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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Perfectionist11: 9:36pm On Nov 28, 2016
Emzy90:

ya she is everyone prime suspect but the law don't arrest someone base on assumption

You're right bro..but the "prime suspect fled" after the crime was committed.. and the prime suspect also has a. grudge aginst the son of the deceased and she promised to get back at "Tade..moreova she's got a "mini criminal record""if that's not enough evidence to @ least " not allow her to waka in & out of da station and sit her down 4 interrogation" then the law is kinda ludicrous.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Perfectionist11: 9:36pm On Nov 28, 2016
Emzy90:

ya she is everyone prime suspect but the law don't arrest someone base on assumption

You're right bro..but the "prime suspect fled" after the crime was committed.. and the prime suspect also has a. grudge aginst the son of the deceased and she promised to get back at "Tade..moreova she's got a "mini criminal record""if that's not enough evidence to @ least " not allow her to waka in & out of da station and sit her down 4 interrogation" then the law is kinda ludicrous.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 9:55pm On Nov 28, 2016
dis funmi no get heart again o. She's very wicked. Abeg aunty bibi don't let her repent. She need to suffer for all her evil deeds
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 10:47pm On Nov 28, 2016
Oh my God.. Dupe's mother is dead? shocked cry cry

Chisos.. . This Funmi character needs to die already Bibi, Eliminate her!!! undecided undecided

Thanks for the dedication though wink
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Ibukzy: 10:55pm On Nov 28, 2016
finally caught up with you, you doing a nice job, more grease to ur elbow
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by iwakacome: 11:10pm On Nov 28, 2016
hmmm bibi what's good? wonderful work with the story am really enjoying it.
Did a simple love gone wrong turn Funmi into a demonic vampire or what's up with her twist cos it totally different from the beginning.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 11:11pm On Nov 28, 2016
Officially proclaimed.

Tell me there's a better twister on Nl, and I'll stop appreciating artworks, especially by bibi (teacher mi ) grin

more, more, more. And all those saying death do this and that, shuu person no go kpeme again :/ grin lol bibijay you would hv killed someone else. Dupe's the fav. Character now.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 11:37pm On Nov 28, 2016
At last I've caught up. Funmi is a psychopath. She's evil and should be placed in a mental home.

Nice work bibijay123, hope you're not mad that I've not beenbeen commenting embarassed

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Topscoque(f): 11:40pm On Nov 28, 2016
So unhappy after readin dis update..... Funmi is jst too wicked and Dupe was too blind wit trust to c it
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 5:26am On Nov 29, 2016
Bibi sef this your update eh undecided undecided... In real life, Dupe would've miscarried, the emotional stress on her is Too much (Bibi don't use this one as another twist ooh or "I will find you, and make you change it" grin grin )


Funmi on the other hand is a nutjob who has passed redemption. I cant even wait for karma to start working on her)
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 5:37am On Nov 29, 2016
am so unhappy after readin dis update i pity dupe
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Teespice(f): 6:11am On Nov 29, 2016
Emzy90:

ya she is everyone prime suspect but the law don't arrest someone base on assumption

very true but not in this naija.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by lumzybo: 6:12am On Nov 29, 2016
Bibi, why are u killing everyone in ur story?

No further question *sadface*
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Lleigh(f): 6:15am On Nov 29, 2016
Thanks for the dedication bibijay123

Wow....Funmi is really something else.

She has a grudge against Dupe....why I don't know

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by toboski1(m): 6:21am On Nov 29, 2016
mhiz:
At last I've caught up. Funmi is a psychopath. She's evil and should be placed in a mental home.

Nice work bibijay123, hope you're not mad that I've not beenbeen commenting embarassed

obviously Funmi has taken the right turn to Yaba left, but how we sure she won't kill everyone thr?

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by toboski1(m): 6:23am On Nov 29, 2016
lumzybo:
Bibi, why are u killing everyone in ur story?

No further question *sadface*
Is it new to you?

