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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Red Ashes by oluangelkay(f): 5:33pm On Feb 01, 2017
pls can we start punishing chuks now? He has bitten more than he can chew

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 7:21pm On Feb 01, 2017
Chumzypinky:

lol, how is my daughter-inlaw doing?

She's foine o, showing off her climbing skills. Hope your day was great? Greetings to your family.
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 7:27pm On Feb 01, 2017
sandra2winstar:
Abeg, shey no BASTARD come criticize this thread again? If them dey, MaMa abeg halla me ASAP. We don't need a GUTTER RASCAL on this thread. F*ck them critics. MAMA pinky I gat your bark like say you be TREE. #won_o_bi_ya_enibody.
bae,omo baddest,dats da spirit.bl*ep 'em' all
Re: Red Ashes by Odochime(m): 9:19pm On Feb 01, 2017
Finally ayaff finally catch up with you after a sleepless night. Twas worth it Sha. Ham really henjoying d show. Ama relax and continue sipping ma biq cola. Good work ma'am
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:35pm On Feb 01, 2017
KAINENE.
MummyM was calling. I wondered if i should pick the call. Nathan and i were no longer together. I sighed. The three days i'd spent without Nathan was hell. I missed him like crazy.

There were times when i was tempted to call or even text him. But then, when i thought about his betrayal, i thought otherwise.

'hello mummy'

'hmm Claire, is this how its going to be now?'

'mummy...'

'you cant even call. Neither could you pay me a visit. You're bluffing me now abi?'

'mummy, its not...'

'so if you and Nathan breaks up, then i have to suffer for it as well right?'

I sighed.

'you couldnt even say you should come and meet me. See Claire, i want to see you here in thirty minutes, i wont lose a daughter because of you and Nathan's foolishness, never! Thirty minutes! If i should be the one coming to meet you, then consider yourself dead!'

'yes mummy' i said before she hung up.

****

MABEL.
I'd just come back from the police station which had become my second house since Chioma got arrested.

When i had been told Chioma's offence, i had been shocked to the core. I couldnt believe Chioma would want to do something like that.

Nathan's wierd behaviour was beginning to worry me. He never came out of his room. Sometimes, i percieved the smell of cigarettes from his room and i wondered...does he smoke?

TBC.



Pls guys, in as much as i would have loved to complete this episode, i am so tired and exhausted, bt i promise it will be completed by tomorow morning, pls understood. I spent almost all my time running upandan at FMC today.

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Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 9:43pm On Feb 01, 2017
Mummy chumzy said she is tired nd can't update....but wat is she doing viewing d story na. undecided...go to za oza room nd rob bros chest la...

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Re: Red Ashes by angelliza(f): 10:49pm On Feb 01, 2017
Chumzypinky:
KAINENE.
MummyM was calling. I wondered if i should pick the call. Nathan and i were no longer together. I sighed. The three days i'd spent without Nathan was hell. I missed him like crazy.

There were times when i was tempted to call or even text him. But then, when i thought about his betrayal, i thought otherwise.

'hello mummy'

'hmm Claire, is this how its going to be now?'

'mummy...'

'you cant even call. Neither could you pay me a visit. You're bluffing me now abi?'

'mummy, its not...'

'so if you and Nathan breaks up, then i have to suffer for it as well right?'

I sighed.

'you couldnt even say you should come and meet me. See Claire, i want to see you here in thirty minutes, i wont lose a daughter because of you and Nathan's foolishness, never! Thirty minutes! If i should be the one coming to meet you, then consider yourself dead!'

'yes mummy' i said before she hung up.

****

MABEL.
I'd just come back from the police station which had become my second house since Chioma got arrested.

When i had been told Chioma's offence, i had been shocked to the core. I couldnt believe Chioma would want to do something like that.

Nathan's wierd behaviour was beginning to worry me. He never came out of his room. Sometimes, i percieved the smell of cigarettes from his room and i wondered...does he smoke?

