Charles or Lucien must probably be linked to that guy who she aborted the baby and maybe she even killed someone in her past or the things she did drove a guy to a cruel and sad end..... Sorry Lleigh if am diverting just my curious mind

Eeeeyah.... Sorry who the hell is this guy self ? Linda, really feel pity for u

chai!!!. man pikin haff suffer. charles into Lucien the name lucien sounds similar to lucifer. #sonOFaB**tch

Adesina12:
Loving this story I swear!
Good for Enitan..she should just open new chapter of her life with old friend, Dele (My prayer)
Linda is getting what she deserves and really like the way she is bng tortured
So Linda is a long time and complete ash..hole, she already had a child in the past...
God have mercy on men, all the men she already sample their third leg never knew about this abi na baba ijebu charm they work on them ni?
Lleigh please continue the punishment on Linda and don't forget to deal with Tunde as well
The past is now hunting Linda, I guess her tormentor is from the man she had a child with.
Waiting patiently and meeting you at the club ...Let Linda drink more if Hennessy

Still have a bag full of sweet popcorn with cold drinks...Lleigh, jagugu88li, swann, Lawlahdey join me pls
Meet you at the club

Adesina12 yes poor men

Take it you're not team linda

SimpleBea:
chai!!!.
man pikin haff suffer.
charles into Lucien
the name lucien sounds similar to lucifer.
#sonOFaB**tch

Hi SimpleBea

I like your thinking. ....you and jaguju88li

Tuhndhay:
Charles or Lucien must probably be linked to that guy who she aborted the baby and maybe she even killed someone in her past or the things she did drove a guy to a cruel and sad end..... Sorry Lleigh if am diverting just my curious mind

Tuhndhay thanks for stopping by .

No problem. ...I like comments

nastynic:
Eeeeyah.... Sorry
who the hell is this guy self ?
Linda, really feel pity for u

You feel for Linda. ....nastynic

The story of how the hunter became the hunted.

I feel for her, though.

Even if she does well to find herself physically outside that house, the scars will daily haunt her.

Keep it coming, Lleigh.

Nice update.

Lleigh:

Hi SimpleBea
I like your thinking. ....you and jaguju88li

Miss Lleigh, Am glad you like my point of views. Your diction, choice of words, and styles as a writer is also unique!.

Lleigh:


Haba Nmaglit. ..I will tell you and I won't see you again

I love ur story n am tagging along till d end. So no fear

SimpleBea:

Miss Lleigh,
Am glad you like my point of views.
Your diction, choice of words, and styles as a writer is also unique!.

Thank you SimpleBea

Lleigh:

Thank you SimpleBea

We need updates ma.

Wow nix story. wat goes arond comes arond

update!! update!! where is tat pretty op again?

More!!! More!!!! Really enjoyed it, Ops you are wonderful.

beautifully story....keep it coming

Precial419:
Wow nix story. wat goes arond comes arond

Hi precial419 thanks for stopping by

DaddySLY:
update!! update!! where is tat pretty op again?

Updates are being prepared. ....

Samjr:
More!!! More!!!! Really enjoyed it, Ops you are wonderful.

Samjr thank you for stopping by. ..

osleek:
beautifully story....keep it coming

Osleek thanks for stopping by and commenting

Nice one Lleigh...but I think Lucien is from the under world bibijay123 will understand better "the Devil has the money"

Lleigh... Linda yaff suffered enough, please
Don't you think so too, Adesina12??

Lawlahdey:
Lleigh... Linda yaff suffered enough, please
Don't you think so too, Adesina12??

Lawlahdey hmm...I feel you.....that's life....
You're now team linda?

Lleigh:


Lawlahdey hmm...I feel you.....that's life....
You're now team linda?

Yes jhurr. . Haba

Am really having a nice time viewing and reading this page just so i get to read the interesting story.
We can only decipher what our imagination and minds paints but the true story can only be interpreted through the writer.
Lleigh.

Absorbing piece.

Weldone Lleigh.

I think Lucien (Charles?) is the mysterious man at the auction. I also think he has some mystic powers that is connected to the effective execution of his ''trade''.

Also I think he and his cohorts are responsible for the mysterious disappearance of Jane and Mabel (birds of the same feathers with Linda).

Nice plots and sub plots.

Also, I must commend you, Jagugu88li. Your insights are from a very intelligent mind and they are apt. You wouldn't do badly as a writer too.

Finally, i'm feeling so much pity for Linda -- this is one suffering too much. Please hand her a respite.

[quote author=sirOrubebe post=51738220]Absorbing piece.

Weldone Lleigh.

I think Lucien (Charles?) is the mysterious man at the auction. I also think he has some mystic powers that is connected to the effective execution of his ''trade''.

Also I think he and his cohorts are responsible for the mysterious disappearance of Jane and Mabel (birds of the same feathers with Linda).

Nice plots and sub plots.

Also, I must commend you, Jagugu88li. Your insights are from a very intelligent mind and they are apt. You wouldn't do badly as a writer too.

Finally, i'm feeling so much pity for Linda -- this is one suffering too much. Please hand her a respite. [/quote


Sirorubebe thank you for stopping by and I really like your comments.
Thank you for the thorough reading

@Jagugu88li you see another person has noticed your talent. You need to write here on the literature section. As I said would like to do a colloboration with you. ..
Alternate chapters......
If you haven't killed everyone off that is

sirOrubebe:
Absorbing piece.

sirOrubebe:
Weldone Lleigh.

sirOrubebe:
I think Lucien (Charles?) is the mysterious man at the auction. I also think he has some mystic powers that is connected to the effective execution of his ''trade''.

sirOrubebe:
Also I think he and his cohorts are responsible for the mysterious disappearance of Jane and Mabel (birds of the same feathers with Linda).

sirOrubebe:
Nice plots and sub plots.

sirOrubebe:
Also, I must commend you, Jagugu88li. Your insights are from a very intelligent mind and they are apt. You wouldn't do badly as a writer too.

Thanks loads bro. Lets say its not my time yet, hey

sirOrubebe:
Finally, i'm feeling so much pity for Linda -- this is one suffering too much. Please hand her a respite.

What should be the meaning of this?

Linda poor Linda. ....

So many readers asking for Mercy......

Lleigh:
Linda poor Linda. ....

So many readers asking for Mercy......

I'm not oo!
I don't wish her death, but her intense materialistic lifestyle and her quest to 'belong' by any means not minding the pains she put other people through should not be forgotten.
She should suffer to the point of worthlessness so that if she ever survives, she would immediately become a nun for life.

No amount of pain is too much for what she put Mrs enitan through.

jagugu88li:










Thanks loads bro. Lets say its not my time yet, hey

What should be the meaning of this?

Lol at the last sentence -- it is what it is, ma'am. Team #FeelingSorryForLinda

Lawlahdey:
Lleigh... Linda yaff suffered enough, please
Don't you think so too, Adesina12??

Hey!!! why begging for Linda release? So you 4get so soon?
Someone has left her matrimonial home and wander about, leaving behind her twins children and a juicy appointment in Lagos because of Linda
There are so many of them in our society, they won't stay with a man and the replica is Tunde himself
Lleigh! I just like your thinking faculty.
I have a real life experience of this nature while growing up, up to the point of the separation of the couple and exit of the husband to the life beyond ...my dexterity lies in numeral analysis and not writing ...very bad of me

#teamEnitan# all the way