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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 6:27pm On Jan 22, 2017
ceeSleek:
Ghen Ghen! Cupid don match David for Kaka like MMM GH ooo! Issorite! Nice one chumzypinky, i must reiterate again, your impeccable level of consistency wows me! #NAIRALAND'sFinestWriter
..... 'Wellu' done! Still following your story back to back like kelvin 2 jolade's heart.
wow, i'm jst wowed. Tanx luv. Tho i tot i've nt rili bin consitent ds past few days
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 6:28pm On Jan 22, 2017
haleemwale:
Thank you for d back to back update
u're wlc darlin darlin. Hope hubby doesnt c ds post sha
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 6:41pm On Jan 22, 2017
JOLADE.
'what do you want?! Get out!' i barked covering my breasts with my right hand and my left over my feminity.

'i'm...i'm sorry madam. I thought you werent in'

'this is no time for explanations. Get out will you!!'

He hurried out of the room shutting the door behind him.

I quickly picked my clothes and rushed to the bathroom. I was so ashamed.

***

KAINENE.

I was very surrppprrissedd to see Kaka's call come into my phone. Like seriously? My friend was calling?

I quickly picked the call 'hello? Kamsi? Is that you?'

'no oo, oloshi. Its your father's brother's sister's grandmother's relative. Babe, how far na?'

'what happened? I mean, when...how, where...where are you right now?'

'i just dey chill for one place like that. I just say make i comot nah. I ball in FTC yesterday and one mugu just yama yama show for me. Where you yourself position?'

'i dey house oo. Kaka, i'm really glad you've decided to move on. I never expected your call really. That guy doesnt deserve you. That he pretended to forgive you and fvck you up later doesnt tell good of him. He's a coward for not being able to tell you to your face that he couldnt bring himself to forgive you. You will do better without him Kaks. I'm so happy for you'

'enough of the niceties jareh. I'm so bored right now. I need company, i dont know if i should call MozB'

'eh? You dey mad ni?'

She started laughing 'i was just joking maami. Will you come over?'

'uhm...instead of chilling out in a bar, lets chill out at my house, come over nah. Nathan is here'

'now i get the reason you dont wanna ball out. Instead of saying you're chilling out with your boyfriend, i mean fiance, you dey tell me make i arrive your side. Babe, enjoy your lovey lovey wella jareh. Enjoy it while it lasts because trust me, these guys dont give a shii about the F folks'

'i think you got that line from me. I said that before remember?'

'and you were right bae. All men are the same. Including your Nathan'

'i dont care if they are all the same anymore. What i care about is what i feel. I might end up like you tomorrow. I might not, it all depends on luck Kaks, anywhere fate carries me is where i remain. But for now, i'm savouring whatever it is i feel for him which i know its nothing but love'

'yeah love doctor, preach to me honey!'

'lolz. Silly you! Get your big voluminous ass down here girl! If i dont see you here in thirty minutes, i'm gonna use you ass for ma wedding cake!'

'hahahahaha, on ma way babygirl!'

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by boladex1: 7:02pm On Jan 22, 2017
Chumzypinky thanks for the update

I love that kaka it's bouncing back. Not easy to get dumped on your wedding day.
Re: Red Ashes by ceeSleek(m): 7:05pm On Jan 22, 2017
Chumzypinky:

wow, i'm jst wowed. Tanx luv. Tho i tot i've nt rili bin consitent ds past few days
oh m g! Are you for real?! If you read a lot on Nairaland like me, you would know. Yours is, you at least drop update in days. E get writers wey dey update for weeks once dey dun get enuff readers. I for don like call out writers and their abadoned/late update stories, but for security reasons i'll let it pass. NICE ONE jaree!

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:21pm On Jan 22, 2017
ceeSleek:
oh m g! Are you for real?! If you read a lot on Nairaland like me, you would know. Yours is, you at least drop update in days. E get writers wey dey update for weeks once dey dun get enuff readers. I for don like call out writers and their abadoned/late update stories, but for security reasons i'll let it pass. NICE ONE jaree!
lol, whisper dem 4 my ear jareh
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 7:31pm On Jan 22, 2017
Ah Enjoy This Episode Like Kilode I Day Expect More Oh It Been A While I Comment Cos Have Been Away To Portacourt,
Re: Red Ashes by calebson123: 7:37pm On Jan 22, 2017
Being a silent reader 4 a lng tym nw.just want to appreciate ur consistency despite ur tight shedule.pls welcome me as a first tym comer to comment.@chumzipinky.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:48pm On Jan 22, 2017
CHIOMA.
My heart skipped a beat when i saw him approaching. I wondered what actually brought me here, why did i come here? Didnt i say i didnt want to ever have anything to do with him? Why was i here again? I said a silent prayer in my heart.

He sat on the chair opposite me with a smile on his face 'hi beautiful'

'you kept me waiting' i said 'we agreed to meet by 1pm, but this 2:30'

'first of all, thats not how you're supposed to greet your huband and secondly, i apologise. I had something really important to take care of. Like booking an appointment with the manager of Vanguard newspapers, i...'