TBC.



Pls guys, in as much as i would have loved to complete this episode, i am so tired and exhausted, bt i promise it will be completed by tomorow morning, pls understood. I spent almost all my time running upandan at FMC today.



Evening ma Y FMC hope no problem? The lord is your strength
Re: Red Ashes by ladyverere(f): 10:59pm On Feb 01, 2017
Chumzypinky:
KAINENE.
MummyM was calling. I wondered if i should pick the call. Nathan and i were no longer together. I sighed. The three days i'd spent without Nathan was hell. I missed him like crazy.

There were times when i was tempted to call or even text him. But then, when i thought about his betrayal, i thought otherwise.

'hello mummy'

'hmm Claire, is this how its going to be now?'

'mummy...'

'you cant even call. Neither could you pay me a visit. You're bluffing me now abi?'

'mummy, its not...'

'so if you and Nathan breaks up, then i have to suffer for it as well right?'

I sighed.

'you couldnt even say you should come and meet me. See Claire, i want to see you here in thirty minutes, i wont lose a daughter because of you and Nathan's foolishness, never! Thirty minutes! If i should be the one coming to meet you, then consider yourself dead!'

'yes mummy' i said before she hung up.

****

MABEL.
I'd just come back from the police station which had become my second house since Chioma got arrested.

When i had been told Chioma's offence, i had been shocked to the core. I couldnt believe Chioma would want to do something like that.

Nathan's wierd behaviour was beginning to worry me. He never came out of his room. Sometimes, i percieved the smell of cigarettes from his room and i wondered...does he smoke?

TBC.



Pls guys, in as much as i would have loved to complete this episode, i am so tired and exhausted, bt i promise it will be completed by tomorow morning, pls understood. I spent almost all my time running upandan at FMC today.



Doh my fine Mama. U really dey try o. We understand so make U rest. I know how it feels dear. God bless U real good geh.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 11:05pm On Feb 01, 2017
angelliza:


Evening ma Y FMC hope no problem? The lord is your strength
ante-natal runs
Re: Red Ashes by hatchetman(m): 1:15am On Feb 02, 2017
ladyverere:



Doh my fine Mama. U really dey try o. We understand so make U rest. I know how it feels dear. God bless U real good geh.
c as u quote d tin make me tink say na update
Re: Red Ashes by hatchetman(m): 1:16am On Feb 02, 2017
angelliza:



Evening ma Y FMC hope no problem? The lord is your strength
take am easy na
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 6:51am On Feb 02, 2017
Those dat r quoting d whole episode making me think its update ...if ah release something for una ehhhhh? undecided
Re: Red Ashes by angelliza(f): 7:47am On Feb 02, 2017
Chumzypinky:
ante-natal runs
Ma'am the Lord is you strength
Re: Red Ashes by angelliza(f): 7:49am On Feb 02, 2017
hatchetman:
take am easy na
Lolzzz Am taking it Easy
Re: Red Ashes by hatchetman(m): 8:42am On Feb 02, 2017
angelliza:
Lolzzz Am taking it Easy
tank u
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 12:31pm On Feb 02, 2017
wizsolzy:
Those dat r quoting d whole episode making me think its update ...if ah release something for una ehhhhh? undecided
hmm, wetin u wan release? Hope say no be wetin i dey think oo
Re: Red Ashes by felapikin(m): 1:01pm On Feb 02, 2017
Kainene dey eef up Big time I swear!!!
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 1:05pm On Feb 02, 2017
Chumzypinky:

hmm, wetin u wan release? Hope say no be wetin i dey think oo


oooooohhhh tel me watin u dey think cheesy cheesy cheesy grin grin grin
Re: Red Ashes by rachealfst(f): 1:19pm On Feb 02, 2017
The Lord is your strength dear sis. Please take care of you.
Re: Red Ashes by ladyverere(f): 2:15pm On Feb 02, 2017
grin
hatchetman:
c as u quote d tin make me tink say na update

grin
Re: Red Ashes by ladyverere(f): 2:18pm On Feb 02, 2017
tongue
wizsolzy:
Those dat r quoting d whole episode making me think its update ...if ah release something for una ehhhhh? undecided

