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Contestants 2: emaculate99 & funlord

Judge 1: 93
Judge 2: 84
Judge 3: 93
Accumulative Total: 270

Contestants 3: Jigsawkillah & Imanuelle

Judge 1: 94
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 93
Accumulative Total: 270

Contestants 4: LadyF & 69MissedCalls

Judge 1: 91
Judge 2: 75
Judge 3: 83
Accumulative Total: 249

Contestants 5: rainiscoming & divinepen

Judge 1: 98
Judge 2: 84
Judge 3: 91
Accumulative Total: 273

Contestants 7: babyfaceafrica & barcaboi.

Judge 1: 90
Judge 2: 79
Judge 3: 85
Accumulative Total: 254

Contestants 8: slidewaxie & uncjay

Judge 1: 98
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 91
Accumulative Total: 272

Contestants 9: obiZEAL & Cosmasel

Judge 1: 97
Judge 2: 81
Judge 3: 89
Accumulative Total: 267

Contestants 11: Emyemyberry & alexdidi

Judge 1: 95
Judge 2: 82
Judge 2: 89
Accumulative Total: 266

Contestants 15: Divepen1 & Gr8Adedayo

Judge 1: 97
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 90
Accumulative Total: 270

Contestants 22: Ibnzubair & Donjowebs

Judge 1: 90
Judge 2: 73
Judge 3: 82
Accumulative Total: 246

Contestants 28: Smartlife & Kagari:

Judge 1: 92
Judge 2: 84
Judge 3: 88
Accumulative Total: 264

Contestants 30: PopeExplicit and Oyetunder

Judge 1: 92
Judge 2: 87
Judge 3: 90
Accumulative Total: 269

Contestants 34: trailblaiza & generaliy07

Judge 1: 95
Judge 2: 79
Judge 3: 87
Accumulative Total: 261

Contestants 36: Tuminibody & dchiefpriest

Judge 1: 94
Judge 2: 79
Judge 3: 87
Accumulative Total: 260

Contestants 45: Vantee20 & tkush

Judge 1: 96
Judge 2: 78
Judge 3: 87
Accumulative Total: 261

Contestants 46: Oracle009 & Kraftykc

Judge 1: 93
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 88
Accumulative Total: 264

Contestants 49: SHIZZY7 & Drabeey

Judge 1: 97
Judge 2: 78
Judge 3: 88
Accumulative Total: 263

Contestants 50: threedots & Chuksab

Judge 1: 92
Judge 2: 89
Judge 3: 91
Accumulative Total: 272

Contestants 53: Larryfly & IGITee

Judge 1: 96
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 90
Accumulative Total: 269

Contestants 55: april4mee & israelboy1

Judge 1: 96
Judge 2: 78
Judge 3: 74
Accumulative Total: 248

Contestants 56 : TheAgba & Speeder

Judge 1: 94
Judge 2: 86
Judge 3: 90
Accumulative Total: 270

Contestants 57: Orjhong & Wisdomkosi

Judge 1: 93
Judge 2: 85
Judge 3: 89
Accumulative Total: 267

Contestants 63: pureIvory & spidey77

Judge 1: 98
Judge 2: 82
Judge 3: 90
Accumulative Total: 270

Contestants 64: desmondDessi & beejayodus

Judge 1: 94
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 89
Accumulative Total: 266

Contestants 65: Weno & TheSCRYPT

Judge 1: 94
Judge 2: 88
Judge 3: 91
Accumulative Total: 273

Anyone who wants a break-down of how their poems were scored by each judge should please send me a mail...

desmondDessi:
Hmmmm so who and who qualified?

Making It To The Next Round Are:

Contestants 5: rainiscoming & divinepen with 273 points..

Contestants 65: Weno & TheSCRYPT with 273 points...

Contestants 8: slidewaxie & uncjay with 272 points...

Contestants 50: threedots & Chuksab with 272 points...

Contestants 2: emaculate99 & funlord with 270 points...

Contestants 3: Jigsawkillah & Imanuelle with 270 points..

Contestants 15: Divepen1 & Gr8Adedayo with 270 points..

Contestants 56 : TheAgba & Speeder with 270 points...

Contestants 63: pureIvory & spidey77 with 270 points...


Congratulations poets....


Your next deadline is 11:59pm, on the 24th of November.

Remember that your poems will be judged by these criteria:

i. Compliance To Renga Rules (50 marks)

ii. Grammatical Accuracy (20 marks)

iii. Poetic Devices (20 marks)

iv. Organization/Structure (10 marks)

& Goodluck....

Making It To The Next Round Are:

Contestants 5: rainiscoming & divinepen with 273 points..

Contestants 65: Weno & TheSCRYPT with 273 points...

Contestants 8: slidewaxie & uncjay with 272 points...

Contestants 50: threedots & Chuksab with 272 points...

Contestants 2: emaculate99 & funlord with 270 points...

Contestants 3: Jigsawkillah & Imanuelle with 270 points..

Contestants 15: Divepen1 & Gr8Adedayo with 270 points..

Contestants 56 : TheAgba & Speeder with 270 points...

Contestants 63: pureIvory & spidey77 with 270 points...


Congratulations poets....


Your next deadline is 11:59pm, on the 24th of November.

The writer of the haikus and the writer of the two liners should be mentioned at the start of the submission. Remember that your poems will be judged by these criteria:

i. Compliance To Renga Rules (50 marks)

ii. Grammatical Accuracy (20 marks)

iii. Poetic Devices (20 marks)

iv. Organization/Structure (10 marks)

& Goodluck....

