Larry-Sun:

He's not Redmosquito.

Larry-Sun:

He's not Redmosquito.

Ishilove:
He sure sounds like Red Moss

Rap maestro: all mosquitoes sound alike.. Dey hum a lot.. Red Mosquito,tell all dose ur stalker 2 back of u

Oahray: Yeah right! As if they are mosquitoes for real. If it looks, walks and barks like a dog, is it a cat?
He writes like redmosquito, maybe a bit too much like him.

HumbledbYGrace: Larry Sun would you please remove my name in the list? I don't think I can do this, maybe I should just pull my chair and join the readers club.

I hope my notice is not too late

Thanks

Yellow_Mosquito:

Did I read that right? Hey, you are about betraying the trust put on you

HumbledbYGrace: yes you read it right. Its in black and white

HumbledbYGrace: Larry Sun would you please remove my name in the list? I don't think I can do this, maybe I should just pull my chair and join the readers club.

I hope my notice is not too late

Thanks

Ishilove:
HBG, sup? Why are you pulling out, dear?

HumbledbYGrace: I got carried away with everything but this is just not my call.

There is always a next time.

Ishilove:
I feel you. Detective stories is out of my comfort zone,but I love challenges so I'll try my hands on this collabo.

HumbledbYGrace: I got carried away with everything but this is just not my call.

There is always a next time.

Mynd_44: This is going well......

HumbledbYGrace: I believe in you.....but this is just out of my league

Efemena_xy:

Is? Or isn't?

Mynd_44:
**whistling**

maclatunji: Larry-Sun, make your writing simple. Yes, you are trying to be descreptive but you are overdoing it. The part of 'like a mating chihuahua' was just gross. Find a more
appropriate simile.

Frank 3:16, watch your tenses. Writing literature is different from speaking English. Then again, I think you guys are rushing too much- think and feel your character's emotions not just: "Gbram! I can write, let me start tapping my keyboard and hit the 1,000 mark.

maclatunji: Larry-Sun, make your writing simple. Yes, you are trying to be descreptive but you are overdoing it. The part of 'like a mating chihuahua' was just gross. Find a more
appropriate simile.[/b]
Why? That is what the writer thinks and that is how he pictures.....I don't see why it should be changed cos it is "Gross".....sometimes certain things just descibe what you wanna say and changing the wods don't cut it at all

Frank 3:16, watch your tenses. Writing literature is different from speaking English. Then again, I think you guys are rushing too much- think and feel your character's emotions not just: [b]"Gbram! I can write, let me start tapping my keyboard and hit the 1,000 mark.

Rap maestro: indirectly tellinq him 2 mynd himself abi?

Efemena_xy: ^^ Sounds more like constructive critism to me...

Efemena_xy: ^^ Sounds more like constructive critism to me..

And who, is "him"?

HumbledbYGrace: you call that constructive?

Well

I reserve my comment

Efemena_xy:

Uh..huh, I do.

Even world renown best seller authours / writers have people who review and critique their work...and they can be quite brutal in their assessment.

We as writers all need some measure of critism of our work. Or how else do we improve? For example, rather than say: "That piece was difficult to comprehend", it's better to say: "Incorporating some spacing, paragraphing and punctuation at *** and *** would make your piece easier to read and comprehend..."

HumbledbYGrace: Larry Sun would you please remove my name in the list? I don't think I can do this, maybe I should just pull my chair and join the readers club.

I hope my notice is not too late

Thanks

Larry-Sun:

I am really hurt by this. If you had really thought you wouldn't be able to pull it off, I wonder why you signed up in the first place. Besides, for something as serious as this, I would have expected you to PM me first. My initial plan was to offer an assistance during your turn by working up the chapter with you (I already imagined this when I wrote that members may collaborate to create a chapter), I was even ready to relinquish the spotlight and perhaps send a chapter to your mail to post at your turn. Now that you're definitely opting out, I see no reason to make you stay again after endless tries. Of course, you can remain a reader and make necessary comments and corrections.

To me, your reason for chickening out doesn't hold much fluid, because I'm still certain that you can do it. But I THINK Mazi's decisive prurient art in his future contribution brought about your decision (I may be wrong though).

Anyway, I shall put Yellow Mosquito in your place.

Larry-Sun:

I am really hurt by this. If you had really thought you wouldn't be able to pull it off, I wonder why you signed up in the first place. Besides, for something as serious as this, I would have expected you to PM me first. My initial plan was to offer an assistance during your turn by working up the chapter with you (I already imagined this when I wrote that members may collaborate to create a chapter), I was even ready to relinquish the spotlight and perhaps send a chapter to your mail to post at your turn. Now that you're definitely opting out, I see no reason to make you stay again after endless tries. Of course, you can remain a reader and make necessary comments and corrections.

To me, your reason for chickening out doesn't hold much fluid, because I'm still certain that you can do it. But I THINK Mazi's decisive prurient art in his future contribution brought about your decision (I may be wrong though).

Anyway, I shall put Yellow Mosquito in your place.

maclatunji: Larry-Sun, make your writing simple. Yes, you are trying to be descreptive but you are overdoing it. The part of 'like a mating chihuahua' was just gross. Find a more
appropriate simile.

Frank 3:16, watch your tenses. Writing literature is different from speaking English. Then again, I think you guys are rushing too much- think and feel your character's emotions not just: "Gbram! I can write, let me start tapping my keyboard and hit the 1,000 mark.

Mynd_44:
What is the long post for? Humble is in.......no question about that.

Leave her name there, she gets like this a lot so don't bother