Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 10:58pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
JigsawKillah: kpom means look and sometimes, weed Oh! Any other names for weed?  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 10:57pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
joseph1832: Rule 21 covers that.
Besides, I listen to Immortal Technique, Dance with the devil, men it is intense!!! I love em already. What got my attention was where they said only a hard core man can stab a man continuously and stand and watch the life depart outta the man. I wrote about the same thing in my previous poem "A bloody murder".
"There I stabbed and thus he cried Praying for the pain to ebb away Here I watched and thus I stared, Selfishly seeing the live ebb out of him".
Anyway Dr Dre sang something similar with Snoop, Little Ghetto Boy was the title.
Honestly bro, I really don't think your kid bro should be listening to songs like Dance With The Devil". I'll sure agree with you that it's not a song for kids.  Do you know of Eminem's Kim? |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 10:52pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
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Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 10:49pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
JigsawKillah: you know kpoli? Kpom? Perm? Perm means die. I know that one. The sound of those words make the lines sound funnier.  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 10:47pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
oreos: What about me? Come, no vex abeg. Na man you be abi woman? |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 10:42pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
JigsawKillah: Might I Woo Thee?
Lanicky, see as you siddon dey break my heart
Devil dey worry person but love dey play him part
Your nor go code, but them done clear you how crase take dey start?
My heart na engine, you be the key, na you dey make me start
I fit woo you? I dey fear if you say so
You be first class chick, you go need ego
Na the reason wey dey make me dey hail yayo
The same reason wey stress done make my head flat pass table
I fit gist you? I be street boy wey never sure of him break fast
You be rich girl, you and Genevieve na the same class
I open my eye, like Xavi when he dey kane pass
Out of 5 billion girls, you be first, you nor fit take last
As I perm, dey drag my kpoli
Since I kpom your pic, I swear I never lonely
I tie am for my waist enter hustle, like say na juju
You get ginger spirit die, abeg I fit be your mugu?
I fit woo you? Hahahahah. The emboldened got me rolling the floor.  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 10:40pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
firestar: Hold on bro,
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Di meds wey yu take ehn,
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Hope say na doctor prescribe am o?
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Ehen make I scatter yua yarn,
'Cos I no be boti and dem no born me for barn!
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Yu go get correcshun o!
Yu
Go
Get!
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All join di advice wey elders give me,
Yu
Go
Collect!
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First,
Yu no go get hypertenshun: na ma praya be dat.
Second,
Now e be like I get yua 'attenshun': Go hug one of PHCN's faulty high tension.
Shebi yua brain don sharge?
Oya nau, no say I harsh,
na ma request be dat.
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If I say:
I love yu,
No be dat one wey yu write.
Asha sef sing dat kain 'luv' for 'Subway',
Or na lie she dey lie?
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Yu be ma broda as ma sista Maedan dey too.
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If yu catch ma drift ma broda,
Know say I love her and odas as I love yu.
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Wrote this a few years back. Crazy....  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 10:34pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
Alexpissu: Well, I haven't really paid much attention to JigsawKillah but going by his recent "flips" , he come across to me as a rapper who is fearless . Everybody, wants a pound of flesh of him ,that alone goes to show that the young lad is making a SPELL . Undoubtedly, JigsawKillah remains one of the best poets this forum can boast of. Infact, he'd effortlessly get a place in 'my best 5', for he has the very rare ability of passing his messages across with the most simple, yet the most striking of words. That was the same thing I found charming about Charles Bukwoski. Infact, to give Jigs a nickname like 'NL's Bukwoski' wouldn't really be a bad idea... One thing still baffles me though, and that is the complexity of his rap verses. While he is being revered for possessing poetry verses that are simple, yet striking, I've always had a hard time trying to figure out what his rap bars mean. His, is a personality that really baffles me. llaykorn, I totally agree with you ...Maybe, your younger bro has been misled by the media.Well, Lupe Fiasco comes to me as rapper that gives me headache sometimes trying to understand .What is your take on Nas and Lupe Fiasco ? I haven't really listened to works by any of those. Will you recommend some really good ones from them? 1 Like |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 10:22pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
tohpahz: Lolz.. ermmmm. I'd think abt it.  Don't think for too long, before another lady takes your place.  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 10:17pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
joseph1832: Whoa, I must have missed that class, the only NPC class I learnt from was when Cisse taught tybur poem. I had a blast writing sex/e.rot.ic poems with it.
