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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:03am On Jun 11, 2015 |
I remember I promised 3 chapters tonight but I am gonna add 1 to it...this is in a bid to apologise for updating late... |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Weirdman: 12:07am On Jun 11, 2015 |
Nice story continue man |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:32am On Jun 11, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 16 We began to ascend the stairs leading to Derrek's house when we were abruptly stopped by Jessica. She stood on the top steps with Tiffany on one side of her and Sammy on the other. Jessica had her arms crossed looking down at us with her annoying scrunched up face. She kind of reminded me of a ferret. "And what do you looosers think you're doing here?" She asked us while Tiffany and Sammy mimicked her stuck-up facial expression. "We're coming to the party Jessica, so move." Dorcas jumped in before I could say anything. "Ha! I don't think so. This is a senior's only kind of party." "We were invited." Dorcas said mimicking their stuck-up tone. "I don't care who invited you, you're not welcome here." Jessica insisted. "Derrek invited us and this is his house so get the hell out of the way Jessica!" I finally jumped in as I took another step up. I was now standing face to face with Jessica, staring at her with glaring eyes. She looked at me with amusement, "Ohh look here girls, Shy-loner girl thinks she's tough." She laughed as Tiffany and Sammy joined in following anything Jessica said like two obedient lap dogs. "Well, first of all little girl, Derrek would never be caught dead talking to a sophomore never mind inviting three of them to his party." The front door opened as the noise from inside surrounded us, people's laughter, music, joyful yelling; all the sounds that indicated a teen party. We all looked over to the door and saw Derrek coming out of the house. He was wearing the same clothes he had worn at school today. Blue jeans with a Pittsburgh Steelers hooded sweat shirt on and even though I would have drowned in that sweater it was tight against his overly large muscles. At this point everyone sitting on the porch was now watching us closely. "Your right, Jessica." Derrek said in his deeply low voice. "I didn't invite those three sophomores here." He paused for dramatic effect. "I knew it-" Jessica began before Derrek caught her off. "I invited Jane here. Why the short-stuff and nerd boy came is beyond me." Derrek said while eyeing both Dorcas and Brandon. "Derrek!" Jessica said with amusement. "You know 'nerd boy' is Adams' brother!" Just hearing his name brought a sharp pain into my stomach. Anxiously I looked around hoping he would just appear out of nowhere. I knew it was a tad psychotic, I mean I was supposed to be trying to get over him and yet he was the only thing I could think about. He was the only reason I even came to this party, wishing and hoping that maybe he would be here. Maybe I'd be able to at least see him if not anything else. "I don't care!" Derrek replied to Jessica making her giggle. "And you know we're standing right here!" Brandon announced angrily as both Jessica and Derrek looked back down at Brandon with disgust. Seriously, those two were perfect for each other, both the most stuck-up, 'think they're the best' kids in McLasgidi. "Whatever, we're leaving!" I said through gritted teeth. "Let's go guys." "Wait!" Derrek called out. "You don't have to leave Jane, I invited you!" He said it like it was a good thing, like I wanted to be there and would ditch my friends just to go to his 'party'. God, the nerve of some people! I thought angrily. I turned around to face him, "I'm sorry Derrek, but it's either all of us, or none of us." He looked over at the seniors watching us and then at Jessica who had the 'Yah-right-like- he'll-fall-for-that-one' look on her face. Derrek then looked back at me, "Fine, you guys can all come." Jessica's mouth dropped as she turned to look at Derrek, "But Derrrrekkkk..." She whined. "Shut up Jessica!, you're annoying!" I took one step toward the house before stopping and looking back up at Derrek. "And say you're sorry to my friends." "What?!" He snapped back. "Say you're sorry for calling Dorcas 'short stuff' and Brandon 'nerd boy', or to hell with it...We're leaving." I challenged him. He rolled his eyes, "Fine." He looked at both of them and then muttered "I'msorryokay." Everyone around us gasped in surprise as they stared at Derrek. Though his words were all connected together making it hard to understand them properly I knew it was still a huge achievement to get Derrek to even remotely say it. Jessica stared at Derrek completely stunned before she threw her hands in the air and said, "Unbelievable!" She ran into the house, Tiffany and Sammy tagging along behind her. "You know this is going to ruin my rep! " Derrek groaned. "Well, I guess that's just a risk you're going to have to take." I smiled at him while waving Dorcas and Brandon to follow me. "Party time..." I said unenthusiastically. "I'll show you guys around, follow me." Derrek said as he began to walk into the house. We all followed him as the door opened and once again we were drowned in the noise. "It's a pretty big house so try not to get lost!" Derrek yelled over the noise. I knew it was pointless to try and respond to him, he would never hear me so I just nodded. Derrek began to scream over the music again. "There are drinks in the kitchen, the bar downstairs, there's a keg in the dining room, some hard liquor in the cabinet in the first bedroom up the stairs. If you're planning on getting lucky tonight my bedroom and my parents are off limits. They are probably the only doors locked and if I find anyone in them, they'll get shit-kicked! Girl or boy." He finally stopped yelling as he turned around and looked at us. "Any questions?!" We all shook our heads. "I'll grab us some drinks, what do you want?!" "I'll just have a cooler, maybe?!" I yelled back. "Me too!" Dorcas added. Derrek looked at Brandon waiting for him to answer, "I'm the B.R" Brandon finally responded. "Okay? So beer it is!" Derrek disappeared before Brandon could correct him. I finally took the time to look around and well, everyone was wasted. As my eyes peered around us when I realized I wasn't just checking out the party but actually looking for someone in particular. Every time I saw a tall brown haired boy excitement rose inside me, although I was quickly disappointed because it never turned out to be him. I wanted to forget about him so badly because the constant disappointment was becoming unbearable. I shook my head trying to get him out of my mind. I tried to distract myself by concentrating on something else. At the top of the stairs I saw a couple boys putting a mattress down and looked about ready to ride it down the stairs; both boys had a bottle of hard liquor in their hands. At the bottom of the stairs was a group of teens (boys and girls) cheering and encouraging them. In the corner of the foyer was a chair that was occupied by a half naked girl giving some guy a horrible lap dance, her rhythm was completely off from the music and to any sober person she looked foolish and a tad pathetic. I could slightly see into the dining room where a game of "Strip Poker" was being played. I turned to Dorcas and Brandon waving them closer to me so I didn't have to yell, "Is it just me or is this party a little..." "X-rated?" Brandon finished the sentence for me. "No, this is how parties normally are...aren't they?" Dorcas questioned. "I mean I see it in the movies all the time!" I shook my head trying to keep my eyes averted from all the half naked girls, "Yah, that's just it Dorcas, you see it in movies! I don't think normal teen parties are actually this bad." "Yah, but Jane, this is McLasgidi. 90% of the girls here are sluts!" Brandon nodded, "Dorcas does have a point." "Well...It's still disgusting." They both nodded in agreement though it kind of looked like Brandon was enjoying the 'view'. My head snapped up when I felt someone grab my ass as I quickly turned around to face a drunken guy. He was another senior, not the most popular of the guys but he was still a football player. He was a little chubby with reddish burnt coloured hair, freckles and these piercing green eyes. His eyes were so red and bleary from the vast quantities of alcohol he consumed. "Excuse me!" I said pushing his hand away from me. "Awwww, com' on sex...E " The boy slurred. "I think there's a game of strip poker in the dining room. Umm,why don't you go join them." "Nahhh!" He yelled before stumbling over and falling to the ground. The beer that was once in his hand smashed against the foyer floor. I could hear Dorcas and Brandon laughing behind me as I ignored them and tried to offer him my hand. "Here, I'll help you up." I insisted. "Orrr!" He yelled arrogantly again, "I'll -hicup- helps you'p downn!" He then grabbed my hand before I had a chance to respond and pulled me to the ground as I fell on top of him. Dorcas and Brandon's laughter roared out of control as the boy's arms wrapped around my body and squeezed me tightly against him as I struggled hard to get out of his grasp. "Liam!" Derrek's voice echoed through the foyer as he marched toward us with his arms full of drinks. "What do you think you're doing with Jane, let her go guy, she's mine!" I'm his? I thought to myself, I'm definitely not 'his', I am for nobody, I'm a person not an object. I was going to start yelling at Derrek for saying that. When Liam quickly let go of me and crawled away mumbling apologies to Derrek, I decided to let it slide. "No thank you?" Derrek said as he grabbed me by my waist and pulled me up to my feet. "I'll think about," I replied before turning to Dorcas and Brandon. "Thanks by the way! My two best friends stand by and laugh at me as I get molested by Liam. I have to wait for the stuck- up asshole to come along and save me!" Derrek chuckled, "Hey, I'm standing right here." Brandon butted in, "Yah isn't it fun to be shit talked right in front of your face?" "Whatever Dude, I'm wasted. I honestly don't give a shit." Derrek then