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Re: Undecided by abubakarbabang7(m): 1:19am On Mar 29, 2020
Moura7:
Hey guys, from the bottom of my heart, I really appreciate all your comments, I'm really thankful and overwhelmed with gratitude that you guys are squeezing out time to read my piece but I'd really love it if you actually comment on the episodes and your takes on them and not just when you need updates. Most times I don't update frequently cus I'm at loss of ideas but your inputs on the story no matter what helps to shape something in my mind.....Once again thanks Fam
Will do anything you want boss

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Re: Undecided by hidhrhis(m): 7:40am On Mar 29, 2020
Dont worry bro we go comment
Uve gat talent
For u to know people love ur story check your number of views

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Re: Undecided by vicbros75: 7:55am On Mar 29, 2020
Every of ur episode are good and captivating nice piece of writing. Bt try to make dibz stay and nt leave.much love moura
Re: Undecided by quadri956(m): 9:17am On Mar 29, 2020
Moura7:
Hey guys, from the bottom of my heart, I really appreciate all your comments, I'm really thankful and overwhelmed with gratitude that you guys are squeezing out time to read my piece but I'd really love it if you actually comment on the episodes and your takes on them and not just when you need updates. Most times I don't update frequently cus I'm at loss of ideas but your inputs on the story no matter what helps to shape something in my mind.....Once again thanks Fam
Guy you're good, i'm enjoying every piece of this story...keep it up
Re: Undecided by Missmossy(f): 10:23am On Mar 29, 2020
Moura7 I love your diction for starters and for me the most interesting thing about this story is the imagery you use for each of the major characters I can actually see myself visualizing each occurrence.

Expecting more twists and turns all of these makes the plot turn out amazingly better than expected.

I need to stop here before I go into a full analysis of the story grin

Thumbs up and continue the good work

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Re: Undecided by Dibixxx1(m): 11:03am On Mar 29, 2020
Mad stuff bro...so fire.
I think i understand Dibz if he says he wants to leave....I mean having to experience someone you love always mistrust you at every opportunity can be overbearing and let's be honest the guy has tried. I really Olivia for Dibz but they don't seem to be destined to be together...my opinion tho

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Re: Undecided by Sensitivity1254: 1:04pm On Mar 29, 2020
Leaving wont solve shit.

The best way is to find a way to move on and stop giving a hoot about what anyone is saying about him. He has gone to prison and served for a crime he didn't commit. His father became an invalid cos of it. He and his family have paid enough for a crime that he didn't commit.

What is left for him now to do is to live his life. Finish his studies in that school, move around and get involve in activities as much as he can and never for once give anyone the chance or victory of seeing him sad or melancholic cos of their opinion of him.

As for Olivia, if I were him, I will dive head and shoulders into a relationship with her if that's what she want. Use her to get two things. Get back to social life and spite everyone who thinks that I am supposed to hide my face in shame.






Dibixxx1:
Mad stuff bro...so fire.
I think i understand Dibz if he says he wants to leave....I mean having to experience someone you love always mistrust you at every opportunity can be overbearing and let's be honest the guy has tried. I really Olivia for Dibz but they don't seem to be destined to be together...my opinion tho
Re: Undecided by Moura7(m): 3:14pm On Mar 29, 2020
Wow...thanks guys. Keep em coming
Re: Undecided by cassidypat(m): 9:32pm On Mar 29, 2020
First of all whatever dibz is feeling right now is normal...i feel it kinds of make your character come alive..just imagine me being faced with all this drama ....and to top it all he doesn't seem to drown himself in alcohol like most folks would...i dont think fola would do just right going after dibz right now....even with all her guilty feelings...i think a scenerio where she and hailey would have a strong confrontatio would be nice..something that might lead her to digging thing up...from what i read dibz has already giving her something to chew on...with his accusations....now dear Olivia she would have to come true about her feeling she already started the journey at least she needs to come clean about it...from her actions already i expect a good reaction..she already made a strong move by showing her card to dibx..never underestimate the power of a woman..especially one that has ur mumu button in her hands...so now atleast we have a force that can now tilt the imbalances fola caused in dibz life....henry is probably gonna loose his life due to his paranoid nature...lol that is my own personal wish...hahaha

