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Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by osarenmwienda(f): 7:54pm On Nov 10, 2016
Onyenso100:
sorry being busy with work. chap 10 dropping soom
pls mention me when u do that.... Thanks

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Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 10:33pm On Nov 10, 2016
CHAPTER TEN

fancy ushered me into his car as we left the campus in his Range rover. he sat next to me radiating this devilish charming smile from his face,. the cars moved, his fans were bumping on his car waving and screaming as we drove through them.
i felt very important.like i was the daughter of the governor.

fancy tried everything he could to get me into a conversation but i kept mute and ignored his talks as i kept forming angry. He kept trying untill we left the school road into the major road leading to town.
after some time he clicked on a button by the doorside. The convoy stop, he came down, demanded the key from the driver driving us and send his P.A,his guards and drivers with the other cars home leaving us with just the range rover.

He then took the driver sit and i reluctantlly joined him in the front sit before he drove off. He continued trying to get me into conversation but i still kept mute.

FANCY: Really this slient treatment is it the best treatment between us right now?

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Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 11:16pm On Nov 10, 2016
CHAP 10 UPDATE

I turned,stared at him then looked away still keeping mute.

FANCY: ok am sorry about what i did.i know you dont like that kind of attention i drew to you.
ME: (still kept a long face) blackmailing me with what i hate most.you think that was cools,that after that we would remain cool.
FANCY: Am really sorry for bring you out like that. You were a hard nut to crack, you even say we are friends yet you run away from me for reasons i dont even know. So i desperately needed a way to get you closer.

I looked into his eye,i didnt even know where to anchor my anger cos i couldnt be angry at him. I lean back, looked away,at the sight outside. but at interval i looked at him and i would met his eyes on me smiling. This brought back the shy girl in me,i look down. my body chemistry was reacting rapidly. My emotional tension was heightend. His eyes were causing damage to me. I brought my fingers together twisting them as they fought each other. All i wish for was to disappear this very moment

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Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 11:22pm On Nov 10, 2016
Kep it coming people i need more critics and comment
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Shakyroh320(f): 5:09am On Nov 11, 2016
guy and their styles of getting to gals,and gals and their styles of forming hard to crack nut,tankx for the update,more grease to ur elbow
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 2:01pm On Nov 11, 2016
Next banger story "THE EVANGELIST(follow my words and not my deeds)" by your one and only onyenso dropping soon

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Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 2:22pm On Nov 11, 2016
chap 10 last update dropping soon Meanwhile have read my other story WAR OF HEART .if not try it here @ www.nairaland.com/2945903/war-hearts , promise it love,betrayal and suspend filled

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Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 8:55pm On Nov 11, 2016
CHAP 10 UPDATE

The usual 5 mins journey to my redsential area was taking long than usual. Although i once told fancy my area, but he had never come to my apartment.he kept driving and kept staring at me at intervals. Once more silience broke out in the car.i kept fighting with my own emotion while Fancy's eyes was still on me. Fancy notice i was not at ease.he pushed the on button of the car sound system and a song which i later knew to be BEYONCY-POSION start playing.


***some of it' lyrics****


You pass for me i clearly get it

But i don't see how something good can come from loving you

The death of me must be your mission

Cos with every stare you snatch every strength that am gon need to fight the inevitable

It a heartbreaking situation that am in pains i cant control

It was as if beyoncy read my mind before writing this song. The song was just like me telling the star sitting by me to stay away from my head, my mind And to keep his eyes off me.
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by osarenmwienda(f): 9:10pm On Nov 11, 2016
continu
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 9:14pm On Nov 11, 2016
CHAP 10 LAST UPDATE

Even this song seems not to be having effect on him as he kept smiling. As we were approching my area, A MILLION MILE BY WESTLIFE started playing

***some of it's lyrics***

It easy to fool around

Hard to keep the faith

But i wanna settle down

No Matter what it take

While the song was playing he looked at me a gave out that cute smile. There! I point at a gate in front. He stopped at the front of the gate. i got down and was about entering the gate. "wont you invite me "said fancy
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 9:17pm On Nov 11, 2016
Chap 11 loading ...80%...90%...compl!!
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Shakyroh320(f): 9:41pm On Nov 11, 2016
Kip it up
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by dexzzy(f): 10:48pm On Nov 11, 2016
for goodness sake make it a little bit longer
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 6:17am On Nov 12, 2016
dexzzy:
for goodness sake make it a little bit longer
ALl this updates are just from one chapter which i had to spilt because of my phone typing capabliy
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by dexzzy(f): 9:33am On Nov 12, 2016
Onyenso100:
ALl this updates are just from one chapter which i had to spilt because of my phone typing capabliy








no problem keep it up we are following......................
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 10:52am On Nov 14, 2016
CHAPTER 11

What does he want again. Haven't he done enough damage to my emotions already. Now he want to join me in my otherwise empty room since my roomy is not back. I turned looked at him still forming angry .

