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Re: The New Girl by zeko172(m): 12:22pm On Mar 12
Nice work man, I just hope this piece would some how put Susan on her knees for Daniel
Re: The New Girl by Treasure17(m): 1:18pm On Mar 13
I don't foresee Suzan accepting his apology with ordinary flowers. If she does, then Suzan has issues. Thanks for the update.
Re: The New Girl by XionTemmy(m): 7:36pm On Mar 13
Nice ...I hope susan doesn't fall into his trap again
Re: The New Girl by Asemark: 10:39am On Mar 15
face to face
Daniel turned off the ignition of the car as he parked in the compound of their apartment. He laid back on the chair and sighed as he thought how futile his effort was to uncover the true identity of Kelvin. He still had a gutsy feeling that Kelvin was behind Susan tears and he didn't know why, even as he met a roadblock this time, he was still adamant to expose him to her.
He got out of the car, locked it and walked into the house. He opened the door to his room and met his friends there on his video game. He was too downcast to say anything about it and just sat at the edge of his bed.
"Hey, Daniel," Clement called out as he gave the controller to Felix and went to where Daniel sat. "What's up? Anything?"
"Nothing really. The Kelvin that is dating Jenny isn't the same one dating Susan," Daniel replied, his head still bowed.
"Ooh... So what are you gonna do now?" Clement asked.
"I still have to expose this guy for sure. I can't let him continue fooling around with Susan," Daniel stated.
Clement sighed, "Okay, Daniel, now this is me being serious. I think you're getting too obsessed with trying to catch Kelvin cheating on Susan and I think it might make you not to focus on other things."
"What! You must you joking. What makes you think I'm getting obsessed with Kelvin's case?"
"Oh wait, let me see," Clement said sarcastically rubbing his hand on his chin. "What about you lying to your sister that you truly wanted to see her boyfriend so you guys could get along when we all know that wasn't the case at all."
"Erm... That's not... Well..."
"Just imagine how disappointed Jenny would be when she finds out you used her," Clement stated with a raised eyebrow.
Daniel sighs, " Okay, I get your point. But what do you propose I do? Just sit down and mind my business?"
"Well... Yeah. Just let things play out. Believe me, nothing is hidden under the sun forever. If he's truly playing her, the truth would eventually be revealed one day."
Daniel thought about it for a moment and concluded that Clement was right. He was indeed getting too obsessed with the matter and it might eventually distract him from other important things.
"You're right men! I think I'll let things play along."
Clement nodded and patted him on the shoulder. He went to where Edwin and Felix were busy on the console.
"Unbelievable. Felix, when I gave you the controller, I was one goal up and now, Edwin has scored two goals," Clement nagged.
"That's what you get when you let a loser play for you," Edwin stated and laughed.
"Don't worry, Clement, I'll soon equalize," Felix said.
"Ha! I would like to see you try," Edwin stated.
Daniel stood up and walked out of the room. He brought out of his phone and dialled Susan's number.
"Hello, Susan," he said as she picked up.
"Hey, Daniel. How are you?"
"I'm fine. What about you?"
"Well... I'm okay. Thanks for asking."
"Okay. So I was thinking, do you mind if we both grabbed lunch together after class tomorrow?"
"Sure. That would be great."
"Alright. It's a date then."
********************************
Susan sat alone on a table in the school cafeteria clad on a yellow knee length gown. She pulled out her phone her purse and dialled Daniel's number.
"Hello, Daniel," she began as he picked up.
"Hey, Susan. I'm very sorry for not being there. After the class, Mr. Ojo said I should carry the manuals to his office. I've done that now and I'm on my way. I should be there in about 5mins time."
"Alright. I'll be waiting." She stated and ended the call. She put her phone back in her purse and as she raised her head up, she met Kelvin staring down at her holding a bouquet of flowers and a package.
"Hi, love?" Kelvin greeted with a sly smile.
"Kelvin? What are you doing here?" Susan asked a bit perplexed.
"Ah, c'mon," he said before sitting on the chair opposite hers. "Is it bad for your boyfriend to meet you randomly?"
"Ooh... Right. My boyfriend."
Kelvin smiles, "You look stunning love."
"Thank you. Now, what do you want?"
"Okay... I know you're still angry over what you saw when you came to my house. I just want to let you know that I'm very sorry. That was the old me. I have changed and I want you to give me another chance."
"Oh... Really?"
"Yeah... I was actually going to your place until I saw your angelic figure here. And look at what I got you," he said and drop the bouquet of flowers on the table and brought out a box of chocolate from the package. "I got these for you to show how much I still love and adore you. I still need you in my life baby. I'm sorry and I promise it won't happen again."
Susan took the flowers, examining it as she said, "You know Kelvin, all the events that has happened lately has made me realize something about our relationship."
"Yes... And what is it?" Kelvin asked, beaming a huge smile across his face.
"That we are not meant to be together," she said and threw the flower at his face. "Let's break up."
It took 0.2 seconds for Kelvin expression to change. He wore and gloomy look as she made that statement. "No, Susan, you can't do that to us. I love you. I need you. Without you, I don't think I can survive."
"You know, that's why we are humans. We adapt whenever we are faced with any shortcomings or tragedy. So don't worry, you will naturally learn how to adapt without me," she stated and smiled.
"Look Susan," he said as he grabbed her arm. "Don't do this to me. I love you..."
"Let go off me Kelvin," she said as she struggled to loosen his grip on her.
"Just give me another chance. I will make it up to you. I lo..."
"What's going on here?" A masculine voice boomed beside them.
Kelvin turned around and found Daniel staring angrily at him. He loosen his grip on her and stood up. He then stood face to face with Daniel.
******************************
Woah! Cool! Kelvin is about to deliver some whooping!!�
Sorry Daniel fans but I'm afraid Kelvin is about to deliver the whooping to Daniel
Or maybe it's Daniel that's gonna deliver the
whooping�
Stay tuned to find out!
So what do you guys think of this chapter and what do you think is gonna happen in the next?
Drop them comments people!
And who do think is gonna beat up who?