handed me a red coloured cooler, then handed Karis the same kind and passed Brandon a beer. "You're cocky like your brother, huh?" Brandon shrugged. "Anyways..." Derrek started talking again. That's when I realized the music had calmed down a bit - we were actually able to talk without screaming at each other. "I'm stealing Jane for a bit, you two go enjoy yourself. Look around, get naked. I really don't care." I looked at Derrek like he was nutty, "Umm, don't I get a say on whether or not I want to come with you?" Derrek then looked down at me as if debating, then finally he replied with one word "No." He wrapped his arm around my shoulders and pretty much dragged me along with him. We went through the dining room in which I really wish we hadn't almost everyone sitting around the table had next to nothing on except one guy you looked rather proud of himself. He must have been winning most the games because the only thing he wasn't wearing was his sweater whilst everyone else had piles of clothes beside them. "Derrek, dude you got to get in on this!" The fully clothed boy called out. Derrek merely waved his hand dismissively to him as he brought me through a doorway that led to the kitchen. The kitchen was huge! It looked like it belonged in a restaurant rather than a home. All the appliances were made of stainless steel that matched perfectly to the black marble counter tops. "Did you want another drink?" Derrek asked me as he walked up to one of the two fridges and opened it. The fridge was full of alcoholic beverages from top to bottom and nothing else. I was going to say no when I looked down and realized my cooler had less than a sip left in it, so instead I said "Sure, same thing." He grabbed another red cooler from the fridge twisted off the cap before passing it to me. "So what, you guys don't eat around here?" Derrek sneered, "Obviously we do." He replied snobby, "the food is in there." He pointed to the other fridge as he rolled his eyes at me. "Jane?!" A voice I recognized all too well pierced my ears as I turned around to be face to face with...my brother! "Oh...Uh, hey Richard." I said nervously as I began to take giant nervous swigs from my cooler. "What the hell do you think you're doing here?!" He yelled at me. "Richard, calm down. She's with me." Richard turned to look at Derrek with wide eyes, I could see the anger boiling up inside him as his hands began to clench. "Richard, stop it!" I yelled out, "I'm seventeen years old!" "No exactly Jane, you're only sixteen years old! No sixteen year olds come to this party never mind my little sister!" He growled as I chugged the last bit of the drink down. "And what's that in your hand?!" "It's nothing!" "You're drinking?!" He ignored me. "So what you drink all the time!" "I'm twenty." "Yah and you drank when you were sixteen, too!" "This is not like you Jane, what has gotten into you!?" He demanded. "Nothing has gotten into me, just leave me alone!" I yelled at him as loud as I could, I knew everyone was now staring at us. My cheeks began to redden with both anger and embarrassment as I ran out of the kitchen. I didn't know where I was going but I continued to run knocking already tipsy people to the floor as I passed. I finally made it to a set of sliding glass doors as I opened them up and ran onto Derrek's lawn. I was guessing it was his back yard because I didn't recognize it from earlier. I continued to run down through the grass until I couldn't go any longer. I fell to my knees as tears began to burst out of my eyes - I felt so embarrassment and so angry at my brother. I was already depressed about everything going on between me and Adams. All my emotions exploded at that moment as I sat kneeling in the grass bawling my eyes out. "Jane...are you okay?" 1 Like |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:52am On Jun 11, 2015 |
NOTICE: I want to inform you guys that all other chapters I will be updating from 17 - 27 has some of the casts'name changed... This is due to the fact that some friends of mine whose names I used then were complaining... Especially on the roles I used them for... But you are still going to recognise this characters. |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:58am On Jun 11, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 17 The sound of his voice instantly stopped the tears from forming in my eyes, any thoughts that were once circulating through my mind had vanished. The moment I looked up and peered into his warm brown eyes the world around me disappeared. Even with his right eye completely bruised black he was still gorgeous. I barely even acknowledged the sudden rapid thumping in my chest. I roamed my eyes over every inch of his perfectly sculpted body. I had been waiting, wishing to see him all night but it wasn't until that exact moment did I realize how much I needed him, how much I craved to be securely wrapped in his masculine embrace. It felt like my head was getting light as if maybe I was going to pass out, that's when I realized I had been holding my breath - I let it go. I watched Adams as he knelt down beside me. His arm reached out as he cupped my face in his hand. The second his skin touched mine, my whole body exploded with goose bumps as a shiver ran down my spine. Using his thumb he gently wiped away the left over tears from my cheek as I reached up and pressed my hand against his. His other arm snaked around my neck and at first he hesitated for a brief moment before pulling me closer. I could feel his warm breath against my lips and it smelt of sweet strawberries with a hint of spearmint. The alcohol that was now circulating through my veins dismissed any past anger I had toward him because at that moment all I wanted was to press my lips against his and taste that sweet intoxicating smell that was radiating inside my brain and attacking my senses. I removed my hand from his as I coiled it underneath his arm and grasped on to his back before pulling him closer to me. Our lips were now so close I could feel his lightly brush against mine which instantly forced my lips to begin to tingle. My body began to heat up with anticipation - it felt like hours before our lips finally met although it was merely seconds. It started with light butterfly kisses, our mouths moved in sync with each other. Time seemed to stop as the world around me had been forgotten. It was just me and Adams at that moment and that was all I cared about. The house could have been on fire and I would barely have even acknowledged it. The sounds of cars driving and party-goers laughing, drunken yelling and boats honking and all other sounds that normally filled the night air of McLasgidi had all disappeared from existence. The only sound that seemed to reach my ears were our individual heartbeats pounding against our chests and our heavy breathing as the kiss began to deepen. As Adams pressed his lips harder against mine, pleasure exploded inside me. The tingles that had begun in my lips expanded throughout my entire body. The last couple days I had built up so much resentment toward Adams and self-loathing for being so weak. Not once though could I deny myself what I truly wanted, which was this. I hated Adams after everything he had done to me and deep down there was an unreleased anger toward him but no matter how much I tried to unleash it there was something else fighting against the anger, something stronger. It was something I vaguely recognized from movies I'd watched and books I've read except it was a feeling I was completely new to. There was no other explanation as I just then realized I had truly fallen completely in love with Adams. Adams hand began drawing light circles on the back of my neck which automatically made me shutter with sheer pleasure. My arm joined my other one around his waist as I pulled him harder against me leaving no space between us. We fit together perfectly, like we were specifically made to fit into each other's arms. Even though, I could still hear a faint voice in the depths of my mind, yelling at me to pull away. That this was not safe and I was only setting myself up for more pain, more hurt and more misery. Nice self-talk going on inside my head, I had to ignore the senile bitch and go with the pleasure principle instead! Adams pulled away for only an instant and yet that instant felt to me like an eternity. He lowered his head as he began nibbling on my ear sending me into pure ecstasy. The pleasurable tickling he was doing on my ear over powered the voice in my head and silenced her. Stupid cow she's getting in the way of my happiness! I could feel my hands clenching onto his back and could faintly hear my moans of pleasure though my mind had become nothing more than a cloudy haze as I sat knelt in the grass enjoying every electrifying touch from Adams. "Wait..." Adams pulled away breathing heavily, "We need to talk first..." "Hmmm?" I sat there in a daze barely even realizing he was talking. I didn't want to talk but instead wanted to just feel his body heat against mine and I didn't want the addictive feel good sensations to stop. "Jane," He whispered as his breathing was beginning to even out. He hesitated, debating on whether or not to finish his thought. I really didn't care - I just wished he would stop talking so we could get back to what we were doing. "I need to know, what has gotten into you today? I need to know if this is a permanent thing." "What do you mean?" I spoke softly. I was still too distracted by wanting him and his pleasurable heat. "The new clothes? New attitude? Flirting with Derrek and coming to this party?" His eyes were full of disappointment, "This isn't you Jane, you're not like these people, you're better than this, than them." The absence of his touch cleared my head as the dreamy haze disappeared and I was finally able to make sense of what he was saying. I can't exactly explain why but his accusation of actually 'knowing me' made me angry as my eyes changed from loving to furious in an instant. I know I might have been overreacting but the fact that both Adams and continued to act as if me coming to this 'party' was like God hanging out in Hell was infuriating! I was a teenager like everyone