Nice piece. Kudos

This is a reallly cool piece. Well done.

felt like i was seeing a movie. very nice write-up. loved the fact brown and jane were together but i thought 10 years was way too much for liam.(he didn't do the thing na). anyways,twas kUUl. loved it. felt like i was seeing a movie. very nice write-up. loved the fact brown and jane were together but i thought 10 years was way too much for liam.(he didn't do the thing na). anyways,twas kUUl. loved it.

Tgold1:
Royh ,TheBlessedMAN , SmartestPopQueen , Mrlemuel , fobiflex , AOB1 , Fiyah, PamelB , Princedami....... Comma See oooo

any vacancy in the 1st row? QUEENLIZ is Here

Tgold1:
Royh ,TheBlessedMAN , SmartestPopQueen , Mrlemuel , fobiflex , AOB1 , Fiyah, PamelB , Princedami....... Comma See oooo

I'm late o....but I still join Shaa. AOB1, you no call me,even my admin princedami. Oya shift for me sharp sharp

SmartestPopQUEEN:
any vacancy in the 1st row? QUEENLIZ is Here

Come Sit Beside Me Sweetie

Nice one op,its as though I'm watching all these high school woteva,hollywood people shall locate you,and to those peeps critizing,if u wanna correct him,do dat politely,nd it not as if ya'll can write a page of letter,naw commin here be forming chimamanda adichie or wole soyinka.make una take time,will a simple weldone hurt you,kevin?more grease to ur elbow,bid u well on dis journey,u shall go places wit these.....bless up man.

PamelB:
I'm late o....but I still join Shaa. AOB 1, you no call me,even my admin princedam i. Oya shift for me sharp sharp

Oh! Sorry my lady. *quickly shifts* I even came late too. Thanks to ROYH who gave me a call. Enjoy the popcorn pending the next update

wey saxwizard gan self? *maybe work*

PamelB:
I'm late o....but I still join Shaa. AOB1, you no call me,even my admin princedami. Oya shift for me sharp sharp

But Me I don Invite U na!!!!!

SmartestPopQUEEN:
any vacancy in the 1st row? QUEENLIZ is Here

You Should You are so Special, Oya Come Join Me on this table for Two...... Just for Us

princedami:


Oh! Sorry my lady. *quick shifts* I even came late too. Thanks to ROYH who gave me a call. Enjoy the popcorn pending the next update

wey saxwizard gan self? *maybe work*

its My Plesure Abi Na Pleasure Una Dey Call Am...

D tory Sweet, Finished It Yesterday

Mrlemuel:

Come Sit Beside Me Sweetie

shift for me pls... Let me rest my tired buttocks...

Tgold1:



You Should You are so Special, Oya Come Join Me on this table for Two...... Just for Us

in a little girl's voice... 'thanku sir'

SmartestPopQUEEN:
shift for me pls... Let me rest my tired buttocks...

Sit On My Laps, Or U Can Choose To Sit On My BZK Its Got A Seat Belt*winks*

really cool!..nice write up

princedami:


Oh! Sorry my lady. *quick shifts* I even came late too. Thanks to ROYH who gave me a call. Enjoy the popcorn pending the next update

wey saxwizard gan self? *maybe work*

my broda no ve say I com late.....I dey extra busy of recent. ....

I don carry last Ba

Mrlemuel:

Sit On My Laps, Or U Can Choose To Sit On My BZK Its Got A Seat Belt*winks*

... What a wishful thinker yhu are

lovelygurl:
I could only imagine d old man's face, lol!

Don't give up Kelvin, d more u update d more readers nd coments u get

Yes

Very interesting story. I like d fact that u were able to build up the story from d beginning to the climax which is full of suspense and down to the resolution aspect which makes d story emotional and interesting. This is a nice write-up, keep it up.
I will like to comment on the title of ur story, it looks shallow to me. The plot of your story can be easily guessed from d title. I never wanted to read your story becos the title discouraged me, i thought it is going to be like all this Nigerian novel which in most cases may nt be interesting.
I think u should give ur title and thought maybe u can come up with something intriguing.

Nice story....... But some parts don't come together... How did she get to the room where Liam almost raped her, or did I skip that part??

And for someone that was shot, don't you think one month plus is too soon for sex...just asking?