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bekinyaro:that is an idea Sir, thanks a lot,I will try to do that |
He kept on running, zooming past people without greeting, " oh Dede, Dede ", tears dropped from his eyes, he knew that she is dead, Ichendu had killed her,but he have to confirm it,he had to see her corpse. As he ran he bumped into Ichendu. Ichendu: who is this?, watch where you are going ( he resume walking as Oyeku ran to him). Oyeku; ( with tears in his eyes) Sir,please where do you keep Dede?, is she dead?. Ichendu: ( surprised and confused) who is Dede?, who are you? Oyeku: ( realising that the chief does not recognize him) I am Oyeku, son of Ayeni, and Dede was the slave girl that you brought home yesterday, please I want to see her, please chief ( he bent down and prostrate before Ichendu) Now,Ichendu had comprehend everything, it was indeed Oyeku that the slave was screaming yesterday, he recognized Oyeku now,he had admired the boy the very first time he saw him,he has everything that is required of a warrior, he even heard that he was the one who boosted the morale of the boys to reinforce the ambushed men at usialo. but he doesn't understand his relationship with the slave, are they lovers?, well, whoever the slave is to him there is nothing he can do,he had sacrificed her and iroko has been nourished with her blood, he had to Tell him. Ichendu: now I know you, but who is this slave to you?( Oyeku was just weeping, he did not answer) well,whoever she is to you,she is dead, even if she is crawling now, she would have got to heaven. Oyeku had confirmed it, Dede is dead, that innocent girl, who had great zeal and hope of living,that girl with great dreams, she is dead. He fell down and cried like a woman, all his manliness was gone, he had failed, he had failed to protect her. Ichendu: but why did you not tell me to give her to you since you love her?, after all there are a lot of virgins,if you had told me you want her, I would have picked another girl and give her to you, but there is nothing I can do again now,the life string can not be tied again, I can only tell you where her body is, perhaps, you may want to give her a decent burial.( Oyeku nodded amidst bitter tears that choked his voice, Ichendu described where her body is and Oyeku ran to see her corpse). |
Lakesc:awww! thank you, that was encouraging, but my work is not worthy of been published for now, you know a lot of grammatical errors,lack of organisation and coherence, this is my first experience of writing a story,I believe I would have improved when I will write the second |
Oyeku kept on running, till he got to the village. He had passed Ichendu hut and some other hut,now he is out of breath, he slow down, he bent down to catch his breath as he hold is chest with both of his hands. He had dropped his lamp and his dagger, when he was running. After catching enough breath, he resume jogging, his head is hot and he felt headache. He was shaking with cold, his teeth rattled together, he staggered as if to fall,but he didn't, he must get home whatever happens to him, he could see his hut,he increased speed,he could see baba,with his lamp he was searching for somebody, the sight of baba relieved him. Oyeku: baba ( he called weakly, as he staggered) help me. The old man caught him,and threw his hand under his armpit, as he help him in,Ayeni was busy muttering something, Oyeku knew it was incantations,Ayeni took Oyeku to his own room and lie him down,Oyeku gave up his strength and he collapsed. Maku was with Arore has they walked to the market,Arore had become silent, and each time she would talk,she will always tell Maku to go back. Legun was behind them,fixing an evil eye one Arore. Arore: you won't understand, just go back,don't let people see me with you!. Maku he look hurt) why?, because I am an Oyo?.Arore: ( she was silent for a while) people avoid me, they say I am possessed,you moving with me now,will worsened the matter. Now Maku understand while people has been staring at them like plague, they believe she is possessed, but here he is standing behind the alleged possessed girl having the best of his time, he would never leave Arore, no matter what,in fact,he would prove to her that he does care about what people say. Maku he collected the palm wine calabash from Arore and settled it on his shoulder, then with his other hand,he held her waist) let me see,the fool that we dare call you possessed, or a fool that would want to separate us.Arore tried to remove his hand,but his hands were strong,now passerby her looking at them,some are laughing at Maku for been unfortunate,he had fell in Arore in Arore trap, some would just ease and call Arore names, especially the maidens. Arore: (very sad, almost shedding tears) you see what you have caused now,those girls are calling me names,I told you to go but you won't, if I