else and even though most of my sixteen years were completely isolated, I no longer wanted it to be like that. I wanted to be like a normal teenage girl! I quickly stood to my feet which released me from Adams embrace, leaving me feeling alone and incomplete. Every part of my body ached and craved for his touch but somehow I managed to hold myself together and keep my composure. "This..." I waved my hands up and down my body, "isn't me? How would you know what is or isn't me, Adams? You barely even know me!" "Barely even know you?!" Adams asked in disbelief. "We sat on the cliff for eight hours Jane and did nothing but talk. If anything I know you better than anyone else." I couldn't deny the fact that he was completely right, which only made me that much angrier. A guy I knew for barely even a week knew more about me than my own parents did. We hung out for one night and I had trusted him with my whole life story. He betrayed me the next morning and as I stood there looking down at him knelt in the grass those feelings of betrayal from that afternoon came rushing back. "I don't care!" I yelled immaturely, "Just leave me alone, Adams!" Adams got up to his feet as he tried to reach out to me, instantly I backed away from him knowing the second he touched me all would be forgotten. "Jane, what can I do to prove to you I won't ever hurt you again? I'm begging for your forgiveness." His voice was full of sincerity as he looked down at me with his soft brown eyes that were lightly shimmering with unshed tears. I could see the wetness that glazed over his eyes except the tears never seemed to fall as he tried to keep himself together. My heart began to shatter into pieces as I watched Adams beg me - I had never seen him look so exposed and vulnerable. 2 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by princesssusan(f): 1:03am On Jun 11, 2015 |
Janey u beta bhave urself or else............weldone op. |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 1:05am On Jun 11, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 18 I stood frozen on the spot as fear stirred up inside me. Even the curtains against the window were dark and heavy blocking out the night's sky. Again I spoke into the silence, "Is anyone there...?" I stuttered out of fear but there was no response. I was about to take a step forward when I heard the floor board creek which automatically made my eyes begin to water. My heart was pounding hard against my chest. I was so scared I wanted to burst into tears. I already had a fear of the dark and being in here in the darkness with some unknown person had me shaking and hyperventilating. "Who's there?" I cried out again - silence. I didn't know what to do as my body stood paralyzed in one spot, so I decided to try screaming for help. The second I was about to open my mouth a cold hand clamped over it preventing any sound from escaping my lips. I panicked and tried to scream but it was muffled against the unknown hand. The hand was too big to be a girl's so I knew it had to be a guy's. Swiftly I turned around and was about to start hitting him, but he completely overpowered me. He pushed me hard in the shoulder as I went flying across the room and my head smashed against something hard as I felt warm liquid begin to cover my head. Dizzily, I reach up and touched the thick liquid oozing out of my head and instantly I knew it was blood. I began to scream at the top of my lungs. I felt his hands wrap around my ankles as he pulled me down towards him. "Shut up!" He hissed. I tried to put a face to the voice but I was too panicked to focus. Rivers of tears were now flowing down my cheeks as I squirmed to get away but his hold on me was too strong. I could feel my strength fading and my body began to shake with pure terror as I realized I couldn't escape. "What's wrong Jane? You can go around kissing everyone tonight but me?!" He gritted through his teeth. "I saw you with Adams on the lawn and then Derrek in the kitchen. What about me, don't I get one!" He locked my feet down with his legs as he began crawling on top of me. I tried to punch him but he blocked it by grabbing both my arms and pinning them against the floor. I screamed out in pain as my wrists were smashed with force between the floor and his hands. My head was still pounding and I could feel the blood dripping down my neck and soaking my back. "Please..." I cried out, "J-just let me go...I'm so- sorry! I'll give you a-a kiss if that's what you want..." I stuttered through my sobs. My breathing was erratic I kept gasping but felt like I couldn't get enough air into my lungs. A malicious chuckle came from him as he began forcing his legs between mine. "No, I want more than a kiss." I tried to keep my legs together, but he was too strong and heavy. I screamed out again, wondering where the hell everyone was. This was supposed to be a party surely people had to of heard my screams, why wasn't anyone coming? I felt so alone and scared and vulnerable. "You had better shut up!" He threatened me. I could tell he was growing impatient because his voice was growing angrier. He was sweating and his breathing had quickened but I could tell he was also becoming excited. He pushed both my hands together and held them above my head with his right hand. Even both my hands were no match against his one as I tried pulling them away unsuccessfully. He spread my legs open when I tried to kick him away but he barely even flinched. He was big and I'm not talking about muscles, his round body barely fit between my legs making it almost impossible to move them. With his free hand he ripped the strap off my dress exposing my naked chest to him. Immediately I wished I had never worn this, I wished I had never changed my look to try and make Adams jealous! My loud sobs were now mixed in with hiccups as I began to give up and let my body go limp. Suddenly his hand was at my throat blocking my airway, squeezing and pushing me down against the floor using his weight to exert more force. "Stop fucking crying!" He growled as his grip got tighter and tighter. I tried gasping for air but nothing came as my body began to shake from lack of oxygen. I felt light headed and thought I was going to black out. Stay awake I told myself, don't black out! I found the energy and the will to struggle against his death grip. I turned my head from side to side and bucked my whole body bracing myself with my feet on the floor. He grinned and laughed as he said "That's it Jane, struggle it'll make it feel better for me!" He moved in to kiss me and I could look into his eyes, which were glassy and cold. I could smell his sour breath. I felt nauseous as my stomach began churning. I turned my head and he kissed and licked the side of my neck. He finally let go of my throat and moved his hand downward as I breathed in sharply, gasping in deep gulps of air. His hand ran over my breasts squeezing roughly and pinching my nipples making me moan in pain. He put his mouth on my breast and encircled the nipple before biting down. I could feel his breath on my skin making it crawl. He paused to look at me to see the terror in my eyes. Then his hand began moving its way down between my breasts and inside the top half of my torn dress triggering an alarm inside me. "Please!" I begged. "I said shut the Bleep up!" Suddenly the black of his hand slapped hard against my face as my cries grew louder. The sound of something smashing against the other side of the door made us turn our heads toward the noise. He froze, his eyes wide for a brief moment, and that was all I needed to push him as hard as I could. He didn't move very far but it gave me the chance to wriggle free and try to get up. "Open it dude!" I heard Adams yell on the other side of the door. "Bleep, I'm trying to find the key!" Derrek yelled back. "Adams!" I screamed as I jumped to my feet and attempted to run for the door. The guy got to me first as he clamped his hand onto my arm and threw me hard against the floor. I screamed out in agony. I heard another smash on the door. "If you fucking break that you're paying for it!" Derrek yelled. "Shut up!" Adams yelled back as he smashed against the door again. Suddenly, I was grabbed by my hair and dragged across the floor toward the closet. I didn't want to scream anymore because I knew it would drive Adams mad but I couldn't help it. My loud excruciating screams echoed throughout the house. I felt like he was ripping my scalp off my head. I tried to see what he was doing when I heard him open up the closet door but at the same time I heard the deadbolt click unlocked as the door swung open. Adams rushed into the bedroom with Derrek slowly tagging behind. I finally looked up at the boy and saw his red hair, freckled face and his chunky body. It was Liam. "You fucking bastard!" Adams shouted. It was the first time I had ever heard Adams swear. He ran toward Liam and punched him in the face before Liam even had a chance to react. Liam smashed against the wall behind him as he slid to the floor with a big thud. He looked up at Adams as blood began to gush out of his nose. "You know your little angel was fooling around with Derrek not even ten minutes ago." Liam stated with pure malice. A look of hurt flashed across Adams' face as instant regret wash over me. I had never felt so dishonest and unworthy in my life. I wished I could just curl up into a little ball and disappear forever. Adams' face quickly changed to anger as he kicked Liam hard in the ribs making Liam scream out in pain. "Bleep you Liam, you don't know shit!" Derrek finally spoke up as he pushed Adams out of the way. He grabbed Liam by his shirt and pulled him up with little effort, "I told you to stay away from Jane!" It was Derrek's turn to punch Liam but this time as Liam fell to the ground he was completely knocked out. I was sitting there looking down at Liam's unconscious body while my own body was shaking uncontrollably. I felt Adams' arms wrap around me as I rested my head in his chest, tears streaming down my face. "What are we going to do with him?" Adams questioned Derrek. "What can we do?" "Well, she can charge him...Can't she?" "Ha! Not likely, Liam's dad is one of McLasgidin's most respected Judges and his mom is that fucking sexy and sweet nurse at the hospital." Derrek said as he analyzed Liam's body. "Who do you think they're going to believe? Liam - the son of two extremely respected adults or Jane - the weird loner girl?" TO BE CONTINUED... NOTE: Wow, I think I have done well for tonight... 6 chapters isn't easy... I will update some more tomorrow... I love you guys... Sleep tight. 2 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 5:14pm On Jun 11, 2015 |
