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Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 8:10pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 24 Like I said, this is going to be in Adams POV As in 'point of view' ~ADAMS' P.O.V~ I sat on the hard plastic seats in the waiting room of the Hospital. I watched as a small family that consisted of two younger kids and a mother sat in the corner carefully trying to hide the tears in their eyes. Apparently the mother's father was on his death bed and the doctors had come to the conclusion he may not make it through the night. On the other side of me there was a bouncy mid-twenties lady; her excitement and eagerness made everyone else feel a bit awkward. She was soon to be an aunty; her sister was only a few doors down from Jane and was in the middle of giving birth to a baby boy. Its crazy all the things you can find out about people just by sitting near them. But what's even crazier is Hospitals in general. A hospital can both hold the saddest moments in your life and the happiest. It sees both death and birth; at the same time an old man is dying a new man is being born. I myself was having problems trying to hold myself together; since the moment Jane was admitted into the hospital the doctors had her in the surgery room under intensive care. They wouldn't allow me to go see her and neither would they tell me how she is doing. Apparently they needed to speak with a family member but her parents are unreachable at the moment and Richard is outside the hospital having a mental break down. Derrek's outside with him and trying to calm him down though I hadn't seen them in the past half hour. Everything just seemed like a horrible nightmare. I kept closing my eyes hoping when I reopened them I would be back at my house sitting in the living room next Jane. It never happened though; I'd open my eyes to see the saddened faces of the small family across from me. I had got to the point where I couldn't even cry anymore. Before this week my whole life had been boring and pointless. I never had any reason to live. I had friends who cared more about what they looked like than they di d about me. I had parents who only came around to talk about my future plan and never once actually asking me how I was doing. But then in one night my whole life had taken a complete change for the better; or at least that's how it felt at the time. I was laying on the couch in the living room at Richard's house. I couldn't sleep so randomly I went for a walk; I was just walking up the stairs when I saw Jane leaving her bedroom and heading towards the bathroom. It was like it had been the first time I had 'actually' really seen her. She was wearing these cute little pink pajama pants and a tight black tank top. She looked completely breathtaking; even with her bed hair and off balanced sleepy walk. Curiosity had gotten the best of me as I made my way towards her bedroom. I walked into her room and began to look around; out of all my years being friend with Richard I had never actually 'seen' Jane's room. I was a bit surprised at what I found, I mean I never knew anything about Jane but still when I saw all her superhero comic books scattered across her desk table I small smirk had appeared on my face. I had always been a little bit of a comic book geek though it was a secret obsession I kept hidden from all my 'friends' at school. I continued to roam around her room until I reached her large stack of C.D's; being once again surprised as I realized she had all my favorite bands. Most of the kids at school, well at least the people I hung out with listened to hip-hop. Jane had C.D's of Josh Radin, The Tragically Hip, Green Day, The Spill Canvas and so much more. I sat down on her bed and reach over for a tattered little book on her night stand table, "A Book of Scoundrels" but Charles Whibley. I couldn't believe my eyes, how could she honestly have all my favourites from my most cherished book to my most listened to bands. It was barely a second later when she walked into her room and saw me sitting there on her bed. I remember waking up the next morning; my arms had been securely wrapped around her petite body. I had almost instantly jumped out of bed at I stared down at her; she was so beautiful but she was Richard's little sister. I couldn't believe what I had just done; I couldn't believe I had slept with one of my best friends little sisters. I had rushed out of the house without any explanation and instantly regretted it. All weekend Jane has been stuck in my head and no matter what I did I couldn't get her out. I went to a party at Derrek's house; where Jessica and Tiffany pretty much stripped naked for me but I still kept thinking of Jane. I ended up leaving the party early and by myself. I fell so hard for Jane but was in denial for such a long time. I had never liked anyone the way I liked Jane and it completely scared me. No one had ever had such a strong hold on me and because of that I continue to run until I finally realized I couldn't live without her. When she finally forgave me and came to my house earlier today I felt like my whole life had been complete. Like this void inside me was filled and I finally had a reason to live. But now that reason to live was on the verge of leaving me forever. Like I said before; I couldn't cry. I didn't know what was going on in the surgery room but the worse case scenario was beginning to haunt me. The family across from me had been told the worse news; a loved was not going to make it. While the lady beside me had been told the best news; her sister conceived a baby boy. I sat there in the same room with two of the most opposite emotions surrounding me while awaiting my news; whether it is the worst news or the best news was the unanswered question that froze my body emotionless. "No...No, not my Liam." I heard a soft voice crying from the hallways. I looked up with curiosity as I got up off the hard chair; slowly I crept over to the doorway of the waiting room and peaked down the hall. Alicia Smitten, a curly haired red head nurse was standing a few feet away talking to one of the Police officers that had walked in on the earlier scene. The rather pretty lady who was also Liam's mother had tears rolling down her cheeks as