebrated their union with joyous festivities.

As years passed, their love deepened, transcending the bounds of time. They shared a connection that seemed to bridge the past and the future. They knew each other's thoughts and emotions as if they were inscribed in the stars.

Yet, as life often weaves its complexities, a shadow loomed on the horizon. A war, colossal and fearsome, called Oliver to duty. With heavy hearts, they bid farewell, knowing that their love would endure, steadfast in the face of adversity.

Through letters, inked with love, and those etched into their hearts, they kept their flame alive during those dark times. They clung to the promise of a future where they would be reunited, never doubting the strength of their bond.

Years flowed like a river, and the war's tumultuous tides receded. Oliver returned to the village, and as he walked beneath the cherry trees, he felt a familiar presence. There, beneath the blossoms, stood Eliza, radiant as ever. Time had not dulled her beauty, nor had it diminished their love.

Oliver and Eliza embraced, their hearts beating in harmony once more. Their love had endured the test of time, proving that when two souls are meant to be together, nothing can keep them apart. They married beneath the same ancient oak tree where they had whispered their vows so many years ago.

Life unfolded in a tapestry of shared dreams and endless devotion. They walked hand in hand through fields of wildflowers, their laughter a serenade to the wind. Their love, now seasoned by years, was as vibrant as ever.

They built a home filled with warmth and memories. Each morning, Oliver would wake to the aroma of Eliza's freshly baked bread, and each night, they would stargaze, their fingers intertwined, tracing constellations only they could see.

Their love story was etched into the very fabric of the village. It served as a reminder that love, when nurtured with unwavering dedication, could conquer the most formidable of challenges. The village held them in high regard, for their love had not only endured but thrived, transcending time itself.

As they grew older, Oliver and Eliza's love remained unwavering. Their love had become a legacy—a testament to the enduring power of a love that transcended time and bound their hearts together for all eternity.

And so, Oliver and Eliza continued to live happily ever after, their love story a timeless ode to the enduring magic of true love—a love beyond time.

THE END


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Literature › Re: 3-days "AI Prompting And Its Effectiveness" Workshop WRITING BOOKS 101 by WriterX(op): 9:11am On Oct 08, 2023
UNDERSTANDING THE IMPORTANCE OF PROMPTING IN STORY WRITING PART 1 RESPONSE USING CHAT GPT



USER: CHATGPT WRITE ME A STORY ABOUT A BOY WHO FELL IN LOVE WITH A GIRL



CHATGPT RESPONSE: **Title:** *A Love Beyond Time*

Once upon a time, in a quaint little village nestled among rolling hills, there lived a young boy named Oliver. Oliver was known for his kindness, warm smile, and a heart as big as the horizon itself. He was the kind of boy who believed in magic, love, and the endless possibilities of life.

One sunny day, as Oliver strolled through the village square, his gaze was drawn to a captivating sight. There, under the blossoming cherry trees, sat a girl named Eliza. Her eyes sparkled like stars, and her laughter was a melody that made the birds sing in harmony. It was love at first sight for Oliver.

With newfound courage, Oliver approached Eliza, and their conversations flowed effortlessly, like a river finding its path through the meadows. They shared dreams, secrets, and the warmth of their hearts. Days turned into weeks, and weeks into months. Love blossomed between them like the flowers in the springtime.

Their love story was one of simple pleasures. They picnicked by the river, danced under the moonlight, and whispered sweet promises to each other beneath the ancient oak tree. The village, witnessing the purity of their love, celebrated their union with joyous festivities.

As the years passed, Oliver and Eliza's love deepened, transcending the bounds of time itself. They shared a connection that seemed to bridge the past and the future. They knew each other's thoughts and emotions as if they were written in the stars.

But life, as it often does, brought forth its challenges. A great war loomed on the horizon, and Oliver was called to serve his country. With heavy hearts, they bid each other farewell, knowing that their love would endure even in the face of adversity.

Through letters written in ink as well as those etched into their hearts, Oliver and Eliza kept their love alive during those dark times. They held onto the promise of a future where they would be reunited, never doubting the strength of their bond.

Years passed, and the war ended. Oliver returned to the village, and as he walked through the cherry tree grove, he felt a familiar presence. There, under the blossoms, stood Eliza, as radiant as ever. Time had not dimmed her beauty, nor had it dulled their love.

Oliver and Eliza embraced, their hearts once again beating in perfect harmony. Their love had endured the test of time, proving that when two souls are meant to be together, nothing can keep them apart. They married under the same ancient oak tree where they had whispered their vows so many years ago.

And so, Oliver and Eliza lived happily ever after, their love story a testament to the enduring power of love, a love that transcended time and bound their hearts together for all eternity.



