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Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 11:35am On Apr 24, 2015
discoprophet:
Nice one Thronekid, i dey follow u like follow-come battery. Really good job so far. Oya dey lead, i dey follow joor







ThrONekId all the way
Thank you, sir.

Thanks for taking your precious time to commend the story.

Enjoy!
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 1:29pm On Apr 24, 2015
Sir Royver, here is the story's thread!
Re: Strings And Webs by lanicky(f): 1:48pm On Apr 24, 2015
Hmmm! What can I say? This story left me speechless..woa!

I love Annabelle....her naughty character nd charm.

Jola....hmmm! I like her too.....*shrugs* she needs to let go of the past nd move on (something like dat happened to me but I moved on) I'm a happy person now.

Kazeem! Pheeew! I hope nothing bad happens to him.

Daniel nd Paul....(hope I got their name right) I like Daniel, he knows what he want...but hope he has nothing up his sleeve? I hope.

Paul...hmmm! Thank God u were able to overcome lust.

The twins mum....u hardly check on ur children....u showered too much love on a particular child...dat was too bad.


Finally......I love this story, it's educating, romantic nd captivating.

Kudos Thronekid.
Re: Strings And Webs by Royver(m): 3:06pm On Apr 24, 2015
ThR0NeKiD:
Sir Royver, here is the story's thread!
20pages!

Let me start from the beginning.
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 5:53pm On Apr 24, 2015
7iv (Continuation)



Anabelle collected the outstretched key from the beautiful and petite hotel attendant and smiled at her. The key was tagged 027. She smiled at the attendant, again, and proceeded to her room.

She dragged her legs, exaggeratedly, over the stairs, inducing trance on all nearby as her knee halted gown rode up her thighs, alluringly, and scanned around for any room labelled 027. Finding it, she opened it and walked in. It was tastefully okay. Everything was in an almost-perfect state. She smiled at herself uncounsciously, again, her face obviously unaware of whatever stress she made a show of experiencing.

She dropped her mini bag and took a quick shower. She seemed really fatigued. Once dressed, she ordered for food over the server. She would have, at any other time, prefered to go get the food from the canteen herself but then was different. She needed to replenish her stomach quickly.

While she awaited her orders, she got lost in her thoughts. It was just some minutes past Two and she was in ogun, already. Etiquettes demanded she used her newly bestowed car and ofcourse, she did. She had itched all weekend for the ride, anyways. The car was much more in vogue than her personal. The board had even offered a private driver, too, but she had refused politely. How would someone else man her new car before her!

The journey hadn't been rough, too, atleast not much. Road signs and boards helped a lot. Well, she arrived her destination, anyways, so, no qualms. Daniel had been supportive all way. He called for quite some couple of times. He made everything easy, too. She wished he would never get out of her life. She prayed her wish would come to pass.

"Ding dong!" the doorbell hung on her door peeled and she slipped out of her thoughts.

"Who's there?" she called out.

"Room service!"

"Come in," she smiled uncounsciously, again.

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Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 5:56pm On Apr 24, 2015
Royver:

20pages!

Let me start from the beginning.
Okay, sir.
God bless!
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 5:59pm On Apr 24, 2015
lanicky:
Hmmm! What can I say? This story left me speechless..woa!

I love Annabelle....her naughty character nd charm.

Jola....hmmm! I like her too.....*shrugs* she needs to let go of the past nd move on (something like dat happened to me but I moved on) I'm a happy person now.

Kazeem! Pheeew! I hope nothing bad happens to him.

Daniel nd Paul....(hope I got their name right) I like Daniel, he knows what he want...but hope he has nothing up his sleeve? I hope.

Paul...hmmm! Thank God u were able to overcome lust.

The twins mum....u hardly check on ur children....u showered too much love on a particular child...dat was too bad.


Finally......I love this story, it's educating, romantic nd captivating.

Kudos Thronekid.
Thanks very much, ma. Taking your time to commend a writer seems very arduos for some people but you made an exception. You've once did.

Thanks much, ma.

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Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 8:22pm On Apr 24, 2015
thronekid:
Adeh39, where have you been?
Kenwins, you too.
Gracile, join me here.

I'm sorry jare!!! I've been very busy. Let me go nd start frm where i stopped, I've really missed d story.
Re: Strings And Webs by lanicky(f): 8:55pm On Apr 24, 2015
thronekid:

Thanks very much, ma. Taking your time to commend a writer seems very arduos for some people but you made an exception. You've once did.

Thanks much, ma.

Uwc. smiley
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 10:15pm On Apr 24, 2015
adeh39:


I'm sorry jare!!! I've been very busy. Let me go nd start frm where i stopped, I've really missed d story.
Okay, ma. God bless!
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 8:20am On Apr 25, 2015
7v



Paul smiled sheepishly at the young and handsome-like store attendant. His face depicted how joyous he was. It was literarily glowing. His black tux seemed to share his mood, too, as it basked in his euphoria.

"Let me see that," he pointed at an engagement ring enclosed in a sales show glass. The ring seemed very beautiful. It was adorned with a glowing stone at the top.