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Re: The New Girl by Samuelsmart22(m): 4:26pm On Mar 15
Awwnn OP, it took you so long to release this episode. Why?? Nice episode Op, I think Daniel is knocking out Kelvin. lol Op, please release more episodes real soon. Suspense is killing us *weeps*
Re: The New Girl by Asemark: 7:38pm On Mar 15
Samuelsmart22:
Awwnn OP, it took you so long to release this episode. Why??
Nice episode Op, I think Daniel is knocking out Kelvin. lol
Op, please release more episodes real soon. Suspense is killing us *weeps*
you guys are not encouraging lack of comments shows you are not enjoying the story M planing on stopping it
Re: The New Girl by izaray(f): 8:05pm On Mar 15
Kelvin should just get out jare

Thanks for the update
Re: The New Girl by genius43(m): 8:35pm On Mar 15
Asemark:

you guys are not encouraging lack of comments shows you are not enjoying the story M planing on stopping it

Please don't stop ooo the comments will come don't worry
Re: The New Girl by Toyeebah04: 9:00pm On Mar 15
An amazing writeup
Re: The New Girl by Simplicitymayor: 11:36pm On Mar 15
Eerh! stop wetin? i am a die hard follower of diz story pls don't mind all these ghost readers! #ASEMARK_CARRY_GO
Re: The New Girl by Samuelsmart22(m): 9:08am On Mar 16
Asemark:

you guys are not encouraging lack of comments shows you are not enjoying the story M planing on stopping it
OP, we are so sorry. I bet alot of us are reading ur story even with ghost readers. Few are the ones commenting. But as you've said ur mind now, we promise we'll double up our comments and encouragements henceforth. Please forgive us and continue our great story. Well done OP. More grease.
Re: The New Girl by Samuelsmart22(m): 9:21am On Mar 16
To my fellow lovers, readers of this story and great fans of #Asemark. Please let us always encourage our Op everytime. Our encouragements and comments are what's he needs as feedback from us. He's honestly doing a great job. Whenever we notice he's not consistent on here, let's drop messages here or send Pms to him just to check up on him. With that he'll know we really do care. Please let's change o. *Lol*. God bless yha all. Op, please fire on
Re: The New Girl by zeko172(m): 10:54am On Mar 16
Asemark so you want to declare this wonderful piece inconclusive... Better don't try it o. Please mention me when you drop the next episode
Re: The New Girl by Ann2012(f): 11:13am On Mar 16
Thanks for the update
Re: The New Girl by skubido(m): 3:02pm On Mar 16
Asemark:

you guys are not encouraging lack of comments shows you are not enjoying the story M planing on stopping it


OP shey u dey play ni abi wetin, omo no dey reason us with ur stopping tinz ooo, NOTE if u dey update very well pple go comment na. No do anyhow for here ooo.