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Re: Undecided by cutieisme(m): 9:50pm On Mar 29, 2020
Poor Henry is about to get dumped .. Fola seem to be deciding their fate . I don’t think she should win .. I think she should loose on both ends

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Re: Undecided by Georgetisan: 9:14am On Mar 30, 2020
good work ..fola hasn't seen anything yet
Re: Undecided by temitope23(m): 1:52pm On Mar 30, 2020
Dem say actor no dey die for film.
Re: Undecided by SugarBerry519(m): 2:01pm On Mar 30, 2020
Please complete this story abeg
Re: Undecided by Moura7(m): 9:24pm On Mar 30, 2020
Dibz's POV

Packing my bag, I reminisced on everything that's happened since i got back here. I remembered how I had hated here so much at first, then I only had one goal which was to play ball and not care about anything else but somewhere along the way I cared less about ball. I began to make friends and finally I began to appreciate the value of people. Before here, I hated it if I even had to share a room with someone, that was how anti social I was but by some magic or whatever it was finally felt that joy of belonging to a pact of friendship. Not everything was gloomy here sha, yes I get that I was also accused wrongly here and did time in prison and all that but I still had the best parts of my life here. Trust me if I ever have a chance of doing it all over again I'd not change being who I am or who I got to become here.(ok maybe I'd change a few things but you get what I mean tho lol).
One by one I remembered every single person I got to meet here. From my family down to everyone even Hailey too. I might not get why she did what she did but the truth is I don't feel that hate I used to feel for her during my first months in jail. I forgive her for everything and hope she would some day finally come clean about what really happened so she have peace of mind too.
Oh Olivia, sweet Olivia who had been nothing but kind to me, still been trying her line but it just keeps going to voicemail. Have left her some apology messages tho and I pray she forgives me and most of all wishes her immense joy and happiness all through her life. I really hate the fact that I can't reciprocate her feelings towards me, it hurts that I've got this precious opportunity to be with someone as sweet ,precious and perfect as her but just can't do anything about it just because the heart wants what it wants and my heart by some unphantomable voodoo or mystery doesn't yearn for her in that way. I could try to go along with what she wants and be with her but that would be unfair to her cus she deserves to be with someone that really really loves her in that way.
Josh my man, my best friend , proud to say I had someone as caring and selfless as him in my life. Josh could hear that I killed someone and he'd say that he was an accomplice too. That's how loyal the dude is. Even as I'm leaving this night that's supposed to be his club opening, he still doesn't know what I'm doing.
Tears roll down my cheeks aa I pause and imagine how he'd feel when he eventually finds out I've left for good.
Crazy Tiara, one of the few females in life. I'm really going to miss all her loco. We weren't really close at first, I just acknowledged her as an acquaintance then cus of Fola but we bonded pretty well during my time in prison and I got to see why after the qhile lot of girls Josh's been with, he's still bananas about Tiara. I wish she takes this well and that she and Josh would stop this their running in circles and just be together once and for all.
Finally, Folakemi, my Fola, my beautiful sweet Fola. The love of my life, the one my heart beats for, I know I should have her now I should but..but...I can't seem to just do that. I wipe the years from my eyes as I go through all our happy moments together. Gosh, that girl brought joy into my life. See I know how I was before, I was living alright but I was just getting by life. Nothing was worthwhile to me, even football I just had to force myself to believe that was my purpose but this girl just came in and it was just life I was finally set free from a cage. I started living, she showered me with love, mad love.
I didn't like myself before honestly, I always portrayed this persona of nonchalance, not caring what people said about me or my appearance, hating people and all that but deep down in the dark corners of my heart i was crying, I was so damn insecure about myself, I saw myself as even ugly and not worth acknowledging not to talk of being accepted as a friend sef. I saw this as the reason why people didn't want to associate with me at all and so I decided to always acting like the person that wasn't interested in any act if socializing at all so I'd be saved the agony of rejection or being ignored. It started since I was a child when people always preferred when sis when they just met us. They hadn't even got to know us and they'd already pick her and just leave me out. When they came to visit they'd first of all ask if she was around and if she wasn't they'd just pretend to stick around for some moments and then they'd make up some silky excuse and just bounce. Then it progresses to my so little friends too, I was the only one that was always exempted from a discussion among my peers.
I begin to sob gently now as all these painful memories that coming back to me. Even my parents were guilty of this act sometimes although I know that they did it unintentionally.
This was the major reason I decided to go leave with my aunt in London.
But you see, Fola saw me, she really really saw me and stuck by me. She brought out the best in me too, I used to think school wasn't for me but she helped me understand school subjects and I got to realize that it wasn't that hard at all.
She really helped me through stuff, including my appearance. My self confidence was uncovered all because of her love towards me so forgive me if after everything she's done, I'm still madly in love with her. Maybe it might be just gratitude for everything she did for me but one thing's for sure which is whatever it is I'm feeling for her I don't want it to ever ever stop.
The gospel truth is if Fola all of a sudden comes here now and begs to stay , I would, but I know that's never going to happen. So I just wish that she's happy , really happy all her life and that she eventually fulfils her dream of dancing. I wish she excels in everything she does and while I don't think I'd be able to fall in love with any other person again, I pray she does find someone that would make her happy and love her well.
Done. My bag's packed and I reach for my phone to call my dad to inform him that I'm ready.