she continued to shake her head in denial. The officer placed his hand gently onto the nurse's shoulder in attempt to comfort her. "I'm sorry Mrs. Smitten but he already admitted to it." The policeman said softly. "B-but L-Liam would never sh-sh-shoot someone." Alicia cried. "Aren't you going to do more investigating?" The Officer sighed lightly, "There is no need too. We caught him red handed aiming your Husbands hand gun at young Mr. Richard. When he was questioned; he admitted to shooting Miss. Jane without hesitation." "No! Oh, please...No. Liam...Not my Liam." I turned around; not being able to watch anymore. I felt both shocked and guilty; shocked because I couldn't understand why Liam had admitted to shooting Jane when it was in fact Richard who had accidentally shot her and guilty because I already knew I was going to go along with that story; Liam being the shooter. I didn't so much feel bad for Liam; he deserved to go to jail for what he did to Jane but I did feel bad for Alicia. She had always been an amazing Mother and far better than most the mothers in McLasgidi. I couldn't even imagine what this was going to do to the poor lady emotionally. I had just sat back down on the hard chair when a tall dark haired doctor walked into the waiting room. He had been one of the many doctors that had been going in and out of Jane's room since she got here. "Richard Raine?" He called out while looking around the room. I jumped up to my feet as I felt the quick hammering of my chest. "He's outside...It is Jane? How is she? Please, tell me she's alright?" I began to ramble as I quietly raced over to him. He looked at me skeptically at first, "I should Only speak to a family member pls." "Richard's not exactly sane enough to talk right now. Please, just tell me! She's going be okay...please tell me she's going to be okay." I could already feel pools of water filling my eyes. He cleared his throat before motioning towards the hallway with his head. I followed him out into the hallways as everything around me began to fade away and all I could hear or see was the Doctor. Once we were away from any nosy ears he stopped and looked towards me. "She lost a lot of blood." He began; instantly the tears in my eyes broke free as they fell down my face. "But she's okay!?" I managed to yell out. "For now. We have stabilised her and lucky the bullet missed all major organs and arteries. The bullet pierced right through the side of her stomach and came out at her side. It was only a flesh wound but as I said before; she did lose a lot of blood." I wasn't exactly sure what the Doctor was saying; did that mean she was going to be okay? She lost a lot of blood, what did that mean? I just stood there staring at the Doctor as the tears slowed down for the moment. "At the moment she is unconscious and due to the amount of blood loss her body went into shock; we've done everything we could but we can't say whether or not she will wake up." "What?! What do you mean?" I cried out, "what do you mean?!" "Her body reached a high level of shock called Hemorrhagic shock; it prevented her cells from getting enough oxygen which forced her organs to begin to fail. Her body has gone into a coma. It is now a waiting game; there is nothing more we can do. I'm sorry Sir, it's in God's hands now." Doctor said quietly, "but you may go visit her." 1 Like |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 8:54pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
Omg! Jane should be fine o |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 9:03pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 25 Three weeks later... *Adams' P.O.V Continues* ~ I looked over at the form of a person lying on the hospital bed. I stood up off the hard chair as I walked over to her but as I looked down my eyes went wide. It was Jane, but she was old. Her hair was white and her face was wrinkled; she was still as beautiful as ever but she looked nearly ninety years old. I turned around to look in the mirror behind me; I reached up to my face as the mirrors reflection mimicked my every move. My hair was completely white as my face slightly drooped down from years of gravity and I looked nearly dead. I coughed as I turned to look back down at the sleeping women on the bed. A doctor walked into the hospital room; a doctor I had never seen before. "Adams, we need to talk." The doctor said softly as he looked down at Jane then back up at me. "...About what?" I asked fearfully; knowing exactly what he wanted to talk about. "It's been 75 years Adams; she has no family left anymore...We need your permission to pull the plug." "No, no...She's going to wake up, she has to." "Adams..." The doctor shook his head as he glanced down at the old lady who looked so similar to Jane and yet so different. "She is nearly 92 years old... Even if she were to wake up, her heart is already beginning to fail her; she won't be strong enough to pull through." "No, no...She'll wake up...She'll be fine. No, no, no." My voice echoed in my ears as everything began to fade away. ~ "Adams...Adams, wake up." I sprang forward as my eyes flung open; my heart was pounding inside my chest and my body was drenched in sweat. I looked around the white room as my eyes fell on Jane's motionless body. She looked the exact same as she looked last night, the night before and even three weeks ago. Her eyes were closed shut as her chest continued to grow before sinking with each shallow breath. Her hair was its regular deep brown colour as it outlined her perfect face. I sighed with relief as I realized it had only been a dream. I shuffled around on the hard chair that I had been sleeping on. My legs felt stiff and sore from the awkward sleeping position I was beginning to grow use to it. For the past three weeks I had been sleeping on that exact chair every second night. "Dorcas is on her way over here...She was wondering if you wanted some coffee." I finally looked up to where the voice was coming from. My eyes locked with my younger brother's as I quickly turned to look at the clock. It read eight thirty in the morning which meant I had only gotten at the most two hours of sleep last night. I groaned loudly as I rested my head on Jane's bed. I couldn't be mad at Brandon for waking me up because even if he hadn't, my