manage to get away from you now, I would not give you the chance to see me again. Maku: ( he brought down the calabash from his shoulder and hold Arore face with his palm) Arore, listen to me,my people call me a madman at home, because I don't respect the gods,they call me pervert and other names,but I am not bothered, and you know what?, I do end up been happy than most of them,and that is because, I don't care what people say. Arore you are different from all the girls I know, you are special and that is why they were jealous of you,I have met a lot of girls who wants to sleep with me because of my money, but here you are sleeping with for nothing( he dragged her closer to himself) may heaven bear me witness that I love and that I will always love,no matter what people will say,you are a special person Arore, and you have a kind heart, I will never let you leave,if you do I will die. Arore was filled with emotions as she cried holding her face with her hands,she cried with such volume, that got people rushing to the scene only to find two lovers dancing to the tune of love. Ogbo had been monitoring chilo for a while now,he had not seen her with any boy,perhaps she was lying about having a man. ogbo was never good in wooing ladies, he is someone who believes women are plaything, something you use when you want it,the sweetest word he had ever tell a lady was " your vagina is sweet ", That was his mindset until he met Chilo. Chilo had made him for the first time say," I love you ", and he never regret that he did. But chilo had not return his love,and it broke his heart,but he had made a plan,he would steal chilo, he would kidnap her and run away with her to ibiru,he will make her love him by force, if she would not love him for love sake,she would love him for children sake, when she start having children for him. But right now, he had to study her movement, when she is always going to the stream and when she is always at home, when her mother is always around and when she is always absent, he would watch out for the day that she alone would go to the stream, then he would touch her with a charm ring that would make her sleep,then he would carry her across the stream to the east, there he would make her a woman. The thought of chilo been his woman made him,exhale. How wonderful it will be if chilo would be at his side every night to warm his bed and for him to wake up every morning and see her coming to greet him with his food, how wonderful, he smiled. Oyeku woke up to see ife sitting beside him,touching his head with a hot cloth,everywhere was smelling of herbs,he try to figure how he came to Baba's room, then slowly and steady he recollect. The thought of Dede got him on his feet. ife: son, sit down,you are not well enough, sit down now ( she tried to pull him down). Oyeku: iya,please I have to see somebody, I do, somebody is about to die( he said with tears, and sprinted out towards Ichendu hut) . He was running very fast,and his head was aching but still he kept on moving |
Ciara9251:I don't understand too,the mod actually complained of wrong punctuations. |
Ciara9251:sickness ke! please be well o,for the sake of new year and the sake of your followers |
KhalifaDam:you are welcome khalifadam,I missed your comment |
Ciara9251:oh ciara,I am very sorry, I should be the first person to wish you happy new year,but I have been very busy,but my wish is not too late, I Wish You A Happy New Year |
EdoDefence:if you are not okay with a Yoruba created forum, go create yours and stop been a parasite |
Ayo5991:thanks bro,you had been the one that has keep me going today, I appreciate, update is coming watch out |
TAO11:sure, I will do that |
TAO11:please just make sure you wipe those boys well,I like fierce women |
work on the Lagos account which is said by Robert Smith to be based on the first two. Cc: Obalufon, Ideadoctor, Balogunodua, babtoundey, sesan85[/quote]Today I must confess to you Tao11, I like you,walahi,your intelligence and scholarlistical tendencies are amazing, each time I come to comment on this trend and I see your write up,I will just smile and relax, Tao11 had tackle them,without even seeing you,your write up made fall for you,lest I get too naughty,let me stop here,in as much you are still on nairaland, my own comments would not be much,because you are reliable, especially now that school is resuming, unilorin no be joke |