"I'm set dad, have you reached the pilot yet?", I said into the phone sniffing abit.
"Yes son, he'd be in Nigeria in the next hour so I suggest yiu start heading to the hangar now", he said.
"Are you sure about this son?", He asked after some silence on the line.
I hesitate for some time and then I heave a long sigh.
"I am dad, I am", I answer.
"Ok, whatever you decide just know that we are fully behind you. We've got you son. We are expecting you here soon", he said.
"Thanks alot I appreciate the support.see you soon bye", I said hanging up.
Well this is it I guess, the next phase of my life. Goodbye Nigeria......... or so I thought....TBC

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Re: Undecided by Moura7(m): 9:25pm On Mar 30, 2020
Next update in a few hours
Re: Undecided by hidhrhis(m): 9:54pm On Mar 30, 2020
Moura7 i promise u something the day you finish this story
I love this story
Re: Undecided by Moura7(m): 10:26pm On Mar 30, 2020
hidhrhis:
Moura7 i promise u something the day you finish this story
I love this story
Lol thanks alot man...you always comment and I really appreciate bro. Thanks again.
Re: Undecided by Moura7(m): 10:27pm On Mar 30, 2020
Moura7:
Next update in a few hours
So so sorry folks can't update this night again....will do in the morning tho. Still trying to get an angle to Liv's POV
Re: Undecided by dimssy(m): 11:01pm On Mar 30, 2020
Thanks for the updates boss.

I just hope he doesn't leave though
#ThingsThatMakeAMan
Re: Undecided by jupitre(m): 7:29am On Mar 31, 2020
Thanks bro for everything
There's a mystery in life I still don't understand.Why do we hurt those that love us and love those that hurt us�.
A lady like Fola shouldn't be trusted to me.As far as you can believe a story bout me without listening to my own side of it..
Who does that..Maybe Fola
Re: Undecided by bigbauer(m): 4:02pm On Mar 31, 2020
Moura7, great job. I’m enjoying and learning loads from this story.
Re: Undecided by BOMA2912(m): 7:46pm On Mar 31, 2020
Wow, great story boss, got me hooked like coke. Kudos, more power to your elbow.

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Re: Undecided by BOMA2912(m): 7:49pm On Mar 31, 2020
Wow, great story boss, got me hooked like coke. Kudos, more power to your elbow.

