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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 8:06pm On Jan 18, 2017
I just know dat nathan nd kaka are going to make cry... Dis kind of love I can't explain.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:20pm On Jan 18, 2017
CHIOMA.

Chuks' visit shakened me a bit. Even though i tried to stop myself from thinking about his "empty" threat, i still couldnt. I couldnt stop thinking about it.

He knew the secret concerning that hotel and he could ruin me with it. God! What did i do to deserve all this?

I checked the time. It was 8pm now but Kainene was not back. Maybe she was busy, because the next day would be Kaka's wedding.

My phone rang and it was Mabel calling. The two of us had gotten close by now, though she still hadnt regained her memories.

'hello Chioma...' her voice was lively.

I cleared my throat trying to sound lively 'Mab, how are you?'

'i'm fine oo. Nathan's taking me to a wedding ceremony tomorrow. Though i dont know the girl thats getting married but she's Claire's friend. Will you be there as well?'

'certainly. Kaka, she's Claire's friend' i wondered why she preferred calling Kainene Claire instead of Kainene. I didnt exactly like the name Claire. It was Chuks' handiwork.

'where are you? I'm bored. Are you at your hotel? Should i come over?'

'i'm at home. You want to come over by this time? Where's Nathan?'

'i dont know where he went to oo. Can i come over?'

'yes certainly. Bring something when you're coming over sha. And be prepared to spend the night'

She chuckled 'no problem. You'll see me in twenty'

'no problem' i hung up.

I dropped the phone and rubbed my forehead painfully. God alone was going to help me in this. God alone knew i had no hand in what was done concerning that hotel. I wasnt the founder of that hotel. My mum was and i inherited it when she passed away. I didnt trust Chuks anymore. What if he spills?

My phone beeped. I thought it was Mabel but when i opened the message, a frown creased my brows. It read;
Have you thought about what i said? I wasnt joking when i said i'd spill. I'm really going to spill if you dont reconsider, your darling husband

My heart skipped. Now i know Chuks was out to ruin me. But what was my offence?

***

KAKA
*my wedding day*

21st March 2016 was the happiest day of my life. It was my wedding day. Today i was getting married to the man of my dreams.

I couldnt sleep the previous night. I kept tossing on my bed and at a time, i regretted not asking Kainene to sleep over. At about 3am, i went to my parents' room. My mum had been surprised 'ahn-ahn! Dem pursue you for your room?'

I had a wierd request. One she might not consent to, knowing my mother very well 'mum? Dad? Can i sleep in between you guys for the last time? Please?'

My dad had smiled proudly. Oh! How much i truly love that man. My mum had looked at me as if i had gone mad. My dad shifted and patted the middly for me 'come my angel'

'so if i want to do something with your father, how is it going to be possible with you here eh?' my mum grumbled.

I laid in between them and kissed her forehead 'mum, manage na. After today, you wont have me around anymore'

'thats why i'm tolerating your presence here dimwit!' she slapped my forehead. But that night, she had held me tightly to herself and prayed for me all night. At a time, i thought i heard her sob, then finally she whispered 'i will miss you Sunshine' my heart gladdened at that name.

So finally it was my wedding day. And by time, the renown make-up artist had finished her wonders on my face, i couldnt recognise myself. Was i this beautiful? I looked up at Kainene and smiled. She smiled back. She was on a beautiful cream sleeveless long flowing gown and blue heels.

The drive to the church was a quiet one. I dont know why i kept staring at my phone. More like i was expecting his phone call. Seriously he couldnt even call? I've watched movies and read novels where the grooms call their brides promising to take care of them and thanking them for accepting their proposals bla bla bla.

We got to the church by 9pm, with my parents and siblings.

To cut the long story short, the groom was not in the church yet. We were led to a part of the church where we were told to wait for the groom's arrival. At first, i thought they were being held by traffic. But when my mum came back saying she had tried his lines severally but he wasnt picking, i became apprehensive.

I started calling with my own number, he wasnt picking. I called him over fifty times, i wasnt counting but he wasnt picking. The time was almost 12pm now. Guests had come and gone. My family were helter-skelter. By this time, i had cried my eyes out.

Casmir couldnt do this to me. He wouldnt stand me up at the alter. I waited. I decided to wait. 2pm and my mum got up angrily, that she was leaving.