LET'S CRITICALLY REVIEW THE ABOVE RESPONSE


1.Lack of Originality: The story follows a very clichéd and predictable plotline. It features a generic romance between two characters, Oliver and Eliza, without any unique or unexpected elements. Readers often seek stories that offer something fresh or innovative.

2.Shallow Characterization: The characters, Oliver and Eliza, are underdeveloped and lack depth. Readers typically connect more with characters who have distinct personalities, flaws, and complexities. In this story, the characters feel one-dimensional.

3.Minimal Conflict: Conflict is an essential element in storytelling, and this story lacks significant conflict or obstacles to overcome. A good love story often involves challenges that test the relationship and characters' growth.

4.Lack of Emotional Depth: The story fails to evoke strong emotions or a deep connection with the characters. Readers usually look for stories that tug at their heartstrings, make them laugh, cry, or feel something meaningful.

5.Limited Descriptive Language: The narrative lacks vivid descriptions and sensory details that help readers visualize the setting, characters, and emotions. Engaging stories often paint a rich mental picture for readers.

6.Linear Progression: The plot progresses in a linear and straightforward manner without any twists, surprises, or subplots. Complex storytelling with unexpected turns can be more engaging.

7.Lack of Imagery and Symbolism: Engaging stories often use symbolism, metaphors, and imagery to add depth and layers of meaning. This story is straightforward and doesn't delve into symbolism.

8.Absence of Unique Voice: The narrative voice lacks uniqueness and a distinctive tone. Memorable stories often have a voice that stands out and resonates with the reader.

9Overuse of Clichés: The story relies on clichés and overused phrases, making it feel formulaic. Readers appreciate stories that offer fresh perspectives and language.

10.Limited Exploration of Themes: Love stories often explore profound themes like sacrifice, forgiveness, or personal growth. This story remains on the surface and misses the opportunity to delve into meaningful themes.

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Crime › Re: Alleged Manhood Disappearance: Panic Grips Residents Of Abuja, Other Cities by WriterX(m): 8:59am On Oct 08, 2023
Na wao oh
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Family › Re: A Lady Ran Away With My Pregnancy. by WriterX(m): 7:11pm On Oct 07, 2023
Whatisurproblem:
Good day everyone, I need your opinion on this matter.

I've been dating this lady for like 4months now. Anytimee I try to visit her, she will only come to a junction for us to meet. I requested to know where she lives and also for me to know her people, she always decline the request claiming she's staying with someone not her relative, at a point I asked if she's a ghost 👻 which she deny.

The problem now is she suddenly came to my house with a pregnancy test strip, she carried out test in my present and the results came out that she's truly pregnant.

I scheduled for the following day to take her to hospital, she left my house that day and never return, anytime I call her on phone, she will not respond to come and see me, and I don't know where to locate her. I threatened her that if she refused to show up that I won't take responsibility for the pregnancy, she blatantly told me she will keep the pregnancy and take care of it by herself.

I began to worry if this is a baby factory things or she just used me to get pregnant and run or what is her mission?

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So let's see if you can find her by tracking her.


I would need you to take into account little details about her life in her conversations, we can't never hide the truth in all situations. Friend's name, contact of someone, a restaurant, eatery, saloon, address, something that is traceable. Someone who knows her, something unique only to her character. Go on social media, Facebook, Instagram are your friends, it will take alot of patience , get a book and write out who you know about her, she must have said something about her personal personal life. That can be used to filter such details. Account names, associates. I have searched and found friends and family members with miniscule details. I think in the end if you want to find her, you will find her. Good luck!
Politics › Re: CBN Books: Obazee Report Causing Discomfort In Presidency by WriterX(m): 10:13pm On Oct 04, 2023
grin dogs don't eat dogs, if one sees a bone and another comes that is bigger, the small one will either leave the bone for the big one or the big one will eat its own and let the small take the rest.
Politics › Re: Moment Ministerial Nominee, Balarabe Abbas Collapsed During Screening (Video) by WriterX(m): 4:55pm On Oct 04, 2023
Wishing him a Barry Allen recovery
Family › Re: Why Do Men Like To Sleep With Their House Helps? by WriterX(m): 3:22pm On Oct 04, 2023
grin
Zonefree:
A house help that treats Oga better than the wife is worth sharing the gbola with.