Wow, u tried! Loving this story more nd more |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Calmdove(f): 8:04pm On Jun 11, 2015 |
Wow! Dat was so close... And were was dorcas and brandon when dis happened 1 Like |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by CHOREM(f): 10:34pm On Jun 11, 2015 |
Thumb up to u. U av really done well. |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 10:47pm On Jun 11, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 19 "I don't care whether you guys kicked his ass or not, she's my little sister so this problem is mine to deal with!" I woke up to the sound of my brother yelling from his bedroom into what I'm guessing was a phone seeing as I couldn't hear anyone reply. I squinted my eyes against the bright morning light shining through my bedroom window. My head instantly began to pound hard as my stomach rumbled angrily inside me. My mouth was dry as I ached for some water to drink, I felt drowsy and nauseated. This must be what a hangover feels like, I thought to myself as I pulled the blanket off me and tossed it to the ground. "Where is he?!" Richard's loud voice reached my ears, "Is he at your house? He is, isn't he! I'm coming over." I looked around my empty bedroom trying hard to ignore my brother's hollering that was only adding to the excruciating pain my head was causing me. "No? No! What do you mean no?!" Richard continued to scream as his voice echoed through the whole house. I didn't know exactly who my brother was talking to but I definitely knew what they were talking about. The memory of last night began to replay in my head like a terrifying horror movie. It was all just a drunken blur as if I was watching a movie on a video projector with multiple clips missing. I was just beginning to crawl out of bed when I saw a small note left on my bedside table. I picked it up and began to read. Jane, I'm sorry I had to leave. I really wish I could have stayed with you... but I did wait until you were safely sleeping. I will be with my parents all morning but I plan to head to school at around lunch time. I'm not sure if you are even planning on going to school or not, but I just thought I'd let you know. I dressed you up in some bedtime wear last night, your dress was...well...ripped. I took the dress with me, I'm going to get my Mom's tailor to fix it up for you. If I don't see you at lunch I'll check up on you after school. I hope you're alright... Adams I looked down at myself and saw that I was wearing blue and red striped pyjama pants with a green t-shirt with black pot a dots on it. Out of all the clothes Adams could have put on me, out of all the matching clothes he had decided to go with the most 'clashiest' outfit I had ever seen. Instantly a small smile of amusement appeared on my face as I rolled my eyes and shook my head. "Fine! Bleep you Derrek, don't even bother trying to talk to me, you backstabbing prick!" I turned my head in the direction of Trent's room my eyes widening in shock. I knew he was just trying to protect me and that the horrible news of last night's events had obviously pushed him over the edge but honestly I wished the yelling would just stop. I wanted to get the memory of last night out of my head though it seemed nearly impossible with him constantly yelling about it. "I am not being immature!" I dragged myself out of bed and began to head towards my mirror, fearing what I see in the mirror would echo how I was feeling. At first I stood there with my eyes closed, taking slow deep breaths trying hard to gain enough courage to just open them up and look at my reflection. "Derrek...I told you not to invite her to the party, and what did you do? You invited her anyways!" I peeled my eyes open as I began to adjust to the sight in front of me. My hair was a scrambled mess on top my head as dried up blood matted my hair together in dark clumps. I reached up to feel the slight gash on top the goose egg, which had emerged out of my head. An instant replay of being tossed to the ground and smashing my head made me to tremble. My left cheek was swollen and discoloured as the memory of Liam smacking me across the face flashed through my mind. I could see the skin on my neck darkened into the shape of his chubby little hand as the feeling of not being able to breathe came back to me. "You're sorry?! That's it? Okay where is he, Derrek? Where is Liam?!....Fine! I'll find him myself, you good for nothing piece of shit!" The sound of something smashing against the wall in my brothers room instantly reminded me of Adams smashing against the door urgently trying to get in as I was being dragged across the room by my hair. In that exact second the tears began to gush out as I fell to the floor. All of last night's flashback memories were becoming too much to bear and my body marked with reminders of the events that occurred. The past sixteen years of my life have been boring and completely safe and predictable. No real happiness or sadness, it was merely a life of neutral nothingness. I barely remember ever actually crying although the past week it seemed that's all I had been doing. I never thought when the time finally came that I made friends that I would want everything to go back to the way it was. But I did - I missed the non-dramatic, overly boring life I lived only a mere week ago. I laid on my bedroom floor my hands covering my face crying from my very soul. My cries grew louder and louder as every second passed. I felt broken. Suddenly my bedroom door flung open as I turned to look at my brother standing in the door way. In his hand he held the handset of his telephone, the cord hanging loosely from where it had been pulled out of the base. At first I continued to cry though as my eyes settled on Richard longer, I couldn't help but cough out a laugh. He looked down at me with such a worried expression, as if there were something wrong with me and yet he was the one standing there with a broken phone in his hand and a red hot face. In some twisted way it amused me that he and I were such a train wreck. My brother was usually so in control of his emotions, calm and steady able to cope with practically anything. I just had no reasons to feel any emotions before. Ever since I decided to break out of my shell of loneliness and join the real world I have turned Richard into an overly protective brother, while I seemed to be nothing more than bipolar and depressed. "Are you okay?" Richard whispered as he walked into my room. I nodded my head trying to swallow the large lump in my throat. "I'm going to kill him, Jane." His voice was full of animosity. "No...Richard, just leave it be...please." I pleaded as I began to get to my feet. "But look at you; he can't just get away with that!" "But that's the thing Richard, he can." I walked over to my closet trying to ignore him. "Just drop it okay." "But Jane-" "Richard, please!" He finally gave up but not without storming out of my bedroom angrily and slamming the door shut behind him. I sighed heavily before going to my bathroom and jumping into the shower attempting to once again forget all of last night's events. I decided to wear something a little more casual today, not the little kid-baggy outfits I used to wear but neither was it anything like my yesterdays outfit. I choose a nice pair of blue jeans with a perfectly fitted yellow t-shirt. There was no extra skin showing but the outfit did outline all my curves giving me a more natural beauty rather than a forced one. My hair was pulled back into a messy pony tail with strands of hair falling out and I decided to boycott makeup wanting to embrace a more natural look. I looked in the mirror as a smile appeared on my face. Ignoring the fact that my cheek and neck were bruised I actually looked good. It was a more in-between look and evidently I liked it. I wasn't overly trying but I definitely was trying a little more than I used to - giving me a more matured natural beauty. The sound of a vehicle peeling out of my driveway forced me to run to the spare bedroom across the hall to look out the window. I saw my brother's Chevy zooming down the street as my heart began to accelerate. I knew where he was going and I knew it couldn't be good. I ran back to my room and grabbed my phone quickly dialing Richard's cell phone number. It rang and continued to ring unanswered finally going to voice mail. Thinking quickly I looked through our caller display to find Derrek's number. I knew that's where Richard would be heading. "I thought you never wanted to talk to me again." Derrek's voice answered the phone sounding amused. "I think Richard's going to kill Liam!" I almost yelled into the phone. "Jane?" It was at that moment that I realized that I didn't blame Liam for what he did to me, I blamed myself. If I hadn't decided to change my appearance and try to look like Tiffany and the Crew then maybe Liam wouldn't have forced himself on me. I had got so caught up with trying to pay Adams back that I had stooped so low as to dress up like a slut. The girls in McLasgidi that dress the way I did yesterday are the type to give themselves freely to any guy. Liam was far past drunk last night and though what he did was wrong, I still blamed myself for it. He did deserve to be beaten up for hitting me but honestly I did not wish death upon him. "Did you hear me?!" I said panicked, "Richard is going to your house to kill Liam!" Derrek laughed into the phone which made me realize why Trent threw his phone against the wall. "This is serious!" I yelled angrily. "Calm down ya' grouch. No one's at my house right now, I'm on my way to school and Liam has gone on a much needed vacation." "What?!" I asked confused. "Well, when Liam woke up this