The attendant bent over and brought out the ring. Here, he stretched it towards him.

He collected it and surveyed it, admiringly, and sub-counsciously, a smile dangled accross his lips. He imagined, without much success, how Jolade would react on seeing it. He could have figured it out on any other day, but then wasn't any other day, he couldn't, not after their last time together. He, uncounsciously, replayed the last time out with her. The fun they had was just the type he had wished for. Suck luck was not an everyday's thing.

Then, he felt very joyous with her. He couldn't wait to make her his, already. Making her his, was a top prority, then. He wanted to get married to her as fast as he could. Right then, an engagement was the imminent thing on his mind.

Yeah, getting engaged!

"How much is it?" he asked, and dangled it towards the young attendant.
"Just a meagre sum of one hundred and fifty thousand naire, sir," the attendant spilled.
"Meagre, you say!" he smiled. "Anyways, do you guys accept credit cards?"

"Yes, sir,"

"Here!" he retrieved his card and gestured it towards the attendant.

"Done," the attendant announced and smiled, before adding, "She must be a very lucky woman!"

His heart jumped in glee at the compliment. The attendant sure was lively and knew his duty. He studied him briefly. His dressing looked okay, too, "Oh! She sure is," he exclaimed.

"Thanks," he shooked the attendant's hand, jokingly, and smiled at him. "Here, have this," he gave him a token of Ten thousand naire.
"Thanks, sir," the attendant smiled.

Smiling and feeling fly, he took calculated steps out of the pendants store.


Anabelle walked into the classy looking restaurant, fatiguedly. She made a show of being weak to earth as she took a seat on one of the black leathered chair that sat round one of the numerous green glass tables the restaurant housed. The floor was marbled spick and spanningly. Air conditionals provided the needed ventilation. It sure was nice and all. She had had a couple of meals, there, for some past two days. The food was nice, too.

"What can I get you, ma?" a waiter intercepted her thoughts.
"Oh," she smiled at the waiter. He looked just like the typical european Waiter. There bills were, ofcourse, high. "Get me fried rice," she placed.

"Okay, ma,".

She smiled at the waiter's humile character, all just to earn a living. Well, who was she to criticize! Was she here, far from the comforts of Daniel's hands, just for fun? She had missed him terrificly.

"Here it is, ma," the waiter intercepted her thoughts again and placed her supposed order on the table.

"Thanks," she smiled, wearily, almost inducing a trance on the waiter.

"You look beautiful, ma" she heard him complimented and her cheeks turned red. She had heard quite a bulk quantity of that in the past three days. "Thanks, sir,".

"Welcome," the waiter got the jibe.

She turned on her helplessly lying food, the instant he left. She ate cautiously, though she wished she could do better than that.
The day had been quite hectic. She had met her main client earlier in the day. It was a hit. He accepted the company's proposal. She had been very joyous, since, but the gnawing hunger wouldn't grant her that much a chance to celebrate, at least, not yet.

She wished Daniel would be there, that night. They'd have so much fun.

"Bella!" she heard a hoarse thick voice bellowed from behind. The voice sounded familiar. The owner was the last person she would ever want to meet.

"Yeah," she turned, trying to conceal her nervousness. Her mouth opened wide, she had guessed right, what made it more surprising was the intimidating presence of two soldiers flanking him.
"Whats up, Tim?" she smiled, nervously. She was really not okay. She could feel mountain lumps erupting on her skin.

The man's next statement hit her like a sledgehammer, though, her feigned hospitality couldn't help, "Where is my daughter?"

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Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 9:56am On Apr 25, 2015
Sir Larrysun, are you still here?
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 5:21pm On Apr 25, 2015
Bella had a daughter,wow this is great...
Paul you must get married to Jola ni oo..

Thronekid i don't need the suspence
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 6:00pm On Apr 25, 2015
Are u kidding me? Anabelle? Daughter? Lyk seriously? I've neva 4 once imagine dat despite her naughtiness.... Dis is serious o.....

Paul u must marry Jolade by fire by force ni o

Hakeem......hope he's nt an Hiv positive?, If he is ehn.....mmmmn.......I reserve my comment.

Thronekid......Thanks 4 d updates.... expecting more, nd i'm so much loving d twists nd turns...Wit d way dis story is going ehn, U are making me hav a Crush on u ooo..........
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 9:24pm On Apr 25, 2015
adeh39:
Are u kidding me? Anabelle? Daughter? Lyk seriously? I've neva 4 once imagine dat despite her naughtiness.... Dis is serious o.....

Paul u must marry Jolade by fire by force ni o

Hakeem......hope he's nt an Hiv positive?, If he is ehn.....mmmmn.......I reserve my comment.

Thronekid......Thanks 4 d updates.... expecting more, nd i'm so much loving d twists nd turns...Wit d way dis story is going ehn, U are making me hav a Crush on u ooo..........
crush?Thronekid better reject the crush
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 9:46pm On Apr 25, 2015
prettydiva89:
Bella had a daughter,wow this is great...
Paul you must get married to Jola ni oo..

