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Re: Red Ashes by harameede99(f): 9:07pm On Jan 29, 2017
Chumzypinky:

go girl! Im no reach!
mummy chumzy any idiot wey dey against d progress of dis beautiful story na thunder go fire am e go go continue d rest for hell
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:23pm On Jan 29, 2017
That i havent been able to make friends with anyone. The time had come when i needed to change into a new leaf. I was letting go of Nathan right now. Yes i loved him. I still loved him till now but i certainly didnt see a future with him.

It was over now.

I closed my eyes and sighed.

'why did you even come with Nathan?' i heard Kainene say and my heart skipped. Yes, it was time fo her to ask the question i knew she had been dying to ask me.

'Nathan?' she called.

'yes honey. We met at the company. She came to see me but i couldnt talk with her when i was in a hurry to rush down to the station, so she insisted on coming along, i couldnt argue with her so i agreed'

'tell me why i should believe you now' Kainene said.

I smiled and turned back at her 'i understand that you have every right to get suspicious now Kainene, but you have to believe him now. I had the mind to confront him about my pregnancy today'

'your pregnancy?'

Nathan looked at me sharply.

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:40pm On Jan 29, 2017
Thank u so much 4 updating.luv u plenty
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 10:43pm On Jan 29, 2017
Paradise163:


Boy no just try me, we are not mates so please lets accord each other the respect each deserves
you should have respected me in the first place by ignoring my posts.. Nonsense
Re: Red Ashes by kajsa08: 11:58pm On Jan 29, 2017
finally! Jolade has heard d inner truth. @chumzypinky abeg continue d good work.
nice night.

Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:21am On Jan 30, 2017
Gudmrning pals. Na later things oo

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:27am On Jan 30, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
i am sure u cant write a simple composition about your mother... How can you tell a good story from bad ones? Mtchwwww
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who d fvck are u 2 include my mother? senseless human being
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 8:44am On Jan 30, 2017
NLchikeeto:
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who d fvck are u 2 include my mother? senseless human being
dnt anger me this morning... Dnt even dare
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 8:45am On Jan 30, 2017
Chumzypinky:
Gudmrning pals. Na later things oo
how was your night?
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 9:09am On Jan 30, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
dnt anger me this morning... Dnt even dare
. I have beta tinz 2 do wit my tym dis morning, so I won't give u d attention u r looking 4,which u obviously thrive in. HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY.
Re: Red Ashes by Jaytoy(f): 9:14am On Jan 30, 2017
Mummy Pinky gud a m.
I've always been a silent reader on ur trend and I will commend u, u are doing a great job God bless u big and the works of ur hand.....
BUT Mummy...... Im not happy with u.
Y? U just fall my hand. Must u reply every tom, dick, and harry who has no future, whom are the md ceo saddist of life? Whom are just bunch of fools whose life has no meaning? Abet aunty let them be and dont reply any of them irrespective of anything said by them. Dont even go to their trend to reply them as they have nothing to offer. They are called "JOY KILKERS, DESTINY DESTROYERS"
Abeg the Lord is ur strength. Continue with the wonderful story and waiting for a more interesting one after this.
God bless u and ur family and the works of ur hand.
Shallom!
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 9:23am On Jan 30, 2017
Wetin Dey Happen Here Political Thug Or Wetin U Call Yr Name Pls Dont Spoil These Wondenful Story Wit Those Blemish U Dey Speak, So Pls Go To Where U Belong,*and Let Me Tell U These U Belong To The Groups Of Failure* Cus U Self U Are Failure,
Re: Red Ashes by cyndylove64(f): 9:45am On Jan 30, 2017
See i take God beg una dis morning political thug is too early e jo,biko nu.haba what sef.have beared enough of all this insult in this thread.any more insult frm u i won't hesistate to let the mod ban u.are u stupid or something.or do u lack manner.i saw ur message abt some one mother.for some one like u claiming to be older dan metusalah u lack respect,u are arrogant,rude,and mannerless.you don't even no how to accord respect to people.u come online to spill trash my brother Please GET A LIFE.try to accord respect to people no matter how big or small. Finally if anybody type any trash here derail the thread with insult i will personally ban u.rubbish#IRANU
Re: Red Ashes by hannne(f): 1:38pm On Jan 30, 2017
madam chumpzy. welldone o. This is my first time getting hooked to a nairaland story. I started yesterday and finished today..I can't believe I read all d pages self so tey I was dreaming of the different plots the story might take at night. Loool. Nice one. regards to family...superwoman
Re: Red Ashes by twinkiet(f): 2:40pm On Jan 30, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
type in english please.
. PoliticalThug you are so stupid........ Who the Bleep do you think you are....... You are just a hopeless lonely man seeking attention....... I know you are going to rant on about this as expected of a lonely useless man....... To the mod that banned me...... Thank you so much.... You didn't ban the abuser when he started this but you can ban me for replying him. You are so cute........ Lol.... Bleep you...... Ban me again tongue