chapter thirteen Oyeku was restless, he couldn't sleep throughout the night, the thought of Dede safety is what was bothering his mind,he had promised to help her but he doesn't know how to do so. He turned again on his mat,he couldn't sleep, he was not just comfortable, he had seen Dede's slaver,it was the chief, Ichendu. He had watched as they came,he saw Ichendu touching the girls,some are falling, some are standing, he knew the significant of what he was doing, he was checking their innocence. innocence are checked for two reasons, to show if a woman is worthy of been married or been fit to be the food for the gods. He knew Ichendu will not marry the slaves nor will he keep them as concubines, he is a man that will never stoop low to make love to slaves. This fact support the other option, that is Ichendu wants the girls for sacrifice, he was very sure of that fact, but he had stopped himself from believing it,he has develop the urge to go to Ichendu hut to check for Dede several times, but he had stopped himself from doing so. He won't be able to sleep until he had seen that she is safe. He stood up from his mat and took his oil lamp, he stepped outside his hut,The moon was full and the sky was cloudless,the breeze was blowing quite hard,so he had to protect the lamp flame from been quenched. He stepped into the night and headed towards Ichendu hut,Ichendu hut was situated at the outskirt of the village,his hut his the last hut to the farmlands, that means Oyeku had a long way to go. The night was very cold, so he had wrapped a wrapper around his chest,his dagger is in it sheath at his right hand.He walked quickly, he passed chilo's hut and didn't even noticed, he was getting very anxious, he started jogging, in his heart,he prayed that Dede should be okay. Now he could sight Ichendu hut from afar,his heart beat fast, what would he even do when he gets there?,how would he even know if Dede is okay?.still he kept on jogging, finally he got to Ichendu hut,he could see the three hut Ichendu had built, one for his first wive, the other for the second, the third and the largest is for him and for his demons, he always warns his children never to enter that room. He could see Ichendu wives and there children sleeping at the verandah of the hut,they were fast asleep, but he couldn't see Ichendu and his boys. They suppose to be outside too,where could they be?, the slaves supposed to be at the backyard,he assumed. He silently tiptoed to the backyard, but there was no slaves,his heart skipped, " oh Dede, where are you?". Suddenly, he heard voices from the path to the woods, he was afraid, he quickly leaped into the bush and stayed silent, his attention was on the voices, it was Ichendu and his boys, they were coming from the forest. Oyeku could swear that what he was thinking was right, the reality made him dizzy, they had killed Dede!." No!,Never!,Dede is not dead ", he told himself, he would go into the wood and confirm it. He silently moved away from his hiding site and moved towards the forest path,he waited for Ichendu and his boys to pass,then he resumed his trip to the forest. It is already midnight,he jogged along farmlands and little streams, but he doesn't know where to turn to now,there are many paths,he was confused,the cold in the forest is unbearable, and the breeze is too powerful, he fears that his lamp will go off. He was still thinking of what path to take,when everything became silent,the woods were no more creaking, the dancing leaves are now stale,the full moon had hide it face,and the heavens was dark as if it would rain, he felt great cold, a strange cold that crept into his spines. Suddenly, his lamp went off,and fear crept into his heart, he brought out his dagger and start turning around to see anybody, but he saw nobody, the cold was getting unbearable and the night is becoming darker . He could feel is kneel getting weak,then suddenly, he saw a shape,a great black shape, which stood right in front of him,he was not sure maybe he was seeing the right thing,but he knew someone is standing right at his front. His head swelled,and he felt dizzy, he became rooted to the spot,he couldn't move. The shape was moving towards him, the way it moves appears as if he is walking head down or somersaulting. All of a sudden,he was free,he could feel his feet once more,his body is active again, he turned back and started running, he was feeling the presence of the strange being behind him,he ran through blady grasses that cut his legs and drew blood, he ran and jump hole,he could feel his head getting hot,as if a burning coal a is brought near to his head. Then he heard the voice, a voice full of mockery and hatred," why do you run son of man? why did you not wait?", the voice echoed in his ears,if you don't listen enough you want hear the content of the sound, the sound was wavy and amplified, then he heard the most horrifying laughter he had ever heard,the sound by now was far behind him. |
