ghostwritter:

lol...Tom Tom kò...Tirebo ní.
Now I see this story is getting u all twisted but babe relax for the next chapter, a new character will be on board to reveal the mistery of all that had happened.

Bro it is not confusing at all. Infact, it is extremely clear and entertaining. However, the delay in update kills the vibe and fun it creates. Try to post more often.

Can't wait for the next update. Nice work bro.

D twists ehn.....no b here. Tnx for d update

can't wait for you to update, what an amazing story

ghostwritter:

lol...Tom Tom kò...Tirebo ní.
Now I see this story is getting u all twisted but babe relax for the next chapter, a new character will be on board to reveal the mistery of all that had happened.

Yeah sir. *breathe in, breathe out* Oya I'm relaxed

Thanks ghostwriter
Eid Mubarak...waiting patiently for the next twist
@queenitee nawa for u oooo
Which one be tom tom and gudigudi?
Sweet popcorn for you op

Adesina12:
Thanks ghostwriter
Eid Mubarak...waiting patiently for the next twist
@queenitee nawa for u oooo
Which one be tom tom and gudigudi?
Sweet popcorn for you op

tom tom na

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CHAPTER FIFTEEN

THE FALL

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SUDDENLY, he heard a distress call from behind, he turned around and wasn’t surprise to see it was Kara, pointing at his direction while she kept on shouting for the guards to come see the prisoner escaping. Cencii though was afraid but had to be courageous and was determined to play the situation to his own favour. Guards armed to tooth were on his tail in desperate pursuit as they dashed out from various corners amongst the buildings, aiming all sought of deadly weapons towards him as he dashed out through the city gate that was strangely opened and unguarded. The chase went on for hours as he had dashed out of the city gate into an open dry and deserted land having no clue of where his horses were heading but he was certain not be caught going by the way and manner his pursuers were coming after him. He saw an arrow narrowly missed him from behind to go hit the white horse ahead of him but surprisingly the horse kept running like nothing had happened, his eyes widened in horror when he saw the cliff ahead, he remembered Kara’s instruction to him, he deepened his hand into the jar and like he had expected, he brought out a small black pebble from it, he knew too well what would happen if he goes by Kara’s instruction and within seconds while he watched his horses dashing towards the edge of the cliff like they had been compelled to, he thought of it all, he thought of what Dakdar had said to him, he thought of the dream he had in the cell, he then concluded it was time to stair things up, break the chain of event for a difference, do things in his own way and by that he decided to end it all, he decided he would die for a change. Cencii threw away the pebble to embrace himself for the worst ahead before lashing the horses for the very last time. Like they were blind, the horses speedily dragged themselves down the cliff along with him, Tom saw himself falling loosely, carelessly drifting long way down through the hot air, he screamed with eyes widen in horror seeing himself heading for a heard crashed, he almost wished he had taken to Kara’s words but it was too late for regret. He fell heard to the ground hitting his head on a rocky surface just before one of the falling horses crushed him to the ground.
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(I dedicate this chapter to all Nigerians who still belief our darling SUPER EAGLE can still make it to the world cup final against Saudi-Arabia .
Catch-up with chapter sixteen next week)
One love.

U too much OP. Jah bless

Ghost, the update is dope as usual but the dedication get as it is sha, the sarcasm no be here own..

dope update as usual, but more update quick �

Awwwn, but rn I'm not a Nigerian

Wow Ghost this is amazing man

queenitee:
Awwwn, but rn I'm not a Nigerian

So who are you?
You must return to Togo immediately we win the World Cup against Saudi Arabia
Sweetest popcorn for you ghostwriter

Adesina12:

So who are you?
You must return to Togo immediately we win the World Cup against Saudi Arabia
Sweetest popcorn for you ghostwriter

I'm not from Togo either

queenitee:
Awwwn, but rn I'm not a Nigerian

You are not a Nigerian then what are u doing on Nairaland

Vulcanheph:

You are not a Nigerian then what are u doing on Nairaland

I have a Nigerian uncle, he introduced me to Nairaland. Don't worry, you won't understand

ghostwritter:

lol...Tom Tom kò...Tirebo ní.
Now I see this story is getting u all twisted but babe relax for the next chapter, a new character will be on board to reveal the mistery of all that had happened.

I can't wait either o.. I don't even know which world I am now, which one is real and which one is fake

I have a feeling that Ghostwritter has done it again....leaving us Hanging like he did on his other two stories Lucifer's key and Corridors of hell.

REMOVED

It keeps getting interesting

Keep the updates coming

Thanks

tanks for the update. jah bless


happy new month to u all

tanks for the update. jah bless


happy new month to u all

Following keenlyy.

Dear Ghostwriter , becareful time travel stories always get complicated and might give way to Loopholes.

Eshey o

Updates please!! @ghostwriter

Ghostwriter ...... Last update was 20 days ago, don't kill the spirit of this work..

If not for the fact that I'm the one writing this story, I would had concluded the story had been abandoned 'again'. But coming up with the next chapter had been very tasking as I need to be careful what to post so I don't rubbish the entire work. Trust me, the next post will drop on sunday and wallahi it's going to be unimaginable.
Guy Pls forgive me for my ghosterity to ur comments all alone.

I dey watch you

ghostwritter:
If not for the fact that I'm the one writing this story, I would had concluded the story had been abandoned 'again'. But coming up with the next chapter had been very tasking as I need to be careful what to post so I don't rubbish the entire work. Trust me, the next post will drop on sunday and wallahi it's going to be unimaginable.
Guy Pls forgive me for my ghosterity to ur comments all alone.

A relief na, would have said baba done run leave work abi na forget, also suspected writers block but it's good to find out you're still very much around and a very tight update is brewing..... Please serve it chilly hot once it is ready.

ghostwritter:
If not for the fact that I'm the one writing this story, I would had concluded the story had been abandoned 'again'. But coming up with the next chapter had been very tasking as I need to be careful what to post so I don't rubbish the entire work. Trust me, the next post will drop on sunday and wallahi it's going to be unimaginable.
Guy Pls forgive me for my ghosterity to ur comments all alone.

We are gladly waiting