'what?!' i was shaky now 'Chuks, dont tell me you're going to carry out your threat'

'relax dear,' he said with a cool smile 'i havent carried it out just yet. You seem to have forgotten that i've been friends with Dele from way back. The outcome of our meeting today determines how my appointment with Dele is going to be like'

'Chuks please dont do this to me. I am no longer interested in renewing our wedding vows, you cant force me into doing what i dont want to'

'i am not forcing you to do anything. I'm just telling you whats going to happen if you dont marry me. Your secrets, your hotel. Chioma, remember them all'

'this is blackmail'

'i will do anything to have you back Chichi. Thats how much i love you. Give me a chance to make up for the mistakes i made in the past. Give me a chance to do the things that i should have done a long time ago. Like starting a happy family with you and my daughter. Everyone needs a second chance, even the devil needs a second chance, why cant i get a second chance too?'

'i already gave you a second chance but you messed it up Chuka!'

'i didnt mess anything up. What happened was that you found out aout one of the regrettable mistakes i made in the past. I know i made a mistake by not telling you about all of them on time but then i'm sorry. Chioma please forgive me. I know i've not been a very good husband to you. I know i've messed up big time but please, give me a chance to set things straight, please'

I sighed. He reached for my hands 'Chioma, you're the reason i live. You're the air that i breathe. Leaving you was the greatest mistake of my life and i'll live to regret it for as long as you keep pushing me away. I want to be there on my daughter's wedding. I want to be there for her on the happiest day of her life. Chichi, please do this for me. If you ever truly loved me during the time we dated and got married, then you'll do this for me and even more. I love you Chioma'

At this point, i became confused. He had my heart melted already and all i wanted was to draw him back into my arms. But then, he had already exposed a side of him i never knew existed. He could blackmail me anytime with my secret, the secret of the hotel. Marrying him wasnt a safe idea right now. I'll only become a slave with him. He was going to control me using the secret of the hotel and i wouldnt want that.

I slowly withdrew my hands from his 'Chuks, i'm sorry. I'm sorry but i cant give you what you want right now. I'm very sorry Chuks, i cant' i broke down in tears 'forgive me. I know i'm being heartless at the moment but i'm doing this for my daughter. I love you Chuks, i really do. But we cant be together. That doesnt mean i'm stopping you from carrying out your duties as a father. That doesnt stop you from attending Kainene's wedding. That doesnt stop you from playing the father role on her wedding. That doesnt stop you from recieving her brideprice and carrying out the necessary rights as a father. I'll not stop you because we both have equaly rights over Kainene, she's your daughter as much as she's mine. But please, its too late to renew whatever it is we shared. Chuks i'm sorry, i'm so sorry' i dabbed my eyes with my handkerchief.

He stared at me with a dangerous look in his eyes, then he banged the table angrily 'Chioma, what is wrong with you? Why are you this heartless? Why are you punishing me for my sins? Why do you want me miserable? Anything i've done please forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! Forgive me! How many times will i plead for your forgiveness? Do i have to kill myself first? Do i have to shred myself into pieces before you know what it is i actually feel inside right now? What kind of a woman are you? How did i even get myself entangled with a woman with such an unforgiving spirit in the first place? God! I regret everything! I regret getting married to you in the first place. And believe me you, i'll make you pay! I'll make your life so miserable in this town that you'll have nowhere else and no one else to turn to except me, watch and see! I'll make you regret your decisions Chioma, you'll suffer for them. Good day' he stood up and walked away angrily.

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:49pm On Jan 22, 2017
calebson123:
Being a silent reader 4 a lng tym nw.just want to appreciate ur consistency despite ur tight shedule.pls welcome me as a first tym comer to comment.@chumzipinky.
welcome my luv. U're welcome
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:49pm On Jan 22, 2017
holuwanoisy111:
Ah Enjoy This Episode Like Kilode I Day Expect More Oh It Been A While I Comment Cos Have Been Away To Portacourt,
hmm, shebi u bring bread come sha
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:51pm On Jan 22, 2017
So i dropped four updates today which is very unusual of me since skul and wrk resumed. Its because its weekend. I kukuma carry the kids drop dem for mumsi side, tho my hubby has gone 2 kari dem. So i'm kinda free here. But from 2moro, pls all of una has to bear with me. 2 have three children and still expecting 1 is nt beans...

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Re: Red Ashes by saraphina(f): 8:04pm On Jan 22, 2017
I tuale for u mama
Re: Red Ashes by alarmednigerian: 8:22pm On Jan 22, 2017
I LOVE LOVE LOVE! Thanks for your constant update, i appreciate.
Re: Red Ashes by Chommieblaq(f): 8:28pm On Jan 22, 2017
Chumzypinky:
Spixytinxy
Mareema
Chommieblaq

Swt namesake, I have been following you bumper to bumper.
I love the twists, made d whole thing totally unpredictable.