morning and realized what he did, he decided to go visit with his aunt in California until things...settle down a bit. I think he knew your brother would be going after him." "Oh." "So I'm guessing you need a ride to school?" "What? Oh...I didn't even think about-" "I'll be there in five minutes." He cut me off before hanging up. Richard, please! Richard, please! |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 11:16pm On Jun 11, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 20 Derrek pulled up in his silver 2009 Lamborghini Gallardo; usually when people would see that car they would stare with envy but I merely rolled my eyes with disgust. He looked over at me and smirked before hooking the horn even though I was already at the car. I opened up the passenger side door, gave him an evil glare before getting inside. "Nice bag." He said sarcastically while looking down at my batman backpack. "Shut-up and go!" I snapped back. "Someone's P.M. Sing..." Derrek mumbled as he pulled his car out of the driveway and sped down the street without even giving me the chance to put my seatbelt on. I glared at him once again before I pulled my seatbelt with much emphasizes and wrapped it around me angrily. "Honestly Derrek, why is it you can be such a complete dick." "Ummm...Because I have money." I couldn't tell if he was joking or not but either way it still pissed me off. I looked over at the overly muscular guy sitting in the drives seat; he had a snobbish grin plastered to his face. Curiosity was beginning to get the best of me as I finally asked the question that had been on my mind for the pass 15 minutes. "Derrek, why are you all of a sudden talking to me and driving me to school? I'm not part of your 'in' crowd so why are you even acknowledging me." "You can blame Richard for that one. He wanted me to keep an eye on you, make sure nothing happens..." He laughed but continued. "I sure bleeped up last night, huh?" I rolled my eyes at him. He was such an inconsiderate bastard. "I didn't know you and Richard were such good friends." I finally said breaking the silence. "There's a lot you don't know." Suddenly a memory from last night I had tried to completely erase from my mind appeared. It was right after I had chugged half a bottle of Tequila and I was drunk...too drunk. The thought of my lips pressed up against Derrek's almost forced me to puke right then and there. "Look Derrek...about last night-" "What part?" He cut me off. "The...umm...kiss." I said as my cheeks flushed red. "Don't worry about it." "It's just I don't...like you like that..." I mumbled, "What I mean is...That-" He cut me off again before I could continue "I said don't worry about it, I'm not attracted to you." "Oh right, your only attracted you older women." I snapped back. I had no reason to be jealous but maybe my insecurities were starting to take over and I was hoping for some reassurance from Derrek. Which, apparently I was not going to get. Derrek laughed his loud hearty laugh, "and where did you hear that." "Hey, just because I never used to talk to anyone doesn't mean I didn't hear all the rumours. Like for instants how you've never slept with any of the high school girls and that you only go for older women." "Like you said, those are all rumours." He said nonchalantly. "So what are you telling me you're a virgin?" "Bleep no; I lost my virginity to Tiffany in 10th grade(like SS2 here in Nigeria)." "Oh, and she's the only girl you've ever slept with?" I said with disbelief. "Yes actually, she is the only girl I've ever slept with." He replied truthfully. He turned his head towards me while biting his lip as if he were having a debate inside his head but then finally continued. "I didn't sleep with her because I wanted to either. I slept with her because I thought maybe if I had sex with a girl, I'd start being attracted to girls." "What are you taking abou-" I stopped mid sentence as my mouth dropped to the floor. "Wait are you saying..." "Unfortunately, yes...I'm in the same boat as Richard-Or should I say closet." "You know about Richard?" I said in surprise before realisation dawned on me. "Wait, are you two..." "It's an on and off kind of relationship and I'm guessing right now it's off. He was pretty pissed at me this morning." "Oh my god..." I managed to whisper in daze of shock. "But you seem so-" "Straight?" He finished my sentence. "It's called acting...I act like a big dick head who's too good for all the girls in high school, that way they don't constantly try hitting on me. Well, aside from the stupid ones like Jessica." "Well, you're sure good at it." I said still completely taken back. "Are you saying I'd make it as an actor?" He joked. "Very good possibility." I said while smiling back at him. "Does anyone know...Like about you?" "No." He said sternly while adding in the same tone, "other than Richard and I'd like to keep it that way." "No problem; My lips are sealed." I wasn't lying either. Even though Derrek was a complete asshole (whether it was all an act or not I still wasn't sure of) but I knew this secret was not mine to tell. "So...If no one's knows about you but my brother...Why did you tell me." "I don't know...I guess I feel like I can trust you." He admitted; I smiled up at him in response. "I can...Can't I?" "Of course, your dating my brother so your practically family!" This made him smile but just as quickly as the smile appeared it faded. "Well, I don't think were actually together right now..." "He'll get over it." "Hopefully..." He spoke softly as he stared out the windshield. The silence was starting to become uncomfortable as I tried to change the subject. "So why don't you and Richard just tell everyone you're dating. Why do you have to hide, I mean it would be so much easier for you two if you didn't always have to pretend to be something your not." "Shit." He shook his head, "Not likely, we're in high school doll. If me and Richard let any of those little immature teens know our real sexuality, we'd be teased more than the band geeks." I shook my head at him in annoyance. "You guys are all the same." "What are you talking about now?" "You, Richard, Adams... You guys care to much what other people think; you are all so embarrassed to just be yourselves." "Okay, Adams has NOTHING to be embarrassed about." Derrek said while pulling into a parking spot. I was so lost in the conversation I hadn't even realized we were all ready at school. I turned to look at Derrek and said, "Neither do you or Richard." With that I got out of the car and began to walk towards the school, not once glancing back at Derrek though I knew he was still watching me. ~ I watched the rain pouring outside threw my classroom window as my nerves began to spike up. Soon the lunch bell would ring and because of the weather the whole student body would be in the cafeteria for lunch. I didn't know what to be expecting; whether Adams would act how he usually did around everyone else or if maybe by some chance he really was going to change. Either way I was scared for lunch to come and as every second ticked by my nerves continued to grow. I stared at the round clock that sat above the chalk board at the front of the classroom as the big hand joined the little one at the number 12. At that same instant the bell rang loud vibrating in my ears as my body froze with nothing but my heart rapidly beating. The whole classroom erupted with noise as everyone piled out of the door hurrying away for their one hour of freedom. Both English and History class had dragged by so slowly this morning but now that it was actually lunch it felt like it approached too soon. I slowly picked myself up off my seat as I could feel my palms begin to grow warmer. I made my way out of the empty classroom as slow as a slug before heading to my locker. It felt like barely seconds had gone by but I had already dropped off my books and was standing in front of the cafeteria doors. I could hear loud laughter coming from within the room on the other side of the doors. Already I knew the café was going to be unbelievably packed and obviously Adams lied beyond these doors as well. "Okay stop being such a baby and open the door," I muttered quietly to myself. I inhaled a deep breath before pulling the door open and entering inside the cafeteria, which too no surprise was completely packed. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Shuq29(f): 12:28am On Jun 12, 2015 |
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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Calmdove(f): 8:11pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Calmdove(f): 8:11pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Luckygurl(f): 8:33pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 11:06pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 21 "Get away from me!" I was half way to the Cafeteria exit when Adams' voice reached my ears, I wasn't exactly sure if it had only been my imagination adding to the chaos inside my head but either way I stopped dead in my tracks. "Jane!" His voice came again; this time loud and clear as any false thoughts began to evaporate. I slowly turned around to see Adams running towards me with Tabitha tagging behind him. "Adams! What do you mean? What are you doing?" Her whiney voice made me shutter is annoyance. Within seconds Adams was standing in front of me, breathing heavily while he tried to catch his breath. I could feel every pair of eyes in the room directed towards us in anticipation; waiting and wondering what was going to happen next. Even the few teacher supervisors in the Café stood still with both shock and curiosity. "Jane, you need to stop running away from me. What are you afraid of?" He finally spoke once as his breathing became more even. At first I said nothing as I was a little taken back by the accusation but then my eyes landed on Tabitha. "But what about you and her?" I said while nodding my head to the girl who was still trying to approach us though her nine inch heels were slowing her down a bit. "There is no Me and either, Jessica, Tabitha or anyone...There never was and there never will be, honestly Jane. I have never done, tried, or will do anything with