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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 3:54pm On Oct 20, 2015
Laitesmart:
All dis people we wan make them name enter so no go pay? Emi nko?
.

As per say na u. Bring 5k last last
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 3:50pm On Oct 20, 2015
OmowumiJ:
I was a guest here 16hrs ago..joined nairaland just to follow this story! Classcaptain.. Oya chop fictional kisses
i no want fictional kisses, make i use reflex action tear kpetus naw.lol. Thanks for following
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 3:43pm On Oct 20, 2015
mikaj:
This your thunder pursue me commot from my hiding place. Chie!!!!! Fire on bro. I go personally compose all ur story create new topic giving you all acknowledgement for people who dey look for episodes.
dis your english too strong. Simplify
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 2:52pm On Oct 20, 2015
Ehnihorlah1:
Classcaptain, abeg make me part of the cast ooo.
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Confirmed sir
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 2:48pm On Oct 20, 2015
ghost readers. I fire una with the thunder. fire. Come out of your hiding place.
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 2:45pm On Oct 20, 2015
slimbiggy:
wanted to be a ghost reader all tru bt reflex action no gree me. Kudos man @classcaptain i don upgrade u to courserep
i dey feel your reflex action baba mi. Make u use reflex action wire me 10k for dere
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 2:27pm On Oct 20, 2015
Amagmilton:
...Please is this story a true life story?, cos am beginning 2 doubt.
it is not a true life story ..Purely fiction
LiteratureRe: The Day MTN taught me the Lesson of my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 2:23pm On Oct 20, 2015
ritababe:
weldone
lol
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 2:22pm On Oct 20, 2015
2nd ending..


I tear ichinbong well well. The next morning,I no see inchinbong again..She had dissapeared with my laptop, phone way I record the chooking with and some other valuables

. My guys con give me deadline of seven days to either bring the money or find inchinbong and bring d evidence.. Na then I con find out say inchinbong no be student of d school at all.

my guys dey threaten mr,one even talk say he go kill me if I no find..I met with Mrs akorowem .....and others.

Like like like that
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 2:16pm On Oct 20, 2015
First ending..

.. .. After Sleeping with inchinbong,I tried to remove my Gbola " from her kpetus..the thing no comot..Na so my
kini stuck insyd the thing.
Na my gateman con force door open way he hear us day shout.. Na so everybody dey take pics ,day snap us.

We later found out it was inchinbong father that put " a no penetration of d puna " charm on inchinbong.We had to wait four hours for papa inchinbong to come and release...

like DAT,like that..This ending was actually much funny..
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 2:08pm On Oct 20, 2015
...Firstly,

The predictable endings like I contacted hiv,after sleeping with her,the girl turn to snake con bite me,she turn to coffin inside room and all dose endings, was totally ruled out.
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 2:01pm On Oct 20, 2015
Before The final Episode...I will like to share some endings I projected for the story..
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 1:53pm On Oct 20, 2015
micronut:
Wow!!! Really mind blowing piece, i had referred at least 3friends plux my gf join, to come and have a filled day with this masterpiece. It's has indeed worth the while.. More ink to your pen. Get your self a "blogging site" like "Naijasinglegirl" and make available all your past and present works.. Small change will start coming. With a good traffic, konga and jumia go dey advertize for ya small world.

Once again, bigups! I love romantic fictions..
Micronut hails.
I will pm u sir
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 1:51pm On Oct 20, 2015
toluleke:
Wow...I really learnt some lessons
1) Never let other push you to do evil
2) Always listen to people advice no matter how foolish it may sound
3) In all life is like air it comes and goes in seconds...though dis story contains 18+..but I just wish people could learn from it than just get hard
thank you sir
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 1:50pm On Oct 20, 2015
TechsNG:
ClassCaptain, with such overwhelming story line and good suspense skill, i would honestly advice that you create a blog and push all of your works there. You can share the links on nairaland in other to drive traffic to the blog site. This current story has got almost 100,000 views. Imagine if about 30,000 views were to your blog.

I really can't remember the last time i stayed glued to a story as lengthy as this and at same time, very interesting that i have to keep the page alive on my PC browser and refresh every-time i feel there is an update. You really should push your works to your blog. It would help on a long run. I would be willing to help in the little way i can. Cheers bro! Awesome piece! Awesome!