He couldn't believe his ears, he just heard maku's voice, he quickly got up and ran to the direction of the sound, behold, Maku and Arore walking hand to hands like lovers. When he saw Maku, joy filled his heart,his hope revived he ran and fell at his feet,holding his feet. legun weeping profusely) my lord,my lord!, I thought I lost you, I thought you are dead,oh my lord,I am happy you are alive, I will never let you out of my sight again ( he weep as mucus dropped down his nose)Maku he lifted Maku up) I am lucky and proud to have a brother like you, I will never forget everything you have done for me( he cleaned ogbo face his palm) I am back now brother, so don't cry anymore, and I will like to introduce you to my love Arore ( he faced Arore) Arore this is my brother legun, he loves me much,I am show you two will get along, right? ( Arore nodded with a smile, pretending to be shy In front of legun)legun he looked at her like plague and dragged Maku to a corner) my lord,what are you doing with this witch,she....... (Maku cut him shut).Maku: whatever she is I love her,and brother I will want you to bear her with me,I know you are trying to protect me,but these is what I want and remember, you promised to want anything that I want. legun: ( he shook head like a stubborn boy) but ...... Maku: there is no but, brother ( he hugged legun) you have to start getting used to her Arore: you are keeping someone waiting ( she was impatient) Maku quickly ran back to her Maku: you are too jealous, am talking with a man and you are acting like these, what about if it is a girl? you would have.....( she cut him off) Arore; I want to go sell palm wine at the market today,I would see you in the night ( she hurried off) Maku: we are going together( he hurried after her, legun watch them for a moment then he also hurried after them) |
legun sat at the palm wine sellers hut,he has been here since last night, he had searched for his majesty,throughout the night,but he couldn't find him. He had searched everywhere last night, but he still couldn't find him. He blamed himself for everything, why didn't he follow him yesterday when he angrily left the stream, he should have known that Maku is not in his right sense and so he needed to be monitored. He had thought that Maku just needed to cool off his head for sometimes, so he left him but when it was getting dark and he couldn't see Maku, he became nervous and afraid. He was depressed right now? he can't find Maku, his master,Maku is the reason why he is living, without him,he does not want life. He would search for Maku today and if he can't find him, he would kill himself. But before he kill himself he would first kill that bastard,ogbo,yes,he would kill him if he can't find Maku, anybody who seek after the life of his master deserves death,and ogbo would surely die,he would never forgive him,he hates traitors. How sudden people change, he never believed ogbo could be this filthy,he remembered the night Maku bought both of them ,they were both stolen from ibiru by some Oyo slave raiders who wanted them for ritual,but Maku had saw them, he called the slavers and ask their prize, Maku had paid them slavers handsomely,he brought them home and fed them and made sure they got drunk with wine,Maku had made them laugh telling them about the type of women he had slept with,the big waist,the big bosomed and the ones with milky vagina. Maku never called them slaves,except yesterday, and it wasn't his fault, he was not in his right sense,till today he never knew why Maku had been so nice to them,but he had not been an ingrate either, he had devoted everything about himself to Maku. He made sure that Maku got everything he wants,he is ready to do anything for him,anything. But he wondered what came upon ogbo, why he had become so inert,ogbo had broken the vow of brotherhood and tried to bite the hand that fed him, but he wouldn't go away with it,he would die. legun prepared to stand up,that was when he heard maku's thick voice and Arore laughter |
Oyo kingdom Ari is alone in his room,the palace was silent, even the children seems to be away,it was early in the morning, but everything was just silent. Ari sat on his throne, thinking about his life,his youthful age, he was just like Maku, he loves pleasures, whatever he desire he must get it,he was also bit promiscuous like Maku, more reason he refused to blame Maku for his misdeeds. After all the same blood flows through their veins,but the only thing he blamed Maku for Is that he desired a dangerous thing and he got it. Ever since Maku had left,his mind was not at peace, he doesn't know where he is or what is happening to him,he doesn't know if he is dead or alive, but one thing he knows, wherever he is ,he is suffering right now and he must call him back home. He had decided to send his youngest son to go look for me,Deolu is the only person he can trust with such assignment, not only is he diligent but he likes to receive his father complements which makes him do things that would make his father happy. The only thing Ari hates about Deolu is the fact that he gambles a lot,he can even gamble with his mother vagina,if he had something big gain,apart from gambling he is an addicted drunkard who always drink till he lose conscious and be carried home, he vomit everywhere and give the maids some work to do. Deolu would bring Maku home Ari was sure of it. He had heard that the priestess had moved from Oyo to Oma without his notice and he doesn't care either,in fact it solves his problem, with the priestess gone no one would raise questions concerning Maku, he tried to believe that his plans would work. |