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:08pm On Jan 30, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
how was your night?
fine and urs?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:08pm On Jan 30, 2017
twinkiet:
. PoliticalThug you are so stupid........ Who the Bleep do you think you are....... You are just a hopeless lonely man seeking attention....... I know you are going to rant on about this as expected of a lonely useless man....... To the mod that banned me...... Thank you so much.... You didn't ban the abuser when he started this but you can ban me for replying him. You are so cute........ Lol.... Bleep you...... Ban me again tongue
jesus! Who had d guts and effontery to ban my darling?
Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 3:25pm On Jan 30, 2017
twinkiet:
. PoliticalThug you are so stupid........ Who the Bleep do you think you are....... You are just a hopeless lonely man seeking attention....... I know you are going to rant on about this as expected of a lonely useless man....... To the mod that banned me...... Thank you so much.... You didn't ban the abuser when he started this but you can ban me for replying him. You are so cute........ Lol.... Bleep you...... Ban me again tongue

Lol......my wife really is feisty o....i pray i dont ever get on ur bad side...


so u were put in nl prison and i didnt know shocked shocked

hope they dont imprison u again sha o with dis ur comment grin grin
Re: Red Ashes by hatchetman(m): 3:59pm On Jan 30, 2017
walai it is paining me d way u guys r all attacking dis guy..make una free am na..u guys r making it intrestin 2 him..its exactly wat he wants..ion tink he deserves dis much attention
Re: Red Ashes by twinkiet(f): 4:08pm On Jan 30, 2017
Chumzypinky:

jesus! Who had d guts and effontery to ban my darling?
. Lols....... I wonder oouoo. Mummy pinky I don't know oh
Re: Red Ashes by twinkiet(f): 4:15pm On Jan 30, 2017
samyfreshsmooth:


Lol......my wife really is feisty o....i pray i dont ever get on ur bad side...


so u were put in nl prison and i didnt know shocked shocked

hope they dont imprison u again sha o with dis ur comment grin grin
..... The love of my life.......... My heartbeat....... I miss you so much........ Let us go inside the room and get busy. My body is aching for your touch....... Your favorite food is ready

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Re: Red Ashes by samyfreshsmooth(m): 4:46pm On Jan 30, 2017
twinkiet:
..... The love of my life.......... My heartbeat....... I miss you so much........ Let us go inside the room and get busy. My body is aching for your touch....... Your favorite food is ready

i want milk first grin grin
Re: Red Ashes by BurnaKing21(m): 7:09pm On Jan 30, 2017
Abeg all d energy u dey take construct reply for POLITICALTHUG....Please save it and use it 2 complete d story..........i no get joy @all d way u dey take reply everytin person talk o
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:43pm On Jan 30, 2017
twinkiet:
..... The love of my life.......... My heartbeat....... I miss you so much........ Let us go inside the room and get busy. My body is aching for your touch....... Your favorite food is ready
Jesus! For my thread?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:05pm On Jan 30, 2017
JOLADE.
'stop the car!' Kainene screamed suddenly.

'what? Why? I mean...' Nathan stammered, then looked at me.

'i said stop the motherfucking car or i bleeping jump out of it! Stop it now!' she screamed.

Nathan swerved to the left immediately and stopped the car. She came down immediately.

'whats going on?' i heard Kaka mutter say before going out of the car as well.

Nathan stared murderously at me.