Regards from TechsNG Blog.
or blog is Very nice.Abi u go dash me one vershu phone grin
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 1:48pm On Oct 20, 2015
Mariojane:
nice story classcaptain you almost corrupt my virgin eyes and mind. but am waiting for the final episode before giving my comment. i remember you said you have 3different ending to the story. i will wait to read the three before i suggest an ending that i believe may fit perfectly with the title and no life will be lost but your life won't remain the same according to the topic.
Actually its 7 ending.. I will share dem in summary
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 1:47pm On Oct 20, 2015
TechsNG:
ClassCaptain, with such overwhelming story line and good suspense skill, i would honestly advice that you create a blog and push all of your works there. You can share the links on nairaland in other to drive traffic to the blog site. This current story has got almost 100,000 views. Imagine if about 30,000 views were to your blog.

I really can't remember the last time i stayed glued to a story as lengthy as this and at same time, very interesting that i have to keep the page alive on my PC browser and refresh every-time i feel there is an update. You really should push your works to your blog. It would help on a long run. I would be willing to help in the little way i can. Cheers bro! Awesome piece! Awesome!

Regards from TechsNG Blog.
Thank you very much Sir !!!!! .I will be happy if we can talk on d blog issue..Pm Sir !!!
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 11:43am On Oct 20, 2015
One final Episode left
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 11:38am On Oct 20, 2015
Episode Finale and The Final Episode is Left ...


follow and pm me if u want your moniker to appear I'm d next Stories

" Lost in Lagos
" A day with an Upcoming artist "
" Why I no go do money ritual again"
" The Community Robbery
" Dating a Church girl"
" How 2go relationship led me to Psychiatric home 2"

bless.
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 11:36am On Oct 20, 2015
DIARY OF RESOLUTION



TESTIMONIES,

THE BIATCHES

Joke134, came and did Same .She affirmed that i was very capable of such
as I was a very chronic drug addict and could have been high that day.

.Evegran even accused me of rape and planning to kill her like that if not that God saved her.She affirmed that i am d killer and that day should make my execution as fast as possible.



LAST MaN

. Even my gateman ,TonyeBarcanista.that i had hope in that he will defend me, told the court that he was not sure and couldnt really say whether i did it or not.as he was not in the room with us.He left without saying anything more.


PHONE EVIDENCE NKO ??

" The Whole Case took a New Twist when my phone ,which i was using to record the steamy romance that i thought who lead to sex between me and inchinbong was brought to the court..

I had initially plan to video the act but the red disco light in the room did not beam enough light to capture our faces so i decided i was going to make her call my name and say some other naughty stuffs that would make anybody know it was her, thus i put d phone on record.


I had left the Record button on when i threatened mrs akorowem " Bitch i will kill u ..." and stabbed her in the belly.

At this moment,not even the Lawyer ,Barrister AndyBlaze who had been arguing d Case for me as Self Defense could not do much

. That was my voice on the phone threatening to kill mrs akorowem and her groans of pain at d throne of death can clearly be heard in the recording...
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 11:20am On Oct 20, 2015
DIARY OF RESOLUTION

TESTIMONIES TIME



THE VIGILANTE ACCOUNT

A lot of people were called as witnesses to come and shed more Light on d case and also testify against me by the Prosecuting counsel, Safarigirl.

The night guard and Chief Vigilante,PassingShot Testified against me and swore that i killed d ladies as they met me with d knife and blood all over me when they came in.His two other vigilantes,Tomtom15 and nacosprof also affrirmed this.

He further added that i was very much capable of such MURDER from his interaction and experience with me.


THE PASTOR'S ANGLE

Pastor Seun was called upon and also testified that truely ,he called ichinbong to apologize me..He said he asked her to do this as a Good Christian and move on with her Life but never adviced or told her to visit him in anyway or kickstart a sexual relationship with me.

He also rounded things up also that i was Capable of killing ichinbong as i was an unbalanced,cold hearted and unrepentant sinner who deserves to ROt in hell without Salvation and that even God wont forgive me.

He stated that day,how he was also about developing and building a godly relationship with Inchinbong before her untimely death . He wept out of d witness box that day.

