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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by thirdi(m): 8:19am On Nov 03, 2015
Its my day with destiny
The day my flesh will disintegrate
Sweat soaked face my teeth feels shattered
With the suit of death and button to end it all with a shiver.
As am lead out my legs feels like rubber.
I close my eyes and fall into that bottomless pit and everlasting sleep.

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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by Ignyte(m): 8:20am On Nov 03, 2015
In hopes for the rising sun
We sat in darkness: eaten by corruption
dancing with poverty, we were.
Sounds of wailing and pain,
Even in headphones, were all we could hear
Even, now we still sit in hopes for the rising sun

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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by toyejohnson(m): 8:23am On Nov 03, 2015
SLIDEwaxie:
There is a land not far away
Filled with honey and milky juices
Wedged between fleshy branches
Covered from dirt with dark thick bushes
There I must go, and I must make hay
For my path is made on your narrow way!
wink

badt guy, good one
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by fikki1: 8:26am On Nov 03, 2015
I broke the bottle,
here i am, so cool n humble
was with you, but yet i fumbled
i wish for you, even if its just a little..
oh, yes i fumbled, but now am humble
wishing for you again, so life can bubble

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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by ibksiv(m): 8:36am On Nov 03, 2015
IT ALL FALLS

Aint her love for me full like her breast full still
All she got for me is a short syncopated baleful blue
A turgid dark soot to double my misery
My soul is drought struck my heart is shut up my feet is... i can't take no more i believe no more
No jazz nights, no balls ,no kisses no hugs..(a deep sigh)
It alllllll falls. damn
It all falls. damn!!!!!

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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by overboard(m): 8:41am On Nov 03, 2015
The Deterred Mind/I'm Deter Minded

Our minds, an enclave of pondering criss-crossings
Engineered to lead astray or aright and to wins
Gents, our minds can betray the resolve that deter us
From actions, callous and of vice origins
Lest we need psychological detergent
To deter and align, our minds...

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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by llaykorn: 8:41am On Nov 03, 2015
welshv:
I am interested!
Post your six line poem, bro.
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by llaykorn: 8:41am On Nov 03, 2015
welshv:
I am interested!
Post your six line poem, bro.
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by tkush: 8:46am On Nov 03, 2015
with the wiles of the crowd

your unique voice mesmerize my ears

so sweet I could hear the wisper in my dream

cause all I could ever love is you

so loving I could imagine myself every seconds

cause into my life you came.

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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by VanTee20(m): 8:51am On Nov 03, 2015
Okay, let's do this...

FOR HER..

Let me stand by you to the last day,

I'll be your shining armour knight.


Come rain, come sun, whatever may,

I'll be your shield day and night.


Pay no heed to what people say,

For when we are together, nothing else will ever feel right.

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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by doncutie(m): 8:54am On Nov 03, 2015
AishyWemsy:
I caught him watching me sleep
He smiled and kissed me good morning
We got up prayed, had some chores
We fed each other and prepared for work
We kissed good bye, I slowed down and said HEY HONEY HAVE A SUPER DAY
Love is complicated and yet SO SIMPLE


I watched you sleep 'cause it keeps me at peace

I smiled & kissed gudmorning 'cause your lips are mine 4 keeps

We pray 2geda so God could 4eva make me the nigger you'll ever need

Yes we fed each other and left 4 work 'cause without you i can't breath

Wen you said 'Hey honey, have a super day' i mumbled You gave me one 2day

Yep it's complicated no doubt 'cause what comes across da thought of better half remains a mystery

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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by Laveda(f): 8:56am On Nov 03, 2015
WarRLaY:
ain't cool, we don't need useless people in Nigeria, dogs,goats and cows are only allowed to be like you
You're a fool, can't you mind your business? Who are you to tell me what to post on Nl? You better stop typing trash with those leprous fingers into my mentions

_retard.
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by oracle009(m): 8:58am On Nov 03, 2015
Welcome to the world of the dead,

We were once like u, but now a step ahead,

A world filled with scares of red,

Just so empty and dry as crumbs of bread,

No shower, no toilets or beds,

'Coz we are dead, shake not your head!

