Av neva read a story on NL wit twist and turns such as urs.... Its like watching a season muvie
So many events happening but all still connected.....
I duff my hat for u Silver .... U too much
Wehdone sir

This story is Superb but d *tenses* are killing me doh

Wow...... Carlos is just a badass evil moda4ka

Wow...... Carlos is just a badass evil moda4ka

Wow...... Carlos is just a badass evil moda4ka

So delicious..... So intriguing.... Dis story is like a big onion, so many layers of mystery n suspense

Am in love, am in love with this story

Damnnnnnnnn...... Dat was a real show down.... Finishing ..... Maryam is too much..... Sokodobo u r awesome

I love d twists n turns.... its so exhilarating.... Dis story is tha bomb

Awwwwwwn..... Am hurting for dem

Just beautiful

Whaow..... Dis beats any Nollywood action movie... Great story!!! Dis Jezebel's mind is just twisted... chai

Wawuuu.... Anoda thrilling update.
N dats d sad tin in d world today, some ladies just wanna 'die there' by all means possible, even wen dere is no love from d guy.

Sokodobo.... U r really trying... But... U do nid to improve in ur Punctuationsa and spacing.
Its always hard to tell wen its a dialogue or narration

I had a feeling it was gonna get to dis..... I just hope Ameer's good works/seeds will save him at his tym of need.

But really.... dis is d stupid world of d police... Dey are too lazy to investigate, but capitalize on d feeble information dey have n tag an innocent person a criminal.
If nah d rich n famous, d person will be granted bail & walk free

@Oyinprince... pls coman update oo.... Am seriously anxious of wat is gonna happen next

Ghen-ghen...... Imagine their own interpretation of Missionaries coming to their land

Awwwwwwn..... Tank God d baby survived

Great writeup OP..... Am following u bumper-to-bumper

I perceive dis will be an interesting writeup, its already captivating from d start.....
Doh am not a Muslim, but am already loving d story... Thumbs up

Wow... Anoda refreshing update
Its not like I haven't read dis kinda storyline before, but d way u tell dis particular one is so unique & thrilling.... I love d twist n turn of event.
Dear Rosemary, U r d bomb.... Ur appreciated dearie

Anoda abandoned great story

Dear OP, pls don't be like writers on NL who starts interesting stories n later abandon dem, Biko

My dear Rosemary33, u kip twisting dis story n am so intrigued.... Pregnancy! I didn't really see dat coming.... Am so hooked to ur masterpiece, keep soaring

OP....... 3 Gbosas for u, u dey try...........
Dis story is so thrilling, cant get enuf of it.

Awwwwwn ..... Happy ending, doh i missed updating at d course of the story.... Anyways, a good job well served Giannaaaa, u r great.
In this story, Moral lesson is FORGIVENESS

Shit, dat was a close one ...... For now, I rejoice wit Ken for winning a battle he didn't know he partook in
But I know for Chinyeanka, its not over yet.

Ghen-ghen..... Drama unfolding.... I anticipate d final showdown between Imelda & Ahmad

Chinyeaka! U beta dey ur lane oo.... Don't coman spoil dis beautiful love oo

Op.... How old are Jenny n Jessy & r dey Twins or wat?

Tanks for anoda round of nourishing update
But u gotta watch d errors e.g using 'thing' for 'think' or 'ones' for 'once'