A house help will cook for your husband, serve him, wash his clothes, clean his shoes, sweep his bedroom, dress his bed and you think Oga is foolish not to compensate her with his gbola in a magnificent way undecided



Men are naturally benevolent. No sane man should allow his wife stops him from finding the love of his life.
You already found the love of your life..you called her your wife...now you are going in search of the lust of the eyes.
Education › Re: Questions Arise As Chrisland School Wins 12 Out Of 25 Beacon Of Safety Awards by WriterX(m): 3:19pm On Oct 04, 2023
grin interesting
Travel › Re: Which Country Will You Like To Come From If Given Another Chance To Be Born? by WriterX(m): 3:12pm On Oct 04, 2023
grin me the mathematician, if everyone in Nigeria is asked this question for real and they are been relocated then that means there would be like 10-15% population that would be left in Nigeria..that means I would definitely want to return as a Nigeria. Nigeria is good just bad leaders and ignorant followers that keeps ruining it.
Crime › Re: Police Foil Kidnap Attempt, Neutralise Bandit, Recover AK-47 Rifle In Katsina by WriterX(m): 7:41am On Oct 03, 2023
; D I came here to read meaningful comments but las las There is dram here too.
Crime › Re: SSN On CSU Documents Released To Atiku, Shows It Belongs To President Tinubu by WriterX(m): 7:39am On Oct 03, 2023
A grand chess master cheesy this game is intriguing
Politics › Re: 6 Major Findings About Tinubu From The CSU Documents By Farooq Kperogi by WriterX(m): 7:37am On Oct 03, 2023
grin this is getting interesting. Check my signature by the way.
Literature › Re: Paranormal Writers Needed by WriterX(m): 7:06am On Oct 03, 2023
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I am currently working on a long term project and I need a writer to work with.


The project revolves around billionaire romance story filed with twist,intrigue,emotion and romance.

This is a long- term project,I am looking for a writer who can deliver high quality content consistantly.


But firstly,I'll need a well detailed plot,first 5,000 words of a captivating,intriguing billionaire romance story filed with twist,a powerful Ml lead,a weak FL lead, and villains.


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Title: Inheritance of Shadows

Synopsis:

In the enigmatic world of the Santa Cruz billionaire empire, where secrets shroud centuries-old traditions, a reluctant heir, Hellsing Santa Cruz (26 years old), stands at a crossroads. To ascend as the new head of the family, he must traverse a treacherous path of duty and destiny.

Part 1: The Heir's Dilemma

Hellsing Santa Cruz, known for his charisma and nonchalant charm, finds himself burdened with an ancestral tradition that threatens to upend the world. His task? To select a bride, a woman of his choosing, and preserve the family's darkest, world-altering rituals.

Part 2: The College Rivalry Resurfaces

Unbeknownst to Cruz, his college nemesis, the fiery and determined Marima, re-enters his life. What begins as a quest to humiliate her soon spirals into a battle of wits, wills, and a revelation of shared secrets that bind them together.

Part 3: Unveiling the Supernatural Legacy

As Cruz delves deeper into his family's legacy, he uncovers a world teeming with supernatural beings. Leading this enigmatic faction is none other than his estranged sister, Delga, who harbors a vendetta against the Santa Cruz bloodline.

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Sports › Re: ‘Gaslighting 101’ - Nigerians Blast Napoli For ‘fake’ Apology To Osimhen by WriterX(m): 3:12pm On Sep 29, 2023
I think OSIM should forget this all and continue playing.
Romance › Re: How To Deal With A Neighbor's Very Active Sexual Life by WriterX(m): 5:49am On Sep 29, 2023
Lol, it happens, Been there too. Just got to dettach your focus..don't get into all that, the mind is a tricky fella, you might think its annoying and irritating until you start wanting a piece of the action yourself... I have loud neighbors too but my mind is disciplined enough to focus on my business within the four walls of my room for now. You will be okay, learn to dettach your focus from his activities, discipline your mind, the real problem is up there.

And oh for all those who think celibacy aint a thing, you have a fellow brother here as well, Been there for two years now, I and my gal are hardworkers physically and spiritually for now, we just want have alot to clear out before settling down. Dont let no one get into your mind. Protect it with God's word and thetrust in your relationship you have worked hard on. God bless you boss man.
Celebrities › Re: Mohbad: “by Their Fruits You Shall Know Them” Ruth Kadiri Slams Reno Omokri by WriterX(m): 7:08pm On Sep 28, 2023
Interesting
Romance › Re: BA Pilot Fired After Snorting Coke Off Topless Women In Joburg (PICS) by WriterX(m): 6:55pm On Sep 28, 2023
grin Tell me everything grin grin grin grin

This word shall if na nigerian guy man na there he go for start dey suspect...


Tell me everything....oga pilot turn witch way swallow holy water... grin grin

He is done as a pilot for any major industry, might be taken in by small private ones shall if they too are on drugs. grin

This world is wonderful...na so "tell me evrything take carry food comot for man mouth like that, he don lose wife, lose child, lose court case (cos wife go sue) lose job join!
Foreign Affairs › Re: The Gruesome Murder Of The Roman Emperor - Julius Caesar (Throwback) by WriterX(m): 7:43pm On Sep 23, 2023
There was a movie , an old classic movie about brutus and caesar, i can still remember the soothsayer warnings and his wife having nightmares and the murder it self which was quite brutal then. I loved it, great story till date!
Literature › Re: Blood And Thrones : KING KHA'ARMA COMING SOON by WriterX(op): 8:33pm On Sep 17, 2023
CHAPTER ONE - LONG LIVE THE KING


COMING SOON
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Literature › Re: I Need A Professional Script Writer by WriterX(m): 6:03am On Sep 07, 2023
Hello, let's talk , i can write your scripts for you , i use trelby for scripting.
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Literature › Re: Flash Fiction: Shadow Of A Ninja III by WriterX(op): 12:28am On Sep 07, 2023
"Just pick anyone!"

