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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Red Ashes by teel123(f): 7:13pm On Jan 25, 2017
65
Re: Red Ashes by teel123(f): 7:14pm On Jan 25, 2017
65 please update *winks*
Re: Red Ashes by harameede99(f): 7:16pm On Jan 25, 2017
Aunty chumzy i say make u kill chucks naw see wetin he don du if anytin apen to chioma i go fight u oo
Re: Red Ashes by Paradise163(f): 7:21pm On Jan 25, 2017
Lolz Chumzypinky see comments o. We don reach page 65. More updates please cool Thanks for your effort in seeing to it that you update regularly. If all writers on nairaland are like you eh, story no go take up to one month finish sef
Re: Red Ashes by twinkiet(f): 7:34pm On Jan 25, 2017
Mummy pinky...... I really laud your efforts... You are the best.... Chuks is mad..... U really want him to die. I'm in love with Samyfreshsmooth
Re: Red Ashes by rachealfst(f): 7:34pm On Jan 25, 2017
Chumzypinky:

and urs too my luv. Do u knw i luv u so much?
Huh! I'm blushing right now. I love you too. *hugs&kizzes* Thanks.
Re: Red Ashes by twinkiet(f): 8:11pm On Jan 25, 2017
Mummy pinky...... I really laud your efforts... You are the best.... Chuks is mad..... I really want him to die. I'm in love with Samyfreshsmooth..... Will you marry me
Re: Red Ashes by yusufibrahim(m): 8:16pm On Jan 25, 2017
twinkiet:
Mummy pinky...... I really laud your efforts... You are the best.... Chuks is mad..... U really want him to die. I'm in love with Samyfreshsmooth..... Will you marry me
wow that's serious love o
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:33pm On Jan 25, 2017
Prettyhurts:

One down, 3 to go by His Grace
Lemme wait small so it'll enter page 65.......... Is it 65 yet.
its 65 now Lol. So wats my daughter's name nw?
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:44pm On Jan 25, 2017
Chumzypinky:
Shey una no wan comment again abi? Ok, no quata, no more update for una until d page reach 65 *tongue-out*
ok.e don reach page 65 we need ntin less than 5 updates 2mao or else!!................
Re: Red Ashes by twinkiet(f): 9:04pm On Jan 25, 2017
yusufibrahim:
wow that's serious love o
yeah..... Samy baby where are thou
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 9:09pm On Jan 25, 2017
twinkiet:
Mummy pinky...... I really laud your efforts... You are the best.... Chuks is mad..... U really want him to die. I'm in love with Samyfreshsmooth..... Will you marry me

shocked OMG!!! shocked OMG!!! shocked OMG!!! is this real??

someone should hold me nw b4 i faint o.....

hadampson the great seer comman see dis proposal beautiful miss twinkiet is laying b4 me o

did u see this in the prophecy abi horoscope u foretold about abt me and sunshine46?


ermmm miss twinkiet am so tempted to say yes o (just checked ur profile and my oh my u really are beautiful)
bt then i cant accept cos am in luff with anada bae (sunshine46)......i culd hook u up with my cousin though...his name is samsonfreshsmooth grin grin grin
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 9:15pm On Jan 25, 2017
rachealfst:
Huh! I'm blushing right now. I love you too. *hugs&kizzes* Thanks.

I yaf tire 4 all this girls on NL dat will be giving their fellow gals hugs and kisses o angry angry

aff guys finish on nl ni?
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 9:19pm On Jan 25, 2017
I've really missed but here I am now

Chuks making this interesting, It's normal to have a villain but if you are disturbing Chioma too much,I'll have no choice but to enter the story myself and hand you over to either jagugu88li or cerowo or hadampson to take you to hell
Btw,ma'am chumpzypinky,to born one dey scare me like anything let alone four,una wan kill person?
Re: Red Ashes by cerowo(f): 9:35pm On Jan 25, 2017
Azeequeen:
I've really missed but here I am now

