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Re: Melina by derachokolate(m): 9:59pm On Jul 21, 2018 |
******************************************* MELINA Episode. 29 *********** MR MAXWELL'S POV ************ "arghhhh!!!! " ... I woke up to see grace pouring buckets of water on me , I passed out after the first torture , but for how many hours , I did not know . " you have been off since yesterday sir , we are here for day two " .. She said .. I barely survived the first day , I have not drank water yet , since the first day I came to the basement . " please grace , is this not enough yet ??" .. I muttered . " what is enough to equal death if not death ? " .. She said before calling on the boys again . They brought a tray with different sizes of sharp knives . She started cutting my body one by one , flogging me with sharp edge , I was losing a lot of blood , I prayed my last prayers , she was laughing and saw fun with what she was doing . When she stopped , she switched off the video camera , and then inserted the memory card in my phone , and then she sent the video to my wife , I couldn't shift , I only watched her do everything . ************* GABRIEL'S POV ************* Since the kidnap of Lina's dad , I haven't gone home , I just go pick my clothes and come back , I have to help her and her mom , I am the person working with the police . It was actually the second day of the fathers demise , our friends came as they promised , Henry and Susan are friends now which still surprises me , but I decide to allow it slide . We were discussing in the sitting room when we heard shouts from the moms room , we all headed to the direction Of her room . "Mom what is it " .. Lina shouted as she pushed the door open . We met her crying , holding her phone , we all looked and saw the video of Lina's dad bring tortured , Lina went at the pitch of very voice , allowing the ocean of accumulated tears pour after we had watched the video . " something can be done I think , the video was sent with his phone , and the computer guru working with the police can scan the location " ... I suggested immediately collecting the phone . All of them looked at me . "Yes , the kidnapper shot a wrong shot " .. I said "Lina , your key " .. I took the phone and headed out as fast as I could , signalling my friends to help keep them sane till I come back . When I reached the police station , I headed to Mr dele's office , who invited a young guy with a laptop and they traced the location in which the video was sent , and then it was located . "You can go home Gabriel , we will take it up from here " .. They said . "Thank you sir , please be fast " ... I said before I left the police station . When I got home , immediately I pushed the door open , everyone rushed towards me . "Please tell us something positive " Lina said . "They found the location , and they were going after it already when I left the station , so you all should calm down , they will find him " .. I said reassuring them . " thank you Riel " .. She pulled me into a deep hug . "Thank you my son "... I felt her moms hands too , before Henry , Hills and susan came along like some family reunion. We spent the rest of the day together watching television without saying much , for the first time , Lina's mom left her room to stay with us in the sitting room .I could see the human in them coming back . " Christie and charity are not here yet ?".. "Not yet mom " ************** MR MAXWELL'S POV cont.. ************** I was waiting for death to embrace me when I heard sirens , and voices on microphone outside the basement , which caused a chaos amongst my kidnappers . Grace was sweating already . " let's head to the tunnel ,I heard them say and then they were gone " .. I didn't really know where the tunnel was . Then the door of the basement was open and the police rushed to me . "Senator max ?" .. I tried to make some noise . " He is still alive , medicals please " .. The nurses came and carried me with stretchers . ************ GABRIEL'S POV cont . ************ In the evening as my friends were about to leave the house , I got a call from Mr dele, he said they have found Lina's dad and he gave me the directions to the hospital that he was admitted . The excitement didn't keep me mouth shut as I shouted . "They found him !!!" . " where " ..was ranting in the air . " he is being admitted in the general hospital , room 67, emergency ward " ... I said as we all headed to the door . We drove in the mom's car , it was a little bigger . ******************************************* Written by Chidera chokolate . ©oracle 4 Likes |
Re: Melina by Danavast(m): 10:56pm On Jul 21, 2018 |