All comments should go here:

www.nairaland.com/2708057/npc-collaboration-poetry-competition-season/13#40170495

Scores For The First Round Of The NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition:

Contestants 2: emaculate99 & funlord

Judge 1: 93
Judge 2: 84
Judge 3: 93
Accumulative Total: 270

Contestants 3: Jigsawkillah & Imanuelle

Judge 1: 94
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 93
Accumulative Total: 270

Contestants 4: LadyF & 69MissedCalls

Judge 1: 91
Judge 2: 75
Judge 3: 83
Accumulative Total: 249

Contestants 5: rainiscoming & divinepen

Judge 1: 98
Judge 2: 84
Judge 3: 91
Accumulative Total: 273

Contestants 7: babyfaceafrica & barcaboi.

Judge 1: 90
Judge 2: 79
Judge 3: 85
Accumulative Total: 254

Contestants 8: slidewaxie & uncjay

Judge 1: 98
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 91
Accumulative Total: 272

Contestants 9: obiZEAL & Cosmasel

Judge 1: 97
Judge 2: 81
Judge 3: 89
Accumulative Total: 267

Contestants 11: Emyemyberry & alexdidi

Judge 1: 95
Judge 2: 82
Judge 2: 89
Accumulative Total: 266

Contestants 15: Divepen1 & Gr8Adedayo

Judge 1: 97
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 90
Accumulative Total: 270

Contestants 22: Ibnzubair & Donjowebs

Judge 1: 90
Judge 2: 73
Judge 3: 82
Accumulative Total: 246

Contestants 28: Smartlife & Kagari:

Judge 1: 92
Judge 2: 84
Judge 3: 88
Accumulative Total: 264

Contestants 30: PopeExplicit and Oyetunder

Judge 1: 92
Judge 2: 87
Judge 3: 90
Accumulative Total: 269

Contestants 34: trailblaiza & generaliy07

Judge 1: 95
Judge 2: 79
Judge 3: 87
Accumulative Total: 261

Contestants 36: Tuminibody & dchiefpriest

Judge 1: 94
Judge 2: 79
Judge 3: 87
Accumulative Total: 260

Contestants 45: Vantee20 & tkush

Judge 1: 96
Judge 2: 78
Judge 3: 87
Accumulative Total: 261

Contestants 46: Oracle009 & Kraftykc

Judge 1: 93
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 88
Accumulative Total: 264

Contestants 49: SHIZZY7 & Drabeey

Judge 1: 97
Judge 2: 78
Judge 3: 88
Accumulative Total: 263

Contestants 50: threedots & Chuksab

Judge 1: 92
Judge 2: 89
Judge 3: 91
Accumulative Total: 272

Contestants 53: Larryfly & IGITee

Judge 1: 96
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 90
Accumulative Total: 269

Contestants 55: april4mee & israelboy1

Judge 1: 96
Judge 2: 78
Judge 3: 74
Accumulative Total: 248

Contestants 56 : TheAgba & Speeder

Judge 1: 94
Judge 2: 86
Judge 3: 90
Accumulative Total: 270

Contestants 57: Orjhong & Wisdomkosi

Judge 1: 93
Judge 2: 85
Judge 3: 89
Accumulative Total: 267

Contestants 63: pureIvory & spidey77

Judge 1: 98
Judge 2: 82
Judge 3: 90
Accumulative Total: 270

Contestants 64: desmondDessi & beejayodus

Judge 1: 94
Judge 2: 83
Judge 3: 89
Accumulative Total: 266

Contestants 65: Weno & TheSCRYPT

Judge 1: 94
Judge 2: 88
Judge 3: 91
Accumulative Total: 273

TheAgba:
Where is Ilaykorn ?

Gr8Adedayo:
he's working hard I guess. Let's be calm.

Thanks, Gr8Adebayo. One of the judges ran into some unforeseen circumstances which we were lately informed about so we had to delegate just this morning. They will be posted by the end of today, and the qualifying pairs of poets announced. Thanks for your patience, poets.

*following

ibnzubair:
IBNZUBAIR


There is this future we all expected
A dream that has kept us all excited
A past we believed, that never was
For as it had always been, we had no cause
Now we see a future that isn’t to be
Eyes open or closed that we won’t see
We rather told our hearts it will come
That the future was sure, and it was for some
Those opportune to rule like kings
They are those who fly over with wings
Who deceives us that we are on the path
But live on our wealth and grow so fat
O youths of today when will you arise
And tell yourselves “enough of the cries”
It’s time to fight for that which is right
Let on our torches, and not wait for the light
The light the deceivers have promised for long



DONJOWEBS


No! We won't tarry and wary
In this quest for our conquest
So let us embrace this race
To fight this gloom and doom of evening men
A doom that has built a room over our boom
Let us disunite our weaknesses
And unite in our strength of collective belief
Belief bonded and forged
In a furnace of brotherhood and nationhood
Let’s stand together and defeat the wrong
And to this I can proudly say
The future is here and has come to stay


ANALYSIS

This poem is generally about Nigeria... Past present and the likely future. We all believe in a great past that never existed, we kept whining in the present about our condition instead of standing up for ourselves and we hope the future brings better without working towards that...

The aim is the youth, they are the group most affected by this chaotic situation so it is left to them to decide what they want.


cc texanomaly

Please post it on this thread:

www.nairaland.com/2722154/npcc-competition-2-renga-fiesta

MzNelly:
Try to write a story. Just try to write a story once.

No, really, sit down in your room, pick up your pen and think of a plot. Think of what she/he looks like. Think of what should come next. Think of the suspense build up to keep your readers wanting more. Think of the denouement, tragedy, climax, anti climax, everything.

Try it.
And maybe, just maybe when you see how difficult it is, you would realize how important compliments/constructive criticisms are.

Awwww, this just pulled at my heart MzNelly.