You da best.
Jisike!
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:36pm On Jan 22, 2017
Chumzypinky:
So i dropped four updates today which is very unusual of me since skul and wrk resumed. Its because its weekend. I kukuma carry the kids drop dem for mumsi side, tho my hubby has gone 2 kari dem. So i'm kinda free here. But from 2moro, pls all of una has to bear with me. 2 have three children and still expecting 1 is nt beans...
ok.we'll try 2 bear wit u.tnx 4 d update.nd help me 2 grit my siblings(una children)oo.wishin u safe deliverywink
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:37pm On Jan 22, 2017
Chumzypinky:
So i dropped four updates today which is very unusual of me since skul and wrk resumed. Its because its weekend. I kukuma carry the kids drop dem for mumsi side, tho my hubby has gone 2 kari dem. So i'm kinda free here. But from 2moro, pls all of una has to bear with me. 2 have three children and still expecting 1 is nt beans...
ok.we'll try 2 bear wit u.tnx 4 d updates.nd help me 2 grit my siblings(una children)oo.wishin u safe deliverywink
Re: Red Ashes by teel123(f): 8:38pm On Jan 22, 2017
Chuks threat should be empty please oooo. Good work . How are ur girls.
Re: Red Ashes by xaviercasmir(m): 8:48pm On Jan 22, 2017
There must be something about chioma have that she herself does not know about that is making chuks to resort to blackmail in order to get using the hotel secret as a cover.
my opinion though.
Ride on sis.
Re: Red Ashes by lobiologs(m): 9:02pm On Jan 22, 2017
*singing* somebody is on the way oh, biggy biggy bouncing baby... Thanks for the update at least before I enter camp I will have something to look forward to every now and then.

Ijust don't want to go and come back and start finding
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.
.
Nairaland writers love doing this to stories after they are through with em. But you know sey me dey follow you like fly wey dey follow shit. Good jod maam
Re: Red Ashes by brohimot(f): 9:54pm On Jan 22, 2017
My darling muaah! Thanks for d update but no fall my hand cos I dey boast of u to other writers. How's d family?
Re: Red Ashes by Maryclaire1(f): 11:10pm On Jan 22, 2017
Chuks is just after his own selfish interest thinking of himself alone Loading kakadavid soon grin...thanks for the update ma...
Re: Red Ashes by hatchetman(m): 11:42pm On Jan 22, 2017
nyc job..mama..ayam lovin u walai..more scenes 2 ur immagination
Re: Red Ashes by cutiepie25(f): 8:22am On Jan 23, 2017
Wow, bumped into your story since yesterday out of boredom and decided to read from the first page to the last. I enjoyed every bit of it and wish there are still more. Babe you got me hooked and am happy i found it. More ink to your pen and please update often. Following you fully.
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:58am On Jan 23, 2017
Chumzypinky:
So i dropped four updates today which is very unusual of me since skul and wrk resumed. Its because its weekend. I kukuma carry the kids drop dem for mumsi side, tho my hubby has gone 2 kari dem. So i'm kinda free here. But from 2moro, pls all of una has to bear with me. 2 have three children and still expecting 1 is nt beans...

Expecting one Yippee #dancingAtilogwu. www.nairaland.com/889053/pregnancy-pregnant-going-through-high you can join us in this thread, the thread is a definition of BAE. We no dy vex, we dy madt ni. Rest o, enjoy o biko for my future inlaw
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:49pm On Jan 23, 2017
Prettyhurts:


Expecting one Yippee #dancingAtilogwu. www.nairaland.com/889053/pregnancy-pregnant-going-through-high you can join us in this thread, the thread is a definition of BAE. We no dy vex, we dy madt ni. Rest o, enjoy o biko for my future inlaw
hahahaha, mummy o, i dey cum

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:50pm On Jan 23, 2017
cutiepie25:
Wow, bumped into your story since yesterday out of boredom and decided to read from the first page to the last. I enjoyed every bit of it and wish there are still more. Babe you got me hooked and am happy i found it. More ink to your pen and please update often. Following you fully.
tanx luv
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:52pm On Jan 23, 2017
brohimot:
My darling muaah! Thanks for d update but no fall my hand cos I dey boast of u to other writers. How's d family?
d family dey oo. Dem say make i greet u
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:53pm On Jan 23, 2017
teel123:
Chuks threat should be empty please oooo. Good work . How are ur girls.
dem der oo. Anything 4 dem?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:54pm On Jan 23, 2017
boffinjay:
ok.we'll try 2 bear wit u.tnx 4 d update.nd help me 2 grit my siblings(una children)oo.wishin u safe deliverywink
tanx dear
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:54pm On Jan 23, 2017
Chommieblaq:

Swt namesake, I have been following you bumper to bumper. I love the twists, made d whole thing totally unpredictable.

You da best. Jisike!
i wil dearie. Tanx
Re: Red Ashes by Azeequeen(f): 3:19pm On Jan 23, 2017
You have three children and another is on the way? Your oga dey try o
Btw,please and please,just borrow Jolade's mum small sense

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