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Re: Red Ashes by damsel14(f): 10:39am On Jan 21, 2017
chai see wetin i don miss for ma mummy thread hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.m....jolade i think kelvin likes u o..hmm..


kaniene fall my hand small sha y did she shout on my crush like dat shey she no renember the oath ni...
Re: Red Ashes by sotadegrt(m): 10:52am On Jan 21, 2017
Azeequeen:
I just feel like giving this Chuks a maddening,resounding,ear-deafening,brain-stopper slap...His apologies are not even genuine. That's rubbish,nonsense,balderdash,shenanigan etc. I no even know wetin I want type again
Is it by force?



lyk u have the genuine one in your wardrobe
Re: Red Ashes by sotadegrt(m): 12:10pm On Jan 21, 2017
I doff ma cap for u.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:16pm On Jan 21, 2017
KAINENE.
I tried reaching Nathan. But he wasnt picking his calls. I slapped my forehead. What had gotten into me?
Who could even blame me?
No one would understand the way i felt the moment i read that message. My first thought was that Nathan had broken my heart. And that he was going to marry someone else. I hadnt even thought of the blood oath that moment and that was my greatest mistake. Yes, i know i was insecure but it wasnt my fault, i didnt want what happened to Kaka happening to me.

Speaking about Kaka, she had woken up but she had refused speaking to anyone or even eating. When she was discharged from the hospital and taken home, she had had herself locked up in her room, for days unend, i kept coming to their house hoping that she might at least talk to me but she refused opening the door for me.

'Claire! Longest time no see!' MummyM said embracing me the moment i stepped into the house.

I hugged her back 'mum, how have you been?'

'i've been okay. You finally decided to come see me today. I'm grateful for that'

'its not like that nah...' i followed her to the kitchen 'what are you cooking?'

'your fiance's favourite. I dont know whats wrong with him but he hardly smiles nowadays. And he doesnt step out. I'm very worried about him'

'where is he now?'

'he's upstairs in his room. Do you want to see him?'

I nodded.

'anyways, its him you came to see anyways. You can go'

I pecked her plumpy cheeks then i raced upstairs. I stood in front of his room. I knocked lightly. There was no response. Then i opened it. I heard water running from the bathroom and i knew he was having a shower.

I sat on the bed waiting for him.

Then suddenly i percieved the smell of marijuana. Where was it coming from?
Just when i stood up to check where the smell was coming from, my eyes darted to an open drawer. I walked to it. I saw some powdery white substances, some were wrapped in a white sheet of paper while some leaked from the sheet of paper.

What was this?

I dipped my fingers into one of the substances and smoothed it with my fingers. Then i sniffed it. Just sniffing it alone gave me a bang in my head. I held the back of my head painfully.

Cocaine!

No! No! No! I kept screaming in my head. It couldnt be. It was a big misunderstanding. My Nathan would never take cocaine! No!

I sat on the bed. The smell of marijuana still lingered in the room. Then the water stopped running and i heard the door open from the inside.

I folded my arms waiting for him.

He came out with a towel around his waist and another around his neck. He froze on seeing me. And when he lowered his eyes to see the opened drawer, his mouth opened. He tried saying something. I just stared at him. Then out of nowhere, tears came to my eyes.

'i cant believe i've been dating a drug addict! God!' i broke down.

'Kainene, i...'

I raised my hand 'save it! Save the goddamn lies for whoever cares to listen! Its over Nath! Its over. I cant spend the rest of my life with a crazy motherfucking hopeless drug addict such as you! Here i was thinking you didnt even smoke cigarettes anymore, i never knew that you did worse in your closet! Cocaine? Thats the height of it!'

He tried coming closer 'baby, dont say that. It cant be over. Remember the blood convenant...'

'fvck every blood convenant Nathan! Screw every godforsaken blood oath both of us took out of foolishness. I declare that blood convenant annulled right now! Even God will understand'

'baby stop talking nonsense. That..' he pointed at the cocaine 'i cant remember the last time i took that. I swear to God who made me Nene, since we started dating, i've never taken that. I swear to God!'

'oh shut up you fustrated bastard! Dont ever ever try to swear to God with your smelly mouth ever ever again! So God doesnt punish you and terminate the scrap you call life!'

'Kainene....'

'its over between us. Take it or leave it!' I made to walk away but he held my hand. Then a tear strolled down his cheeks.