'i'm sorry. I slipped. I swear it wasnt intentional' i fidgeted.

'i'm coming back for you' he rushed down of the car as well.

I hesitated for a moment before i also came down. I saw them arguing by the side of the road. Kaka was trying to pull Kainene from entering the cab Kainene had already flagged down and Nathan was trying to plead. Tears stung my eyes. Was i really badluck? How do i solve this mess now?

I moved close to them and Kainene stopped struggling. She stared daggers at me 'you! You've finally gotten what you wanted abi? You've always wanted Nathan right? Fine! Now you have him! Eat him! Screw him, do whatever you like with him, i dont care anymore!' Nathan tried coming closer to her but she pointed a warning finger at him 'dont you dare! Dont you dare come close! Its over between us, do you hear? Go back to your babymama, your bleeping pregnant mistress, i dont want you anywhere near me any longer, you bloody cheat of a liar!' she barked.

'baby you cant do this. We cant stay apart. Remember Kainene...remember...Kaka please talk to your friend, you know what i'm talking about' Nathan pleaded.

'it didnt work! The blood convenant isnt working!' Kainene blurted out. I grimaced. Blood convenant? In this modern day and age? Was somebody bleeping kidding me?

'Kainene...' Kaka gasped holding her.

Kainene shrugged it off 'leave me alone! That blood convenant holds no power. Because if it does, you wouldnt have been screwing your mistress even going as far as impregnating her without you running mad! So leaving you wont make me run mad because you've been bleeping behind my back!'

'i've not been sleeping with anybody Nene!' Nathan said throwing a fist in the air, then he forcefully held my hand 'common! Tell them the whole truth, tell them i'm innocent! I'm not responsible for this pregnancy, please tell Nene that!'

I winced 'Nathan...you're...you're...hurting me'

'shut up and say the truth!' he barked.

By this time, Kainene and Kaka had already entered the cab and zoomed off.

'fvck!' Nathan cursed and ran after the car. He couldnt match the pace and he soon came running towards me. He had so much fury and anger in his eyes and i knew what was coming next if i didnt run. And so i took to my heels, he kept chasing me. I ran as fast as i could.
I ran like i've never ran before. Nathan was a mad man. I didnt know what he'd do to me if he caught up with me.
As i ran along the street in the night, i kept screaming for help. The streets were lonely (i had already ran all the way from the major road into the first street i could find) except a few people here and there who instead of helping me watched us.

I suddenly became weak. My legs could no longer carry me. I still tried.

'Nathan please i'm sorry! It was never intended! Please forgive me!' i begged weakly as i ran. I could hear his pants behind me and i knew it was only a matter of time before he held me.

Suddenly i felt dizzy. It felt as if the world was revolving around me. I felt like collapsing. I stumbled on something and i fell.
But i didnt fall to the floor. I fell into someone's arms. Blackout.

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:20pm On Jan 30, 2017
Thanks 4 dis. U neva disappoint
Re: Red Ashes by PoliticalThuG(m): 8:20pm On Jan 30, 2017
Wish This Lazy Boy Would Update Tarasha Like This Woman. A Woman With Kids. Imagine Reading An Update Per Week.. How That Story Go Be Sef. Mthwww
Re: Red Ashes by twinkiet(f): 8:24pm On Jan 30, 2017
Chumzypinky:

Jesus! For my thread?
..... So what,we are in love and that is all matter..... And besides you are my mum so automatically i own this thread too
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:48pm On Jan 30, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
Wish This Lazy Boy Would Update Tarasha Like This Woman. A Woman With Kids. Imagine Reading An Update Per Week.. How That Story Go Be Sef. Mthwww
wait oo, am i going blind? Is dat a compliment?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:48pm On Jan 30, 2017
twinkiet:
..... So what,we are in love and that is all matter..... And besides you are my mum so automatically i own this thread too
so dats hw u'll be bringing boys to my house abi?
Re: Red Ashes by yorhmienerd(m): 8:58pm On Jan 30, 2017
PoliticalThuG:
Wish This Lazy Boy Would Update Tarasha Like This Woman. A Woman With Kids. Imagine Reading An Update Per Week.. How That Story Go Be Sef. Mthwww
Guy cheesy

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