Tanks for the update..
Re: The New Girl by iamgprince(m): 4:41pm On Mar 16
This is an interesting story. thanks for the update op and please be consistent with the updates
Re: The New Girl by Treasure17(m): 5:45pm On Mar 16
Asemark:

you guys are not encouraging lack of comments shows you are not enjoying the story M planing on stopping it
Don't stop please.. Let kelvin and Daniel exchange punches abeg. thanks for the update.
Re: The New Girl by jrapkiss(m): 1:34am On Mar 17
every body reading this trend is enjoying it but find it hard to comment bcus it took u long to update episodes so pls try to keep our suspense short a bit.

in fact this is the best story I have come across in this site....trust me I love your work
Re: The New Girl by do4luv14(m): 4:42am On Mar 17
Asemark:

you guys are not encouraging lack of comments shows you are not enjoying the story M planing on stopping it


stop wetin,
look very well bro, its the slow part of update, and the lenghty time it took to arrive,
that's making fans to lost faith gradually,
but we still dry here,

so you should try update atlst twice weekly
Re: The New Girl by jrapkiss(m): 8:50pm On Mar 20
pls na asemark I can't wait to read next episode
more grease to your elbow bro
Re: The New Girl by Remite011(m): 10:11pm On Mar 20
Asemark:

you guys are not encouraging lack of comments shows you are not enjoying the story M planing on stopping it

stop wetin, after you don't turn me to night with wey dey watch over dashboard every minute for notification, abeg I and my entire crew dey follow u big time, we gat ur back bro, just keep it flowing and the encouragement follows pronto
Re: The New Girl by Taniaa(f): 2:20am On Mar 21
Asemark:
face to face
Daniel turned off the ignition of the car as he parked in the compound of their apartment. He laid back on the chair and sighed as he thought how futile his effort was to uncover the true identity of Kelvin. He still had a gutsy feeling that Kelvin was behind Susan tears and he didn't know why, even as he met a roadblock this time, he was still adamant to expose him to her.
He got out of the car, locked it and walked into the house. He opened the door to his room and met his friends there on his video game. He was too downcast to say anything about it and just sat at the edge of his bed.
"Hey, Daniel," Clement called out as he gave the controller to Felix and went to where Daniel sat. "What's up? Anything?"
"Nothing really. The Kelvin that is dating Jenny isn't the same one dating Susan," Daniel replied, his head still bowed.
"Ooh... So what are you gonna do now?" Clement asked.
"I still have to expose this guy for sure. I can't let him continue fooling around with Susan," Daniel stated.
Clement sighed, "Okay, Daniel, now this is me being serious. I think you're getting too obsessed with trying to catch Kelvin cheating on Susan and I think it might make you not to focus on other things."
"What! You must you joking. What makes you think I'm getting obsessed with Kelvin's case?"
"Oh wait, let me see," Clement said sarcastically rubbing his hand on his chin. "What about you lying to your sister that you truly wanted to see her boyfriend so you guys could get along when we all know that wasn't the case at all."
"Erm... That's not... Well..."
"Just imagine how disappointed Jenny would be when she finds out you used her," Clement stated with a raised eyebrow.
Daniel sighs, " Okay, I get your point. But what do you propose I do? Just sit down and mind my business?"
"Well... Yeah. Just let things play out. Believe me, nothing is hidden under the sun forever. If he's truly playing her, the truth would eventually be revealed one day."
Daniel thought about it for a moment and concluded that Clement was right. He was indeed getting too obsessed with the matter and it might eventually distract him from other important things.
"You're right men! I think I'll let things play along."
Clement nodded and patted him on the shoulder. He went to where Edwin and Felix were busy on the console.