This story make sence..can't wait 4 nxt episode |
Re: Melina by jbtobsyn(m): 1:49am On Jul 22, 2018 |
This story is interesting but you said Senator Maxwell is the Senate President. Then how come a senate president doesn't have security details. 3 Likes |
Re: Melina by AeroplaneApple: 11:26am On Jul 22, 2018 |
Sure he has now |
Re: Melina by devilmaycry: 11:33am On Jul 22, 2018 |
LightQueen:are u a rich babe? |
Re: Melina by skubido(m): 1:49pm On Jul 22, 2018 |
jbtobsyn: nice point. he must,, tink d writer don't add it.. nd d writer knows what his doing.. confirm kidnappers don't fear security oo. Is only God that can protect someone joor. OP tanks a lot for the update |
Re: Melina by skubido(m): 1:53pm On Jul 22, 2018 |
shey Grace never enter ham now.. cuz to me they will hack d acct she transfer the money to.. OP plz don't waste time @d next update.. God will continue to help u |
Re: Melina by Worthie(m): 2:15pm On Jul 22, 2018 |
Nice story OP...keep it up |
Re: Melina by Nobody: 2:22pm On Jul 22, 2018 |
Op, keep it up. Thanks for the update. God bless. Expecting more... |
Re: Melina by Nobody: 2:35pm On Jul 22, 2018 |
devilmaycry:Poor my dear |
Re: Melina by devilmaycry: 6:43pm On Jul 22, 2018 |
LightQueen:shift from road....i'm looking for a rich babe like Gab |
Re: Melina by Nobody: 6:53pm On Jul 22, 2018 |
Grace Grace... just continue running, but the senator deserve that punishment small. @ devilmaycry you will soon locate her |
Re: Melina by devilmaycry: 7:14pm On Jul 22, 2018 |
LightQueen:not small....he should have been killed self...politicians! |
Re: Melina by zeko172(m): 11:47pm On Jul 22, 2018 |
Wow,am sure this is going to turn out to be one hell of a story, following till d end. Keep it up Op, you've just won yourself a new fan. |
Re: Melina by devilmaycry1(m): 8:36am On Jul 23, 2018 |
hmmmm |
Re: Melina by izaray(f): 10:38am On Jul 23, 2018 |
Well done Gabriel, Mr Maxwell's family will never regret having you as their inlaw and next of king soonest Just keep the update coming as e dey hot |
Re: Melina by derachokolate(m): 6:56am On Jul 24, 2018 |
******************************************* MELINA Episode 30 When we got to the hospital, we were told to wait at the reception room till when the doctor is done . I called my dad to inform him about the new development , he wall all blaming himself already . Few minutes later the doctor walked out of the room. " doctor Clark , are you the wife ?" .. He asked Lina's mom . " yes doctor " .. " you can go and see him now , but dont touch him , he is paining all over his body, and you might alter a wound we have nursed already , please" .. He warned . " thanks doctor " .. We all rushed to the room , we met him bandaged beyond recognition . I nearly cried at the sight but I tried not to , Lina was shedding tears already , I tried consoling her while henry and Susan deals with the mother . He was sleeping and need be that the mom has to stay with him in the hospital . We stayed till night fall , and then Susan has to go , Henry and Hillary were prepared to stay throughout the night . Lina hugged Susan good bye , I could see the connection already , that sisterhood was identical . I like it , I didnt really like the charity and Christie 's friendship with her . When she left , we stayed together , waiting for Lina's dad to open his eyes and at 8pm at the dot he opened his eyes , we all rushed to the bed . "Ohh mr senator " ... Lina said out faintly and then letting out a smile . "My little madam" ... He forced him self to say .. The smile was restored , Lina's face got brightened , she was still shedding tears but she was smiling . " daddy " .. Mom said smiling . "Mommy " .. We all heard him force it again . We all went close smiling not trying to stress him , he replied with a smile and a nod . "School tomorrow boys , you have missed school , erm , you should sleep at home , here is the keys , lina needs company , I will stay here tonight .".. We collected the keys . " make sure you bring the car back on your way to school tomorrow " We left the hospital , the lina we know is back , she was pinching the hell outta me already . We drove to Henry's house first to pick his school clothe and school bag . Then we drove to Hill's house.. We got home , exhausted , we all suggested henry should cook spaghetti