THE FRIENDS


My guys wey we gather bet where surprised to see my fine boy face had been destroyed and surprisingly, all of them testified against me that i killed d girls..One even said i was a Cultist and told him secretly that i was going to kill two Ladies in order to renew my jazz and power..

..God ..So these guys could actually be this bad. no true friends anymore...i wept as they made known their own account of the incident.
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 11:02am On Oct 20, 2015
The Last three episodes. " DIARY OF Resolutions "" will drop now..
LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 11:00am On Oct 20, 2015
BEGINNING OF THE END 10

My mother hustle helter skelter,left, right,center just to get some money and got me a Good lawyer, Barrister Andyblaze ( ESQ) as my counsel and the case kicked off officially.

. ..Kudos to my Mother..May God bless her and every other mother out there like her. Despite warning me seriously that night, sending me open heavens every morning on whatsapp and counselling me.

Struggling to get me the best no matter what even when she never got a single thing for her,even when she had to do dehumanizing things,even though it wasnt easy for her and she was constantly praying and warning me to keep off bad company but i didn't listen to her and discarded her " Old school advice " thus bringing shame and a disfigured face back to compensate her for all her efforts.

. My mother still showed a great deal of support and care ,i never imagined i could get from her. ..She was like a Jesus beside me.. ..She was my strength.. infact she was a god to me.

My love of God and admiration for her got deeper during this trying time.

I could not but weep when i saw Mrs Akorowem three young kids,The Oldest was just 14....I felt immense guilt and pain anytime i heard news about those kids..How i wish i could reach out to them. and tell them that it wasn't my fault. i never planned to hurt their mother and That i am now a changed person..

I hope they dont know the circumstances behind their mother's death and if they know,i hope day forgive..Because it is now that she is gone, they will truely know her value.
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:32am On Oct 20, 2015
BEGINNING OF THE END 9

I thought of escaping twice from detention,but it was of no use, with this scar on my face,i will surely be caught again..


.!! It was During d Court Session that i fully knew that Mrs Akorowem was the First daughter of Ichinbong Father but they were not related by mother.. .Mrs akorowem mother was d First wife and Inchingbong mother was d 2nd wife.

.Ichingbong was d only daughter and child of her Mother just like i am the only child of my mother too.

. Sometimes I put d blame on their mothers..All this poo was predestined ?? It could be as a result of their Two mothers rivalry and plan to use juju to kill each other's children that led to their own untimely death but The Devil just had to use me as the channel.

Ichibong mother was admitted to a psychiatric home for treatment due to incoherent statement and behaviour and Her Father,who actually forsaked her and her mother when she was actually alive and never really cared for them,swore that i was going to Die by hanging and get justice as i deserved.. He was a Lawyer ( SAN) and surprisingly, very connected and powerful.
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:19am On Oct 20, 2015
BEGINNING OF THE END 8

And truely d Night Guard had warned me on several occasions when i came to d house late in the night with different girls , to desist and repent of my ways..

" You see i was once like u...Dat is what led me to my present state " ..I know what am saying wen i tell you to stop ".. You will regret it " - He would always say and narrate how he was every girls dream and all that.

But i never took his words serious as i always thought it was the words of a Drunkard.

" Listen to me " ....i tried to Give an explanation.. but d Next thing i got was a Slap on my fore head.. I think the slap was enchanted because i could not say, know or Comprehend anything till we got to d Police station that midnight as i kept doing and following as they commanded while Barcanista and d Other vigilante took care of d Bodies at home..

Meanwhile,all through out this period, My phone at home was on Audio record ...
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 10:07am On Oct 20, 2015
BEGINNING OF THE END 7

Tonye Barcanista,about Four vigilantes led by the chief vigilante,PassingShot came in right after i had just Remove d Life out of Mrs Akorowem..

" Oga ...huh - TonyeBarnacista shouted on sigjting d gore and blood in d room..

" Ju obe owo sile..( Drop d Knife )... The chief vigilante,Passingshot shouted as he pointed his dane gun at me.


Many thoughts crept through my mind at dat moment as I could not hold the tears in my eyes..Should i just end everything and take my own life ....Is this the end of everything ?? My life ?? My education ?? what will happen to my mother ?? What will....

" Mo ni ko gbe Obe owo sile ki to fi ibon fo ori ( i said ..drop the Knife now or i will shoot u ....) - PassingShot roared again..

