kingphilip:
babe the movie don de end now so people gat die in every update now til the movie finish

zika1: true. Make e do finish make we start anoda movie

Ms Spaqs: Wasn't planning 2 comment on this story @ all but i don't like it when readers second-guess a writer.It takes all d fun out of d story.So pls lets just enjoy d story

Cold faya:

Exactly. I'm very of d feeling that in d original plot in kay's head, Ahmed was not supposed to die but cos ppl had predicted too much that d colonel will die, Kay had to look for a way to alter d predictions n take ahmed out. Let's just predict in our minds abeg cos I'm sure Kay wouldn't want d story to follow our predictions even if that should b d original plot. It takes away d writers power of suspense n control of his movie.

Nice one kay baba

rapmike: Kay,kay, wel done o. The death wey u arrange 4 ahmed no gud.


I making sum predictions as d story wines down. Eva wil survive dis, as d story is abt her and 4rm d title, it luks lyke she is saying a true lyfe story. Sophia wil surely die, her entanglement wit Sean and d general is 2 much so am expecting a cross fire event with d 3.


Unles Sean manages 2 run off wit Eva,he go die 4 dia, Sophia will almost kill him at d very least and he is in direct fire wit d General.


The General has 3 ways 2 go, either he dies in a gunfire,or a tortured death at d hands of the Colonel,or he shuts d Ghost corporation off sucessfully and escapes wit Eva.



Ope may jst survive,as he is nt in d major scheme of tinz,same as Ambrose.


I dnt knw 4 Colonel sha

Leebliss13: great!.. W0nder what y0u gain in 0ver sabi..like seri0usly dude?...0wk,if the st0ry clicks to y0ur predicti0ns,are y0u g0nna feel the fun?..just keep shut please.

gennysq: ♌ I'll say "Do not underestimate D Power of a Woman esp D one's wit curved Assss,big breastts.....

gb_ajike: Ok. My very first comment!
Great write up Kay! Your pen....true art!
Howeva I feel Ahmed shouldn't have died so easily,or at least he should have been given a gallant death, not the fearful character we saw. There seems to be this inconsistency in his character. First introduction as the baddest cop around - bulging biceps, black top, the menacing anger at the death of his friend (the undacova agent) and later his dog - remember? Where did all that go? Instead we see him yelping like a pup in d face of death. No bravado,no tough talk, no nofin.
And besides, even if the corporation was way above his league, we assume he was trained by his uncle for three years.
We notice the progression in the characters of Eva and Sean, their skill and brutality. But that of Ahmed seems a little bit truncated. Just my tots. But then, a great job.
And for the record...I really don't mind the short breaks you take every now and then. I can fully relate with how difficult it is to consistently keep the game up...and then with a job?!!
My advice? Take your time. End this story well. It deserves to be a masterpiece! Any hot blooded person can go ask Michaelangelo or Da Vinci how long it took to create theirs!

kayemjay: Good Morning guys.

First of all, I have been going through a hectic week. Proposals, IT meetings, installations, server re-routing, A LOT. However, ALL the while, I ALWAYS had you guys in mind. Please rest assured that I WILL FINISH THIS STORY.

I agree that Ahmed's death was not in the original plan. I actually didn't have a plan but I NEVER INTENDED Ahmed to die. He was supposed to be the guy who avenges his Uncle's death. Anyways, I had made you guys used to daily 8pm updates and I guess work took its toll and I could not make it for a few days. It is understandable that you guys got agitated, more especially as I already have a very interesting uncompleted thread.

I take responsibility for the inconsistency in Ahmed's character and say I am sorry. I don't really do well under pressure.

I love you all. The suggestions, the love, the critique. Una too much.

Updates later at 8pm tonight. Expect the unexpected!!!


Still, I write.

rapmike:
Wat did i do dat warrant all d insults,eh? Leebliss? Fine, u guys dnt want me 2 predict anytin again, jst say so and end it at dat! Cuming 2 tel me 2 shut up is very,very rude cos i hav d right as a fan of this thread! Wen kayemay dey get writer's block and weakend shoulders, i dey wait patiently 4 hia una no show,no sign of support. Nw d guy update and i made a prediction,wich is nt d 1st tyme dat i will do it and u jst open mouth insult me. Please i dnt like it,if any1 wan complain e suppose be kayemay no be una!



All d same, i no dey predict again. Mschew.