since he owns the food . We all switched on the ps3 and then down to blur to race it . I was happy that lina was being this happy . "Dinner is set , y'all should come and eat and go to bed , school tomorrow" ... Henry sounded more like a senior brother . "Okay bro " .. Lina shouted . Then she switched off the console . We all headed to the table . Yummy !!! We ate , dinner talks , and then someone called Hillary and he excused himself to go and answer the call . The same girl that do call him , I stood up and did the spy something . I caught him saying " I love you more " to someone I don't know . "Who was that ?" ... I asked " someone , I will tell you but not now , so act cool " .. He said . But he was being mad over the person , screaming I love you and blowing kisses to the air . We went back to the dinning and I covered up with that his mom called . When we were done eating , we showed Henry and Hillary the visitor's room and then "Good night brothers " We went up to Lina's room . We bathed together , we changed into our night wears , and then jumped on the bed before lina crawled into my arms . "Good night babe " ... I kissed her forehead ********* Light reflected on my face , I opened my eye to see the window ajar . "Lazy goat " .. I turned to see lina already prepared for school. " you !!! , you betrayed me !! , how will you silently leave my arms !!"... I said jokingly I headed to the bathroom , brushed up ,bathed and then got ready for school . "Ready to go ?" " yaya!! " Just then a knock came . "What are you guys waiting for ,we are late " Henry said . "We are coming bro" ... We said in unison . ****************************************** Written by chidera chokolate ©oracle 1 Like |
Re: Melina by derachokolate(m): 6:59am On Jul 24, 2018 |
******************************************* MELINA Episode 31 ********** MELINA'S POV ********** My dad being rescued brought back the joy I lost, seeing the video of him being tortured was hell , it was like I was being tortured too , I dont blame myself or being daddy's pet . "We are coming bro" we echoed in unison when henry was knocking on the door . I watched Gabriel make the first move , he was actually the reason I was still strong after the big struck . I admired him everyday When we got downstairs , Henry and Hillary has already cleaned up the house , gotten breakfast ready and then my dads food in a flask. Henry drove mom's car since we were going to the hospital first before going yo school so we will drop the car . I drove , Riel. "I love you " .. I broke the silence in the car . " you know I love you too " ... He muttered . The look on his face wasn't so nice , I held the steering with one hand and pressed the other on his . "We will get your dad fixed , I promise you " ... I assured him . I have already called my doctor friend who and he was going to help with the surgery , fully happy having dad back but it won't be complete if he doesn't have his dad back to standing . *I am a senator's daughter so don't ask where I got the money from * I watched him nod his head . "Put on music , here is too quite " he managed to say after few minutes magna silencia . " I know you are bored but other than music we can do something crazy " ... I gave out that evil grin . I press the horn , making henry to slow down , I got up to him and then got my glass down . "Race it " ... I shouted . " sure !!! , this is not blur sis !!!" .. He said . " I will still beat you here bro!!!" .. "Let's get to it then " .. I laugh and got my glass up again and then focused on the road and booom!!! I could see the smile on his face lit up , I thought he was going to object the idea but he didn't . I followed a shortcut and got to the hospital's parking ground before them . "I told you !! I will win " " you cheated !!!" .. I could see him make funny faces . We got down and went to see dad and drop the key . On entering the room we met Susan . "Ohhh , I was about to call you but I forgot " .. I said as I let out a sisterly hug . " don't worry babe , I am here for you anytime " .. She replied with a smile . I watched her hug the boys , the smile she gave henry before hugging him , I didn't want to conclude , so I let it slide . "Good morning madam motherf***ker " .. I greeted mom . "Little b**ch, good morning , how was your sleep " .. She said , once again the momma I know . "Fine mom , we brought you food " Just then my dad opens his eyes , he was sleeping . "Good morning Mr senator " .. I said with a smile . "Good morning little madam " ... He reciprocated the smile which melted my heart and made me feel whole . "How are you dad" .. I asked with a tint of curiosity. " I am alive just that my body hurts , but the doctor assured me that within three months I will be out " ... He lamented . "Don't worry dad , I will be here for you " " we will be here for you " .. I felt hands on my shoulder , and my friends were standing with me . My dad let out a big smile . "Thanks to you all " .. He said. "Gabriel my son , don't worry we will still get it fixed once am out here " .. He said . " don't worry sir , just get your health fixed first " ..he said . "Late to school boys " .. My mom went on her voice . We all headed to the door , bidding them good bye . I got to school and then the boys and Susan left me since they all were in the same course and had the same classes . "Text me when its time for lunch " .. Susan said . I went for my classes , boring lecturers , it felt like a while , students who approached me to say sorry . And then on the hall way I bumped into charity and Christie as I was heading for lunch . " Mels " .. They called . "What??" ... I growled " we heard of your dads incident , but we have been busy , and hadn't made out time , we were about coming to your house today and now saw you in school " ... Charity said putting up a pretentious pity smile . "Well , no problem , you know what ?" .. I said with a sarcastic smile . "What ?" They said in unison " fake friends always come like police do at the end of a robbery attack and then there is nothing that can be done " .. I winked at them . "What do you mean ?" .. Christie shouted . "Excuse me " .. I said as I walked out on them . "Imagine small mels ".. Charity was becoming brutal and dragged my hands . " if you dare touch her !! " .. Susan threatened from behind and I gained back my breath . "Wow , is that so ?" ... Christie said with hands akimbo . "Let her go , before you both will have to call me a drama queen" .. She replied folding her hands . Charity left my hands . "Good " .. She said winking at them " sissy let's go" .. "How did you find me ?" .. I asked her . " I came to submit an assignment in this block though , let's call it a fluke " .. She said with a smile . " thank you sis " .. Yes we turned sisters already . We went to pizza hut for lunch , took our sits and got us a big pizza . "So you and Henry are a thing ?" .. The curious me wouldn't let me hold my peace . "I am not telling you,I don't know " she winked and swerved the topic . " so how was lectures today ". " fine , boring what about yours ?" .. I asked . "Cool , interesting a little shaa " .. She said . We finished with lunch and got back to school , it felt good having some alone time , girls time . After school , we all drove to the hospital ,it was going to be more like a routine though . From the hospital , I drove all of em home and ended up going back home with just Gabriel . ******************************************* Written by Chidera chokolate ©oracle 2 Likes |
Re: Melina by skubido(m): 8:15am On Jul 24, 2018 |
nice wan OP.. I dey ur back.. |
Re: Melina by Ann2012(f): 8:35am On Jul 24, 2018 |
Thanks Dear These updates dey sweet my die 1 Like |
Re: Melina by udoka55555: 4:12pm On Jul 24, 2018 |
its obvious charity and Christie are the kidnappers |
Re: Melina by Danavast(m): 7:32pm On Jul 25, 2018 |
Nice update..keep it up |
Re: Melina by Nobody: 7:25am On Jul 26, 2018 |
Thanks for the update. God bless. |
Re: Melina by AvatarMode(m): 9:54am On Jul 26, 2018 |
You are doing a good job. Keep it coming... |
Re: Melina by Emmanuelempire(m): 10:41pm On Jul 26, 2018 |
Have bin following dis story ryt 4rm d beginning and I have to admit. It a very nice and interesting story. Keep it up bro. |
Re: Melina by donobecs(m): 3:19am On Jul 27, 2018 |
this is a masterpiece.. keep up the good work bro |
Re: Melina by Danpersie31(m): 7:44am On Jul 27, 2018 |
we on FP ... |
Re: Melina by skubido(m): 8:17am On Jul 27, 2018 |
OP congrat @FP tinz.. God will bless your Hand work ooo. comma update ooooo |
Re: Melina by danjudchi: 8:46am On Jul 27, 2018 |
Pls update . don't keep us salivating |
Re: Melina by Nobody: 9:25am On Jul 27, 2018 |
Congrat on Making the Front Page. Keep it up!!!! Thumbs up |
Re: Melina by Seunfunmi18(m): 1:27pm On Jul 27, 2018 |
nice story OP this story seems familiar to one mirabel story like that (The president Daughter) nice story tho |
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