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Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 1:20pm On Sep 25, 2013 |
Babzilla:Yeah...I get. |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by aprokomania(m): 1:34pm On Sep 25, 2013 |
thanks for the compliment sholay. akpu wouldnt be bad. i would like to work with you on this movie if you wish to release it. |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by VillageBoi(m): 1:34pm On Sep 25, 2013 |
Lol @ 'blood & gore'... that's all 1 Like |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 1:43pm On Sep 25, 2013 |
aprokomania: thanks for the compliment sholay. akpu wouldnt be bad. i would like to work with you on this movie if you wish to release it.You are welcome. I am just a scriptwriter, not a filmmaker. So, I have 'released' it already on nairaland . But I can work with filmmakers whose emphasis is on quality. |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 2:56pm On Sep 25, 2013 |
Where's speedyboi btw? |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by VillageBoi(m): 3:02pm On Sep 25, 2013 |
sholay2011: Where's speedyboi btw?The BigBoi dey take sabbatical every week |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 3:04pm On Sep 25, 2013 |
VillageBoi:I see. If he is a BigBoi...you be BigMan |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by prof800(m): 8:49am On Sep 26, 2013 |
Ikamenze:Ahhh...Ikamenze how are you na.. I like the above statement...there is nothing like a perfect script. @villageboi..I'm shocked really,I was expecting some harsh criticisms from you...I thought you were gonna give him the same treatment you gave me when I made my first post......Have you gone soft or is shola a close friend of urs,u don't wanna hurt his feelings ryt? Lol......I remember your story from like last year or so,... ...every body is just trying to make every body get better...there is nothing to it. 1 Like |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by VillageBoi(m): 9:49am On Sep 26, 2013 |
sholay2011:For where? I get pot-belly? |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 10:11am On Sep 26, 2013 |
VillageBoi:Is that ur definition of a Big man? |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by VillageBoi(m): 12:10pm On Sep 26, 2013 |
sholay2011:Lol... mind yasef! |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by Nobody: 7:33pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
First things first; Sholay I'm very sorry for not responding on time....accept my apologies . Okay! Btw, should this fall under 'horror' genre? Seems to me more like a fantasy... This script is really beautiful! The plot is very cool and I like it! I really love Madam Q's character! Her lines are 'tight' as well! I think FUNLOLA AOFIYEBI will act that role perfectly . The dialogue is also beautifully written except just two parts...which sounds quite cheesy. 1. JAYE:I dunno why, but I just don't like that reply. It is too fast paced IMO. It could have been splitted for madam q to say something before 'then why did I agree to....' 2. MARY:Lol...this is really crappy. I don't see anyone in Mary's condition at that particular point in time saying this! A 'shocky' and 'screwed up' Facial expression could've been more appropriate. Afterall said. Sholay! This is nice! Am I forgiven thou? |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by Nobody: 7:41pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
uj_sizzle: Oh Poor Mary. So you and villageboi finally stole my slang You in particular don dey use am the way I don't like though . I still have the power to sue you for copyright infringement...u know.. |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by Nobody: 7:57pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
tony ayo: You are aware there's something called 'shooting script', right? But before I talk make I remember say Naija producer get category...so make I just shut my mouth |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 8:08pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
speedyboi: First things first; Sholay I'm very sorry for not responding on time....accept my apologies .Of course, you are forgiven bro. Welcome back! Prof and Villageboi wud be "over the moon" with ur return. Hmmm...your comment really got me thinking. Fantasy? I don't agree...yet but those lines you pointed out now seem a bit 'crappy' to me just because you pointed them out! Funlola Aofiyebi? Hmmm...she wud be too young for such role. I wud choose Joke Silva or Liz Benson I really appreciate your comment. Thanks. Btw, where have you been We've missed you in the chat room. I'm glad you're back. |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by Nobody: 8:17pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
thank God I shut my mouth, Prof said it all on the second page Babzilla: WHY DONT U MAKE MADAM Q TURN INTO A DRAGON OR SOMETHING HORRIBLE THEN EAT UP EVERYONE IN THE HOUSE THEN BURNS DOWN THE HOUSE WITH HER BREATH B4 FLYING OFF SCREECHING Wicked! |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by Nobody: 8:35pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
