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|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by doctorexcel(m): 9:11pm On Aug 11|
Thanks for update but ann seem to hesitate in wiping out perceived danger unlike typical assassins
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by C8t8(m): 9:27pm On Aug 11|
Don't forget we're still in the early chapters of the novel
Just so you know it has a season two
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by C8t8(m): 9:30pm On Aug 11|
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by doctorexcel(m): 5:49am On Aug 12|
C8t8:ok. Patiently observing
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by PenHub: 12:43pm On Aug 12|
Nice story. Following patiently waiting for next
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Khriztarl(f): 3:13pm On Aug 12|
I said it. Incredible ann.
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Adeola25(f): 5:00pm On Aug 12|
See woman power oo. Thanks for the update
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Herbiedeen(m): 10:03pm On Aug 12|
Khriztarl:what did you said
even if you don't said it, na today we know say actor no dey die
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Khriztarl(f): 10:13pm On Aug 12|
Herbiedeen:lol. Actually, my post had nothing to do with the actor dying or not. I just wanted to get a 'yes, you said it' from ann2012. BTW I havn't taken a stand yet between miri and ann. There's a turn out am expecting, maybe after that you can tell me 'actor no dey die'.
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Mummyclieva: 1:07am On Aug 14|
Great job. Hope you finish it.
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by dawno2008(m): 10:35am On Aug 14|
But he said he would
Abi won't you @C8t8.
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Mummyclieva: 9:35pm On Aug 14|
dawno2008:I hope so
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Ismaxx: 10:52am On Aug 15|
nice one op...kip it rolling
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Ismaxx: 10:57am On Aug 15|
pls complete dis story o @c8t8....just kip up d gud work
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by C8t8(m): 9:02pm On Aug 15|
Ismaxx:I will try to
dawno2008:I will, so help me God
Mummyclieva:I hope so
PenHub:Thanks for following
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by duruZed(m): 3:35pm On Aug 16|
C8t8:I dey ur back gidigbam.
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by enirock(m): 6:55pm On Aug 16|
Feed us more. Waiting patiently for more updates.
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by C8t8(m): 6:16pm On Aug 18|
Guys, I hope you forgive me for going AWOL
Was really busy...
But updates will continue to flow in. I will take great care not to delay updates again. Would find time to post updates.
Anyways, anticipate two action-packed episodes tonight, to compensate you guys, you know?
Typing in progress...
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Ann2012(f): 6:44pm On Aug 18|
Moderator, seems enirock was banned from commenting on literature section. Divepen1 pls take note
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by doctorexcel(m): 7:06pm On Aug 18|
Shaun Sir! Eagerly awaiting the two updates
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Khriztarl(f): 10:36pm On Aug 18|
Ann2012:Yes, please. Mods available should do something about it.
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by enirock(m): 10:45pm On Aug 18|
Ann2012:Thanks for this dear. Divepen1, I would love to know why I was banned from this section, so that I don't repeat same mistake. Thanks.
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by C8t8(m): 12:40am On Aug 19|
Ann applied finishing touches to her make-up and stood up from the chair she was seating on. She got hold of the unbearably high heeled sandals on the make up table, bent and slipped them on. She glanced at the large mirror in front of her and smiled. She looked like a sl*t. Perfect!
She reached for a shelf, stooped and pulled out a drawer. She then brought out her favourite Glock 19 pistol and closed the drawer. She twirled the gun round and kissed it.
'Dear baby,' she muttered to the gun. 'Momma is out on her very first shopping and ready to take her baby out. Believe me, you will enjoy tonight.' And she laughed.
She raised her pink wig and put the gun in it. She then wore it back. The wig was designed for such purpose- to hide small pistols, grenades and so on. She had many of the wigs with her, all of various sizes, colours and styles. And each served a different purpose.
She checked her wristwatch, it was exactly eleven thirty. The time to strike! She grabbed a handbag from the same make-up table and walked out of the room, her pink high heels making loud, slapping noises on the floor.
She got out of the house and walked to the new car she just got that very evening. Her previous Venza had been left with the police and she didn't regretted doing so. She should have changed the car a long time ago, it would only bring her problems like the one she encountered today. An assassin who don't want to get caught should make sure he switches cars at will. One operation, one car, one operation, one car.
She looked at the plate number at the back of the car. It was very much fake. She had stocks of fake plate numbers with her she would apply at will on different cars. Now tell me, how could they track a fake plate number to her? Beautifully impossible!
Ann walked to the door and hopped in. She zipped open her handbag and brought out her android device and re-read the message earlier sent to her by Chief. She crammed the address and minimized the message app. She then opened the GPS application and typed in the address. At once, an automated voice came on to her phone and she placed it on her exposed laps as she started the car.
'Move forward,' the voice started commanding...
'We're here!' the voice said and the GPS app closed. Ann gazed at the fenced building in front of her. It was a shady and dirty building. Weeds occupied the ground leading to the gate. Thick grass and parasitic weeds twirled all over the fenced walls and the rusty metallic gate. Behind the gate, a generator hummed and sounds laughter came occassionally.