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Re: Undecided by Moura7(m): 8:31pm On Mar 31, 2020
BOMA2912:
Wow, great story boss, got me hooked like coke. Kudos, more power to your elbow.
Lol.. thanks man
Re: Undecided by Moura7(m): 8:32pm On Mar 31, 2020
bigbauer:
Moura7, great job. I’m enjoying and learning loads from this story.
Thanks bro
Re: Undecided by Moura7(m): 8:33pm On Mar 31, 2020
jupitre:
Thanks bro for everything
There's a mystery in life I still don't understand.Why do we hurt those that love us and love those that hurt us�.
A lady like Fola shouldn't be trusted to me.As far as you can believe a story bout me without listening to my own side of it..
Who does that..Maybe Fola
Lol....you might have reacted the same if you were presented with such evidence
Re: Undecided by jupitre(m): 8:38pm On Mar 31, 2020
Moura7:

Lol....you might have reacted the same if you were presented with such evidence
Nah.
I try as much as possible not to judge..
Re: Undecided by Ray1251(m): 11:49pm On Mar 31, 2020
nice story
Re: Undecided by Moura7(m): 11:10am On Apr 01, 2020
Olivia

I sat on one of the really high stools at the bar, glass of martini in hand as i contemplated on if I was really going switch to alcohol to get my mind off him.
Josh's club opening was finally here, everything all glamorous and posh but the allure of the bar had been the most appealing to me at the moment as I hadn't left there since. As expected Dibz didn't show up as he said he wouldn't. He's been sending apology messages since but doesn't have the guts to come do it in person , if he was really sorry he'd atleast shown up to do it in person.
The way he had spoken to me the other wasn't nice I know but he's apologized already maybe I should just stop being childish and just accept his apology.
"I'm pretty sure that glass is over freaked out now with the way you've been staring at it", Josh said sliding into the seat beside mine.
I gasped as I totally forgot myself thinking about you know who.
"I feel so jealous now, you know it's my day but a glass of martini is getting more attention than I am", he continued, his face masked in fake anger.
I chuckled a little as I finally took a sip from my drink.
"Oh Josh, I'm really sorry it's just that alot has been on mind lately, pls forgive me", I apologized smiling.
"Nah, it's all good but you should try to loose for a while, that's what tonight's for", he said.
What he said made sense actually, I've been worrying myself lately maybe I just need to let loose and forget everything even if it's just tonight. Yes, I should dance, get drunk and sing very loudly with my horrible voice and who knows, I might just get lucky and get laid...or not.
"You know what J, you're right, I'm gonna live a little tonight", I said , suddenly feeling energized.
I immediately downed the whole contents of another and shouted.
I left Josh who has an amused look on his face as I danced my way to the dancefloor. It's been a while since I felt this euphoric.
At that moment, fireboy's vibration came on and mehn I lost it. I danced my life out, moving my body with reckless abandon. Now I'm not really a good dancer but that is actually the fun of it all, I just had to move my body anyhow and not give a single care at all. I got back to the bar, took another drink and returned to my dancing.
Tonight was all about me, I'm done trying to help someone that doesn't want to be helped. Why I was so invested in helping him out is what I don't know but I know that I actually loved it. Yes I might be so annoyed with him now but anger is so weak compared to the other emotion burning rapidly inside of me.
I don't know how but I just believe his innocent of everything he's being accused of, somehow my heart just knows he's innocent but that's not even the scary part which is that I don't think I'd still back off even if he was guilty, even if he raped or attempted to rape a fellow girl like me, even if he killed someone I don't these feelings in me would let me let him go.
This scares me alot and the truth is I don't even want to try and fight them off because it feels good, it just feels great. I know I shouldn't even be talking to him let alone having feelings for my cousin's ex but I don't care.
There's this unspoken rule that somehow forbids people from dating or having a thing with their sibling's, friend's or even cousin's ex, some sort of code or something but that's not stopping me either. But in a way I think he still has feelings for Fola and I know I should be happy about that but I'm not. The way in which we are just discussing or doing random stuff and he just unconsciously says that it reminded him of Fola and he starts to smile or how he acts when someone mentions her name just pisses me off.
This is someone that abandoned him when he needed her the most and still he's still gushing over her like that. Fola has always had that effect on people sha, even my parents. Don't get me wrong, I really love Fola and there's no bad blood between us, infact we're more like sisters as we've always been inseparable and I've never envied or wanted anything that's hers till now.
Everyone thinks I just hapoened to attend college here because Fola's here too and that might be true in a way but the main reason was to meet Dibz. Yes I knew about him long before now. Fola always flooded her insta story then with pictures and videos of them together and I had fallen hard for Dibz at just a glance.
So when I finally got here and I learned that he was in prison, I felt really heartbroken and when Fola vowed not to visit him at all added to my misery but I didn't do a thing cus I couldn't risk anyone knowing my intentions. I decided to accept it as it was and just get on with my studies so you could imagine the shock I felt when I was in spillover course with 2nd year students when he walked in as a new student. My feelings came alive again and I did everything possible to get him to like me too in the way that I did for him but it seems that's not happening anytime soon with Fola still in the picture. Well that's for another day, tonight's all about me having fun and fun I'm going to get no matter what.

