Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 11:28pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
hmn Lsofdk: have bn rolling on d floor since, guy you nailed this story. thumbs up. include me for the next story. thanks boss |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 11:16pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
Ay04z: U re one of d best of ur kind...May GOD replenish ur knowledge...in other news nollywood need U in d future...always include ur number or bb pin..we neva can tell anyone might want to use u for a writing contract...but i still want to know d final gudgement of d whole scenario... hmmn |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:56pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
josephos: Classcaptain, U ar the BOMB.
i learnt another important lesson...TO BE PATIENT
some ppl rush out of this thread thinking they have already known the end to the story
i'm very sure nw that their reflex action will prevent them from making the same hasty conclusion next time oga u dey try talk say their Reflex action na Bend down select grade be that Oo ?? |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:53pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
bukatee2015: O.P frm d desk of the judges
You are here by appointed the award of Naija Got Talent season 26 as a winner and also a brand new winner of a peugeot 401  Peugeout 401 ?? una no get Volvo.Volkswagen or keke napep ?? |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:50pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
tosyne2much: I meant "nice thread".. Na typo error  when be say na Woman u dey with ..y u no go dey mistype...U no day use Reflex action ?? |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:42pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
mistarsam: @classcaptain: wen i use my reflex action (apologies to evergran) evaluate ur work, i can say dat it is da bomb. Your Reflex Action sharp Jare.Bet y u dey apologise give am..?? She fit use reflex action vex ooo |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:39pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
ojsquare: oya use reflex action check your pm and sharperly reply am... I don use High speed Alacrity and Very high reflex action reply am sir """ Thanks |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:29pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
tosyne2much: Hahahaha roflwkmd 
OP, u be clown ooooo 
Nice ticket oooo Ticket? ticket go where.. |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:21pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
evegran: Mtchewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Are u related to this man ?? 9 Likes 1 Share
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Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:17pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
iomoge2: Unfollows tread u unfollow thread u still come Day comment for later posts... I throw way yansh oo 1 Like |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:15pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
Jimmyo3: OP love abeg come complete the tori...i go give u my ass 4get Ichinbong punny. Boss. I don't do guys. Gimme your babe instead.. lol |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:13pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
makizee: Simply Put.....This thread has lost its way
I'm out. Bye Bye oyoyo..Buy something for us wen u come back oo |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:08pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
synoble: .
op, hope say thunder no dey again oo Thunder ?? hope u no go fire Ghost readers again..Thunder ?? Thunder ?? answer naa. Oops.Bruv I don forget say d thing no get reflex action 1 Like |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:04pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
Dazzlinggem: If I can enjoy this story from 0 page to the last stage and didn't comment, then am an enemy of progress like Evagren. As u mention thunder and fire, i used 'Reflex action' run out from my ghost mode. Thanks for this wonderful piece, more grease to ur elbow. Everybody just dey rub Grease for my elbow since...Una no go like use Reflex Action rub another part.. or rub am with money """ lol |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:04pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
Dazzlinggem: If I can enjoy this story from 0 page to the last stage and didn't comment, then am an enemy of progress like Evagren. As u mention thunder and fire, i used 'Reflex action' run out from my ghost mode. Thanks for this wonderful piece, more grease to ur elbow. Everybody just dey rub Grease for my album..Una no go like use Reflex Action rub another part.. or rub am with money """ lol |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 8:47pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
harrrywhyte: class captain your story make sense u had me following up since your first post.but you are a bad guy sha with bad imaginations. I know u doing some of the stuffs in your story sha.but anyway kudos I like your story.badest boy tumbs up Baba I be Virgin ooo,no corrupt me |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 8:39pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
evegran: Mtchewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Lol pple Evegran is back ?? How are u dear ?? No more beef a beg Hope u enjoyed d Story ?? 1 Like |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 8:36pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
Helkayklassic: Nice one classcaptain, I don't want to be left out too, will like to feature in your next tori, i can act Ajigijaga part wella  Oga na Tout u wan be Contunu """ |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 8:31pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
gykes: @classcaptain just had to come of hiding. Been a ghost reader from page 0 and must confess you are much more than a talent, you are a money bag who is yet to discover himself.
My little piece though: if eventually you do go into blogging, get your own blog! And Write for nobody. Yes you will need mentorship from the big guys who have been there before you, but thats just about it. Be your own boss and make your pay - Linda Ikeji comes to mind.
One more thing, you could use BBM-Channel to forward extend your reach and redirect traffic to your blog - if you are on BBM
Lastly, have you considered selling e-versions of your stories? Complete uncut versions without suspence and breaks in PDF formats? Of course you should know the stories on your blog will carry much suspence, say 3 paragraphs every 4 hours.
