more plssssssss

more plsssssss

unending mysteries, maybe the last part will revealed how the whole thing was staged.

I am waiting to see whose confession it was.

Very good job!your imagination is unbelievable but you have a little bit of the happy-writer-syndrome where a writer goes on forever.At first I thought the rite thing to do was to let us:the dears,lose with our imagination by ending the story after Daniel confession.Infact,it is unethical for Lot not to at least remand Daniel until a court find him not guilty.The medical examiner should only submit his autopsy report and not be present during interrogation of suspects except if he had to be called in court for his testimony.

The engagement chapter is too long but atleast u tied a story from the beginin in it.Now another is rearing its head!I hope u are not going to turn it into the series 24. Otherwise,very very good novel.

Very good job!your imagination is unbelievable but you have a little bit of the happy-writer-syndrome where a writer goes on forever.At first I thought the rite thing to do was to let us:the dears,lose with our imagination by ending the story after Daniel's confession.Infact,it is unethical for Lot not to at least remand Daniel until a court finds him not guilty.The medical examiner should only submit his autopsy report and not be present during interrogation of suspects except if he had to be called in court for his testimony.

The engagement chapter is too long but atleast u tied a story from the beginin in it.Now another is rearing its head!I hope u are not going to turn it into the series 24. Otherwise,very very good novel.

moreeni: Very good job!your imagination is unbelievable but you have a little bit of the happy-writer-syndrome where a writer goes on forever.At first I thought the rite thing to do was to let us:the dears,lose with our imagination by ending the story after Daniel's confession.Infact,it is unethical for Lot not to at least remand Daniel until a court finds him not guilty.The medical examiner should only submit his autopsy report and not be present during interrogation of suspects except if he had to be called in court for his testimony.

The engagement chapter is too long but atleast u tied a story from the beginin in it.Now another is rearing its head!I hope u are not going to turn it into the series 24. Otherwise,very very good novel.

Thanks Moreeni. My writing style, characterization, dialogues, plotting...all are not perfect, I agree. I'm just still a caterpillar, like I've penned in the Author's Note. It is on the shoulders of you and other more sublime literary giants of Nairaland that I hope to stand. The comments of you readers have been very helpful. When an audience decides to read the work of a new writer, he is forsaking, at least for the moment, the works of some great popular writers to read a totally different story. The least the creator of the story can do is entertain his audience. Impressing my readers is my major goal. I just hope I'm succeeding. The Brand Of Cain is only of twenty-five chapters. Here is the last part of the final chapter. And the truth be known to all.

Thank you everybody! I love you all.

This is intriguing. Larry please finish it na

This suspense is killing oh.
More pls.

LARRY,MORE PLEASE...

Larry!!!! You are a badass writer!
I'm glad i found this post.
Abeg chop knuckle

Laaaarrrrryyyyyy!!! This is absolutely sensational. I would love to read more of your works.

Awesome awesome! OP thank you for this wonderful mini novel. God bless!!!

wow! What a twist in tale, bravo Larry

I just love this book this is definitely above average
op more ink to ur pen

BRAVO!!!!!!

I admire and respect good writers when I see one.

Wow! Weldone Larry!
That means dt boy Abel was d photographer, so funny.
Alas! i've seen d end of Cain Martins.

Pls, let's have more of this thrillers. Thanks.

uj_sizzle: Larry!!!! You are a badass writer!
I'm glad i found this post.
Abeg chop knuckle

LOL! Yap, chop knuckle.

Iaz93: Laaaarrrrryyyyyy!!! This is absolutely sensational. I would love to read more of your works.

Thanks, buddy. You definitely would.

brokoto: Awesome awesome! OP thank you for this wonderful mini novel. God bless!!!

Thanks bro, for reading it. I hope I was able to convince and not confuse you.

Adinije: wow! What a twist in tale, bravo Larry

Thank you, Adinije. I STILL PLAN TO TURN THE KNIFE IN THE WOUND.

loadux: I just love this book this is definitely above average
op more ink to ur pen

Amen, I hope enough ink would be provided while I pen more suspense, if you know what I mean . And, I'll aim on achieving ten over ten.

moreeni: BRAVO!!!!!!

Thanks Moreeni, your comment fills me with glee. I feel like dancing salsa.

oyestephen: I admire and respect good writers when I see one.

Steve, BLESS YOU.

avicky: Wow! Weldone Larry!
That means dt boy Abel was d photographer, so funny.
Alas! i've seen d end of Cain Martins.

Pls, let's have more of this thrillers. Thanks.

Thanks Vicky. Yes, Abel the photographer did it. Do you know a photographer named Abel? We're still looking for him.
Trust me, more thrillers shall come your way.

I ALSO HAVE A CONFESSION TO MAKE!

Larry-Sun:
I ALSO HAVE A CONFESSION TO MAKE!

Lol! Okay, Larry start confessing.