I'll try working on one Pidgin poem as soon as possible but I don't know if posting here might be dubbed breaking a rule? I won't mind if Obinnau can give us a helping hand. I'm talking about the WhatsApp group, sir. You were never a member of the group. Oh! I miss cisse7575... I miss that man so much. And, why would posting a pidgin poem be illegal? |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 10:10pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
kr0ne: See whining! Truth is, I don't really know the rudiments of poetry; the subject itself is complex and a bit confusing too. I've read a dozen or more of Shakespeare's novels. He used rhymes and stanzas most of the time. But here I see people telling me that rhyming doesn't matter in poetry. I guess you Literature students should know better. I'll join the site at my leisure. Thanks, bro. Poetry? Complex and confusing? Setting up a punchline is 1000 times more complex.  Lol, about rhyming. It's true that Shakespeare rhymed in his poems, but poems that don't rhyme will be called poems too. Most poems rhyme, really, but a lot don't rhyme too. This choice of rhyming or not that poets possess goes a long way in making us know that the essence of poetry lies way deeper than the 'foot/boot' or the 'ball/call' at the end of lines. It is an art that will succeed in passing a message and still be enjoyable even without rhymes. If your bars can still pass a message, make a meaning, and still be enjoyed even when your rhymes are removed, then, is some way you're doing poetry.  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 9:47pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
Alexpissu: hahaha! most rappers fail to understand that RAP is an expression . You have to key in to every aspects of it . Well, I am more fascinated to poet and storytelling rappers because they input knowledge,creativity and life in their raps. Many rappers can't get in line doing poetry ,they feel rapping is all about battle rhymes....If a poetic rapper is dissing you ,it will take you moments to figure out.
You can't go wrong listening to the likes of Immortal Technique, Killa Priest, Lupe Fiasco ,Nas , Kendrick Lamar ( I admire the technicality in his raps ) ,Eminem , Common e.t.c
Krone, don't make me laugh(we dey follow your footstep) ....I totally agree with llaykorn about his comment on you though.
Rebel, Coogar and Adanna are blessed Immortal Technique is a favorite to me too. I was trying to explain to my kid brother today what real rap meant and I just had to use Immortal Technique's 'Dance With The Devil' lyrics as an example. Well, he's a big fan of Olamide and Lil' Kesh.  And, you forgot JigsawKillah.  |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: "Chat Central and Derailer's Paradise"...Welcome! by llaykorn: 9:06pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
FriedPlantain: Grandma good morning o,
where that my other grandma Mrs Gurgle.?  Dey call your last born age mates Grandma.  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 9:01pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
kr0ne: LOL! Na you suppose teach me poetry na. I really don't understand the rules but I think I can catch up. Been studying Alexpissu lately. That one is a born poet. Another unknown poet in the rap section is Fuckyouhard aka Jason21, but he doesn't come online regularly. JayZ once said something. He said that rap is a mix of rhythm and poetry, and yes I agree with him. Good rappers like you have all it takes to be good poets. Infact, I saw what you wrote in the Greek gods cypher, and removing the ellipses and bar boundary signifiers, would make it a very good piece of poetry, sir. You could join this forum: allpoetry.com for awesome poems to study. It has some of the best poets in the world as members. You can follow me if you join, sir. My moniker is laykorn. 1 Like 1 Share |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 8:26pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
Oahray: hmmm... Tish me how to write the em... 'stick' something na  Come. Can you be whinning your elder brother like this?  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 7:54pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
kr0ne: Might I woo thee. . .