'baby, i'm sorry. I'm sorry please, dont leave me'

'i'm leaving you! Because i think you value cocaine and marijuana more than you actually value me!'

'baby thats not true!' he went on his knees 'i'm really sorry about the marijuana but i swear, i didnt sniff the coke. And today was my first time since we started dating smoking Marijuana. I dont know what came over me. I was just fustrated that you didnt actually trust me enough. That was why, baby i'm sorry'

'what is going on here?' I raised my head to see Jolade standing by the door

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 1:23pm On Jan 21, 2017
am beginning to dislike dis keke napep of a girl.... Oliver twist want some more embarassed embarassed embarassed embarassed embarassed sad sad sad angry angry angry cry cry cry
Re: Red Ashes by Opeoluwa99(f): 1:36pm On Jan 21, 2017
Jolade what again o
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 1:37pm On Jan 21, 2017
ohh!chioma!i need maw pls.*crying*
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 1:41pm On Jan 21, 2017
sotadegrt:



lyk u have the genuine one in your wardrobe
Make I dash you one?
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 1:43pm On Jan 21, 2017
Who called Jolade now?
Re: Red Ashes by felapikin(m): 1:49pm On Jan 21, 2017
Joladr kwa wetin dat forgotten Big fool come find there again. Who even open door for am MummyM no see her pass mtchewww
Re: Red Ashes by sotadegrt(m): 1:49pm On Jan 21, 2017
Azeequeen:

Make I dash you one?



who turns down such an offer? #waiting for the genuine one in #dotherroom# *winks*
Re: Red Ashes by Ehmjay(m): 2:06pm On Jan 21, 2017
This jolade gal get prob sha,d chin chin wey dey her head is raised to power 10...mama chumzy nice update jhawe,awaiting yhur next update
Re: Red Ashes by sirblero(m): 2:37pm On Jan 21, 2017
Chumzypinky:

lol, because u're Kelvin, d Kelvin wil b a gud 1


lol..thanks ma'am!....just can't wait to see the very end of this story..those that will loose...and that will gain....

loving this story like palmwine ...
#following...
Re: Red Ashes by sirblero(m): 2:37pm On Jan 21, 2017
Chumzypinky:

lol, because u're Kelvin, d Kelvin wil b a gud 1


lol..thanks ma'am!....just can't wait to see the very end of this story..those that will loose...and that will gain....


loving this story like palmwine ...
#following...
Re: Red Ashes by Blokifen(f): 5:07pm On Jan 21, 2017
This Kainene is getting on my nerves,who does she think she is? please mummy chum make she suffer small nah
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:36pm On Jan 21, 2017
sotadegrt:




who turns down such an offer? #waiting for the genuine one in #dotherroom# *winks*
abeg make una no dsvirgn my thread, una dey hear?
Re: Red Ashes by twinkiet(f): 5:57pm On Jan 21, 2017
Mummy pinky,are you still going to update today. Please do
Re: Red Ashes by sotadegrt(m): 6:55pm On Jan 21, 2017
Chumzypinky:

abeg make una no dsvirgn my thread, una dey hear?


wen one girl say she na nathan--ur bro birthday mate, u suggested setting a date for their two assuring her of ur bro's big dick nd watery pocket jokingly nd seriously. Now, me wan try, yaff spoil show. Is dt nt lopsided appointment nd marginalisation of d southsouth? Lols.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:53pm On Jan 21, 2017
sotadegrt:



wen one girl say she na nathan--ur bro birthday mate, u suggested setting a date for their two assuring her of ur bro's big dick nd watery pocket jokingly nd seriously. Now, me wan try, yaff spoil show. Is dt nt lopsided appointment nd marginalisation of d southsouth? Lols.
southsouth ni eastwest ko
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:07pm On Jan 21, 2017
Chumzypinky:

abeg make una no dsvirgn my thread, una dey hear?
disvirgin kwa!abegi muna cum update
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:34pm On Jan 21, 2017
boffinjay:
disvirgin kwa!abegi muna cum update
i wil bt its goin 2 b short
Re: Red Ashes by mujybee(f): 8:55pm On Jan 21, 2017
Chumzypinky:
i wil bt its goin 2 b short
tonyt ahbi
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:55pm On Jan 21, 2017
Chumzypinky:

i wil bt its goin 2 b short
ok.we go manage am lyk dat sha.abi fellow readers?
Re: Red Ashes by mujybee(f): 8:55pm On Jan 21, 2017
Chumzypinky:
i wil bt its goin 2 b short
tonyt ahbi
Re: Red Ashes by mujybee(f): 8:57pm On Jan 21, 2017
boffinjay:
ok.we go manage am lyk dat sha.abi fellow readers?

yes dr
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:26pm On Jan 21, 2017
¤¤¤¤¤¤¤CONTINUATION¤¤¤¤
MABEL.
I started hearing voices from Nathan's room a bit after Jolade or whatever she was who introduced herself as Nathan's friend went up to his room.