bad dream surely would have. "Why aren't you guys at school?" My voice came out a lot groggier than I had expected; I tried to clear my throat as I watched Brandon bite down on his lip. "Umm, Adams...It's Saturday." He said each word slowly as if he were talking to a mental patient. "Oh. Well, uh, sure...Coffee sounds good." Brandon nodded as he began to head towards the hallway while pulling his cell phone out of his pocket. He hesitated at the door way before slowly turning around to look back over at me. "Adams..." "...What?" "You should, w-well, you should really go home and try to get some rest." He spoke softly. "No!" I glared at him, "I'll be fine...And I'm not leaving until Dr. Moore kicks me out again." I watched Brandon sigh heavily before giving up and heading out of the room. I turned back towards Jane as I reached my hand up and brushed her hair behind her ear. For the past three weeks Richard and I had been trying to spend every second of the day here with Jane but apparently the Doctors didn't agree so much with the idea. With the help of Derrek and his parents' money, we did manage to bribe them to let us visit her after and before visiting hours but of course there were conditions. Richard and I both had to take turns staying the night with her; with me staying every second night and Richard every other. Apparently the idea of us sleeping on a hard hospital chair every night was completely out of the question. They also had gone so far as to kick us out during school hours; though in my opinion it was a pointless effort. Even when I did attempt to go to school; I couldn't pay attention to what the teachers said. Almost everything people said to me lately would go in one ear and out the other. There was only one thought stuck in my mind, one unanswered question that haunted me both awake and sleeping; will she ever wake up? Jane still hadn't shown any signs of awakening but I knew I would never give up on her. I would stay at her bed side for all of eternity if I had to. The only people that were really there for her was Richard, Derrek, Dorcas, Brandon and of course me. Sure, Jane's parents had obviously come home when they finally found out the news but they didn't stay very long. They were here for the first week but had to leave again for work. It honestly didn't surprise very many of us; both Jane's parents and mine were a lot alike. They were the type of people who cared more about working and making money than they did about their children. They figured as long as they paid the medical bill; they were doing a good job. I sighed heavily as I placed my folded arms on top Jane's bed and rested head down against them. I peered outside through the hospital window. The weather seemed to mimic my mood; it was pouring rain and had been like this for the past week. Water smeared across the windows making it almost impossible to see past the flooded glass. Everyday seemed to slowly creep by; I would stare up at the clock as each second ticked to the next. I had probably missed more school in the past three weeks than I had within the whole year. But a lot of things at High school had changed since the accident; one being Derrek and Richard going public with their intimate relationship. Apparently after everything that had happened they realized that life was too short and ended up kissing in the middle of the hallways during the morning rush. With Derrek and Richard going public with their sexual preferences, Liam admitting that he had shot Jane, Tabitha being humiliated in front of the entire student body and me becoming a complete loner who barely showed up for school; the whole 'A class' senior crowd had crumbled to the ground. Kelvin being completely homophobic began hanging out with some of the less known football players; acting as if his ten year friendship with Richard never happened. 1 Like |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 9:09pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
PLS HOLD ON, CHAPTER 25 STILL CONTINUES... |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 9:27pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
CHAPTER 25 CONTUINATION... Tiffany and Sammy finally ditched Jessica and decided to follow their own dreams rather than being Tabitha's little sidekicks. Jessica still roamed the school with her head held up high; thinking she was the hottest thing since Megan Fox. The good news was; people seemed to envy her a lot less now. Even with all of Kersha High completely changing for the better; I still couldn't manage to fake a smile. I mean, sure, I was happy that everyone was beginning to be true to themselves. Also, me finally stepping up and not letting the judgmental teens of today's society control my life had started some kind of epidemic. But I still couldn't gain the strength to smile, not when the women the love was caught between life and death, in the dreamless state that consumed her unconscious body relying on nothing more than the Hospital's computers and technology to keep her alive. "How is she doing today...?" The sound of Richard's voice brought me out of my thoughts as I turned to watch him walk into the room and take the seat on the other side of Jane. I shrugged as I rested my head back down on the bed. My hand snaked its way towards Jane's motionless body as I covered her cold hand with the warmth of mine. I glanced up at Richard; he looked horrible and yet very similar to me. He had big dark circles underlining his eyes, his hair looked as if it hadn't been touched in days, he wore the same wrinkled clothes from the day before and even his body language showed signs of complete exhaustion. "So...Uh," my barely used voice came out scratchy, "did you go to Liam's trial?" Richard nodded slowly as his eyes stayed locked on Jane. He cleared his throat, "yah...The lawyer was a bit angry you didn't show up." I rolled my eyes, "Liam admitted to it...They didn't need my statement anyways." "Well, apparently they did." Richard's voice grew angrier as he finally looked up at me. "I guess Liam finally started thinking properly because now he's pleading innocent." "What?!" I felt my heart skip a beat. "Not that it really got him anywhere... He had already admitted to it, so he was charged as an adult with assault with a deadly