Can you heal my broken Heart?

He promised me heaven on earth
He made me feel ten feet tall
Even though his promises were off the wall
I still beloved him in good faith.

His words made me strong
I thought nothing would go bad
But I got it all wrong
And now I feel so sad.

You love me with your sweet kisses
You hold me with your sweet promises
But tomorrow you may crush my daisies
And break my china vase in pieces.

My soul is torn apart
For my heart is broken
And I feel so forsaken
Can you heal my broken heart?

~By Orikinla Osinachi
Tuesday October 5, 2010.

Note: This is a love song of a heart broken woman to her new lover. It would be best performed by a soprano.

Do we really need this?

op are u advertising pono film?

The literature section is always there you know.

rokiatu:

The literature section is always there you know.

Because it is written in verse does not mean it cannot be on the Romance Board.
I don't have to write it in prose and empathize with the woman to make it applicable here.

The subject is romance. The message is all about romance.

There is absolute nothing different from this and https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-524491.32.html.

You can write romance is any form of modern English language, the official language of this forum.

I wrote somethn lyk dat few wks bac,i didnt knw it, nyway, av finishd it and i titled it "Divided heart" its a song

Omolola1:

I wrote somethn lyk dat few wks bac,i didnt knw it, nyway, av finishd it and i titled it "Divided heart" its a song

Post it to share it.

Not yet, am still developing it. i write songs. this particular one, i think i would want to promote

wat a wack song . . . to her new lover you say ? bet he is on his fastest heels

Yeah sure, Take a 2 weeks break to Spain.Portugal or Florida. It works.

dude only Gay guys write poems plus true is that a porn movie,