her, never." "But-" I started to say but was quickly interrupted as Adams' lips crashed down on mine in an explosion of pleasurable tingles. I felt his arms wrap tightly around my waist as he pulled me in against his hard chest. My arms were hanging loosely at my sides as I stood there in complete shock which lasted merely a millisecond before I threw my arms hastily around his neck and pulled myself up towards him. Our lips moved together in perfect harmony as our hands eagerly tried pulling each other closer which was almost impossible. My knees felt weak beneath me though my hold around his neck and his hold around my waist kept me from crumbling to the ground. His mouth tasted just as sweet as last time though instead I could taste a hint of maple syrup. His tongue was just beginning to find its way into my mouth when someone's hand grasped my shoulder and pulled me away. That's when I realized we were still in the cafeteria. I looked around at everyone as they stared with their mouths dropped and eyes wide. I could feel my cheeks begin to burn up with embarrassment from our very public and yet very passionate kiss. I looked up at Adams as he seemed to be coming out of the same cloudy daze as me. "W.T.F was that?!" Tabitha nearly yelled from behind me instantly forcing me to turn around to face her while covering my ears from her irritable voice. "Tabitha, why can't you just leave us alone?" Adams spoke sternly as he came to stand at my side. "What are you talking about Adams, you actually like this 'little' girl?" She said while emphasising the word little. "Little? Tabitha she is 17 years old and far more mature than you and your little groupies put together." Adams snapped back. "But Adams...Look at her, she isn't even HOT!" Tabitha whined. "What do you think you're hot? You look like a cheap prostitute and well shit, you act like one too! I'm sorry to break it to you 'darling' but guys don't like sluts like you. Jane on the other hand, well, she is unbelievably gorgeous. She presents herself in a way that you never could." I looked up at Adams with complete awe, his words making me want to wrap my arms around him again but never let go. "Uh! Whatever Adams!" She said while flicking her wrist and putting her bare balm in his face. If she was trying to act mature she was definitely failing horribly. "And you..." Tabitha turn to face me with her face squished up into a very unattractive smug look. "Well, you can have him all you want...You-dirty-little-slut!" It was at about that moment when I could no longer handle Tabitha's voice. Honestly, it had nothing to do with what she was saying anymore, I could care less what came out of her mouth. No, what came next was because I couldn't handle hearing her screeching, high pitched, whiney voice anymore. My fist had already been clenched since the moment I heard her voice but I had been trying to control myself; I tried to remind myself that I won. Adams was mine and he didn't want her not now, not ever, but a person can have only so much control. I felt my arm reach back before springing forward in one fast motion as it connected hard with her face. I felt something crunch under the pressure as she flew to the floor and began to scream loudly, tears began flooding her face. "Sheeee brokeee my noseeee!" Her voice yelled out instantly making me regret doing it because obviously it didn't shut her up, it only made it worse. I felt Adams' hand lightly tug my arm trying to get my attention. At first I just stared down at Tabitha completely shocked at what I had just done but I felt Adams growing impatient as I finally looked up at him. "We have to get out of here..." He said while I followed his gaze and saw the few supervisors now advancing on us. "Like now!" He grabbed my hand and began to pull me which finally broke me out of my shocked trance. We both began to run; hand in hand out of the cafeteria and down the hallways. We were running so fast and kept looking behind us that we didn't even noticed the old Janitor slowly making his way across the hallway. Our interlocked hands ended up knocking Mr. Charles straight on his butt as we flew by him. "You crazy, crazy kids, with all your hyper- ness jumping-jumpy inside you! If you want to run...Go on a Marathon!" He yelled back at us as he began to get up off the floor. I felt bad not helping him up but it was either; go to the principal's office with a phone call home and perhaps suspension or be a rude teen and leave the old man on the ground. I had already punched a girl in the face; why not add another something to my 'bad girl list'. Next thing I knew Adams and I were scrambling into his GMC truck. The second we were both securely inside with the doors locked we roared into laughter though it didn't last long when we saw a few teachers running out of the School's front entrance. I watched Adams fumbling for his keys inside his hooded pocket. "Hurry, hurry, hurry." I muttered as I watched the teachers getting closer and closer. They just made it to the parking lot when I heard the engine roar to life. Quickly Adams shifted the truck into drive and pulled out of the parking spot and sped down the road. I suddenly roared into laughter while holding my stomach. I couldn't believe I had done that and yet it seemed so unrealistically funny. Adams looked over at me before he began to laugh to, both our voices echoing through the truck. It was a good five minutes later when our laughter began to cease. I looked over at him as I bit down on my lip. I still couldn't believe what he had done; he had kissed me in front of the whole student body and then called Tabitha a slut. He had finally decided not to hide his feeling for me and had made, what ever our relationship was, very public. "What are you looking at?" Adams looked over at me sheepishly, a half smirk plastered to his face. I shook my head, "you surprise me, that's all." "What do you mean?" I looked up at him with a shy smile, "well...I just wasn't expecting that...In the cafeteria." "I told you, Jane. I'm going to change...I don't care what they think, especially Tabitha. You are the only person I care about and I'm not going to be afraid of showing that." He looked out windshield before adding, "anymore." I nodded my head as I peered out the window. I could feel my cheeks slightly turning red so I changed the subject. "So, where are we going?" "I was thinking of just heading to my house. I mean, if that's okay with you?" "Yah, that's great." ~~ "Did you want something to drink?" Adams asked me once we finally made it to his house. I was sitting on the couch in his living room as he stood at the dining room entrance looking over at me. "Just water is fine." I replied. He nodded before disappearing. My eyes began to wander around the room; it was big and yet completely cosy. There were large window the looked out at their front yard, the sun shined through lighting the place up. Their couches were a beige color with hardwood flooring and black glass top coffee table and side tables. There was no TV but a big portrait sat where the TV would have been. I turned my head behind me as I heard footsteps coming into the living room. I was a little surprised at what I seen. It wasn't Adams; instead it was Dorcas wearing nothing but a guys superman t-shirt and underwear. I inverted my eye brows in confusion as I watched her face turn a different shade of pink. She pulled down on the bottom of the shirt trying to cover her bare legs. "Dorcas? What are you doing here?" I finally asked. She stared me with the same wide eyes, "I should be asking you the same thing." "Yah, well, I asked you first." The look of surprise on her face quickly vanished as she ran over to me and plopped down on the couch; still wearing nothing but the t-shirt and underwear. "I slept here last night." She said with a smile that reached her eyes. "What?! Tell me more... |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 11:21pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 22 I felt my heart sink as the whole world around me became a little distant movie. I held my breath as I stared out at the fireplace in front of me. I felt unable to form words in my mouth as Derrek's words began to sink in. -He never made it to PH- The word's echoed in my mind as thousands of possibilities circulated through my head. "W-what do you mean?" I stuttered as I looked over at Adams with wide eyes. He looked back at me with curiosity though I completely ignored him as all my attention was directed towards Derrek on the phone. "I don't have any time for this, Jane. Just come to Liam's house...FAST!?" His urgent voice forced me to think of the worst case scenario. "Get off the phone!" I could hear my brother's distant voice yelling in the background. The line instantly went dead as my mouth dropped and my cell phone fell to the ground. I could hear it hitting the hard wood flooring as the back piece broke off and scattered across the floor. "We need to go!" I panicked as I stood up from the couch and began to run towards the front door. I could hear Adams' footsteps running behind me. "Jane, Jane! What's going on?" He asked as he finally caught up to me, grabbing onto my arm; turning me to face him. "R-Richard...We have to go!" I cried out; making absolutely no sense. I turned to face the door as I pulled it open and ran out into the chilly night air. Adams followed me and I could tell he was utterly confused by the way he kept staring at me like I was some run-away-mental-patient. "Jane!" He yelled out, trying to get my attention which, surprisingly enough worked. I turned around to face him and even though I stood completely still, my whole body was moving at an unheard of pace. My heart hammered fast inside my chest as my body continued to shake with anxiety. I felt my knee's weakening beneath me as my head span out of control. "What is going on?" Adams demanded. I knew our time was limited and Adams' constant questions were only slowing us down. I rolled my eyes angrily before replaying mine and Derrek's conversation to him. All my words seemed to mix in together as I spoke as fast as an auctioneer. I could barely understand what I was saying but Adams seemed to of got the just of