weapon, attempted murder and unlawful discharge of a firearm. He's been sentenced to ten years in prison and depending on how Jane does; years may be added on." Richard finally finished and as I looked up at him; I could still see the shame and guilt the masked his face. As much as Liam deserved to be punished for he had previously done to Jane, the fact that it had actually been Richard who accidentally pulled the trigger had been haunting him since the moment it happened. Every time he looked down at his little sister; tears of regret would fill his eyes. Many nights I had watched Richard waking up screaming such things like 'I'm sorry' or 'I didn't mean to'. Countless times, Derrek and I had tried to convince Richard it was not his fault, that it was an accident and Jane would never want Richard to be putting himself through all this. We could tell him a thousand times but it would never do anything; he needed Jane to wake up and to forgive him herself, otherwise he'd never be able to let it go. "Coffee anyone?" Dorcas' soft voice reached my ears as I left my head up off the bed. I turned towards the doorway as Brandon, Dorcas and Derrek walked into the room. I tried to force a polite smile onto my face but I could just tell by Dorcas' sympathetic look that I had definitely failed. She passed me over one of the two coffees in her hands before grabbing a chair and pulling it up to the end of Jane's bed. Brandon followed her as he too grabbed one of the chairs from against the wall and placed it beside Dorcas. Derrek walked around the bed and sat down on the arm rest of Richard's chair. I watched him as he wrapped his arm around Richard's neck and tilted his head against him. I then turned to look at Dorcas and Brandon as my eyes fell down to their interlocked hands. I couldn't help be feeling envious of the two couples, they both managed to find comfort in each other during such tragic times while I sat at the bedside of the only person who could have given me that comfort. We all sat there in silence as we continued to watch Jane's still body as her chest grew and sank with each deep breath. Whenever I was alone with Jane, I would usually read or sing to her and even sometimes talk to her but when all of us were with her; we would sort of just sit there and watch her. Small conversations sometimes would fill the silence but with both Richard and I never really joining in on them; they would quickly die down. I took a small sip of Coffee; though it didn't seem to be helping very much because my eye lids still felt overly heavy. I struggled to stay awake but as soon as I rested my head against the side of the hospital bed; sleep had consumed me. ~ "Jane, please, please wake up. I love you and I can't lose you...I'm so sorry, this is all my fault and I just...don't know what to do. If you don't wake up...I-I just don't know how I will manage to go on. Please, Jane, Please. You are my baby sister; my everything...and I'm so sorry." Richard's whispering cries forced me to open my eyes. I didn't lift my head up or really show any sign of being awake as I glanced around the empty room. My eyes finally fell on Richard; he was still sitting across from me but Derrek and everyone else was gone. It was only me, Jane and Richard in the room now. Richard was looking down at his sister as tears rolled down his cheeks, his bottom lip was slightly quivering as he reached up and brushed Jane's hair gently. "J-Jane...Can you hear me? Please, you need to be strong...You need to pull through, I need you, we all need you." He coughed out through his silent sobs. "Please, you have to wake up." I heard soft foot steps behind me. "Richard...?" Derrek's quiet voice forced Richard to quickly wipe the tears off his face. "I'm going down to the Hospital cafeteria." "O-okay." Richard mumbled back. "Come with me, please." "I'm not hungry..." Silence filled the room for a second before the sound of Derrek's footsteps grew closer. I was starting to wish I was still sleeping because it felt like I was invading their privacy. Derrek reached for Richard hand and I finally decided to close my eyes. "Your never hungry, Richard...But you still have to eat." Derrek spoke softly. "But, Jane..." "Adams' here." "Yah, but..." "Please, come eat with me." Richard hesitated for a long moment before replying. "Fine." I waited until they both left the room before I opened my eyes and sat up straight. I looked back down at the beautiful girl sleeping on the hospital bed. I bent forward as I lightly brushed my lips against her forehead. "You have to wake up..." I repeated Richard's words as a single tear fell down my face. 1 Like |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 9:33pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 26 Another Week Later... Adams' P.O.V Continues... I stared out of the Hospital window; looking to the west as the sun began to disappear behind the large mountain on the other side of McLasgidin. That same mountain was the place I had brought Jane and somewhere along that mountain was the cliff that I seemed to find so much comfort in. Usually when I had a lot on my mind, or when I just needed to get away from reality for a while I would go there. But apparently even that cliff couldn't give me the comfort I needed. Every morning I would watch the sun rise above the ocean on the east side. Each time the sun would rise; so would my hopes. A new day had begun and with this new day my faith in Jane's awakening would resurface. But as every day came to an end and as I watched the sun set in the west behind those large mountains; it felt like a part of my soul would disappear with it. Each day it seemed to get worse and worse. I would spend almost every day completely emotionless; I couldn't remember the last time I laughed... Well, actually I could. It was four weeks ago; right after Jane had punched Tabitha in the face and we were speeding off in my Truck. The only thing that kept reminding me that I was still human and that I wasn't a complete emotionless psycho path was when I cried. I would sit at Jane's bedside; staring at her motionless body, praying and begging for her to wake up. But aside from the few tears I shed regularly; my facial expression stayed neutral. My strength to even attempt to fake a smile had vanished; the