And there's BBM pay powered by interswitch (a fine integration of its QuickTeller services with BBM). You could make BBM your market place where you sell your stories in PDF to impatient readers on your BBM. Here are some sources you will find useful http://www.vanguardngr.com/2015/10/quickteller-partners-blackberry-to-integrate-payments-with-bbm/ http://www.crackberry.com/interswitch-partners-blackberry-integrate-payments-through-bbm-nigeria
The fear of that thunder is the beginning of Wisedom lol .. God bless you sir.Am praying to God to provide me with money for a good new phone so to DAT I will get and do The BBM interswitch stuff.. .. I will start work on d Blog soon enough sir by God's grace.Thanks So much for this wonderful piece of advice. I don tell Thor make he pardon you. lol 1 Like 1 Share |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 8:24pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
TeeVibes: I've actually been on the under following ur story mehn, you really killed it and would advice you follow TechsNg suggestion on creating ur personal blog BTW feature me on the Money ritual story bruh. . Bro. I fear u Oo .of all d Stories na money ritual Oo u wish for..." Am looking u with one eye |
Romance › Re: My Great Fear For Many Nigeria Spinsters. by ClassCaptain(m): 7:53pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
I dey feel am |
Romance › Re: Why Do We Spend 4years To Learn What Is Not Applicable In Real Life? by ClassCaptain(m): 7:47pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
So as to boost our Reflex Action |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 7:26pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
YINKS89: Classcaptain u gats put yinks89 oooooo I go put am but first..what is the website of NSCDC ?? if u get am..u go feature 1 Like |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 7:24pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
smileyz16: add my moniker in ur nxt write up..i can act big men perfectly Lol..Na everybody wan good thing... Wait make I try use reflex action think am first |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 7:23pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
ojsquare: Classcaptain please send me a pm. It's important and urgent. Nice story nice conclusion. You are talented and I love the way you are using your talent. Thumbs up bro Sent my OGA. |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 7:22pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
Ghost readers. Make una dey show face.. Na thor house I day now and we day discuss d type of Thunder way go strike una.. lol 1 Like 1 Share |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 7:19pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
Abigurl: @Classcaptain you're so funny,, pls i will luv to meet u.. Where are u @? YabaLeft 4 Likes |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 7:15pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
dahaz: Intresting story class captain.you are very talented.The introduction of evegran and her reflex action to the story was the bomb of the story. I also love your conclusion.it gives the readers doubt and spevulation as to what was the verdict..i wil give you 9.5/10...looking forward to your nxt story. I very much appreciate Sir.. Thank you.. |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 6:57pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
EPISODE FINALE
I lost d 40k bet.i lost 250 thousand naira plus d Gifts ,clothes and shoes Found in mrs akorowem car which obviously she was bringing for me
I lost my fine boy face as even if it did heal up,d deep scar would still be visible, i lost four of my closest and most trusted friends,i lost my gateman,i lost my home ,i lost my education, my chances of ever getting pussy again ,marry or even give birth. Greatest of all ,what even caused all dis trouble in d first place, I lost inchinbong's pussy ..i could care less about her death if i had bleeped her already before the Devil came.
I Laid in the accused box.All hope lost,weak from d beatings and extreme torture from d police officers while in detention,broken by the severe pain and bleeding in my asshole after several assaults in my short time in d prison by numerous Hot prison mates,shattered by d betrayal of friends and most trusted associates and haunted by the deeds of my turbulent past.
, I looked back to see the Face of my anxious and scared Beautiful Mother, as the Judge,gathered his papers to announce d Final judgement after enough time of investigation and argument..
" After the various arguments by the counsels and the evidence and witnesses brought to the notice of the court which all have been properly examined and checked to follow constitutional procedures in fairness,equity and good justice ,this is my judgment,
..
.It does not matter whether i go to prison..It does not matter when i am released to go free..Neither does it matter whether i am going to be killed..None of these will transform me.The real lessons God wanted me to learn i have learned..I have learnt not to trust.i have learned to desist from a wayward life and most inportantly,i have learnt that no matter what.God is in Control..
.I have leant my lessons and the purpose of what i went through as been served ..
I could only think of one thing as the Judge readied his paper and was about to pronounce my fate ..NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS",GOD IS IN CONTROL .
THE END. 30 Likes 2 Shares |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 6:29pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
Final Episode in a bit ... |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 4:44pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
Temilayhor: @classcaptain as per say na the same class we dey...me sef no go mind if una feature me for the remaining toris o.....sha hala me wetin the form cost......osheey in advance waka pass 5k character wey go die quick 2k 5 Likes 1 Share |
Literature › Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 3:56pm On Oct 20, 2015 |
Abigurl: you're a badt guy abigurl. The last episode go soon drop. Make e no be like say tori no end.
I day gbadun u gan olohun.ori wa be |