" Haa oga..Drop it oo..pls "

...I dropped the knife in surrender .the cut on my face more painful than hell..i put my hands behind my back as the other two vigilantes.,Tomtom15 and nacosprof,came in and tied my hands with their locally made handcuff dat came with a Padlock and a Key..


" I did it in self Defence "...I said... as they led me out.
.
" Gbenu e soun ( shut up)..You murderer..You killed two people in self defence... I always knew that d way u were living your life.,Sleeping with black today,yellow tomorrow .you will one day get yourself in trouble.
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 9:58am On Oct 20, 2015
BEGINNING OF THE END 6

At the end i was able to Get d Knife from her.

She looked on in defeat.. I had the choice to simply let her go or just knock her out but no,i felt d Deep cut she made across my face..it was Deeper than i thought...i could feel d inner skin of my body....

I was actually going to knock her out when again she ran to attack me and collect d knife again..

" You bitch """" I am going to kill Youuuuuuu "

"..And Gbam.. I plunged the knife into her Abdomen as her intestines spilled out of her body.

she Held me as she fell to d ground and i kicked her bitchy hands away from me....

" i ....i ...lov..vve....she murmured as she went down.

Blood Dripped from my Knife and also from my slashed face.. 2 dead bodies. One living person. The Music track, Double wahala" by OritseFemi blasted from the Stereo.


TonyeBarcanista on his part,had rush to get d Stupid Vigilantes who allowed mrs akoworem in despite her coming after the curfew time, (probably after she bribed dem) ..

He rushed out to get them when the Fight and shout between Ichinbong and Akorowem was Getting two much for him to bear.. ...
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 9:47am On Oct 20, 2015
BEGINNING OF THE END 5

I watched as She fell to d Ground and d blood gushed all over her white bra....Her hairs flowing as her mouth gasped for breath while mrs akorowem watched on,unmoved.

Her hand placed on her chest, blood gushing out as her eyes felt weary,she could see her life flashed through her.face .


She turned her face to me,she was trying to mutter some words but blood was all that came out.. She kept opening her mouth..... trying to speak but it was too late. All she could do was mumbling .

" What have you done "..i screamed Aloud .as i watch ichinbong struggle in deep pain in her last moments on earth.. If anybody told her she would die today,she would have probably laughed it off.

" YOU MANIAC. !!!!!.. i screamed as i approached mummy akorowem .with my veins all stretched and an amazing super strength fueled by my inate anger I never felt before.

. But Rather than back down, The sex hungry,psychopath,Mrs Akorowem Used d Knife and Made A Deep slash across my face..She was Definitely aiming for my neck but somehow i managed to evade her..


This woman was incredibly strong as i struggled to collect d Knife from her,blood dripping from the Torn flesh in my face....We struggled all around the room for like 2 minutes,.

This woman was really determined to kill me that moment.
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 9:33am On Oct 20, 2015
BEGINNING OF THE END 4

Still very much stunned ,She questioned what Ichinbong was doing in my room and sharpaly,ichinbong sef replied her why she day ask DAT kind stupid question ..

" No .. we are just having a photo shoot ..are u as blind as u are daft ??

" So boo...it is because of this thing.u left me ,all alone in my hotel room,?? what did u ever want that i didnt give u ..u ungrateful bastard "" ..Mrs akorowem complained bitterly, tears beaming up in her eyes

" Eh eh ...wetin be all dis talk naa?? I no blame u..na everybody for house sabi say u be grade 1 ashaewo ..

boo ...I trusted u ....i never wanted to give u a chance. i never knew you were dis evil...And the holy spirit warned me...
.
shut up ichinbong ,you harlot before i shut it up for u " Mrs Akorowem roared,her eyes were pure red.


" Aunty community dog, u too shut up "..u too shut up "
..She replied..

" Me "
" yes you. what will u do ??

In no time ,the two began to fight....I tried my possible best to try and Seperate the two but it all proved abortive. i was still trying to wear my Trousers and see if i could call for help outside when Angry mrs Akorowem ,...got her hand on the knife i left on d passage floor and plunged it suddenly ,right into Ichinbong's Heart.
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 9:23am On Oct 20, 2015
BEGINNING OF THE END 3

I had just innocently described my address for this bitch during one of our sex chats back then .Never knew she could still have that address or even go to d extent of tracing me home especially at dis time of d night..10 30 pm ??