Maku kept on running till he became exhausted, he is now in a farm,he had ran blindly through the dark, he would have fought those men till death,if he was to be the former Maku, but this Maku is different, he wants to live and enjoy More of Arore. He sat down on a heap of sand and cover his face with his palms as he weeps,he knew he is going insane, he knew he is been enchanted, he knew that Arore is not ordinary, but still he want her. If he can lay hold of her now, he prays that he dies on her,he can't leave to continue like these, or better still, " wait", what about if I end my life right now at least u would be free from the pain of unsatisfied passion," no I can't, I want to taste her ",. He was still sobbing when someone touched him behind, he turned back slowly, and behold, it was Arore, she was standing with one hand on her hip and the other on his shoulder, she was smiling mysteriously, a seductive smile that got his organ waving. Hormone burst out of his brain as he sweat profusely,she was wearing beads,on her waist, multiple beads that rolls on each other making a funny sound,the sight and sound of the beads brought him to his knees as he hold her narrow waist rubbing the beads against her hips. Maku: ( sobbing pathetically as he hold her waist) Arore why? why?, why do you choose to punish me with this thing?, why do you want to make me crazy?( he stood) please Arore, I beg you,don't leave me again, I would do anything for you,I am a prince,my father is Ari, please marry me Arore: ( she laughed as if what he said was funny) fool,I only came to ease you,and you are here wasting my time with your talk( she threw down her wrapper and lie backward, she opened her legs and move her hands of her body sensuously) if you take time I would leave you till next tomorrow. Maku: (he was shaking with dangerous lust that can make a man kill a woman in bed) he pounced on her and quickly push off his skirt,he brought out his instrument and slide it her juicy hole) aaaaaaaargh,yeeeeeeeeh,mokuo( he shouted in pleasure, he was shouting and moaning so loud that if they had not been in the farm,people would have come out to see them. He rammed her hole for an hour but could not release,his desire was growing too,the reality of yesterday dawn on him,the pain of not been able to ease, he had to do something, but he could do nothing Maku: Arore, it has happen again, I can't ease,I don't know what to do now,please what should I do?( he was thrusting faster now) Arore: between that maid at Oyo and me,who is sweeter?. Maku still thrusting ) if she is as sweet as you, I would still be at Oyo now.(he managed to get those words out of his mouth, because of the super pleasure, a word is followed by a moan)Arore: ( she dragged him to herself in such away that they are airtight, she could feel his hot breath and fast heart beat,there was a great heat and Maku could feel his fluid travelling up his balls and with great pressure and force he shot a kilo into Arore and he immediately, he slumped on her,exhausted, Arore didn't push him away this time, she held him to herself and rubs his head seductively, they lay together till morning. |
Ayo5991:na so o, dem just they ban me anyhow,but don't worry me too I get strong head, I must finish this story,but I need comments to keep me going,happy new year bro |
ashatoda:you got the point sir,I am encouraged by your comment, happy new year you sir |
Maku is sitting outside the palm wine joint, there were some customers,especially war returnee, they are drinking and making comments about the war, about the slaves, elaborating fantastic war events with boasts and exaggeration. Maku was not aware of there presence, his mind was just on only one person; Arore. He had left the stream angrily that afternoon, he was very mad at the fool,legun,if not for him he would have got hold of Arore, but the bastard and hold him down till she slipped away. He had come straight to the palm wine joint,maybe he would see her at home. He met her mother and asked her about Arore whereabouts, but her mother didn't answer, she was bent on knowing whom he is,Maku had told her that he is her lover,he wants to marry her. She could saw the joy in her mother's face, she was apparently ready to marry her off, but why would she want to?, especially when she knows little about him. " forget that ", he said to himself, now he had been waiting for her since afternoon, but he could not see her anywhere. It is now very dark and Maku is getting