That was when a text came into my phone Marrying you would have been the happiest moment of my life. But obviously i can spend the rest of my life with an adulteress like you. I'm leaving the country today. I'm starting a new life. I wish you all the best Kaka, you'll find a better man It was from Xaviercasmir.

I tried his number again and this time, unreachable.

I fainted.

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by fam24(f): 8:38pm On Jan 18, 2017
I knew Casmir is too much of a coward to just forgive and accept like that. Kaka, you are worth more than that loser. I know it will be painful, but every disappointment is a blessing in disguise. It is better than been in an unloved marriage. Some day, you will find a man truly worthy of you
Re: Red Ashes by majoie: 8:39pm On Jan 18, 2017
I knew that guy was up to something.... chaiiiiiii
Re: Red Ashes by ADUKKY(f): 8:41pm On Jan 18, 2017
How dare you Casmir, how could you do this to my free spirited Kaka. You could broken the engagement rather than embarrass her like this. Chioma you are in for a long thing, be prepared. Kaine where are you o, Kaka needs your shoulder now. Chumzy, thanks for the regular update. First time commenter any medal for that?
Re: Red Ashes by adebriana(f): 8:42pm On Jan 18, 2017
This casmir is a bastard. Calling her an adulteress, when he did same. What was the point in making her believe d wedding will push through, y raise her hopes and dash them afterwards? He's a jerk, just had to embarrass her... I feel so bad for Kaka.
Re: Red Ashes by mismore(f): 8:48pm On Jan 18, 2017
Guys will always be jerks! When they cheat its normal, but when ladies do hell will be loose.
Though, nothing pays like loyalty.
Weldone ma'am

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Re: Red Ashes by heemah(f): 9:05pm On Jan 18, 2017
Like seriously? Did Casmir just did that??
*speechless* Like I'm just boiling with anger! To fink we were alrdy praising him?
Re: Red Ashes by AnnieC(f): 9:19pm On Jan 18, 2017
Haba, this update just made me comment FTVFT! I believe Casmir was kidnapped by MozB!
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 9:25pm On Jan 18, 2017
EWWWOO!*points a gun at her*chumzy,if any single thing happens to kaka,u don die 4 my hand
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 9:34pm On Jan 18, 2017
Chumzypinky:
Ayoomolabake, i've been noticing you. You're always viewing bt u hardly comment, why? Wat dd i dd 2 u na?


Chai! She caught me ooo. You didn't do anything ooo... am very sorry.
Great job ma'am! ..As for Casmir , tell him it is not fair ooooo but we believe there is a better person for our darling Kaka.
Re: Red Ashes by iwakacome: 9:39pm On Jan 18, 2017
hopeless slow poke bastard.
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 9:50pm On Jan 18, 2017
Xaviercamsir abi wetin be your name?,I swear,you no do well at all Kaka,Kainene warned you but you refused...Pick yourself up,life continues
Re: Red Ashes by ayoxelee(m): 9:51pm On Jan 18, 2017
I just knew it, Casmir isn't that nyc, he is upto no gud........ chai I pity Kaka. D guy is a mini version of Chucks
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:54pm On Jan 18, 2017
ADUKKY:
How dare you Casmir, how could you do this to my free spirited Kaka. You could broken the engagement rather than embarrass her like this. Chioma you are in for a long thing, be prepared. Kaine where are you o, Kaka needs your shoulder now. Chumzy, thanks for the regular update. First time commenter any medal for that?
ofcus, a dedicated wuld do. Or do u wnt banga rice?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:55pm On Jan 18, 2017
Missperfect28:
EWWWOO!*points a gun at her*chumzy,if any single thing happens to kaka,u don die 4 my hand
c person ooo! U wan kill pesin mama/wife bah?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:56pm On Jan 18, 2017
AnnieC:
Haba, this update just made me comment FTVFT!
I believe Casmir was kidnapped by MozB!
lol, ds got me laughing hard

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Re: Red Ashes by djgreenland(m): 10:01pm On Jan 18, 2017
This act from Xavier has given the ladies following this story a case study.... See how they are generalizing the whole issue....





Cc Adebriana
Cc Missmore
Cc Missperfect
Cc Heemah
Re: Red Ashes by Tife101(m): 10:04pm On Jan 18, 2017
Speechless............



Casmir is a fvcking bastard. Never knew he couldn't even forgive and forget. What if she didn't tell him anything and he got to know about it when they've been married. That guy fvck up big time!!