Thronekid i don't need the suspence
Anabelle might have had a daughter, ma. Who knows how her past was?

Thanks for dropping in!
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 9:55pm On Apr 25, 2015
adeh39:
Are u kidding me? Anabelle? Daughter? Lyk seriously? I've neva 4 once imagine dat despite her naughtiness.... Dis is serious o.....

Paul u must marry Jolade by fire by force ni o

Hakeem......hope he's nt an Hiv positive?, If he is ehn.....mmmmn.......I reserve my comment.

Thronekid......Thanks 4 d updates.... expecting more, nd i'm so much loving d twists nd turns...Wit d way dis story is going ehn, U are making me hav a Crush on u ooo..........
Anabelle might have had a daughter, ma. She might not. Who knows! Life is a very weird thing.

It seemes fate feels like smiling on Jolade, now, who can tell? The mysterious ways life often plays out is, indeed, a mystery.

Hakeem! Who knows what could be going on with him? I pray he gets okay, soon. I loathe tragedies. He might be, though, fate's never been fair to anyone.

Regarding the crush thingy, I have a crush on you, too. Lets see how fate plays everything out!
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 9:56pm On Apr 25, 2015
prettydiva89:

crush?Thronekid better reject the crush
I should? What could be behind that thought of yours, ma?
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 10:03pm On Apr 25, 2015
thronekid:

I should? What could be behind that thought of yours, ma?
cos she's for dee ni oo
please update oo
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 10:34pm On Apr 25, 2015
prettydiva89:

cos she's for dee ni oo
please update oo
She crushed, I crushed, the chemistry could be right.

Adeh39, what did she mean by that?
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 10:37pm On Apr 25, 2015
prettydiva89:
please update oo
That might be tomorrow, ma.
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 2:25pm On Apr 26, 2015
thronekid:

She crushed, I crushed, the chemistry could be right.

Adeh39, what did she mean by that?

Thronekid dnt mind her jare....... U dnt hv to know wat she means, just 4get dat side, Ehen.....I'm so happy about Crushing part, dnt worry, We shall see if d chemistry will work.
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 2:29pm On Apr 26, 2015
prettydiva89:

crush?Thronekid better reject the crush

Wat did i do 4 u nau?
Y do u wnt 2 spoil things 4 me nau
Re: Strings And Webs by jezuzboi(m): 5:14pm On Apr 26, 2015
I had said earlier that there's more to Jolade than words had depicted. It's seemingly gradually unfolding.

Wonderful Annabela is responsible for way about of someone's daughter, and no one else seems to know except she and the girl's father. And probably her one sided mother.

Interesting................,
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 5:22pm On Apr 26, 2015
jezuzboi:
I had said earlier that there's more to Jolade than words had depicted. It's seemingly gradually unfolding.

Wonderful Annabela is responsible for way about of someone's daughter, and no one else seems to know except she and the girl's father. And probably her one sided mother.

Interesting................,
You probably mean, you don't believe that Anabelle might have had a daughter? I like guys with your trait, guys that would always hold on to and support what they believe in.
You might be right, sir. Who knows what's what?

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Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 5:23pm On Apr 26, 2015
adeh39:


Thronekid dnt mind her jare....... U dnt hv to know wat she means, just 4get dat side, Ehen.....I'm so happy about Crushing part, dnt worry, We shall see if d chemistry will work.
Okay, dear. We'll figure it out, overtime.
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 5:26pm On Apr 26, 2015
Hi guys, I would have updated if my Battery's acting okay. Weird things happening.
Kindly, understand!
Re: Strings And Webs by jezuzboi(m): 5:31pm On Apr 26, 2015
thronekid:

You probably mean, you don't believe that Anabelle might have had a daughter? I like guys with your trait, guys that would always hold on to and support what they believe in.
You might be right, sir. Who knows what's what?
By saying someone's daughter, it could mean she may or may not be the mother. I phrased it "someone's daughter" in case she happens not to be the girl's mother.
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 5:54pm On Apr 26, 2015
jezuzboi:

By saying someone's daughter, it could mean she may or may not be the mother. I phrased it "someone's daughter" in case she happens not to be the girl's mother.
Okay, sir.
Re: Strings And Webs by Nobody: 7:45pm On Apr 26, 2015
adeh39:


Wat did i do 4 u nau?
Y do u wnt 2 spoil things 4 me nau
am not spoiling things nah,or should i tell dee
Re: Strings And Webs by gracile(f): 12:04am On Apr 27, 2015
nice one thronekid! love the twist.. and enjoying every episode smiley
Re: Strings And Webs by harjibolar10(m): 10:42am On Apr 27, 2015
What goes around, they said it always comes around.

Bella, be it you are the mother or not, your past is surely catching up with you, and you have to deal with that honourably and mature 'ly, or else (flanked) soldiers sabi make person say watin them no do ooo... I dey wait shaa

Jola, it seems everything is going perfectly okay for you now, except the fact that, your are job less, and thats a blow for you shaa.. . Change of mind from paul is what I don't and won't entertain or welcome ever ooo.

Keep em coming boss, I'm back now

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