Tayeni: thank you! Although I enjoyed reading it but I couldn't place a finger on what was wrong wt it until I read ur comment.......Mary not knwing madam Q was her mother unlaw is a hard sell......its not believable to me. They've lived in d same estate 4 atleast 4years and must hv had mutual friends or neighbors.......I'm not literary, I'm just a consumer yet I spotted that loophole.Short films are not meant to throw everything at your face! You can always make your own conclusions What I actually made out of that is; Madam Q lied about living in the estate initially and she never had any party. Just excuses to see her face or to pick offence or whatever (for whatever reason). |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by UjSizzle(f): 8:49pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
speedyboi:hehehehe copyright ko |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by Nobody: 9:01pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
sholay2011:Lol. I just realized. Can you believe I pictured madam Q as Funlola through out the short? Did you put madam Q's age at first sef. Lemme check! Sholay2011: Btw, where have you been We've missed you in the chat room. I'm glad you're back.I'm sorry Jo. Last week and this week has been somehow hectic for me. And seriously, I don't know if I'm back. I still have lots of tasks staring at my face, I just had to read your script |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 9:06pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
^^^^^lol. Thanks for checking. And well done wiv ur tight schedule. Yeah, Madam Q is 62 years old. |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by Nobody: 9:31pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
sholay2011: ^^^^^lol. Thanks for checking. I don't have a tight schedule......wahala just come and go! |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 9:39pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
speedyboi:Mmm...now I'm getting curious. |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by alkalineak: 4:20pm On Oct 01, 2013 |
Interesting short and nicely written Am afraid i kinda agree with speedyboi, its more of a fantasy than horror. Maybe if you show us in the script how Mary was killed, like madam Q walks to her and rip her heart out and eat it bla bla bla and how Madam Q destroyed the pregnancy by just looking at Mary's tummy, it might look scary lol. And also that Madam Q character, do you intend to make her Jaye's mother or just a neighbour as she introduced herself to Mary? i think you need to make that clear in the script if thats what you intend to do, coz i thought she's a neighbour that helped Jaye acquire his wealth, both Jaye and Madam Q now lie to sade by calling Madam Q his mom to make things easy whenever they plan to kill sade. hope you catch my drift? Overall its a very interesting short script, looks like you are more into horror/fantasy stories. nice one |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 4:47pm On Oct 01, 2013 |
^^^^Tnx bro. Your advice is noted. I dnt do horror/fantasy alone. But I like if my script thrills ppl, even if it's romance. My favourite genre sef na "intelligent comedy". Lol. I appreciate your comment. |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by alkalineak: 5:45pm On Oct 01, 2013 |
Comedy! wow thats nice.. apparently comedy is the hardest script to write, i'll love to see your work whenever you write one |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 6:16pm On Oct 01, 2013 |
alkaline.ak:Tnx. |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by danielmay16(m): 5:05pm On Oct 09, 2013 |
I tink u shud play around more with adjectives, makes lines punchy. Yea, I saw d picture painted n synchd wit it. Nice sharp turn conflict 'blood seepin out...' Lots of description, u'll b a better novel writer. Hailn a broda |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 5:12pm On Oct 09, 2013 |
danielmay16: I tink u shud play around more with adjectives, makes lines punchy. Yea, I saw d picture painted n synchd wit it.Bro, I appreciate your feedback and I would take note of using more adjectives. And I don't think I would be a better novel writer. |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by danielmay16(m): 6:53pm On Oct 09, 2013 |
Fear not, I mean well broda |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by sholay2011(m): 7:18pm On Oct 09, 2013 |
danielmay16: Fear not, I mean well brodaLol@fear not. Okay bro. |
Re: Nigerian Horror Story- A Short Film Script by morsadh(m): 11:06am On Nov 17, 2014 |
You write very lovely shorts-very straightforward. Would have to agree though with the others. This may not be horror. Maybe thriller is the right genre for this. Would love to see your works on screen. |
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