Chuks making this interesting, It's normal to have a villain but if you are disturbing Chioma too much,I'll have no choice but to enter the story myself and hand you over to either jagugu88li or cerowo or hadampson to take you to hell
Btw,ma'am chumpzypinky,to born one dey scare me like anything let alone four,una wan kill person?
Hi sis, wat is going on here?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:42pm On Jan 25, 2017
Azeequeen:
I've really missed but here I am now

Chuks making this interesting, It's normal to have a villain but if you are disturbing Chioma too much,I'll have no choice but to enter the story myself and hand you over to either jagugu88li or cerowo or hadampson to take you to hell
Btw,ma'am chumpzypinky,to born one dey scare me like anything let alone four,una wan kill person?
na who get toto dey born u hear?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:44pm On Jan 25, 2017
samyfreshsmooth:


I yaf tire 4 all this girls on NL dat will be giving their fellow gals hugs and kisses o angry angry

aff guys finish on nl ni?
are u jealous?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:45pm On Jan 25, 2017
boffinjay:
ok.e don reach page 65 we need ntin less than 5 updates 2mao or else!!................
lol, infact na 2moro i wan finish d story
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 9:51pm On Jan 25, 2017
Chumzypinky:
na who get toto dey born u hear?
Yes ma,your honourable servant heard you loud n clear
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 9:54pm On Jan 25, 2017
cerowo:

Hi sis, wat is going on here?
Una don miss gan niyen o
Many things dey happen for here,na one interesting story dey here jawe...Make una enjoy am?Lemme shift for you small
We need popcorn here,please?
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 10:04pm On Jan 25, 2017
Chumzypinky:

are u jealous?

Yes...ermm...no...maybe #shakes head#
dats not the point...its not just rite na...guys full here yet una dy give una selves kisses

is it fair?
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 10:14pm On Jan 25, 2017
twinkiet:
Mummy pinky...... I really laud your efforts... You are the best.... Chuks is mad..... I really want him to die. I'm in love with Samyfreshsmooth..... Will you marry me

Screw my earlier comment...i just say make i form small...
i wuld marry u jareh

bt den lets do it rite..

elegant miss twinkiet wuld u do me d honour of being my nl wife 4 better or worse until nl closes grin grin

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Re: Red Ashes by cerowo(f): 10:22pm On Jan 25, 2017
Azeequeen:

Una don miss gan niyen o
Many things dey happen for here,na one interesting story dey here jawe...Make una enjoy am?Lemme shift for you small
We need popcorn here,please?
Tnks 4 alerting me here
*runs out ov thread 2 call Adesina12 d pop corn manager*
still waiting 4 him sis

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:25pm On Jan 25, 2017
samyfreshsmooth:


Screw my earlier comment...i just say make i form small...
i wuld marry u jareh

bt den lets do it rite..

elegant miss twinkiet wuld u do me d honour of being my nl wife 4 better or worse until nl closes grin grin
hahahaha, u go fear bouquet na
Re: Red Ashes by ztarlord(m): 10:25pm On Jan 25, 2017
breathtaking as always
Re: Red Ashes by Adesina12: 10:56pm On Jan 25, 2017
cerowo:

Tnks 4 alerting me here
*runs out ov thread 2 call Adesina12 d pop corn manager*
still waiting 4 him sis

Thanks bae

I am very much around with tons of sweet popcorn
Re: Red Ashes by twinkiet(f): 12:03am On Jan 26, 2017
samyfreshsmooth:


Screw my earlier comment...i just say make i form small...
i wuld marry u jareh

bt den lets do it rite..

elegant miss twinkiet wuld u do me d honour of being my nl wife 4 better or worse until nl closes grin grin
yes baby.... Hope I'm not dreaming...... I love you baby

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:05am On Jan 26, 2017
twinkiet:
yes baby.... Hope I'm not dreaming...... I love you baby
hian! In my thread?
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 7:06am On Jan 26, 2017
Chumzypinky:
lol, infact na 2moro i wan finish d story
huh!2mao ke
Re: Red Ashes by Hadampson(m): 7:54am On Jan 26, 2017
Azeequeen:
I've really missed but here I am now

Chuks making this interesting, It's normal to have a villain but if you are disturbing Chioma too much,I'll have no choice but to enter the story myself and hand you over to either jagugu88li or cerowo or hadampson to take you to hell
Btw,ma'am chumpzypinky,to born one dey scare me like anything let alone four,una wan kill person?
Wetin dey apen babe? undecided
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:01am On Jan 26, 2017
Chumzypinky:
JOLADE.