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Jay542(m): 9:46am On Nov 29, 2016
This Funmi has no shame. What a fool angry

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by amtalkin(f): 10:07am On Nov 29, 2016
Bibijay123 Queen of twist.
Twist this story anyhow you like but don't kill Uche and make Sly marry Dupe oooo. If you know you don't e-protest
Pls allow Uche to regain his sight biko o?
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by mamindy(f): 10:39am On Nov 29, 2016
Ooh my Dupe my heart is shattered because am losing you gradually, why should you of all people experience the dangerous fate. But just bear it in mind that no matter what am here by your side, you have a shoulder to cry.
Please Bibi, my heart is in your pen(hand). I might soon join Uche in the hospital if the update goes more wrong for my sweetheart Dupe, please handle with care. Love you big time Bibi, keep it coming

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by SPDAZZY(f): 10:56am On Nov 29, 2016
embarassed embarassed embarassed
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 11:14am On Nov 29, 2016
This is frustrating though, the nerve in Funmi's head. I don't know wether she's psychologically unstable or she's playing die hard....

Girlhaley or Swann said they have powers to perform miracles, please do the needful. Funmi must be brought to justice. This girl is destroying everything.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by room089: 1:52pm On Nov 29, 2016
Twist the story!
Kill anybody!

But mind you, Funmi didn't kill Mrs Afolabi. I am an eye-witness! grin

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Roseygold(f): 2:43pm On Nov 29, 2016
I've realy miss alot. Bibi please i want a very big punishment for funmi dont end this story like yoruba film o. More wisdom to your brain
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Horlorlardaey: 2:48pm On Nov 29, 2016
room089:
Twist the story!
Kill anybody!

But mind you, Funmi didn't kill Mrs Afolabi. I am an eye-witness! grin

me too
I'm rooting for funmi, she isnt the killer jare

who knows maybe the dead Mrs Afolabi has a secret enemy

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Horlorlardaey: 2:50pm On Nov 29, 2016
Aunty Bibijay123,

your Writing skills needs no more perfections just accolades and encouragements has brought the bestest in you

Kip Slaying Nairaland with your stories that has no match.

Oya pls your constant update is what Nairalanders needs now.

your faithful follower,

Horlorlardaey.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 2:53pm On Nov 29, 2016
Roseygold:
I've realy miss alot. Bibi please i want a very big punishment for funmi dont end this story like yoruba film o. More wisdom to your brain

lol how does a yoruba movie end? you are welcome back.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 2:53pm On Nov 29, 2016
Horlorlardaey:
Aunty Bibijay123,

your Writing skills needs no more perfections just accolades and encouragements has brought the bestest in you

Kip Slaying Nairaland with your stories that has no match.

Oya pls your constant update is what Nairalanders needs now.

your faithful follower,

Horlorlardaey.

Thank you Ola tongue

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 2:55pm On Nov 29, 2016
toboski1:

Is it new to you?



cry

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Horlorlardaey: 2:55pm On Nov 29, 2016
back to the story,

Dupe mama yaff dead away, aunty bibi why??

Funmi wants to be the current wife and legal godmother of dupe unborn baby, aunty why?

Why di i keep having that feelings that sly most trusted lawyer will lose this case,
why do i keep having that feeling that Funmi isnt the killer,
Uche, youve suffered enough, yah mama is the cause jare.
sly, emotions yaff started spoiling you, i laff your destiny is spanish o
funmi, people arent understanding you, thats the reason for your problem


Aunty Bibijay123, pls goan borrow a detective come oooo, i want to know who kill tade mama

and that foolish police whey cause dupe mama death ehn??

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Horlorlardaey: 2:59pm On Nov 29, 2016
bibijay123:


Thank you Ola tongue
I'm blushing oooo

i will need an autograph of yours when we meet
lest i forget,
are you participating in #njawrites prize for dedication??
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 3:01pm On Nov 29, 2016
Horlorlardaey:
back to the story,

Dupe mama yaff dead away, aunty bibi why??

Funmi wants to be the current wife and legal godmother of dupe unborn baby, aunty why?

Why di i keep having that feelings that sly most trusted lawyer will lose this case,
why do i keep having that feeling that Funmi isnt the killer,
Uche, youve suffered enough, yah mama is the cause jare.
sly, emotions yaff started spoiling you, i laff your destiny is spanish o
funmi, people arent understanding you, thats the reason for your problem


Aunty Bibijay123, pls goan borrow a detective come oooo, i want to know who kill tade mama

and that foolish police whey cause dupe mama death ehn??





Questions will be answered in subsequent updates. Where went you? cool

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 3:02pm On Nov 29, 2016
Horlorlardaey:
I'm blushing oooo

i will need an autograph of yours when we meet
lest i forget,
are you participating in #njawrites prize for dedication??


lol, No, tell me about it.

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