Wetin U wan release wizzy?
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 2:23pm On Feb 02, 2017
ladyverere:
tongue

Wetin U wan release wizzy?

hmmmmmm ladyverere... ur name dey smell waffi gal... i can now see clearly wit my okpolo eyes shocked dat all d ladies here yaf spoil.. eyaf zoin badt gang eya want to know wat i wat to release..prease come to za oza room undecided
Re: Red Ashes by Baytech(m): 2:24pm On Feb 02, 2017
Ma, buh u said u'll continue ds mrng...

Waiting 4d updates pls...

Tnx... More data nd better service 2ur device(s)...

:-D :-D :-D
Re: Red Ashes by jkaro(m): 2:47pm On Feb 02, 2017
I started from page 0 down to page 74 and still counting oo....i started reading this since yesterday and today I am in the 74 page. I thought it was the last page. hmmm

I won't fail to appreciate a good work, bae u not doing bad with this stuff.

u be warri bae Shey....?
me too'‹
Re: Red Ashes by Baytech(m): 4:39pm On Feb 02, 2017
Nice work I've ever READED... Pls dnt chk ur dictionary 4dat o [[wink]]

Chumzypinky:


Mummy Pinky Oyoyo!
Mummy Pinky Oyoyo!!
Mummy Pinky Oyoyo!!!

I must commend your hard work seriously... You're really trying...

Waiting plsssssssss...

HIS201, 203 and 205 Assignment on ma "TABLE..." And RedAshes207 on my "HEAD..."


lol.........

Just that I'm almost getting out of Popcorn here and still waiting for the next update...

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 5:42pm On Feb 02, 2017
I've refreshed and refreshed this page tire. Ahh mummy I'm tired of longer Drinking(nl stop changing my words biko) throat for more. See me frying plantain and pwessn fone, make your tori no send me back to my papa house ni o. I've milzed you biko.

Ahh na my tatafoo be this o, so someborri want to name him shild GREGORY ni wen e grow , no allow my Nigeria mama's spoilet it for you to GERINGORLI
Re: Red Ashes by Ikigia: 6:19pm On Feb 02, 2017
Chumzypinky, keep it coming..
Re: Red Ashes by Ikigia: 7:22pm On Feb 02, 2017
Chumzypinky:

ante-natal runs
It will surely end in praise. amen
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:47pm On Feb 02, 2017
Gud evening frends.
Hw are you guys?
Sori for nt updating today. Its very unlike me, i know. I was admitted in St Joseph today oo. I almost fainted 2day at d office oo.
I dnt knw hw lng it will take for me 2 recova bt i pray its by tomorrow. I'm off work for a week. Ds week, i'll make sure i reach 89% of dis story. Thanks for understand.
Prettyhurts mama, i sight you

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Re: Red Ashes by aprilwise(m): 8:03pm On Feb 02, 2017
sorry wishing u fast recovering and good health. take good care of yourself.
Re: Red Ashes by ladyverere(f): 8:15pm On Feb 02, 2017
Pls accept my sympathy dear. Praying for ur quick recovery.
Re: Red Ashes by jkaro(m): 8:46pm On Feb 02, 2017
Chumzypinky:
Gud evening frends.
Hw are you guys?
Sori for nt updating today. Its very unlike me, i know. I was admitted in St Joseph today oo. I almost fainted 2day at d office oo.
I dnt knw hw lng it will take for me 2 recova bt i pray its by tomorrow. I'm off work for a week. Ds week, i'll make sure i reach 89% of dis story. Thanks for understand.
Prettyhurts mama, i sight you

I wish u quick recovery.

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