only time I spoke was to Jane and I felt like there was a large void inside me. But I knew I would never leave her and I would stay at her side forever if I had too. I turned back around to look over at the hospital bed in which Jane laid peacefully asleep. I sighed before slowly walking over to the large bouquet of white lilies that sat on the bedside table next to a cute little brown teddy bear. My fingers trailed along the stem of the flower as I inhaled the fragrant sent I was beginning to grow so use to. Every week I would go to the Hospital gift shop and replace the lilies with new ones. I let my fingers fall away from the flowers as I moved towards the bed; taking my place on the seat next to Jane. I reached my hand towards her before intertwining my fingers through her small ones. I rest my head on her bed as I looked up to her closed eyes. "How's she doing today...?" I looked up to the sound of my brother's voice. Brandon and Dorcas were standing in the doorway, hand in hand, looking down at Jane and I with sympathetic facial expressions. I slightly bit down on my lip before shaking my head slowly. Dorcas let go of Brandon as she walked over to the side of the hospital bed. "Hey Jane." Dorcas said; trying to sound upbeat. "Me and Brandon are here... We can't stay long because well, him and I are performing in Romeo and Juliet at the school today. Yeah we both managed to get the two main roles in the play." I saw the shimmering wetness that glazed over her eyes as she spoke. Talking to Jane was always the hardest part; for all of us. Suddenly I felt Jane's hand slightly tighten around mine as my eyes flung open and I jerked into an upright position. "Dr. Moore, Someone, come here!?" I yelled as water filled my eyes once again. I quickly glanced towards her face; the feeling of her fingers still slightly moving against mine shot tingles through my entire body. Her closed eye lids slightly fluttered as I sat there in anticipation. "Jane, come on!" I said with a shaky voice, "You can do it, just open your eyes. Please, Jane...I know you can pull through!" I watched her as her eye lids slowly began to rise upwards. Her sandy colored eyes soon found their way to me as tears streamed down my face. I felt completely paralyzed, all I could do we sit there and stare at her as tears of joy continued to flow down my face. "A-Adams...?" Jane's voice came out so weak and yet it was as harmonic as ever. TO BE CONTINUED O O O 11 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by matie(f): 9:39pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
waoh...weldone kelvin3028..I feel Adam's pain buy how come Liam was met with the gun |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 9:47pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
matie:Richard dropped the gun when he notice he had shot his sister then Liam had the opportunity to pick it for his safety, at that point, the police came in... |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by richesmensah(f): 9:48pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
awwwww...I feel like crying |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by richesmensah(f): 9:52pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
awwwwwww...I feel like crying |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by pheranmyy(f): 10:48pm On Jun 14, 2015 |
So touching tanx for d update |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by estluv(f): 7:02am On Jun 15, 2015 |
nice update....hmmmmmm am happy jane is alive |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by richesmensah(f): 9:10am On Jun 15, 2015 |
when is the next update @ Kelvin? |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Calmdove(f): 9:41am On Jun 15, 2015 |
Oh! So touching... Thank God she woke up after sleeping 4 a month! Weldone kelvin 1 Like |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 2:43pm On Jun 15, 2015 |
Pheeew, thank God she woke up Americans and guns God save them Thumbs up Kelvin! |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Franchris(f): 2:20pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
Oh! So touching i had to comment (Ghost reader). Good work.. Be fast and update pls.. Harjibolar10 never see this one. Chai. You af miss. |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 3:30pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
Thanks for all ur comments and encouragements... I will update 2nite 'in jesus name' |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by princessadeola(f): 7:18pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
Kelvin3028:Amen |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by toluwanmi(f): 7:25pm On Jun 16, 2015 |
Amen ooooo |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by harjibolar10(m): 12:20am On Jun 17, 2015 |
Now Franchris:Present!!! |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Franchris(f): 10:24am On Jun 17, 2015 |
harjibolar10:ehn ehn. Wey the popcorn? |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Ifyapp(f): 11:44am On Jun 17, 2015 |
Op pls update before my weekly MB expires...... I've been a ghost reader bt cant hide anylonger, i love ur story!! Update 1 Like |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by jameran(m): 9:26pm On Jun 17, 2015 |
What a write up is so cool |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 11:35pm On Jun 17, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE CHAPTER 27 NOTE: Yes..It's coming to an end. After this chapter it will be the Epilogue and I'll have the Epilogue up by the weekend. XD *Tear* It's soo sad to see this story ending. I'd like to thank Each and everyone of you who have been supporting me all these months.. I don't know if I would have had the motivation to finish this if it weren't for all of you.. Thank you so much! I hope you like this chapter as much as i did. Enjoy And now Presenting.. BACK TO JANE'S POV I was completely surprised I had even managed to muster out Adams' name. My whole body felt utterly weak; almost as if I were paralysed. I knew I wasn't though, I could still feel the blanket that was wrapped tightly around me but even so, it was almost impossible to move. Not only that; but it also felt like I couldn't talk. My throat was unbelievably dry and burnt whenever I