it because before I could even finish, he was already running towards his truck. Every second felt like a minute and every minute felt like an hour as I jumped into the truck and we sped down the street. Different scenes began to circulate through my mind as both Adams and I sat in the truck silently. I watched as normal things passed by my window as we drove; kids playing happily, cute old couples holding hands as they walked down the sidewalk, dogs running around in their yards. Everything seemed so normal and yet my life was the complete opposite. I was driving to my almost rapist's house to most likely find him strangled to death by my brother. Just the thought of it forced my stomach to turn as I tried to hold myself back from Peking. It really had nothing to do with Liam; I mean I could almost care less about what might've happened to him. No, all my worry and distress was for Richard and only Richard. Honestly, I never really thought he was capable of doing the things that were now flashing through my head but then again, I had never seen him as angry as he was this morning. I closed my eyes as I imagined myself walking into Liam's house; a complete blood bath. Even though it was only my imagination making these scenes up in my own head it still hadn't stopped my stomach from dropping. Liam's dead, motionless body lying on the ground as Richard stood up beside him. A bloody kitchen knife clenched in his hand as police barged in through the doors. All of them; looking over at Liam's body before charging at my brother; taking him down to the ground hard. As Richard fell to the ground, his face would smash against the floor before erupting in blood. Instantly I opened my eyes, desperately trying to shake the thought away. Richard wouldn't do that, he couldn't, there was just no way. "Jane..." Adams' soft voice interrupted my thoughts as I looked over to him. "It's going to be okay." He reached over to me and tucked my hair behind my ear. His fingers trailed down my neck; the light touch of his rough skin against the softness of mine forced the hair on my arms to stand up. His fingers continued to down towards my collar bone before his hand landed on my shoulder. Gently, he began to massage my shoulder as he looked up at me with caring eyes; utter concern masked his face. "It...It's a-all my f-fault..." I murmured as my eyes began to fill up with water. I closed my eyes lightly as two tears trickled down my cheeks. Adams' arm snaked around my neck as he pulled me in towards him. I scooted over to the middle seat as I snuggled against his warm body. He tightened his hold on me for a second before loosening it; he began to twirl strands of my hair between his fingers. "How is it your fault?" He whispered quietly as he let go of my hair and began to caress my arm. I slightly bit down on my bottom lip as another tear trailed down my face, "If I h-hadn't tried to c-change...Then m-maybe Liam wouldn't of..." My voice began to trail off as more tears left my eyes. "What!?" Adams staggered; his hand instantly stopped rubbing me. He shook his head as he looked out of the windshield with disgust. "Jane, do NOT blame yourself for what happened. It was NOT your fault...Liam has always been a disturbed boy and what he did was wrong. Very Wrong!" "But-" "No, it doesn't matter if you wore clothes a little more out there; that still does not mean what Liam did was right!" He growled furiously, "even if he would have done that to Tabitha; it still would NOT have been right nor would it have been her fault. It was Liam's fault...So don't you dare try to blame yourself." He exhaled deeply, "okay?" My face was gleamed with wetness as I shakily began to nod my head. I looked up at Adams as his crispy eyes began to grow soft once again. He looked down at me reluctantly before tightening his grip around my shoulders. He then held me close against his own body as I nuzzled into him. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to yell." He said quietly. A small smile twitched as the corner of my lips, "I know." He looked back down at me and smiled sweetly, almost in a thankful kind of way. I watched him as his head bent down slightly and he pressed his lips gently against the top of my head. The small-almost invisible smile on my face grew as my cheek flush ed pink. I fiddled with around with the hem of my shirt before looking away shyly. Even at times like this, Adams managed to make me smile; it wasn't a large smile and maybe it wasn't even considered a smile but either way I glad he was here. I laid my head back against his chest as I attempted to get as close to him as humanly possible. I cleared my throat, "do you know where Liam lives?" I asked... |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 11:53pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 23 My heart stopped as I slowly looked up at the house that we were now parked in front of. Everything looked so normal; it was just your regular house in which wasn't too big nor too small. It was a perfect little cozy house with blue stucco sidings with black roofing. Three steps led up to the small porch which a cute little swing chair sat beside the white front door. I took a deep breath before looking up to Adams, "so...I guess we'd better go find Trent and Derrek?" I whispered quietly; still fearing what it is we would find. Adams nodded his head as he turned off the engine. I reached a shaky hand over to the door handle and opened up the truck door; slowly climbing out of the truck, being careful not to fall. "Hang up the phone!" Instantly my body froze as Richard's yelling voice reached my ears; he was inside the house. My stomach turned inside me; there was something about his voice that honestly scared me. Suddenly my heart began to race as I quickly ran towards the house not wasting another second. I could vaguely hear Adams running after me though I completely ignored him as I ran up the stairs and reached the door. I didn't even bother knocking as I grabbed the door knob and pushed against the door; fumbling into the house. "Jane?!" Once I caught my balance I turned my head to look over at Richard. My eyes went wide with complete horror. The whole living room was a disaster; the glass coffee table was smashed into tiny pieces, framed picture scattered across the floor, the space rug was crunch up and lying in a corner of the room and most of the cushions from the couch were thrown around randomly. The whole living room looked as if a small tornado had blown through and destroyed everything. I looked back up at Richard. He was standing there with his arm securely wrapped around the neck of a chubby little red head; Liam. Blood smeared across Richard's face, starting at his nose in which honestly looked broken. His hair was a complete mess on top of his head and as my eye's trailed over to Liam he looked just as bad. His lip looked as if it had been cut right open and there was a small black bruise already forming under his eye. But that was definitely not the worst of it. I looked back up at Richard as something finally caught my eye...Something I hadn't seen at first. In his free hand he was holding a hand gun; the gun directly pointed at Liam's head. Tears ran down Liam's face as he barely even acknowledged my presence. He stood there squirming against Richard's hold as he continued to beg for his life in quiet almost silent sobs. "R-Richard..." I barely whispered. Adams suddenly was standing right beside me as he began to take in the whole scene. "Richard! What are you doing?" Adams' stern voice echoed through the room. I began to scan the room in search of Derrek. Finally I saw him on the other side of the room standing again the wall holding his hands up in the air as if he were surrendering. He looked over at me with slight relief as he mouthed the words 'Thank God.' Richard shook his head obviously trying to get over the shock of Adams and I barging into the house. "He can't get away with what he tried to do to you Jane!" He said staring at me and only me as he slightly loosened his grip on Liam. "Okay, that may be true but still Richard, this will not solve anything!" I finally replied once I found my voice. I slowly took a step forward so I was once again standing next to Adams. "St-Stay back!" Richard stuttered as he nudged the gun against Liam's head which forced me to freeze. My whole body was not vibrating in fear and worry; I couldn't believe my own eyes, it was almost as if Richard had passed the point of sanity. But I guess this was normal behaviour for a brother who would risk his own life for the safety of his little sister; he is my big brother and pretty much my both my parents in one. He feels the need to protect me and would obviously go to any extent to do so...even if it were morally wrong and completely out of character for him. "Richard, Please. The police are on their way...You can't do this!" Derrek finally spoke up though he didn't dare move an inch as he did so. The Police? I thought to myself as I began to panic. The thought of my brother being sent to jail forced tears to emerge in my eyes. I couldn't live without Richard, he couldn't go to jail...He just couldn't. Anger quickly masked Richard's face, "Derrek, I told you to shut up!" Richard barked back at him. "Why are you protecting Liam? Do you have a 'thing' for him or something?" My brother hissed jealously. "No! I just don't want to lose YOU!" Derrek cried back. Richard stared at Derrek for a few my moments as frustration and sadness began to take over his face as he kept his eyes locked with Derrek's. Instantly, I could just see the passion and love they felt for each other; just by looking between the two of them anybody could tell how much they truly cared for one another. Even Derrek; big tough, asshole Derrek was standing there tears rolling down his cheeks in fear of losing Richard. He stood there knowing that moving would only anger Richard further; staying still, he looked at Richard with pleading eyes. I could just tell by his face expression that he was feeling the same emotions I wa s feeling. Not fear for Liam but fear of losing the one person he cared about most in the world; Richard. "The Police?...W-who called the