"Hey Liv, can I talk with you for a minute pls", someone shouted to me as I danced. I looked to see that it was Fola, thought she wasn't coming.
"Hey, I think it can wait, I'm having fun right now", I replied dismissively. Suddenly I feel irritated at her presence.
"No it can't wait Liv, pls it's important", She persisted.
"Well that's not my problem", I said, continuing to dance. I felt her sigh and then she tapped me again, harder this time.
"It's about Dibz", she shouted, but that didn't faze me. I danced on.
"Yh, that's none of my business now besides since when did you care about him?, I asked.
"I think he's gone, Liv, like packed bags kinda of gone", she stated and I stopped dancing immediately.
"What do you mean by gone?", I asked softly this time.
"Can we go somewhere quiet and talk?", She said. I nodded and she led me to a quiet and tastefully furnished office which I guess was Josh's.
There, she told me about the call she had from Dibz the night we fought.
"You mean you knew like this would happen and you didn't tell me?", I shouted.
"I'm sorry Liv, I thought I could get him to change his mind, I didn't know he'd leave right away", she apologized.
"Wait, how sure are you that he's actually gone, cus if he's really gone Josh would have told me", I said.
"I don't think Josh knows, I got to his place to try and talk to him but the gateman told me he'd already left, just a few hours before I got there*, she replied.
I chuckled abit as something began to get clear to me.
"So he decides to leave and you suddenly want to stop him, huh? You're the one that told him to leave that always antagonized him and made life hell for him so why the change of heart, Fola why?", I asked, tears forming in my eyes now.
She just looked down and didn't speak.
"Why Fola, answer me, is it because you still love him?", I asked again. Now, she raised her tear filled face to look at me.
" Honestly Liv, I ....I never....I never stopped loving...", She started sobbing.
I felt a hole inside me immediately I understood what she was trying to say, no no no, it can't be, I can't fight my cousin for Dibz's love. It was better when she hated him, she doesn't get to love him now....No!
I wanted to talk but the news on the TV cut me short as the music playing was suddenly removed as 'Breaking news' displayed on the screen. 'What is it this time?', I thought.
"We bring you breaking news now live from the outskirts of Cameroon where a plane crash had occurred. A jet believed to be a bombardier G65 flying from Nigeria had crashed just a few hours after taking off. It was a private jet believed to be carrying a Onyekachi Manuel ,son of Chief Njoku Manuel and heir to the Manuel fortune. That's it for the news for now, We'd back to report if there were any casualties involved. I am Joy New land thanks for watching and have a good night".

I heard a piercing scream from Fola before I felt myself falling and everything went black.....TBC

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Re: Undecided by quadri956(m): 12:10pm On Apr 01, 2020
Damn,the suspense is killing
Re: Undecided by vicbros75: 12:30pm On Apr 01, 2020
Nice piece d suspence is so killing I love it keep it up.more update plz
Re: Undecided by Dibixxx1(m): 8:39pm On Apr 01, 2020
Wow...guy you bad joo.... didn't see that coming

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