Some gestured at me where i shuddered and shook under the cold blistering snow that was determined to end us all if our choices didn't.

Laid in front of all eight of us where the pots of 99 death and 1 life. Each Pot filled with a different kind of poison that explored death in its own fancy manner and one that was filled with an antidote for all.


We bothered not to look for the masters, they were always watching and observing us, by now you would think we were any better trying to be what we desired most; well, i taught i was amongst many yet we were all in a way children, desperate for something other than sudden death.


Striped naked and left thirsty for the last two days didn't do us any good either, if we could fight the cold, if we could defy our need to quench our thirst, could we defy the commands of the Masters whose penalty was taking our tongues from us?

The numbers were against us here, the seniors had passed a warning about this test, it wasn't to teach us a lesson or something, it was simple and finely orchestrated murder on a mass level, the seniors had been reduced to little over ten from a count of fifty three, we were a lot lesser than that.

Perhaps Okiho's miserable attempt to escape the training camp and find his way to the world below which had been meant with punishment worth more than a thousand death still somehow infuriated the masters? I wondered.

"As the snow bites deeper and your throat yearns for a bit of liquid, you can be certain, reasoning becomes a death sentence and you can never know which is antidote but you will know which is the poison!" one of us declared to us as he was told by a senior.

Someone came out and walked into the labyrinth of pots, he had been trying to get someone else to take a leap of faith.

I watched him closely, as he moved from one identical clay pot with pure colorless liquid to another, he seemed nervous and edgy as he withdrew back but just then the cold wind blew and there he fell to the ground, his body could no longer take the cold.

Rishi rushed out and grabbed the boy; rishi was a no good boy who gladly sacrificed anything or anyone to stay alive but then again, we all had a little of him or more in ourselves and maybe this one, i rooted for him to do something or anything to help us stay alive.

Rishi pulled the almost lifeless boy by his head and began to force him to drink as many as he could.

"Poison...Poison...Poison...Poison...Poison.........."


"1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8....12..13"

Rishi pulled the boy closer to realize the 13th pot had been the poor soul's last attempt to help us.

Rishi screamed angrily and tossed the kid away like trash and how it did anger me but rishi wasn't done just yet.

He pulled away and seemed to give the pots a thought before settling his eyes on me.

I took some steps back even though i knew I would never be able to win a fight in this condition.

"Come quietly, there is no reason for all of us to die tonight, you just need to get the right pot and you won't die!"

I shook my head in disapproval as I withdrew my steps quickly which only gave rishi more excitement to grab me.

I disappeared into the midst of the others who only pushed me out, it was certain they would be next, after i was long gone.

"Got you!"

Rishi held tightly to me, his grip and the cold threatened to peal my flesh off my bones.

This was it, I imagined, my own death seemed closer than ever.

"Don't drink it all, have a taste and get over it and be quick about it, the others might die soon from the cold, I will need them to continue from where you stopped!"

I took my first taste and soon realized, there was a taste once it was about to slip into my throat.

I spat hard and went for the next pot; a startled rishi was taken a back by my sudden willingness to participate in this game of death.

"Poison...Poison... Poison... Poison..."

I vomited and spat terribly each time i felt that foreign taste in the liquid.

"Hurry up, I need something to drink!" A cowardly and ungrateful rishi said.

"Poison... Poison... Poison.... Poison... wait...wait..."

Rishi kicked me so hard i crashed into a clay pot whilst he and the others took the antidote for themselves.

I tried my best to get up and get a drink myself, aware i had swallowed a vast amount of that pot which i had crashed into.

Rishi and the others had their fill and did the unthinkable.

"Kplah!!!"

Rishi kicked hard the pot so that it broke and shattered.


I managed to stand up, stared at rishi and the others, my sadness and hopelessness soon turned into a vicious smile.

It was right there, Rishi and his cohorts realized what had happened.

"You crashed into..."

His brain didn't get to add up the maths but rishi spiteful kick had just saved my life.

I watched them fall, never to rise again, buried by the snow.


SHADOW OF THE NINJA: LABOR OF TASTE
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Literature › Re: The Great Heist (A Page-turny Caper Story). by WriterX(m): 11:33pm On Sep 06, 2023
Here and Reading wink This looks good!
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