Kaka will find a better man that will love and cherish her. Including her imperfections.

Thanks for the update ma'am.
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:28pm On Jan 18, 2017
What if Xavier saw Kaka and Moz is the car and concluded they were still at it. Out of anger, decided to payback for "being made a fool yet again", so booom....his gone. What if?

Chuks you deserve hell fire....if it really exits

Jolade & co....no comment

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Re: Red Ashes by mofy1(f): 10:37pm On Jan 18, 2017
Olololo ooooooo shocked
Re: Red Ashes by haleemwale(m): 10:46pm On Jan 18, 2017
C as u just bust our bubble, wasn't expecting this..e shock me small..great Job ma
Re: Red Ashes by hatchetman(m): 10:58pm On Jan 18, 2017
betrayal is somtin ion think i can 4give..nyc story still
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 11:00pm On Jan 18, 2017
chisos o....i swear dis xaviercasmir na goat, no bastard

hw d f**k can he call kaka an adultress when he himself is a goddamn adulterer too....na plane crash dat mumu must get...nothing dy stop am not even mummy chumzypinky....

y didnt he jxt tell her straight up say babe u f-up o and i no wan marry again....u c y i say i neva still kaka 4 confessing to d animal....

ps: y dem ladies 4 here dy generalise d matter na...na only xavier do am not all men o
Re: Red Ashes by fam24(f): 11:02pm On Jan 18, 2017
jagugu88li:
What if Xavier saw Kaka and Moz is the car and concluded they were still on it, out of anger decided to payback for "being made a fool yet again", so booom....his gone. What if?

This is another angle to it, but he could have at least ask her, instead of taking the back and short way out. For Kaka to have been the one who told him about the affair initially, he should give her a benefit of doubt and ask her if he suspect or see anything. He should confirm if she failed in her promises, instead of him been the first(and only one) to fail in his promise. Anyway, he is a Coward.
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 11:06pm On Jan 18, 2017
ah ma'am u no jxt try at all 4 dis update o.......u just made me depressed rite nw....if only i had ur hubby's num i wuld have begged him 2 just take u 2 d oda room 4 3days witout coming out...

abeg lemme go read anada story 1st to cheer me up small so i can sleep jareh
Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 11:20pm On Jan 18, 2017
Chai Casmir don use raggae spoil Kaka blues, he is very foolish wat if she no tell am, him for knw? (mini Chuks) angry
Re: Red Ashes by MozB: 11:21pm On Jan 18, 2017
lol.. All of una were de blame poor camir! It couldnt have been him... I smell foul play somewhere..
.
And if chioma said she inherited the hotel from her mum, why is she afraid na? What is the secret there? Or is there more to it? I'm itching for the truth to reveal... Nice work madam Chumzypinky. How family?
Re: Red Ashes by Maryclaire1(f): 12:03am On Jan 19, 2017
embarassed this better be a dream ooo... I refuse to believe this in my heart of heart that he did this to her...I guess jagugu might be right but he did it in a cruel manner. this is the highest of it HABA on her wedding day....Abeg this better be a bad dream from kaka..
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 3:36am On Jan 19, 2017
fam24:


This is another angle to it, but he could have at least ask her, instead of taking the back and short way out. For Kaka to have been the one who told him about the affair initially, he should give her a benefit of doubt and ask her if he suspect or see anything. He should confirm if she failed in her promises, instead of him been the first(and only one) to fail in his promise. Anyway, he is a Coward.
I don't wanna say this but hey, lets be honest. I think men can't handle it when they are beaten on their field of excellence.

...and as the gentleman above the lady above me is saying, this could be foul play. My version....say its MozB that choreographed all of this (I'll find a reasonable cause of action and get back).

Rise and shine good people, rise and shine
Re: Red Ashes by yorhmienerd(m): 6:50am On Jan 19, 2017
See female cussing right left and center... Casmir didn't dump Kaka due to her first issue(sex with Moz.B), He definitely saw a picture of Moz.B and Kaka together again that made him dump her

As for Kaniene, Chuks is only playing with fire and to think my mind is telling me that Nathan and Kaniene are sibling, remember Chuks saw a resemblance in Nathan when he met him... Just saying

jagugu88li 'sup, long time
Re: Red Ashes by angelliza(f): 6:54am On Jan 19, 2017
The story keeps getting more interesting Weldone the lord is your strength.

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