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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 11:20am On Dec 19, 2016 |
Qasaforlife:Dear, wats d meanin of Qasa? And its pronounced Kasa rite?? |
Re: Red Ashes by Creeza(m): 11:42am On Dec 19, 2016 |
Chumzypinky:so I guess u were posting on fb. Well nairaland is diff, u wont run mad, just keep calm. |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 12:51pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Creeza:frm d oda stories i've read n d comments, i c dat Nairaland readers are very tough n scary pple 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Amor69(m): 1:25pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Babe are you on whatsapp? |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:29pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Blizzydodo Littlemistress i'm seein u guys oo. If u dnt want 2 comment, y b a registered memba? Pls do comment u hear? Biko |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:30pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Amor69:No |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:30pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Gentleyoung |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:31pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Amor69:No |
Re: Red Ashes by GentleYoung(m): 2:51pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Chumzypinky: Welldone sis |
Re: Red Ashes by GentleYoung(m): 2:53pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Chumzypinky: You're doing an amazing job |
Re: Red Ashes by Qasaforlife(f): 3:09pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Chumzypinky:it's just a username derived from a brand of electronic products i like. It's Q |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:41pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Qasaforlife:oh! I luv d name....Qasa. Then i mistook ur moniker 2 b Qasaqueen, lolllzzz |
Re: Red Ashes by gozieintel(m): 6:02pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Ghost mode deactivated. This story is a wow!!! One of the best I've ever read. Keep it up Chumzypinky. |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 6:38pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Dedicated to Senator Ayoxelee and Tijehi (who's no longer seen) MABEL. Sometimes, i just felt like seeing Chichi again. To just right all my wrongs. She was never going to understand what went down with Chuks several years ago. She was never going to understand what her husband did to me. Yes, i was guilty as well. But if Chuks hadnt come to me, seduced me and told me lies about Jude, i would never have fallen for him. How was i even going to state that he drugged my drink? Chuks was a monster and i hated him. He didnt deserve Chioma. Chioma was too nice for him. I cried in my heart whenever i thought about Chioma's facial expression the day she saw us making out at my apartment. She didnt even know that our affair had lasted for two years. Two solid years and Nathan had already been born then. Even now, as i thought about it, i felt like killing myself. Chichi had been nothing but a good friend to me. I also felt bad betraying the only one who truly loved me and whom i also loved in return. How i wished we could just get back together and forget about all that happened in the past. It was so fustrating. I saw him everytime and i wept in my heart. I still loved this man. Nathan deserved to get back with his father. How i wished i could get him to know Jude. How i wished he could get closer to Jude. He needed a father figure in his life. Maybe, if his father had been around, he wouldnt have turned into the spoilt child he was today. I pondered on it for a while, then i pressed my intercom 'come to my office right now' I hung up. Not up to a minute later, my secretary was in my office. 'madam? You sent for me?' 'yes i did Jagugu. I need you to set up a meeting with Mrs Chioma Igho, the CEO of SpiritSensation Hotel & Suites. Let her know Mabel Imore of Imore Corporations would want to see her' Even as i said so, my heart thumped. How would i face Chioma? Would she want to see me? What do i tell her. I wiped my face with shaky palms. 'okay ma. When?' my secretary asked. 'today. By 2pm' my heart skipped. Wasnt it too early? I shook my head. No, the earlier the better. **** CHIOMA. 'Kainene, Chuka is still your father no matter what. All this your shakara shakara it will not work oo. He's still your father. He's your blodd. Your one and only father. You dont have two fathers oo Kainene. I did not sleep with two men in order to concieve you ooo' My daughter rolled her eyes twirling her locks around her index finger 'mum, this is not my problem. You know what? You and your so called husband are selfish, you guys are heartless and greedy mum and i'm especially disappointed in you. You mum, we've been together for 24yrs, your husband was never there for me. But all of a sudden, your husband comes from nowhere and you choose him over me. Mark my words mum, listen and listen very carefully to me, i will leave your house the moment that man steps in as your husband. You're going to lose me mum, that you can be sure of' 'Kainene!' She shrugged her shoulders carelessly 'i'll see you later mum' she stood up and bumped into a cleaner at the door. 'sorry ma'am' then she looked at me as Kainene exited the office 'ma'am, one Mabel Imore from Imore Corporation requested a meeting with you at 2pm. The manager said i should tell you...' she bowed slightly. 'Jesus Christ!' i sighed. 