attempted to speak. My arms, neck and legs all felt cramped; almost as if I had been sleeping in the same position for days. But it honestly felt like I had only been sleeping for hours and the urge to go back to sleep was growing stronger by the second. I looked up into Adams' deep brown eyes as a few tears rolled down his cheeks. The corners of his lips were stretched upwards into a large smile as he attempted to wipe away his tears. I couldn't understand why he was crying or why he was holding onto my hand so tightly. "Oh, Jane..." He whispered out as he pressed his lips against my forehead. "I-I never thought I was going to see those beautiful eyes again." It was so weird seeing him cry; in all my years I'd never imagined I'd see Adams Hurtz cry. But there he was, sitting right next to me as tears streamed down his face. He continued to mumble things that were completely incoherent to me. I think he might have been saying something along the lines of: oh thank God, your awake, I knew you'd pull through and just a bunch of other weird things like that. My eye lids continued to grow heavier as I let them slightly fall down. "I-I..." I tried speaking to Adams; it hurt so badly but I felt I needed to tell him. "T- think...I'm g-going...to go...back...to sleep." Instantly the smile on Adams' face vanished as it was replaced by concern. "No, no, Jane. Don't go back to bed, stay awake." The tears in his eyes stopped falling as he held tightly onto my hand; slightly he began to shake it. "Stay awake, Jane. Please!" I glanced at him a little confused; why did it matter? Why did he care if I went to sleep? "B-But...I'm tired..." I barely whispered. "No, Jane! You have to stay awake!" He was now beginning to yell. "Doctor! Nurse! Someone, please!" Doctor? I thought to myself, what on earth was he talking about? Finally I began to glance around the room I was in; it was at that moment when I realized I was hooked up to some kind of Hospital machine. With a little more analysing, I noticed I was in a Hospital room and lying on a Hospital bed. "W-What's going on?" I looked up at Adams fearfully. My pulse began to quicken as fear and confusion mixed together inside me. "Jane! Thank God, you're awake." I turned to see a lady with a light blue uniform on, "I'll go fetch Dr. Moore." The nurse said with excitement before rushing out of the room. "Jane...What's the last thing you can remember?" Adams asked softly. I looked up at him before I began to think about it. It was weird; my memory sort of seemed fuzzy. The past week was a bit of a blur but at the same time it wasn't. I remembered Adams finally admitting his feeling towards me in front of our entire school. The memory of our very passionate kiss in front of everyone forced my cheeks to redden. I thought harder as the image of me punching Jessica in the face slightly made my lips form into a smile. I knew that wasn't what Adams was talking about; I needed to look further into my mind. "-Derrek...He called me." I finally mumbled though the memory was a bit unclear; I couldn't remember why he called me. "Do...Do you remember anything else?" Adams questioned. That's when the memory came back like a bomb exploding in my head. Richard had made it to Liam's before he left to California. When Adams and I finally showed up at Liam's house, Richard had a gun pulled out on him and I...I was shot. I tried to move my arm, I wanted to see my stomach but it was too hard to move. My body was so weak but I managed to move my hand to my abdominal. It felt tender and was still slightly in pain. "I...I want to see it." I whispered out. "See what?" "My...My stomach." Adams nodded as he pulled the blanket off my body, he slightly lifted up the hospital gown. I glanced downward only to see a deep red scar; a few little red dots surrounded the bullet wound. My brother once had stitches, so when I saw the red dots I knew right away they were from stitches. "How..." My voice trailed off as I stared down at the healing wound with confusion. "How is it already healed, didn't I just get shot yesterday?" Adams slowly shook his head right before a tall dark haired man wearing a Doctor's uniform came into the room. "Oh, she was right...You are awake." He stared at me in shock, "Usually patients don't wake up so abruptly...Usually they show some kind of signs first; I-I'm shocked." "W-What on earth is going on?" I finally demanded. The doctor walked over to the machinery I was hooked up to but didn't reply. When he finally turned towards me; instead of answering my question he began bombarding me with his own; How old are you? What is your name? What is today's date? What is your address? What are your parents' names? What is the last thing you remember? The list went on and on, and as he was asking all these questions, Adams quickly sneaked out of the room. I could see him through the crack in the door as he paced back and forth while talking on his cell phone. I looked back up at the Doctor and I tried to answer the questions as best as I could. I noticed the more I talked the more my voice grew stronger. I had answered every question right aside from the 'What is today's date?' Apparently I had been in a Coma for four entire weeks. When he told me that I sort of just laid there staring up at him. It felt like I had barely been sleeping for a few hours, although it did explain why the stitches in my stomach had already been removed and also why my whole body was so weak and cramped up. But even so, it was still a little bit of a shocker. I looked up as Adams walked back into the room, "I just called your brother; he's on his way over." "Richard?" I gasped with excitement. 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:29am On Jun 18, 2015 |
LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE EPILOGUE NOTE: I won't say pretty much here and now, I will leave the whole appreciation to my next update which is author's note... PRESENTING NOW... I was sitting in the passenger's seat of Adams' GMC truck as we pulled up to the front doors of my house. It had never felt so good to finally be home. After being at the Hospital for six weeks (two of which I was awake) home felt more like heaven where as the hospital was my hell. Two weeks of constant physiotherapy and even mental therapy had completely worn me out. Luckily, my recovery had been a lot quicker than most peoples and being released after only two weeks after waking up from a month long coma was miracle in itself. I looked up into the windows of my house as I noticed that all the lights were out which indicated my parents weren't home. I had talked to them about three times since I had woken up. They said they loved me and that they wished they were there for me, they said to get better and hopefully they would be able to make it home sometime soon. This would probably upset most teenagers; finding out that you had been in a coma for a month and your parents were only there for one week. Or that once you finally did wake up, they were too busy 'working' to even come and see you. But it honestly didn't bug me, I didn't need them. At this point in my life, I actually know people who cared about me and were there for me and they were all I needed. "Home sweet home." Adams' husky voice reached my ears as I turned my head towards him. A small encouraging smile sat crookedly on his face. "Thank God," I smiled back. "I swear, if I had to have one more bite of that disgusting Hospital Jell-O, I would have..." I scowled while shaking my head, unable to think of a proper word to describe what I'd do. Adams laughed, "Hey, that food didn't look so bad." I rolled my eyes and was just about to glare at him when I caught a glimpse of something in the rear view mirror. Instantly my eyes lit up as I watch Richard's 72 Chevy pickup pull into the driveway with both Richard and Derrek sitting inside it. Behind them was Brandon's black S.U.V and although the windows were fiercely tinted I could still manage to see Dorcas' sitting in the passenger's seat with Brandon driving. I heard Adams slightly chuckle at me. "What?" I questioned. "Nothing." He said as he continued to smile, "Here, let me get your door for you." I watch Adams as he jumped out of his truck and came over to my side of the Vehicle. He opened the door for me before offering me his hand to take. "It's a miracle!" Dorcas yelled from Brandon's SUV. She had the door opened and was leaning over the frame of it. "She can walk!" I watched her as she fully jumped out of the vehicle and began to run towards me. All the guys were slowly getting out of their vehicles and walking up towards the house while Dorcas bounced happily to me within seconds. Of course she had seen me almost every day since I'd woken up but I guess finally seeing me out of the hospital, made her all hyper and excited. I couldn't blame her because honestly, I was pretty excited to be out of there as well. As Dorcas' small arms wrapped around my body and pulled me into a tight embrace, I winced. Her stomach pressed against my own which put pressure against the bullet wound. "Be careful short-stuff..." Darrek said in his low, cool voice. "She may be walking but she did just get shot a little over a month ago." I could just barely see Richard behind Derrek but at the mention of me being shot I did noticed how he lowered his head. Even after two weeks of me constantly forgiving Richard, saying that obviously he didn't mean to and that it had been an accident, he still hadn't fully forgiven himself. I knew that it was going to take some time before Richard came to terms with it and nothing I could say would speed up the process anymore. "Oh, my God." Dorcas exclaimed as she pulled away remorsefully. "Sorry Jane...I guess I wasn't really think about that." I smiled almost immediately as I wrapped my left side arm around her neck and pulled her into a small hug, careful not to press my right side stomach against anything. "Don't worry, it's just a little scratch." I said with a smirk. "Alright, kids, let's take this party inside." Richard teased. He walked up to the front door and began to unlock it as everyone else followed him into the house. Once we were all scattered around the living room, Richard disappeared into the kitchen to fetch everyone some drinks. I sat on one of love seat sofas with Adams, although I had to carefully position myself onto my left side. Brandon sat across from us on a matching chair with Dorcas resting on the arm rest lazily. "Maybe I'll go help Richard out." Derrek finally broke the silence as he got up off the other love-seat and headed towards the kitchen. I then seemed to let my mind wonder over to school and all the days I've missed, luckily it was Friday and I wouldn't have to go back to school for another three days. Also the teachers seemed to let my six weeks off also count as the suspension I should have received for punching Jessica in the face. Apparently most of the teachers at school weren't very fond of her either so they tried to give me the most minimal punishment. But even though I would be going back to school as soon as the weekend ended the amount of catching up I'd have to do was already stressing me out to the max. "Jane?" Adams spoke softly as he reached for my face and lightly brushed his hand along my cheek. I felt my stomach begin to flutter. "Are you okay?" Once Adams' hand pulled away from my face the dreamy state he always caused my body to transform into slowly vanished away. "Huh?" I murmured before I realized what he had actually asked me. "Oh...Uh, yah I'm fine. Just a little stressed out about school, I guess." I heard Brandon laugh from across the room as I jerked my head towards him. "Did I say something funny?" I asked him skeptically. "Kinda." He finally replied. "Jane, you are ahead of everyone in class...Hell, you're ahead of me and Dorcas. You don't have any catching up to do, but at last the entire class has caught up to you." Dorcas giggled, "Jane, He's right." She said as she ran her fingers through Brandon's deep brown curly hair. "You'll be ahead of everyone in a week or so...Well, unless Mr. Adams over there distracts you too much." It was about three hours later when everyone finally left, leaving me and Adams alone in my big empty house. I just finished waving goodbye to Derrek and Richard who were now speeding down the street. I stood at the front door as I watched the truck disappear out of sight. Derrek had decided that because today was their one month 'out of the closet' anniversary, he was going to bring Richard somewhere special. Richard had been a little skeptical