femi4: Dear Sir is right irrespective of the gender of hrm............its a man's world

Also, re-arrange your addy and date in this form and remove the Bsc, gsm no and emai addy. Bsc is not your surname

Full Name.
1 Address Road,
Ekpoma, Edo State.
Nigeria
6th May, 2013

ROSYL: Childish!

AmBeautiful: Your letter should be addressed : Dear Sir/Madam

dulphines: @OP, if your godfather who wants to get the job for you says its ok, then its ok. i.e if you have any. #Just judging by what goes on in Nigeria#

femi4: he can also see it as unnecessary familiarity....its 50/50 sha

obi123:

or be forward thinking , go the extra mile to find out who exactly this letter needs to go to

sure way: I'll suggest you make your research well to know the name of the c/o...instead of saying dear madam/sir..
it can be e.g dear mr Arikuyeri James,

While in the University, I worked as the treasurer of management Science Students Association of Nigeria,(MASSAN) Falculty of Management Science , Ambrose Alli University, Ekpoma . In this, I quickly earned a reputation as a professional, conscientious worker with excellent personal -relations skills. In addition, I am known as someone who is driven to get things done. Among my other strengths, I have good research skills and IT Skills.

Malubi: Just make sure the later is short and snapy because HR Officers may not have time to read a lengthy laters. Thanks

donpere:
So wat do u suggest?

donpere:
So wat do u suggest?

donpere:
So wat do u suggest?

collynzo2: Also make sure you avoid grammatical and spelling blunders like the above.

ROSYL: Childish!

breathless: My RECONSTRUCTION;



I have worked in the same University as the treasurer of management Science Students Association of Nigeria,(MASSAN) Faculty of Management Science where I quickly earned a reputation as a professional and conscientious worker with excellent personal -relations skills. In addition, I am target driven and result oriented on any assigned task. My other knowledge, skills and strengths include but limited to excellent and quality research analysis and ICT Skills such as Arc Maps, Oracle 11g data base, Linus OS, Microsoft Excel, Powerpoint and Microsoft Word.

My post graduation professional work experience include[b] Polaris Digitech where I worked Briefly as a contract staff[/b] from Jan. 2xxx to Dec. 2xxx and Land Surveyors & GIS consultants as a systems operator from Jan. 2xxx to Dec. 2xxx.

obi123:

and with what goes on in Nigeria people are still getting jobs without God fathers

donpere: Hey guys a friend just sent me this cover letter to help edit. I have edited . Below is the Result. Pleas i want to know if its okay.

FULL NAMES, BSc.
1 ADDRESS ROAD ,
EKPOMA , EDO STATE
NIGERIA
G.S.M: (+234xxxxxxxxxx)
Email: xxxxxxx@ymail.com

6,5, 2013

The Human Resources Manager,

Access Bank Plc,

Lagos,

Nigeria



Dear Sir,



APPLICATION FOR GRADUATE TRAINEE



I hereby apply for a Graduate Trainee position in your organization in response to your advertisement 6th May, 2013. I am a promising, hardworking recent university graduate with a background in Accounting and Management.[s] As a creative, energetic individual with excellent communications skills and a pleasant, accommodating manner, I believe I offer the right combination of skills to be just that person you require.[/s]



As you can see from my enclosed résumé,I recently graduated from the Ambrose Alli University, Ekpoma with a Bachelor’s degree in Accounting.


While in the University, I worked as the treasurer of mManagement Science Students Association of Nigeria,(MASSAN) Falculty of Management Science , Ambrose Alli University, Ekpoma . [s]In this, I quickly earned a reputation as a professional, conscientious worker with excellent personal -relations skills[/s]. In addition, I am known as someone who is driven to get things done. Among my other strengths, I have good research skills and IT Skills.

After Mmy University , I worked Briefly as a contract staff with Polaris Digitech , Land Surveyors & GIS consultants as a systems operator, i I have excellent knowledge of Arc Maps, Oracle 11g data base, Linus OS, Microsoft Excel, Powerpoint and Microsoft Word.



As a fast learner with a large capacity for growth and development, I am confident that, with these skills and traits to offer, I will prove to be an asset to your company.

I would be pleased to have the opportunity to discuss and look forward to speaking with you soon. Feel free to contact me at the address and phone number listed above.



Thank you.





Yours faithfully,





XXXXXXXX

breathless: My RECONSTRUCTION;

Dear Sir,



APPLICATION FOR THE POSITION OF GRADUATE TRAINEE



I hereby apply for the above mentioned position in your organization in response to your advertisement of 6th May, 2013 in the xxxxxxx newspaper. I am a promising, hardworking university graduate from the Ambrose Alli University, Ekpoma, with a background in Accounting and Management. As a creative, energetic individual with excellent communications skills and a pleasant, accommodating manner, I believe I possess the right combination of skills to be considered.



I have worked in the same University as the treasurer of management Science Students Association of Nigeria,(MASSAN) Faculty of Management Science where I quickly earned a reputation as a professional and conscientious worker with excellent personal -relations skills. In addition, I am target driven and result oriented on any assigned task. My other knowledge, skills and strengths include but limited to excellent and quality research analysis and ICT Skills such as Arc Maps, Oracle 11g data base, Linus OS, Microsoft Excel, Powerpoint and Microsoft Word.

My post graduation professional work experience include Polaris Digitech where I worked Briefly as a contract staff from Jan. 2xxx to Dec. 2xxx and Land Surveyors & GIS consultants as a systems operator from Jan. 2xxx to Dec. 2xxx.

I am a fast learner and confident with a large intellectual capacity for growth and development. I trust that you will find my qualification and skills resourceful to your organisation.

I will greatly appreciate an opportunity for further discussions as I look forward to your favourable response soonest.

Kindly contact me at the address and phone number listed above.



Thank you.





Yours faithfully,