ME: Sorry i can't do dat.
FANCY: (suprised)wooh!! why?
ME: me and my friend dont bring guys into our room.
FANCY: but am not just any random guy.We are friends.
ME: really? (laughing) francis look around ,It's slient here.that mins most of our neighbours are out. So this new style of blackmail isn't going to work here.
FANCY: (started showing his white set of well arranged teeth and fresh breath in the name of laughing) gosh!! this girl you are really funny.If i really wanted to blackmail you,i know how to go about it.
ME: (Stood with my left hand on my waist) the only thing you can blackmail me with is public attention.that was the only winning card you had in school.I dont see anybody around,they have all gone out.So dont think of blackmail ever working here cause it wont
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 12:50pm On Nov 14, 2016
sorry for the late update. being really busy. chap 11 update drop before 3pm
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 4:30pm On Nov 14, 2016
CHAPTER 11 UPDATE

He stood there just osmosing his cute stylish laugh which was beautful. Seeing him laugh made me become more head over heel in love with him & Want to throw away caution and kiss him there


FANCY: you think i cant blackmail you here if i want.
ME: dont bluff me
FANCY: you really dont known me do you?. Ok lets say you refuse to let me in and i refuse to go. This neighbourhood dont always remain scantiy and knowing who i am,would you really let me stay out here knowing that my guard arent with me. My safety is at joepardy and if anything should happen to me,deary you are not going to just recieve some local attention but bae you appear on mtv,bbc,soundcity which is much attention than you would ever ask for.

I just kept quite,watching as words kept flowing from his beautiful lips. I felt once more like a rat in an airlocked space. I left him standing there,walked to the gate,opened it,entered and turned while stil holding the gate. Won't you come in or are you going to kep standing there.

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Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 8:37pm On Nov 14, 2016
CHAPTER 11 LAST UPDATE

Sign of victory was written all over his face as we started walking down to the stairs. Some other Students who were sitting on the beacony upstairs were all staring at us when we entered.I had heard some weird things like me being a lesbian.mayb because dey had never seen me with a guy in or off campus.i wasnt bother about dey were saying. So you can imagin the brimes of surprise written on their faces as i walked upstair with fancy who they had not known who he was. As we continue walking upstairs, i could hear whispers and laughter but i paid no heed cos my mind was bumping back and forth. if fancy tries anything i wont able to control myself which i dont want.

Sliently we walked up to my door.i searched my hand bag,brought out my keys, insert the key into the key hole and wanted to turn when fancy held my hand. I turned,looked at him smiling with his reddish lips and the urge to kiss him became unbearable. He drew near and stared into my eyes and My whole body went up in flames

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Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 8:41pm On Nov 14, 2016
I want does who are feelling this story to start droping comments, critics and contributions. I really need them to write better
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by evemeshma(f): 9:49pm On Nov 14, 2016
grt story, pls keep it coming
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Humbleamanda(f): 11:32pm On Nov 14, 2016
Love this story, keep it up dear.
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 11:43pm On Nov 14, 2016
thanks to you all that showed love to this gingering up for chap 12
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Shakyroh320(f): 5:21am On Nov 15, 2016
fancy is testing her patience,cos wat i feel is fancy too love her.Gud work,kip it up
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 6:15pm On Nov 15, 2016
are yo all ready for chapter 12
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Humbleamanda(f): 6:40pm On Nov 15, 2016
More than ready dear, give it to us.
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by dexzzy(f): 9:35pm On Nov 15, 2016
over ready dey worry me
pls kwontinue


the suspense is killing me
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by ayaobaidowu: 9:41pm On Nov 15, 2016
more than ready self..... oya continue Jor
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 12:16am On Nov 16, 2016
CHAPTER 12

I was in a state of trans,Beyonce's song "poison"chorus was echoing in my head

*********chorus********
You just like poison
Moving tro my system breaking my defences with time.....

I wasnt a big fan of love songs but This song i had just heard for the first time few minutes ago in fancy's car made lot of sense to me now with this star's face close to mine.

ME: (turned my face away from his. Then gave him a gentle push) fancy am not in the mood for all this sly playing around.
FANCYsadsmiled)am sorry for everything i put through today to get here
ME: francis ur cute smile can fool many girls and make them do your biding,that dont work on me.
FANCY: i know deary and that why you are special. You are not like all those girls to me.
ME: (turned the key and opened the door) special hu? anyways you wnt in that's an open door

he walked in and i closed the door after i entered. i put on the A.C and went into the bathroom where i washed my face,reapplie some makeup and brushed my hair.

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Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Shakyroh320(f): 10:47am On Nov 16, 2016
D update is short nw,plz update more.
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 7:04pm On Nov 17, 2016
CHAPTER 12 UPDATE


I walked into the room,fancy was lying on my bed going through a picture album left on the side of the bed.
ME: Sorry i kept you waiting. Soft or achollic,which should i offer you
FANCY: (he stared at me and smiled again) the only thing i need now from you is your forgiveness for using blackmail on you
ME: dont bring that up again.
FANCY: please!
ME: ok i forgive you. but please dont use blackmail on a lady again it ungentleman-like
FANCY: (we both laughed) yes ma.
ME: so soft or achollic
FANCY: none
ME: you cant come to my house for the first and want nothing.
FANCY: ok i want you
ME: (i gave him an ackward look) me?
FANCY: you! Literal as in you time. come sit here lets chat (he gets up and pulled me up from where i sat on the chair of the dressing table toward the bed)
ME: (sat on the bed with him) what do you want us to talk about.
FANCY: i want to know more about you so you might get to know more about me.
ME: there nothing much to know about.
Re: THE PAINS OF LOVING A STAR [a story that touches the heart] by Onyenso100(m): 7:10pm On Nov 17, 2016
I HAVE BEEN GIVEN TWO DAYS OFF FROM WORK. AND I WANT TO COMPASET MY FANS FOR ALL MY DELAYED UPDATE WITH CHAPTER 13 TO CHAPTER 17. THATS 4CHAPTERS IN TWO DAYS BABY.


BEAT THAT !!!

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