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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by Nobody: 8:59am On Nov 03, 2015
Laveda:
Llaykorn I don't think I'm strong enough for this grin

Plz how much TDB?
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by Laveda(f): 9:00am On Nov 03, 2015
doncutie:
Laveda

Let's go then you and I

as the evening spreads against the Sky

through gasping pleasurable Streets

to loves thresholding Beats

moaning away our mind's Lust

to the stampedes of orgasmic Thrust
Cool, but I'm not in
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by oracle009(m): 9:02am On Nov 03, 2015
oracle009:
Welcome to the world of the dead,

We were once like u, but now a step ahead,

A world filled with scares of red,

Just so empty and dry as crumbs of bread,

No shower, no toilets or beds,

'Coz we are dead, shake not your head!



my poems are mostly cultural and abstract...so, any pairing wt an abstract poet will be appreciated....
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by kraftykc(m): 9:02am On Nov 03, 2015
Tipppy-toed so do I toddle
In the house made wood, no metal lasts

I am the caste-away
Land is no more home, yes I'm wingless

I shimmer between two realities
Existing one foot in both, both feet in none, all foots but one.

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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by franklampard082(m): 9:05am On Nov 03, 2015
Please don't put me on any pedestal
A lot living the fast life but I pedal still
Talking about roses when I can't afford a petal still
How do I survive this 21st century economy with my pen skill being my only skill
Or better still, should I better steal?

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Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by kraftykc(m): 9:05am On Nov 03, 2015
Ignyte:
In hopes for the rising sun
We sat in darkness: eaten by corruption
dancing with poverty, we were.
Sounds of wailing and pain,
Even in headphones, were all we could hear
Even, now we still sit in hopes for the rising sun

Find Prof Ekwuazi's anthology on the rising sun too. You have very similar styles. Good stuff
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by joseph1832(m): 9:08am On Nov 03, 2015
SLIDEwaxie:
There is a land not far away
Filled with honey and milky juices
Wedged between fleshy branches
Covered from dirt with dark thick bushes
There I must go, and I must make hay
For my path is made on your narrow way!
wink

El Magnifico!. *round of applause*
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by Patented: 9:23am On Nov 03, 2015
She said no words
I found no worlds
My tears are her pain
For she had found no gain
My listless sleep punctuated the night
For my motherland has lost her might
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by danbrowndmf(m): 9:24am On Nov 03, 2015
ferdspiration:
is this 6 line?
How many is that sir?
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by midehi2(f): 9:27am On Nov 03, 2015
Laveda:
Maybe yes. Maybe No
Why ask?
i dont think its you cos you cant post such; that thing doesn't look like real bwest sef
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by midehi2(f): 9:35am On Nov 03, 2015
figo05:

Plz how much TDB?
shocked
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by killafree: 9:39am On Nov 03, 2015
My pen is a magic wand
my ink an alchemist's elixir
I write not for the living
but for those who cease to feel
in the lonely grave you hear
my poetry calling you to live
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by Burger01(m): 9:41am On Nov 03, 2015
Vig86:
MY FIRST POEM, DON'T LAUGH ME. Thinking about how moral has encroached on our freedom of thought. Even within you, you are unsafe. Somebody should please teach me how to organize my thought or re-write the 'below'(I feel ashamed to call it poem)


The won't allow me
I am safe here
My thought, very wide
Yes, I am safe here
They won't see it
My moral! I am not safe.
smiley It's well
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by magaliyu(f): 9:43am On Nov 03, 2015
"Alas..thou shall rise that nairaland is no mans land, Seun poem so lest the rest"
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by quomo: 9:44am On Nov 03, 2015
A decade and one; so diverse yet united.
These words bring clarity to the eyes of my soul, that man indeed may be finite yet the cords of affection remains eternal
Evolving like the soft folds of Byssus, spun from the chasm of allure
Like my strength you have been a part of me
My sky blue and my blue sky; my heart and my love.
I am glad we discovered love in tenderness, to relish together for years to come.
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by Burger01(m): 9:47am On Nov 03, 2015
AllNaijaBlogger:



undecided

6 lines!! They said 6 lines but you are here dropping 1000 bars like a possessed rapper.

Great poem though grin grin
Possessed rapper..Classicgrin
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by Nobody: 9:47am On Nov 03, 2015
midehi2:

shocked

D fool is an Olosho. See her dp
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by Nobody: 9:55am On Nov 03, 2015
Burger01:
smiley It's well
You just made me feel bad. No wahala, I will surely learn.
Re: NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta by Burger01(m): 9:57am On Nov 03, 2015
Vig86:

You just made me feel bad. No wahala, I will surely learn.
No no no no! You try my guy. Just keep it real and well linked, then you good to go. The last part of your poem threw me off balance..so I couldn't link rightly. That last part could be something like 'For in my thought...I am safe' smiley

I like poems a lot. I'm always learning from poets like yousmiley

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