at first seeing as I had just returned home from the hospital today. But after about a half hour of convincing him it was alright and that I'd be fine here with Adams, him and Derrek bounced out the doors like a couple of seven year old kids heading to an amusement park. Brandon and Dorcas had left about twenty minutes before my brother. Brandon nearly had to drag Dorcas out of the door and I'm sure they managed to be at least ten minutes late for their "Romeo and Juliet" rehearsal. Luckily, I highly doubted either of them would get so much as a slap on the wrist because from what I heard, Ms. Sherman, the drama teacher, favours Brandon and Dorcas like they were her very own children. "Are you planning on standing out there all night?" Adams called to me from the living room. "So, what if I am?" I answered back while walking back into the house and toward the living room. Once I entered into the room I looked to my left where I found Adams leaning lazily against the piano. His smile brought up both sides of his mouth, and a dimple surfaced. I could feel my insides melting as I watched the way his eyes locked with mine just before his facial expression softened. It wasn't very hard to acknowledge the fact that this was the first time Adams and I had actually been alone, like really alone since our time on the cliff. Even at the hospital, it would almost seem like we had privacy but the second the thought ever came to mind, someone would open the door and 'check in' on us. But now, here we stood in my empty house, completely alone with nothing but the sound of our breathing to fill the silence. I could feel my knees as they began to weaken beneath me. I took a small step away from him in an attempt to keep myself from tumbling to the ground. Soon, I found myself standing up against the back of the couch staring at Adams as he pulled himself away from the Piano and took a step closer to me. I felt my pulse edge up a degree as he dipped his head so his mouth was at my ear. "Do you want me to leave?" He whispered as his warm breath tickled against my skin. His hands reached up towards my face before slowly making his way down my body. Barely touching me, and yet grazing the skin enough to force me to arch my back as a small moan escaped my lips. He roamed his way down to my thighs and then back up towards the buttons on my jeans. Slowly he began to undo them as my hands fell down to his chest. I held myself up as he gently pulled off my jeans and underwear, which left me sitting there completely naked. I slid my hands down his body until I reached the beginning of his jeans, fumbling to get them undone. Once we were both naked Adams wrapped his arms around my waist and rolled me back over so he was once again lying on top of me. "Are you sure you want to do this?" He breathed heavily. I smiled admiringly at him before whispering, "I've never been so sure of anything in my entire life." The first time we had done this was absolutely nothing compared to this time, that was AN EARLY MISTAKE. Everything was so much more delicate, more passionate, and just plain better now. This time it felt right. ~*~ I looked over at Adams who was now lying on my bed wearing nothing but a pair of boxer shorts. He was on his side, resting his head in his hand as he watched me get dressed. I pulled on a pair of black boy-shorts underwear before reaching for Adams' black 'John Deere" t-shirt and pulling it over my head. I completely drowned into his shirt and yet it was probably one of the comfiest things I'd ever worn. As I peered over at Adams again, I noticed a smile smirk had taken over his face and I couldn't help but notice a hint of amusement in his eyes. "What?" I finally asked as I placed my hands on my hips and waited for his answer. "You look so cute in my t-shirt." He finally replied as a bashful smile grew on my face. I was just about to look away shyly when he suddenly pulled me onto the bed with him. I yelled out aloud which soon was followed by giggles. He rolled me over him and placed me on the other side of the bed as he hovered over me. His eyes scaled my body before meeting my own gaze. Just lying there, staring into his deep brown eyes made me feel warm inside. I never wanted this to go away, I wish this moment could last forever. I knew it was getting late and my eyes constantly tried to remind me of how tired I was. But I didn't want to go to sleep, lying in bed with Adams at my side was better than any dream ever could be. I wished I could just stay awake and never let the moment end. "Adams..." I finally whispered out. "Yah?" "Can you promise my something?" I bit my bottom lip. "Depends...?" He said skeptically, although he held a smile on his face that said, 'I'd do anything for you.' "Can you promise me that when I wake up in the morning...You'll still be here?" This actually made him chuckle. I was lying there trying to have a serious conversation with him and he was laughing at me. "Jane..." He began as he dipped his head lower towards me, complete seriousness took over his tone. "I'm sorry to break it to you...But you're officially never getting rid of me." He then closed in the small gap that separated mine and his lips. Tenderly, he pressed his lips against mine which caused my stomach to do somersaults. In my heart, I thought of losing my VIRGINITY to him over and over again. FADE OUT 5 Likes |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Kelvin3028(m): 12:31am On Jun 18, 2015 |
Watch out for the author's appreciation note tomorrow... Thank you all. |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by eniolar0(f): 8:30am On Jun 18, 2015 |
wat a wnderfu work. keep it up |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Cally14(f): 8:35am On Jun 18, 2015 |
Nice one Kelvin3028. Weldone!! |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Mercyesse(f): 10:29am On Jun 18, 2015 |
Wow. Lovely story. Bravo |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by richesmensah(f): 10:43am On Jun 18, 2015 |
perfecto!!! |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 2:38pm On Jun 18, 2015 |
Nyc story,,, wish it neva ended |
Re: Lost Of Virginity; An Early Mistake by Nobody: 3:43pm On Jun 18, 2015 |
Wow, best story ever But, now it's over |
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