Gangsta way, like I'm blowing a tech bit.ch, I'm so in regret that I once showed ye respect treated you like a high-class queen when you're a gnome in the sense love gone now . . .all I hold is contempt! my dick stands better than the two growths in your chest ask around, cu.nt...the Krone is the best! you'd think I'm a babalawo the way them hos give me heads! in the hood, I flex a chick like I flex blings and treat her like a sex thing drop her like her ex did and jump on the next chick
Sorry...trying out something. Can't drop this poo on FFR. Chai, Oga Krone, rap wey dey inside this one pass the poetry wey dey inside wo.  Are these wooing lines too? |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 7:51pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
Oahray: me? How novice wan take get that kind mind na? Dey their dey whine yasef. If na you write am, talk joor.  Say, why don't you try an acrostic for _Shugaryme on this thread? She'd really love it.  |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 7:19pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
kinglahkay: llaykorn are you still down since mikuz is too proud to reply a nigga let's kick 10bars asap Oh! When I thought you had gotten a better option, I went for someone else. We're doing this after this battle I've got ahead of me.  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 7:16pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
AllNaijaBlogger, Joseph1832, kr0ne, JigsawKillah, let's go acrostic. We pick a moniker and we do it. Who's in?  |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 7:13pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
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Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 7:11pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
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Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 7:05pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
kr0ne: For fear of derailers, I'd prefer popping the thread on that very day. Hope he's aware and has accepted the date? Sure, sir! He even promised to come with a coffin.  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 7:02pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
kr0ne: 11 syllables!!! Llaykorn the great! Chaaaaai! Oga Krone, my head is bigging.  Welcome, sir! And, you're setting up our thread, sir. MuhdG VS Laykorn, 8 bars. 13th..  1 Like |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 6:49pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
firestar: *Reads through* Firestar, drop some verses na.  |
Literature › Re: Nmeri's literary junkyard by llaykorn: 6:00pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
Nmeri17: idk why my posts are always clamped even after spacing them. I used dots to separate paragraphs but it doesn't work. how does it look now?? Cool, very cool! It looks so attractive this way.  Ehen, make I read am now. |
Literature › Re: Nmeri's literary junkyard by llaykorn: 5:50pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
Nmeri17: do you know nothing about short stories No, you don't understand that. I told you you should care about how your poem looks on the page and not how your prose looks on the page. Besides, this one doesn't look good enough on the page, na. When you're writing prose, you should space all your paragraphs. It looks better that way.  |
Literature › Re: The Sparrow And The Ant by llaykorn: 5:44pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
FoxyFlow: FOR AJUMA PRINCESS OMEREJO
Came the reply. The sparrow jumped down and helped rolled the grain into the hole for the ant. |
Literature › Re: Nmeri's literary junkyard by llaykorn: 5:39pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
Nmeri17: ^^^ cc tou chmeder larry sun ishi love enoq uin I played girls again. still too manly??
llaykorn I wrote this one "caring how it would appear on print". how's it?? This one no be poetry na.  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 5:35pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
tohpahz: Whu will i woo. *thinking Clue: Joseph rhymes with many words. Writing a wooing poem for the name would be cool...  |
Literature › Re: The Sparrow And The Ant by llaykorn: 2:29pm On Sep 10, 2015*. Modified: 5:43pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
Wow! I must confess that I never expected that caprice, that swift change. I had initially thought this was just another of the our numerous folk tales that illustrate our old maxim that 'every good turn deserves another'. This displayed here, is creativity in it's most extreme form. And, I really mean do 'extreme'.  There's a lil' typographical slip in paragraph 7. Check. Cc: Seun Lalasticlala |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 1:42pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
joseph1832: llaykorn and allnaijablogger, very nice. I once wrote that poem for a certain Miss Nairaland, but tohpahz was who stole the show and possess the poem. Tohpahz? Nna, you use style get taste o...  |
Poems For Review › Re: Might I Woo Thee? by llaykorn: 1:16pm On Sep 10, 2015 |
*rubs palms.... Okay, leggo Why do beads of heavenly glint twist, twirl and swirl Around thy waist of charm as do cow bells? Why does thy lil' face still blushes a'red when Mocking early morning rays, the path it treads? Is not in the smooth of thy skin boundaries of charm set? Is not in the grace of thy smile the way to doom end? Why did the beat of thrill a space in you yearn? Why did the seat of wit a place in you earn? Ahhhh, cao, might I woo thee then - When autumn our friend bades farewell And the cold winter to ourselves is near? Might I woo thee then?  1 Like 1 Share |