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Re: Make Me A Wife by McIrx: 12:27pm On May 15, 2017 |
The intense nature of your story makes it all the more interesting.I enjoyed it from the beginning till the end. Thank you for such a wonderful story. 4 Likes |
Re: Make Me A Wife by ElPhoche(m): 2:36pm On May 15, 2017 |
It was really an interesting piece. You left me spellbound. I would like to point out some few things I hope you could correct in your next work, which I will be eagerly waiting for. 1)Work on the tenses. 2)You saturate your paragraph with so many characters and pronouns that it is difficult at times, keeping up and identifying who is speaking. 3)To forestall above, more paragraph would be better, or you find another way to work around it. As a doctor, , I will say that they didn't stab 'her retroperitoneal organ'. ' means behind. Retroperitoneal organs here would include the ascending, descending colon, kidneys, pancrease, ureters, rectum, which I don't think you mean. 'The girl in glasses' aka Degelinglacis, you rock 3 Likes |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Thastie(f): 3:23pm On May 15, 2017 |
ElPhoche: Her retroperitoneal organ was not stabbed. A knife was pointed at those organs. From what I can picture, the writer meant the knife was pointed at her back. 2 Likes |
Re: Make Me A Wife by tylesh(f): 3:57pm On May 15, 2017 |
@Degelinglacis, you are blessed. What a beautiful story and interesting one at that. I couldn't even make one comment while reading cos I was engrossed in it. Keep it up 2 Likes |
Re: Make Me A Wife by ElPhoche(m): 4:14pm On May 15, 2017 |
Thastie:Ok, but definitely not a retroperitoneal organs, just the brain.... Had to go back and recheck, you are correct. She could have worded it better as '...Pointed the knife on the small of her back' or something. 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Thastie(f): 4:26pm On May 15, 2017 |
ElPhoche: Alright |
Re: Make Me A Wife by degelinglacis: 4:36pm On May 15, 2017 |
ElPhoche: Thanks for the corrections. 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by horlah1(f): 5:28pm On May 15, 2017 |
Wow
Wat a sweet ending for others and a sad one for Aina..
I must commend u lady, u rock... Pls do mention me in ur next story 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Bibi294(f): 6:35pm On May 15, 2017 |
Sort for ur loss,OP. .. God bless you and uphold ur family. This story is dope!! Keep the good work 2 Likes |
Re: Make Me A Wife by ibawon(m): 9:31pm On May 15, 2017 |
Babe, you really tried with this May Almighty God give you more strength and knowledge to move on and create more wonderful stories. Bless you my Dear 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by dafil22(m): 11:11pm On May 15, 2017 |
nice story I totally enjoyed all of it. well-done!!!! 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by ireneblush(f): 4:41pm On May 16, 2017 |
wow. wonderful. thanks so much dear, please do mention me when next you start cooking something.big Ups! 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Olabantu(m): 5:34pm On May 16, 2017 |
Wow...I gat dove my hat for you ooo...Nice one...I really enjoyed it ...Keep it up OP 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by BlissfulJeff(m): 5:25pm On May 18, 2017 |
nice update dear 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Maryclaire1(f): 2:36pm On May 20, 2017 |
No peace for the wicked...lovely ending I must say. I enjoyed it, Aina got what she deserve..thanks ma'am for this beautiful write up u the BOMB 2 Likes |
Re: Make Me A Wife by EvaJael(f): 5:33pm On May 20, 2017 |
It was such a delightful ride. Well done degelinglacis 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Nobody: 6:32pm On May 22, 2017 |
EvaJael: hey please is ur name Evangel? |
Re: Make Me A Wife by EvaJael(f): 6:59pm On May 22, 2017 |
Evaberry:If you mean my real name...nah 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Ansasan(f): 7:45pm On May 23, 2017 |
Awwwn... Finally, the end! Thanks for writing dead. 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Jazmiynne: 8:54pm On May 24, 2017 |
Well-done degehinglacias 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Nobody: 1:13am On May 26, 2017 |
Thumbs up degelinglaics. Dat was dope. My ink to ur pen. 2 Likes |
Re: Make Me A Wife by NairalandSARS: 11:35am On May 30, 2017 |
Re: Make Me A Wife by NairalandSARS: 11:23am On May 31, 2017 |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Nofuckgiven: 9:44pm On Jun 04, 2017 |
My dear,this is one of the best stories I have read online. You really need to publish at least online like an eBook. It would really sell. I am sorry for your sister! Take heart, it is well! 3 Likes |
Re: Make Me A Wife by BlissfulJeff(m): 8:56pm On Jun 06, 2017 |
pls more update 1 Like |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Lankyannie(f): 2:06pm On Jun 12, 2017 |
wooooow I really learned alot from this story.
thanks alot Bae for completing the story. 2 Likes |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Ayemileto(m): 7:57pm On Jun 27, 2018 |
Nice story. Guys looking for complete interesting story should read this 3 Likes |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Nobody: 4:08pm On Jun 29, 2018 |
To d op am lost for words, take dis 3 Likes |
Re: Make Me A Wife by Timsin: 10:15pm On Jul 01, 2018 |
Nice one.[color=#000000][/color] 2 Likes 1 Share |
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