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fanks for the mention i was actually banned by one mod like dat..... how i wish i know the mod i wan finish am.

Ride on.

I don land.

Bibi love I dey ur back oya ride on ..... U re making sense.

guy u gat a nice piece dre pls kip updating...

its time to comment after following this story for a while....... reason why m commenting now is due to the fact that racheal as a writer is now writing a script juz like nollywood movie coz from the beginning i could see the original write up but along the line i could even predict what would happen next...... not because im a writer but because i read a lot of stories and we know how it all started.... we readers need things to keep us glue to our phone i can understand that u want to kip ur readers komin at all time by updating twice daily which is good but atimes its good to give us something to talk about which has been hindering mi from commenting anyways you are doing a great job but a little twist will do the magic....... i drop ma pen at this junction.

regards,
yinks89.

shina is back........

bibi294...... i'll would have juz said wow but at this junction i nid to start talking coz word don full ma mouth now.... firstly i'll commend ur writing skills u re doin gud thou i have saw some flaws in ur script of beta still ur story.... it's not well arranged in the sense that at times if sm1 is not careful enough ull miss some parts nd also i like the fact dat wen ever you introduce any new character you tell us about the but atimes what we readers like is more of suspense like wen u introduce diamond u shld have put alot of suspense into it so we readers wld kip wondering who this person is and along the line u kan shed more light on the particular character. so far so good you've been consistent and i must commend dat also...... finally i'll implore you to remove the (short story) in bracket from the title of the story.
i drop ma pen for now
thanks,
yinks89

Creeza:
You are an avid reader and I respect your reviews. . Please dont hesitate to give me more of these reviews on subsequent stories..

u kan count on mi.

id intended to make a long comment after the story but u cut it short with the tragedy...... ive neva been a fan of tragic story but nonetheless thumbs up nd to the story ill juz say wow! nd wow! again... i drop ma pen hre.

still not time for mi to comment yet.... wen d time koms ill talk.

jagugu88li:
First and foremost, this op no right ooo

Lankyannie check this out. Gabe is not aware that Kate is alive, right? Good. Now.....When love dies is the title.

When love dies....Gabe regrets ever doing wrong to Kate and would rather give back to Dummylola all the wealth he now "has". When he hears of Kate "undying", they'll get back together......just to prove that when love dies (literally), their bad ways die with their partner, the other (Gabe) all of sudden prefers the moneyless life.., as opposed to loosing their loved one.

He'll undo the story again . I love this section

Rachealfst Yinks89 (e be my part) harameedee99 wizsolzy olite93 fam24 queen tee adesina12 lawhaladey (or you don enter jail again) girlhaley.....

do u want ,mi to tell u to read d story again? from the story if u re followin wen she was unconscious gabe suggested that she shld b in an intensive care..... hence d non disclosure ch means gabe knew she is still between life nd death nd more ova it has nuffin to do with her been dead or not........ lets juz chill for the author to kom and either twist or flow with us either which way we hav to read it till d end.
as for now no comment on the story except dre is an update or its d season finale.

rachealfst:
Cc:
YINKS89, WIZGUY69, kushdayo, slimhore , decatalyst, anakadrian, costal, uzzy73, Lilibeth914, Sveen , Noble200, lumzybo,
Gloria007,

i dey ur back gidigba.....