"Unbelievable. Felix, when I gave you the controller, I was one goal up and now, Edwin has scored two goals," Clement nagged.
"That's what you get when you let a loser play for you," Edwin stated and laughed.
"Don't worry, Clement, I'll soon equalize," Felix said.
"Ha! I would like to see you try," Edwin stated.
Daniel stood up and walked out of the room. He brought out of his phone and dialled Susan's number.
"Hello, Susan," he said as she picked up.
"Hey, Daniel. How are you?"
"I'm fine. What about you?"
"Well... I'm okay. Thanks for asking."
"Okay. So I was thinking, do you mind if we both grabbed lunch together after class tomorrow?"
"Sure. That would be great."
"Alright. It's a date then."
********************************
Susan sat alone on a table in the school cafeteria clad on a yellow knee length gown. She pulled out her phone her purse and dialled Daniel's number.
"Hello, Daniel," she began as he picked up.
"Hey, Susan. I'm very sorry for not being there. After the class, Mr. Ojo said I should carry the manuals to his office. I've done that now and I'm on my way. I should be there in about 5mins time."
"Alright. I'll be waiting." She stated and ended the call. She put her phone back in her purse and as she raised her head up, she met Kelvin staring down at her holding a bouquet of flowers and a package.
"Hi, love?" Kelvin greeted with a sly smile.
"Kelvin? What are you doing here?" Susan asked a bit perplexed.
"Ah, c'mon," he said before sitting on the chair opposite hers. "Is it bad for your boyfriend to meet you randomly?"
"Ooh... Right. My boyfriend."
Kelvin smiles, "You look stunning love."
"Thank you. Now, what do you want?"
"Okay... I know you're still angry over what you saw when you came to my house. I just want to let you know that I'm very sorry. That was the old me. I have changed and I want you to give me another chance."
"Oh... Really?"
"Yeah... I was actually going to your place until I saw your angelic figure here. And look at what I got you," he said and drop the bouquet of flowers on the table and brought out a box of chocolate from the package. "I got these for you to show how much I still love and adore you. I still need you in my life baby. I'm sorry and I promise it won't happen again."
Susan took the flowers, examining it as she said, "You know Kelvin, all the events that has happened lately has made me realize something about our relationship."
"Yes... And what is it?" Kelvin asked, beaming a huge smile across his face.
"That we are not meant to be together," she said and threw the flower at his face. "Let's break up."
It took 0.2 seconds for Kelvin expression to change. He wore and gloomy look as she made that statement. "No, Susan, you can't do that to us. I love you. I need you. Without you, I don't think I can survive."
"You know, that's why we are humans. We adapt whenever we are faced with any shortcomings or tragedy. So don't worry, you will naturally learn how to adapt without me," she stated and smiled.
"Look Susan," he said as he grabbed her arm. "Don't do this to me. I love you..."
"Let go off me Kelvin," she said as she struggled to loosen his grip on her.
"Just give me another chance. I will make it up to you. I lo..."
"What's going on here?" A masculine voice boomed beside them.
Kelvin turned around and found Daniel staring angrily at him. He loosen his grip on her and stood up. He then stood face to face with Daniel.
******************************
Woah! Cool! Kelvin is about to deliver some whooping!!�
Sorry Daniel fans but I'm afraid Kelvin is about to deliver the whooping to Daniel
Or maybe it's Daniel that's gonna deliver the
whooping�
Stay tuned to find out!
So what do you guys think of this chapter and what do you think is gonna happen in the next?
Drop them comments people!
And who do think is gonna beat up who?
Update
Re: The New Girl by izaray(f): 10:53am On Mar 21
Upate oooo
Re: The New Girl by Treasure17(m): 12:06pm On Mar 21
Taniaa:
Update