police?" I finally butted in. The second the words left my lips I regretted saying it. Richard's teeth grind together furiously as complete hatred grew in his eyes. "Liam did..." He growled in a low voice as his eyes looked down at the floor. I then followed his gaze down to the ground as my eyes fell on a small cell phone that was now broken into two separate pieces. "Oh Richard..." I whispered quietly. I felt Adams' hand reach towards mine and intertwines between my fingers; lightly he squeezed my hand encouragingly. It was such a small gesture but even so it was all I needed to keep myself from falling apart. I looked up at Adams as I watched his eyes trail towards Richard; he held his head up high as he shook his head slowly. I had to admire him; he was probably the only one of all of us who was able to stay completely calm in such a hellish situation. "Richard" He spoke softly but sternly, "you have to put the gun down and let go of Liam. I know how much you want to make him suffer but killing him is only going to hurt Jane more." "Yah!?" Richard fought back, "and how would YOU know how much I want to make him suffer?" "Because I want to make him suffer for what he did to her!" He said as I watch his control began to slip. "There is nothing I would like more than too force him to lay on the ground and beg for his life as I rip his head..." He trailed off as he realized his voice was growing louder and louder with anger. Richard chuckled, a laugh that honestly forced the hair on my arms to stand up. He sounded completely different and psychotic; nothing like my big brother. "Yes, because you CARE for my sister so much...Huh, Adams? If you actually did care for her you wouldn't have treated her like complete rubbish...Your almost as BAD as Liam!" Richard spat. "Richard...Don't." Derrek said as he finally lowered his arms. Richard's words forced Adams to lower his head in what I'm guessing was shame. I could see the sadness on his face as he lightly bit down on his lip. He slightly lifted his head as he began to speak though his voice was not nearly as firm as before, "Derrek, it's okay...He's right." He whispered quietly as he looked towards me as if he were trying to explain himself to me rather than Trent. "I made a mistake...A few mistakes. I honestly had, still have, strong feelings for you Jane, but I don't know. I was being thick headed; a jerk, an ass, a prick...There are so many words to describe what a complete idiot I was and I'm so sorry." "Adams, it's okay. I know..." I then squeezed his hand this time. "No, Jane just let me finish." I nodded my head as silence filled the room. Well, almost everyone was silent aside Liam who was still sobbing and now hiccupping as he muttered something along the lines of 'Let me go, please, please, please, don't, don't, don't.' Honestly, I don't even think he knew what was happening anymore. Adams reached towards me as his cupped my face in his free hand. "I know I was stupid and immature, letting the stupid judgmental kids at school rule my life. It took me a while but I finally realized it doesn't matter what they think...They don't matter to me. I could live without them but I can't live without you." He stared me straight in the eyes as he spoke so sincerely; honestly, for the few seconds he was speaking I had completely forgotten where we were and what was happening. "I was so worried about my reputation which was completely stupid. I don't even understand how I could have even remotely been embarrassed of you. You are the most amazing girl I have ever met. That night I brought you up onto the cliff? I have never in my life sat up all night long and just talked; we talked about everything and even pointless things like who would win in a fight---"--Batman or Superman..." I finished his sentence as I felt my lips begin to form a small smile. "Yes." He slightly smiled back, "from dusk until dawn; we just talked and yet that was probably one of the best nights of my life. Also Stasee, your real and you don't try to be someone you're not." "Aside from yesterday..." I said quietly which made him smile again. "That doesn't even matter...You're still the best thing that has ever happened to me Jane and I'm sorry it took me so long to realize that." It felt as if my heart had melted inside me as I looked into Adams' chocolate brown eyes. Butterflies had taken over my stomach as the urge to jump into Adams' arms grew stronger. I wanted so badly to wrap my arms around him and never let him go but I knew that would have to wait for later. I then looked back over towards my brother; his grip on Liam seemed to have loosen a little once again. "Let me go!" Liam's voice cried out as he nudged into Richard. Everything seemed to go into slow motion as Richard began to stumble backwards. I even watched as his fists clenched; his index finger slipped against the trigger as a loud BANG echoed throughout the whole house. Everyone began screaming from the loud noise as an invisible force shot me to the ground. I groaned as I fell to my knees and hands as my head instantly began to spin. "J-Jane...I'm sorry. Oh my god, Jane!! I-I didn't mean to!" Richard cried out as tears began to gush out of his eyes. He dropped the gun and ran towards my but merely stood up staring down at me in shock. I looked up at his a little confused. What was he talking about, why was he apologizing. I felt something wet on my hand as I looked down a saw a small pool of blood underneath me. Who's blood was that? I thought to myself, but as soon as the thought came to my mind unbearable pain pierced through my entire body as I screamed out in utter agony. I fell to the floor on my side as my hand reached up to my stomach where it felt like my whole body had been ripped in half. My entire shirt was covered in thick liquid as my screams continued to pierce the air. I opened my eyes as I saw Adams kneel down beside me; he was pulling his sweater off. "You'll be okay, Jane. Stay with me, keep your eyes open." He managed to say though the tears that covered his entire face. He was breathing heavily obviously not getting enough air in his lungs as he began to full outcry. I could vaguely here the sound of sirens in the background but wasn't sure if it was just in my head. "I-I-I..." I tried to talk but was cut off as I began to cough. "Shhhh." Even Adams' shaky voice seemed distant. I struggled to keep my eyes open as I watched Adams crunch up his sweater. He moved my hand of my stomach and pressed his sweater against what I guess was the bullet wound. I screamed loudly as he put pressure onto the wound; it hurt so badly but I knew he was just trying to slow down the bleeding. "Jane, I'm sorry! I'm Sorry. What have I done!" Richard cried out before instantly turning around to glare at Liam. "This is all YOUR fault!" "R-Richard don't." Derrek pleaded as I watched Richard begin to advance on the chubby red head. Then everything got dark... TO BE CONTINUED.... 1 Like |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 11:57pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
Uhmm... Okay, I have done justice to today's update...the next is tomorrow when you will get 2 more chapters before the final 2 chapters with Epilogue on Sunday... Pls NOTE also that the next few chapters will be in Adams' narrative point of view...since Jane is.... Sorry friends... Goodnight. I won't forget to thank you all for following... More importantly to you calmdove and lovelygurl... You are great people. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 5:12am On Jun 13, 2015 |
Kelvin3028: U r welcome but aaaa. Omg i can't believe Richard shot Jane !!! |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 6:31am On Jun 13, 2015 |
lovelygurl:Well, he did... That is why its always dangerous to play with a gun... |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by princesssusan(f): 1:31pm On Jun 13, 2015 |
Richard and Derrek...........Homo I cnt imagine, Jane dead not possible. Weldone Kelvin |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by DanWrites(m): 1:55pm On Jun 13, 2015 |
Lost of Virginity? Please correct. |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by pheranmyy(f): 5:43pm On Jun 13, 2015 |
Plz cum and update kelvin |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 6:53pm On Jun 13, 2015 |
DanWrites:You guys won't quit right?.... You still don't get it... I won't correct that... I have known since I started writing this story, though it was a mistake at first but its becomes my style so I didn't correct it... And no one can pressurise me to do so now |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by DanWrites(m): 7:25pm On Jun 13, 2015 |
Kelvin3028:Oh sorry. Didn't know it was intentional. |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by tessy56: 10:13pm On Jun 13, 2015 |
[color=#000099][/color]nice story. Really luv it. at 1st i thought jane would date brandon buh still love that adams stood up 4 her at last. Cnt bliv ha broda shot her. Nice twist |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by twin86ark(m): 10:14pm On Jun 13, 2015 |
Ds write is wao. Update for d continuity of D's writeup..u r gud bro. |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 9:23am On Jun 14, 2015 |
Guys, am so sorry I didn't update this trend last night, totally my fault... I will be sincere, I was planning to update at 9pm but was already in the dream land by then... Which is why you are gonna get 4 chapters today... am gonna start soon and continue till evening... I know you miss the story, well I miss your comments too so keep it coming... A friend wants to make an awareness, he said you should watch out for www.eolbooks.com (An online library where you can order, rent and publish you books, articles, project materials etc and get royalty) |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by pheranmyy(f): 2:56pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
we are patiently waiting for d update o |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by richesmensah(f): 5:51pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
...please Kelvin you keeping me in suspense, can't wait!!! |
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