I took the stairs two at a time.

On getting there, i found Claire quarelling with the said girl called Jolade.
Nathan was putting on a singlet and black pencilled jean trouser. His hair was ruffled and his body was dripping wet.

'you have no right whatsoever to come into my fiance's room without any invitation whatsoever! Do you understand?!' Claire barked.

'you call him your fiance? Have you forgotten that he left his seed buried inside of me? Look, Kainene or whatever you call your miserable self! I am expecting your fiance's baby and there's nothing you can fucking do about it! Fucking slut!'

'just talk rubbish one more time! Talk pim! If i dont squeeze this stupid mouth of yours and end your miserable and pathetic excuse of a life eh! If i dont do it eh! Know my name is not Kainene! Silly LovePeddler!'

'what is going here?!' i said coming between the two 'whats this rubbish? Why are you both having a heated argument? What is going on?'

'mum, please tell this cheap ashawo to leave my fiance for me! He's the father of my child! He owns this baby in my stomach!' she slapped her flat stomach 'she should stop fighting for what doesnt belong to her!'

'enough!' i said 'dont you have something called respect? An elder is talking to you and instead of you to remain calm, you're shouting on top of your voice? Do you think i came here to listen to your frog-like voice?'

By this time, Nathan had dragged Claire inside his room and shut the door behind us. Jolade started banging the door 'you both should come out oo! Come out and face me! Dont you dare bang her there oo. Dont plant your seed there cos your seed is already here!'

'get out! I wont let you come to my house and constitute nuisance! Dont disturb my daughter-inlaw, understood?' i dragged her out.

¤¤¤¤¤

KAINENE.

'baby i'm very sorry. Forgive me for whatever i've done to you! It wont happen again. Baby please..'

'because of you i've been insulted today! Nathan! What is wrong with you?'

'baby i'm sorry...'

I didnt say anything again. I just sat on the bed. He sat beside me and kissed me 'i'm sorry. It wont happen again'

I looked at him 'Nathan promise me that on no circumstance should you ever light a cigarette or anything, you'll never smoke anything again, Nath promise me'

'i promise you'

He claimed my lips in his. Then he looked at me 'do you know i love you?'

I just smiled.

'answer me Nene'

'i dont know'

'seriously?' he pouted 'i'm gonna cry. Do you know i love you?'

I smiled and kissed 'i do'

'i love you Princess. You're the one i want to spend the rest of my life with...' he raised my finger and kissed the engagement ring 'lets get married Nene'

I smiled 'when do we get married?'

'this month'

I laughed 'you're not serious'

'i just want us to start making babies'

'speaking about babies, tell me the truth, are you...'

He kissed me 'i know what you want to say but just know i'm not responsible for Jolade's pregnancy' he lowered me on the bed.

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 9:42pm On Jan 21, 2017
mujybee:


yes dr
dr?pls xplainFTC
Re: Red Ashes by mujybee(f): 9:54pm On Jan 21, 2017
boffinjay:
dr?pls xplainFTC
c u village boi
na una type I love u go dy shark im head
owk d dr means no harm o
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 9:58pm On Jan 21, 2017
mujybee:

c u village boi
na una type I love u go dy shark im head
owk d dr means no harm o
ehn na d meanin i wan knw
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:59pm On Jan 21, 2017
mujybee:

c u village boi
na una type I love u go dy shark im head
owk d dr means no harm o
shey na luv una dey play 4 my thread ni
Re: Red Ashes by Maryclaire1(f): 10:00pm On Jan 21, 2017
Jolade sense from the beginning of this novel till now is 0/100 I just hope at the end you will give her small sense Bikonu ma'am... Happy weekend
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:01pm On Jan 21, 2017
Chumzypinky:
shey na luv una dey play 4 my thread ni
choi!!c jamb questn

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