Tnx Frank,I enjoyed every bit of it,the sky is ur starting point,n heaven is ur Limit,all d best

A wonderfully written piece,
Tnks for sharing dis wit us.
U̶̲̥̅̊ r going places at the top.

wow dis is really nice i love ur stories. i'v read 'the lost key' n 'The Tenth Generation' they r all good. u r becoming d Nigerian version of Stephen king. u'v got talent bro i wish i cld write buh i'v nt really tried to though i love readin other ppls works buh wt al these maybe i'l jst be motivated to do something.

barag: wow dis is really nice i love ur stories. i'v read 'the lost key' n 'The Tenth Generation' they r all good. u r becoming d Nigerian version of Stephen king. u'v got talent bro i wish i cld write buh i'v nt really tried to though i love readin other ppls works buh wt al these maybe i'l jst be motivated to do something.

thnx man, if u have got it in you, then its just there waiting to be explored by u. pick ya pen and start something. you will be surprised at what u can do.

frank3.16:


thnx man, if u have got it in you, then its just there waiting to be explored by u. pick ya pen and start something. you will be surprised at what u can do.

(u called me man again she's a lady) alright tnx. i'l see what i can do

@frank3.16 Great piece bruh! u r a very talented writer..more ink to your pen game. Bless.

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Troynow: Wassup guys. Visit my blog at rollyspeaks..

this is not fair, u shouldnt use my thread to advertise ur blog. meanwhile what is ur blog all about?

frankie,I must say u're a wonderful writer. I like d way u blend d paranormal into real life in all ur stories.
good work.try and publish some.

zinylizzy: frankie,I must say u're a wonderful writer. I like d way u blend d paranormal into real life in all ur stories.
good work.try and publish some.

Thanks girly... And I must say I like the way u called me frankie

OMG! Fraaaaankkk! God I love this story!
You're great!!!

I dunno what else to say. . Jeeez Ive bin hooked since I found it yesterday and even tho im late I must comment on this thread oo. .

*screaming with delight* Fraaaaaaaankkkk!
OhMiGosh!

Br3nd4: OMG! Fraaaaankkk! God I love this story!
You're great!!!

I dunno what else to say. . Jeeez Ive bin hooked since I found it yesterday and even tho im late I must comment on this thread oo. .

*screaming with delight* Fraaaaaaaankkkk!
OhMiGosh!

thanks... did your read the tenth generation?

frank3.16:


thanks... did your read the tenth generation?

Not yet. .
Im going for it now!!

Br3nd4:

Not yet. .
Im going for it now!!

Pls do, I think that is my best story so far, still working hard on writting a better one. Well I think I have something on my sleeves

It is a lovely story.I like its simplicity. I'm not a huge fan of horror or anything scary, but the simplicity made me read to the end. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Emeraldz: It is a lovely story.I like its simplicity. I'm not a huge fan of horror or anything scary, but the simplicity made me read to the end. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Thanks, u can read the religion and tenth generation if you havnt read them

frank3.16:


Thanks, u can read the religion and tenth generation if you havnt read them

How can i get them?

Just check on the pages of this section, or u google either name slash nairaland e.g, the religion/nairaland, and google will take u right to d story.

Or send me a mail vial my email at the begining of the story and I can send u a copy

nice story! U re talented dude...

What an interesting story, religion led me to here, i want to go ahead to read tenth generations, pls keep it up, i am learning to be a good writer like u and max

Frank, I read The Religion and I was like 'wow'. No scary things this time around. Now unto the tenth generation. . .
I'm sure Chigor would be very proud of you.

Sles: What an interesting story, religion led me to here, i want to go ahead to read tenth generations, pls keep it up, i am learning to be a good writer like u and max

Mnnn thanx, I am sure you are a good writer

Emeraldz: Frank, I read The Religion and I was like 'wow'. No scary things this time around. Now unto the tenth generation. . .
I'm sure Chigor would be very proud of you.

Thanks emerald. I think d tenth generation is mid way between scary and thriller, I hope u will like it, just let me know what u think.

ur best work to me so far is the tenth generation ....followed by cyber lover ...on my way to read the religion

Frank i cant help but comment on the wonderful job u did by writing this piece . Gosh u got me in suspense from the beginning to the end NICE WORK

WOW,dis was nice,i really do enjoy it,AND THEY LIVED HAPPILLY EVER AFTER.hmmm

frank3.16:
guys thanks for reading and please tell me what you think.

i really didnt mind posting the whole book on the internet. like i said i have better completed stories. these are some of my book titles

cyber lover, Fever, tenth Generation(My best novel), three days later, on the seventh day, lovers and killers. etc. unfortunately none of them have been published yet. i hope they dont die with me.

@maeden, i can foward you my tenth generation to read. i believe you deserve it.

i enjoyed d novel tanx alot. Dis is my email. Chigozieiroegbulam@gmail. Plz send me d tenth generation. Tanx alot

Plz hw do i get to read this tenth generation. U cn send me d link@frank

Donpoker9: Plz hw do i get to read this tenth generation. U cn send me d link@frank

Here is the link below
www.nairaland.com/1139191/tenth-generation

frank3.16:


Here is the link below
www.nairaland.com/1139191/tenth-generation

tanx bro, i wil read it 29t. Tanx again

Frank3.16:, I was bored and looking for something to hold my attention and i came across your story and it held my attention till i read it from 1st page till the last page. you are obviously a great story teller. God bless you.

To move to the next level , you need to pay attention to details in your writing. Very few mistakes but were you to be in competion with someone in a contest to select the best you might come 2nd because of lack of attention to details.

You made some little errors ;her gender,was writen as here, help as hell etc. that was the kind of little errors that will cost you getting the price. I have made such errors in the past/ present so i know what it can cost if not checked.

Hope you will not be in too much hurry to proofread before up-loading in your next story. thank you for an entertaining and educative read. I wish you all the best.

oleku baby: Frank3.16:, I was bored and looking for something to hold my attention and i came across your story and it held my attention till i read it from 1st page till the last page. you are obviously a great story teller. God bless you.

To move to the next level , you need to pay attention to details in your writing. Very few mistakes but were you to be in competion with someone in a contest to select the best you might come 2nd because of lack of attention to details.

You made some little errors ;her gender,was writen as here, help as hell etc. that was the kind of little errors that will cost you getting the price. I have made such errors in the past/ present so i know what it can cost if not checked.

Hope you will not be in too much hurry to proofread before up-loading in your next story. thank you for an entertaining and educative read. I wish you all the best.

thanks... i have a good editor who will take cae of all that. he is doing a great job at the moment. this story's edited form is about to be published any way.

i am not really proofreading before posting cos the works i post here are just the skeleton of the stories i write. i only wants peoples opinion on how meaningful the story is. thanks

U are good Frank...kip it up!!!!..U will definitely go places.
Tenth Generation is da Bomb!! Al d best dear.