Re: The New Girl by Ann2012(f): 5:21pm On Mar 21
Update pls
Re: The New Girl by Samuelsmart22(m): 10:16pm On Mar 21
Op Asemark, please comma update oo. We're thirsty, comma quench our thirsts with updates cheesy
Re: The New Girl by Asemark: 12:42pm On Mar 22
Moving on
He clenched his fist as their gaze tore each others eyeballs. None of them were willing to back down. Kelvin then realized what he was up against as he sized Daniel up from head to toe.
He smirked, "Look who has suddenly grown balls...just because of a girl," he thought and looked at Susan.
"Absolutely nothing," he replied and walked away leaving behind the box of chocolate and flowers he bought for her on the floor.
Daniel watched him disappear into the crowd before he brought his attention to Susan. He sat on the chair Kelvin had made vacant and plastered a smile on his face.
"Hi," he greeted.
"Hey," Susan replied with a carefree tone looking downcast.
"Sorry, I was late. Mr. Ojo just wouldn't let me be."
"It's okay."
"You're looking amazing today," Daniel stated. "I love your dress."
Susan face brightened up as he made that statement, "Thanks."
"So, what was that all about? Why were you struggling with him?"
"It's a long story. I don't want to bore you with all the details."
"No. It's fine. I wanna hear it and I'm sure it won't be a bore," Daniel stated and smiled.
Susan sighs, "Okay. He was mad because I broke up with him."
"What? Broke up with him" Daniel asked a bit puzzled. Susan merely nodded.
"Why?" Daniel asked. "What happened?"
"Well," Susan began and leaned towards the table with both hands on it. "I caught him sleeping with another girl."
"What? How could he do that to someone like you?" He asked but Susan didn't reply. She looked downcast and remained motionless. She promised herself not be affected by what Kelvin did, but she telling Daniel now brought back the bad memories she had of him in that room and she just wanted it to just disappear from her mind.
"Hey Susan," Daniel called out in a light masculine tone. She looked up to see him smiling at her. He stretched forward his hands and held hers. "I have a feeling you are still hurting over what he did to you, which is fine because you truly loved him. But what I wanna tell you is that you can't go through this alone because you have me." He held her hands a bit more tight. "And I just want you to know that I'll be with you through this recovering times."
Susan had never heard anything more sweet from a guy in all life. She looked in his eyes and saw sincerity. The sincerity that said he meant every word of what he just said and she didn't know until now that those were the words she needed to hear.
She smiled and nodded, "Thank you, Daniel," her voice was soft and low as she tried to fight back the tear that was beginning to form in her eyes.
"Anything for you," Daniel replied as she smiled. Then, an idea hit him. "Susan, will you be free tomorrow night?"
"Yeah, I will."
"Well, I was thinking if we could go on a date. Nothing to formal, just the two of us. And also, that we would start putting old things far behind us. So, do you mind?"
Susan chuckled, "Sure, why not."
"Great. It's a date then."
"Sure."
The last statement gave way to silence between them as they were both caught in each other's eyes. Daniel was just wondering how someone could cheat on her. She was just too good for any guy. Susan was just wondering how she and Daniel had gotten off on the wrong note. How a sweet and caring guy had seem like an arrogant dude to her at first. After a moment of silence, Daniel then remembered that his hands were still on hers.
"Ooh... Sorry I forgot, what do you care for?" He asked as he withdrew his hand from her and got up.
She smiled, "Just meat pie and a drink."
"Coming right up," he said before walking towards the counter.
*********************************
Kelvin walked into his room with so much rage. He met Paul and another guy in the room talking. He dipped his hand in his pocket, brought a wad of money and flung it to Paul.
"That's your money," he said as he slumped on his bed and buried his head in the pillow.
Paul begins to laughs, "I... I... I told you. I knew you couldn't do it."
"Do what?" Paul's friend asked a bit perplexed.
"Do you know Susan? The girl that won the scholarship?"
"Yeah. I have seen her a couple of times."
"Kelvin and I made a bet. He said he would sleep with her before our first year runs out and I told him he couldn't. Now, look at the result," Paul said, wagging the wad of money.
"Unbelievable. Kelvin, what did you not do," Paul's friend asked.
Kelvin raised his head off the pillow, "If I tell you I knew, I would be lying to you, Desmond. Seems the girls' principle is stronger than my charms."
"I thought you said you were gonna use flowers and chocolate to woo her back?" Paul asked in between laughs.
"I did," he stated while taking a sitting position on the bed. "I did but it didn't work. And on top of that, she even broke up with him."
Paul and Desmond began to laugh uncontrollably that Paul falls off the bed. Kelvin just stared at them with utter disgust.
"Men! This girl has broken countless of records since she came to this school," Desmond said.
"You have no idea bro," Paul replied as he regain his composure. "So what are you gonna doing now, Kelvin."
"Her chapter in my life is over," he stated as he laid on the bed. "I'm moving on."
******************************
Aww... Men! Kelvin has given up.
Curse you Daniel�
What do guys think of this chapter?
Happy�
Or
Sad�
As for me, I'm very sad my match will not happen.
What about you?
Drop your comment, let's feel your pulse�
Next chapter comes up very SOON. So STAY TUNED!

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Re: The New Girl by izaray(f): 12:58pm On Mar 22
Kelvin thought he can easily use flower and chocolate to win Susan's love back

What lubbish and nonsense ingredient wink Mtcheeeew

Op thanks for the update, and don't keep us waiting for too long pls
Re: The New Girl by PrudySara(f): 1:01pm On Mar 22
*Dancing* I'm so happy.
Kelvin ntoor gi! tongue tongue
#SanDan2019
Re: The New Girl by bfawzie(m): 1:56pm On Mar 22
im bleeping happy. kelvin bye bye
Re: The New Girl by genius43(m): 2:27pm On Mar 22
Thanks for the update OP.

I hope Daniel don't mess this up.
Re: The New Girl by Treasure17(m): 2:59pm On Mar 22
Good decision from Suzan. Once you are caught cheating, that's all. No second chance. Thanks for the update.

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