'ma'am are you alright?' TBC 6 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 6:39pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Dedicated to Senator Ayoxelee and Tijehi (who's no longer seen) MABEL. Sometimes, i just felt like seeing Chichi again. To just right all my wrongs. She was never going to understand what went down with Chuks several years ago. She was never going to understand what her husband did to me. Yes, i was guilty as well. But if Chuks hadnt come to me, seduced me and told me lies about Jude, i would never have fallen for him. How was i even going to state that he drugged my drink? Chuks was a monster and i hated him. He didnt deserve Chioma. Chioma was too nice for him. I cried in my heart whenever i thought about Chioma's facial expression the day she saw us making out at my apartment. She didnt even know that our affair had lasted for two years. Two solid years and Nathan had already been born then. Even now, as i thought about it, i felt like killing myself. Chichi had been nothing but a good friend to me. I also felt bad betraying the only one who truly loved me and whom i also loved in return. How i wished we could just get back together and forget about all that happened in the past. It was so fustrating. I saw him everytime and i wept in my heart. I still loved this man. Nathan deserved to get back with his father. How i wished i could get him to know Jude. How i wished he could get closer to Jude. He needed a father figure in his life. Maybe, if his father had been around, he wouldnt have turned into the spoilt child he was today. I pondered on it for a while, then i pressed my intercom 'come to my office right now' I hung up. Not up to a minute later, my secretary was in my office. 'madam? You sent for me?' 'yes i did Jagugu. I need you to set up a meeting with Mrs Chioma Igho, the CEO of SpiritSensation Hotel & Suites. Let her know Mabel Imore of Imore Corporations would want to see her' Even as i said so, my heart thumped. How would i face Chioma? Would she want to see me? What do i tell her. I wiped my face with shaky palms. 'okay ma. When?' my secretary asked. 'today. By 2pm' my heart skipped. Wasnt it too early? I shook my head. No, the earlier the better. **** CHIOMA. 'Kainene, Chuka is still your father no matter what. All this your shakara shakara it will not work oo. He's still your father. He's your blodd. Your one and only father. You dont have two fathers oo Kainene. I did not sleep with two men in order to concieve you ooo' My daughter rolled her eyes twirling her locks around her index finger 'mum, this is not my problem. You know what? You and your so called husband are selfish, you guys are heartless and greedy mum and i'm especially disappointed in you. You mum, we've been together for 24yrs, your husband was never there for me. But all of a sudden, your husband comes from nowhere and you choose him over me. Mark my words mum, listen and listen very carefully to me, i will leave your house the moment that man steps in as your husband. You're going to lose me mum, that you can be sure of' 'Kainene!' She shrugged her shoulders carelessly 'i'll see you later mum' she stood up and bumped into a cleaner at the door. 'sorry ma'am' then she looked at me as Kainene exited the office 'ma'am, one Mabel Imore from Imore Corporation requested a meeting with you at 2pm. The manager said i should tell you...' she bowed slightly. 'Jesus Christ!' i sighed. 'madam are you alright?' TBC 3 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:51pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Angelliza Baddchristy y are you guys doin ds 2 me nw? Comment plss, its so nt fair wen u guys read witout commentin, its heartbreakin |
Re: Red Ashes by ayoxelee(m): 8:52pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Chumzypinky: This is Mr Ayoxelee repping sen Ayoxelee, tnkz for d dedication. The story is getting to d ghe ghen part, there's more between Mabel n Chucks than wat Chioma knw, hpe their issues wnt create another problem for Nathan in pursuit of Nene? kip up d good work , u are just driving us from suspense to suspense .THUMBS UP |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:05pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Sharryboo honey |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:06pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
ayoxelee:Tankz dear. Honestly, u're my manest man in ds thread. I love you more dan ani1 else *runs to hide so Ibullem doesnt c me* |
Re: Red Ashes by kajsa08: 9:10pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
yaga |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 9:15pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Chumzypinky:I was saving my comment till tomorrow because I was planning to start reading your story tomorrow morning |
Re: Red Ashes by haleemwale(m): 9:49pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Nice |
Re: Red Ashes by BlizzydoDo(f): 9:51pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
So very sorry its coming late, yuu are doing an awesome job here hon....more ink to your pen |
Re: Red Ashes by ibullem(m): 9:56pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Chumzypinky:Yea, for dedicating a WHOLE chapter to me |
Re: Red Ashes by Qasaforlife(f): 10:35pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Ghen ghen!!!! Chioma will surely have a hrt attack ooo. Chuks told her he was always seduced oo bt reverse is d case. Keep it up dear |
Re: Red Ashes by Qasaforlife(f): 10:41pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Ghen Ghen!!! Chioma will surely have a heart attack cos chucks said he was always seduced but it was d othere way round. Keep it up dear. |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 11:19pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Baddchristy:Ok |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 11:21pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Soulminister Girlyy i'm sawin u guys oo. If u doesnt commented eh... |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 11:22pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
ibullem:lol |
Re: Red Ashes by soulminister(m): 11:29pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Chumzypinky: just keep on with the story. we shall see about that comment |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 11:31pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
BlizzydoDo:Nt 4gven |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 11:33pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
soulminister:Ok so u dnt nid 2 comment abi? Oya nw, by d tym God go gv una holyghost fire knock eh...all of una go comot 4 ghostmode |
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