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Cristalz:
Why can't some people just appreciate a beautiful poem instead of acting like its an abomination that it originated from a dude. . .

If you must criticize be constructive,otherwise shut it. People are actually getting creative here and all some literature layabouts can do is pick faults. Jeez.


And no,I'm not mad. Just irritated

True Brit:
How does a guy writing about a guy translate to his material being gay material? He wrote the poem as a woman talking about her hubby not as a man talking about his lover/partner (at least that is the impression given. Not that it would matter if it had been one guy talking about another). Would it be different if he had written a story or book as a female character who has these feelings about a man? All these homophobic expressions are not in good taste.

fe32:
wonderful one there biola, thank you, the idea's is that the wife's amazed of the many wonderful qualities she finds in her husband that she sees him as an angel , the part that i really dint work on is that, she fears she may one day loose him to being who he was, that she might be woken up by an angel one moning explaining why he has to go back,

she's amazed that the husband is becoming more perfect by the day, and wondering where his faults her,

hope u get the gist a likkle, but i'll work on that, as i said, i'm only an iron bender and rite now, i can't even write "A B C" because am not in the mood

There is nothing like good or bad art so we should not be too concerned about the grammar in a poem because she is expressing herself

don't know if this's bout me, i'm a guy, anyway, thanks