depressed," where is this girl,why is she always putting me on the way?", Maku thought about how he will feel if she shows up,he will jump and grab her and then look for a comfortable place to make love to her. He imagine the pleasure of sliding his manhood into her creamy hole,how it will slide out and in,the pleasure, the fun," oh! am in trouble, Arore where are you?, please don't kill me with passion", He moaned as he got up,I will look for you,I must find you, wherever you are,he stepped out and walked into the darkness. It is midnight now Maku is still roaming the village like a wandering ghost, he had walked and walked but could not see Arore anywhere. He had gone to the stream to the market, to places he knew maidens would be, but it was as if Arore never existed. As he stagger around, he came across some Aro hunters. 1st hunter: who are you?, a man or a spirit ( he directed if burning torch toward Maku's direction, he saw his face, he was an Oyo, but something caught his eyes below his face,he can't believe, he could see an erected staff,unshaken, pointing north like a compass). 2nd hunter: laro,do you see that? an Oyo with an erected meat,looking for someone to rape I assume. 1st hunter: young man,come over here( he motioned for him to come). Maku: please gentlemen have you seen Arore, one tall slim girl,with firm bosom, the palm wine sellers daughter ( he described her with his hands). The hunters were dazed,if fact they are almost getting scared, maybe he is one of the numerous Oyo madmen that finds there way to Aro. They moved towards him and grabbed him, but Maku was stronger than the both of them. He punched the 1st hunter by the rib, which made him drop down in pain, the 2nd Hunter was head butted and he fell,he had broken his nose and blood was dancing down,Maku quickly ran away with his manhood standing straight. |
where are these boys?, I really want to feed them today, but thank God osanobua had called them to sleep, if not maybe they will celebrate the new year in mild depression |
samuk:This boy just they vex me,you want make I knock you out through phone, why you too dey dull and unlogical |
Etinosa1234:liars approving lies, who your lie help,we are great, and it is apparent. We are ancient, science confirmed it,we are unique the whole world say yes,if Benin say no,who are they?, just one irrelevant minor group,that has managed to gain popularity through international sex slavery. if you want me to feed you with more letters, quote me omode! |
nocomment9999:true history is the one that support your lies and over bloated tribal ego,abeg shift |
samuk:samudiot you wrote trash,complete trash,naso we mumu reach,idiot who are you composing history for!, if dem born you well Joke apart,go and speak this trash to yorubas in the real world that is when you will that khaki no be leather. Wish I could see you face to face, to see that your distorted face, or worst still speak this trash in my hearing, I swear, I would correct your deficiency with beating, you f0cking sissy hiding behind keyboard to conquer lands,yeye,your father's no fit talk less of you boys with little experience of life and death,we don't joke, we take the street |
You f0cking sissies comparing yourself with Israel and other minor nations who hold up against major aggressors, let me ask you do you have any updated arsenal or updated technologies that will serve you against Yoruba imperial power? Benin this Benin that, and biafrans ransacked your little gutter which you call city without your ball less men given any resistance, your big skirt chiefs ran up and down when biafrans announced their arrival with shells. Yoruba stood against the aggressors and no inch of their land was captured, now tell me you that biafrans sacked within a day, how much do we Yoruba need to ruin you, eyin omode! The glory of the war goes to the Yoruba, awolowo provide the strategy, Benjamin adekunle actualized it,talk less of you maggots, am ready for ya all bastards speaking trash all day long,let this be my new years gift to you f0cking worms |
EdoDefence:yeye! |
EdoDefence:i didn't insult you,I only answer you with proverb |
The day you worms will physically claim Lagos not with mouth,that is when I will believe you are sons of warriors not slaves,but if you can't,you are slaves sons of slaves,you claim imperialism,I laugh, even slaves desires to be in the place of the master,look around fools,we ain't your mate,we lead,you follow, aju yin lo ni,ki she ni kekere,eyin alainiran |
EdoDefence:it is a fool that quote proverb with a language that is listener does not hear, it is like pouring expensive soup on the floor |
AntiBalogunodua:more strength to the hands of these fool trolling me around,because you have been working hard,but getting less attention |
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he look hurt) why?, because I am an Oyo?.