Ann reversed the car backwards until it was reasonably far from the building and she stopped. She picked her phone and read the message again, confining her attention to the label of the package. The label was tagged SPECIMEN X0F. Whatever that meant, Ann thought as she memorised the label. She looked at the time again, it was three minutes to midnight.
When the midnight alarm beeped, she saw the gate of the building been opened and she knew the men were getting ready to move. She brought out a bubble gum from her handbag and unwrapped the cover. She then threw it into her mouth and started chewing. She zipped her handbag close, patted her wigged head and stepped out of the car.
Twisting at unbelievable angles, she started walking seductively towards the building.
In the premises of the building
The huge man blew smoke into the air and placed the cigarette in his mouth again. A generator hummed from a distance and bright bulbs lighted the weedy premises. He watched his men numbering eight loading and carrying out some boxes from the building into a truck. He eyed one suspiciously as he carried a box out, he knew it was the most important box- Specimen X0F- and he needed to make sure it wasn't tampered with. Suddenly, the gate opened and he jumped up. His men froze too as they watched the gate.
A beautiful young lady popped in, dressed in a pink cut out mini gown, impossibly short. The gown was slit at the chest and at the hip area too, revealing parts of her breast and hips respectively. She might as well have been naked, thought the man. With the pink wig on her head, pink high heels and a painted face, she looked no more than a LovePeddler.
The man smirked and beckoned on his men. They walked towards the girl.
'Hey handsomes, care for some fun?' the lady asked, chewing and blowing bubbles non-stop.
'yes baby,' the man said and signalled to his men. If not that time was not on his side, he would have got hold of her and banged her destiny out. But still, he would make sure she doesn't get out of that place alive as he couldn't bear the thought of her going away after seeing what was going on.
At his signal, two of his men walked to her. They were to get hold of her.
Ann watched the truck parked at a distance with boxes all around it with the corner of her eyes. At the same time, she watched two men walking towards her.
She had saw the signal the huge man who looked like he was their boss gave to the men and she knew they were coming to get her. She pushed her right foot forward and balanced her left hand on her waist in a seductive pose as they came nearer. They got to her.
'Ready for fun?' she said as she reached for the button of the nearest one.
'Not yet sl*t,' he said, grabbed her wrists and raised her arms up. The second one then proceeded to do something behind her. The other men including the huge one cheered.
Ann quickly curled her hands and dug her long and artificial nails into the man's eyes which wasn't far from her reach. He left her quickly and clutched his face, yelling in rage and pain. The one behind her saw what happened and tried to fell her. Ann turned to him and rammed her right elbow on his face. The sound of bone breaking was heard as he fell, screaming.
Other six men came running towards her. One holding a knife, another holding a big rod. She swerved and tripped the one holding a knife as he tried to stab her. He fell loudly. Ann grabbed his knife and threw it at one of the men. It dug into his left eye and he fell down, dead. She looked round, the men were holding dangerous weapons and hand combat would not work in this line of fight.
She pulled her wig in a flash and brought out her Glock. Rapidly cocking it, she quickly sent bullets into the guys' bodies, including the ones on the ground.
She looked round again, the huge man was nowhere to be seen. Ann looked round, it would be dangerous to go in search of the package while the man was probably watching her somewhere in the compound.
'Where are you?' she shouted. 'Are you scared of me?'
'Scared my foot! Young sl*t,' came a deep voice from behind the truck and suddenly, bullets started raining at Ann's position.
She dove behind a dirty water drum beside her and started firing at the back of the truck. The man fired back. None could get the other.
After some minutes of continuous shooting, Ann suspected that she was about to run out of bullets and decided to end it once and for all. She removed her high heels, stood up and ran towards the truck. She dodged the bullets as she ran.
She came to the back of the truck and saw the man crouched behind the truck, pointing his gun at her, all the while feeling his pockets for something. Probably he's out of bullets, thought Ann. She quickly pointed her gun at him and didn't hesitate in firing at him.
He fell back, dead.
Ann smiled and started walking to the truck. There was no time to waste. She needed to get the box quickly and vanish. For she knew the police would have been on their way to the place after all the loud gunshots being made at so ungodly an hour.
And she was right.
To be continued
Guys, I know I promised to post two episodes today but it just can't be today. The episodes are very lengthy.
But I will make it up to you guys, I promise
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by C8t8(m): 12:45am On Aug 19|
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Christipsy(m): 8:37am On Aug 19|
Nice update but.........................
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by dawno2008(m): 10:35am On Aug 19|
Thanks for the appetizer
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by doctorexcel(m): 12:21pm On Aug 19|
C8t8:Thanks for the update. Quarter bread is better than none LOL
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by enirock(m): 12:59pm On Aug 19|
Thanks for the update
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by PenHub: 1:15pm On Aug 19|
Nice one. Next episode
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by Khriztarl(f): 3:41pm On Aug 19|
C8t8, you're starving us o. Do u know that? Thanks for the update dearie. Deedee033, owh yes baby this way.
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by C8t8(m): 9:05pm On Aug 19|
|Re: REVENGE (an Action Thriller) by C8t8(m): 9:06pm On Aug 19|
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