I checked my wristwatch for the umpteenth time and looked at the entrance of the fast food and i sighed.


He had asked me to come by 1pm, but now it was almost 2:30 and he was nowhere to be found.



I wondered where he was and what he was doing at the moment. He could be with another girl...
I shuddered at the thought of that.




I wondered if Nathan was ever going to change. He was the most handsome guy i've ever met but then, his manners suck.




He was rude and disrespectful to me all the time, no matter how much i tried to please him. No matter how much i tried to make him love me the way i did. He just didnt know how much i really loved him.




I sighed in relief when i saw him enter the fast food. He looked around and when he found me, he started walking towards me.



I loved everything about him. His swag. His dressence. His walking step, everything about me.



He got to my table, pulled out a chair and sat on it without as much glance towards me or even a greeting.



Then he pulled out his phone and began to type.



Not again! I sighed. When will i ever get the attention of this young man? God please help me! Help me in this.




'Nathan, hi...' i greeted with a slight shaky voice.



'hi, you too' he said not looking up from his phone.



'how are you doing?'



'fine'




'what about your mum?'



'you have her phone number right?'



'um...eh..yes i do. I'll call her later'




Then he looked up, tucked his phone back into his pocket then stood up 'lets get out of here. Have you had something to eat?' he asked with a devilish smile.



'eh...um...yeah, but where are we going to?'



'you're going to need that food in few minutes from now. Get up' he said walking towards me. He pulled me up quickly i almost kicked my foot on the table.




Then he proceeded to drag me out of the restaurant.


*****



He dumped me on the bed and pulled off his clothes.


Then he came upon me, kissing and groping at the same time.



I sighed in relief, i thought he was going to be forceful but no, it seems he was in a good mood today. He was very calm, gentle and romantic and it didnt take much time to arouse me.


****


I woke up to the smell of marijuana. And i knew it, Nathan was at it again.


I sat up gently and coughed.


He was sitting on the couch opposite the bed, he was smoking, unclad and wanking again.




I was like....was this guy an addict or something.




'Nathan?'





He looked up at me and stood up.


'what took you so long to wake? You'd me starving here. Lie down and spready your legs quickly' he commanded.





TBC.


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And when she sees a of decent guy, she will mess up over and over. Money is the only true love a man can find, good men should keep their goodness to themselves
Re: Red Ashes by Hadampson(m): 8:06am On Jan 26, 2017
samyfreshsmooth:


shocked OMG!!! shocked OMG!!! shocked OMG!!! is this real??

someone should hold me nw b4 i faint o.....

hadampson the great seer comman see dis proposal beautiful miss twinkiet is laying b4 me o

did u see this in the prophecy abi horoscope u foretold about abt me and sunshine46?


ermmm miss twinkiet am so tempted to say yes o (just checked ur profile and my oh my u really are beautiful)
bt then i cant accept cos am in luff with anada bae (sunshine46)......i culd hook u up with my cousin though...his name is samsonfreshsmooth grin grin grin
*consulting d oracle* gringrin

Iwaju opon
eyin opon
olumulotun
olokoran losi
arin ifa ita orun ni.. mo fi bi pe ibi, mo fi ire pe ire mo fi ololo fo ihun

Mr Oracle u don hear wetin samyfreshsmooth yarn naw.. so wetin be d koko? ehn erm.. ok make im accept twinkiet proposal?? ok oda oshe elerin pin

Samyfreshsmooth U don hear naw.. itz nw left tew u naw o

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