I was confused and Scared at the same time...My preek witnessed an immediate economic depression as it shrunk back to its natural state.

. As the Devil will have,my brain no even go near say make i lock door.. At least if she knock knock knock, by d time wey morning reach,she go leave or pata pata i go call some people on phone make dem con carry am comot. Not locking the Door was a Big mistake i made.

She busted into the house and there i was Stark naked and beside me ,Ichinbong in her pant and bra.. The song ,danger by psquare was playing from d stereo in d Back ground..

" Ichinbong " ..She asked.. ,startled on sighting the strange lady in my room.

" Aunty ... ...ichinbong replied..

haha. wetin day happen..I thought to myself
...
" My God... mrs akorowem said as She dropped her bag...Ichinbong..was this what u were sent to do ...

... He he he...Aunty...So is this how u do your business whenever u come this syd. too. oh oh ??

no wonder u no day tell anybody wen u day town ?? .Is that wat u Tell Papa chimobi wen u....

So they are related. Abi wat is all this happening.. i stood there.. looking..!!! Baba God , what have i gotten myself into...
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 9:11am On Oct 20, 2015
BEGINNING OF THE END 2


" Whats that " She asked as she got up from the bed..
" No oo " Dont mind ...Must be d other compound '..I said as i moved closer to her to penetrate.

" No wait .....That noise is increasing oo " She said .

"madam ,i said he is not at home"
" Haa Barca,let me Check now!why are u Behaving like this ..
" Madam ...I no fit lie u ..

She dipped her hand into her bag and handed 2
thousand naira to him.

" Madam...but
" Just take..Take.. Shebi i will just check

" But madam.. haa madam..he said as he collected the money....Madam be Careful oo..oh madam naa"

' Madam .be careful oo ..Madam... ehh .. ..yet he didnt stop her from moving forward as he pocketed d money in his pocket.

...That voice belongs to nobody else but Madam Akorowem?? Barcanista had betrayed my trust..Despite helping me with the Gen and fuel, He still betrayed me cos of 2 thoussnd.. i told him to specifically ensure no one comes in to see me.

Barcanista was her boy,give him some money and he will start singing your name like a bird.


What d Bleep is Mrs Akorowem doing at my place around 10 40pm in d night ..Is this Old Cargo dat Hot ?? what d Bleep ?? .. How d Bleep did she get pass d Vigilante at this time of d night.. ??

" What is happening " ichinbong jumped up scared,.. She rushed and picked up her pants and Skirt..

Wait naw """.. God which king thing be dis . Again....
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LiteratureRe: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(op): 9:04am On Oct 20, 2015
THE BEGINNING OF THE END...( FIRST ENDING )

Gobbling. eating. licking and swallowing..

... blood flowed all over my body down to my hard preek, as she ate my hotdog together with my balls ,licking and dreeping saliva on the little hairs left here and there on my manhood.

Haa..This Girl was going to make my Cum and we never even start d main thing sef..i pulled out my heavy preek from her mouth and helped her up on her feet as i carressed her yansh ...

.and i unzipped The skirt zip,and slowly moved down the skirt as Her hands were kept busy, handling and rubbing my " Gbola".

She was just doing everything like a Pro.i could swear she would pass for a porn Star.

The Skirt now day down. I was .left with her pants..White in colour... I guessed she knew and prepared her mind down for something today because all dis sparkling white bra and pants, Na so e dey neat reach on a normal day..Shior


I Dipped my index finger into her wet pants and Voila..." The Pussy was tight as shit "..I rhythmically Put in my fingers,going deeper and manourevering for d Gpot at d same time ensuring that i followed slowly , d pace of the background music as She put her hands across my shoulders, giving her breasts a resting place on my chest ..

" Hand me dat" ..i said breathing heavily..

She picked d Condom from the bed and gave it to me.... She then went back on the bed and laid down . Her Two legs up in d air ,showcasing her creamy Treasure island ready for immediate Penetration activity.

I was just putting on the Condom when i heard heavy
Shouts outside the Gate... ...Dat must be from the other compound... I balanced d condom on my preek...The Noise Increased..
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