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Congratulation! |
Witch you have to be in order to fly or may be you are superman. |
penfold: u mean anambra in general....the men were in a black 2000 camry...the hefty man at the wheel in blue check shirt was the SARS commander in anambra state based in awkuzu in anambra staWow! May their soul RIP. Abeg what's d full meaning of SARS? |
Op,well done and what a beautiful story so far. But I'm trying to imagine Aduke given birth without any assistance, also imagining how she gave birth 23 times and trying to picture how she manage to go into the kitchen few minutes after giving birth. Op, pls do help me out. Did she have supernatural power? |
[quote author=rikimaru@crowdk]Thanks for the observations, good ones too I might add. Let me attempt to clarify them. The story is a short story fiction laced with real events. Short stories are peculiar in the sense that the reader has to fill in a lot of details. the story is compressed and allows the reader to dream and create based on limited facts. Writing in my opinion should mould society and real events are the best ways to use to mould society, be that as it may, this is pure fiction and nothing more: the story is told of a man about to die and the events leading to his death. As to the issue of Television, Rimet is named after the original Jules Rimer (footballer and Fifa President) as at the time of the storyteller's birth, there had been about 6 world cups, the world war I and II and television and newspapers already existed. Also, his father was a civil servant and studied Marxism, meaning he most likely studied in England, the home of football. So yes, he knew alot about football and Jules Rimet Cheers Bro[/quote]Mba, Op I disagree totally with this o. Is Marxism a course on its own? Becos he is knowledgeable about marxism, so I should assume he went to England not even Germany? Rimet's mother believe in Jesus, should I also assumed she studied in Isreal? I was not born in that period, so as a writer, u should try not to leave me more confuse in as much is a short story. |
Luvlystar: plead on behalf of her, for the sake of loveLove ke, does he know the accuse. |
eeehhh o! This is writingggg. See turn and twist inside story. I know,I'm begining to sound like a broken record but I go still say my mind . Kai! Repo, u are a very good writer. You have this ability to bring out the right emotion at least in me. Also in every updates your ability to introduce new lines,plots and also the way u develop ur story is superb. But Repo u are not updating o since 2 weeks ago that I read last. |
DavidJohnDavid: No, none...But i have to ask the writer cultural related questions. IWhat inspire him/her to write? When did he start writing? His opinion about the writing industry in Nigeria? How to improve the reading culture in Nigeria? His thought about young authors who are making their country proud? In 5yrs time where does he think the Nigeria writing indusry will be? The role of book in the economic development of Nigeria? Op u ve to read at least half of his books o to know personal question to ask |
Chance I pray to have in order to finish what I started. |
Have u read all the author's book(s)? |
June 12 is not just about M.K.O, it's about some group of people who didn't respect our votes. Who didn't respect our right to choice. June 12 would have been a begining of attaining nationhood for us if not for some stupid set of people. If not for June 12, by extension thousand of people that died for it, there will be no democracy today. June 12 is the real democracy day and it should be honour as such whether M.K.O is a devil or not. |
Oga 4 this kind of love. By the way beautiful poem. |
biolabee: dont think he actually deserved a responseHonestly, if not for clay I wonder how many grandslam he would have won. |
slimchimex: i dont knw abt u oo,but as for me Nadal is the best tennis player d world hv eva seen... If u doubt me name any tennis player on dis earth dat have head-to-head edge over Nadal.... He have a major win over all d players with d best record against Roger federerOn clay! Yes he is best but on other surface nah. |
[quote author=Mynd_44]Here is a little idea, how does Miss NL become the face of NL offline? The logic seems lost don't you agree but you might just believe it cos you contested and lost right? Opps..... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() so if you had won, you would have become the face of NL right? And represented NL in what? No this is funny but serious in the words of Seun "this is just an internet contest"[/quote]That's a new low from you. Why the pessimism? If it's just an internet contest, why the shot? |
Op, u wrote Rimet was named after a popular footballer but there were no television then, so how did they get to watch football? And the begining of the story feels like I'm reading a biography then toward the end it turns to fiction. So, is it fiction or non-fiction? |
Wow! I love this but it is so short. There were alot of missing plots. Op there were few contradictions in your work, pls do work on it. |
baseg25: I wil be glad if ds is stick to d home pageEeeehn! |
Life itself is a paradox. you live to die. The dead cry for the dead. Inequality in life but equality in death. With all the wealth the rich man has, he still can't buy time. I certainly can't settle this paradox since life itself is a paradox. |
Op, I partly agree with you. Nice write-up. |
Go Re! Go Re! The queen of tennis, congrat. Just 2 more grandslams, she will equal Graff and Martina Natrilova in total grandslam wins. Then she will officially be crown G.O.A.T in tennis history. Whoo! I can't wait. |
To the panel of judges- Thanks for trying as much as possible not to been seen or heard but you are definitely felt. Pls do take a bow. To the contestants- You are all bold and beautiful, for coming out to be critique and praise, pls do take a bow. To the winner- congrat and pls let's see more of your posts. Abeg don't dissapear on us o. Also do take a bow. |
alutacontinua: Sexkillz, ain't the outgoing Miss Nairaland supposed to say something in all of this. Maybe when you're giving out the crown or something.It's true o, it will definitely add to the fun. |
'She is blunt to a fault' 'Once she write u off,u are off, that's it.' 'Today, our lack of oneness is expressly seen in the corruption of those at the topmost rung of the ladder to...' 'The spirit of a people is what binds them together as one- volkgeist theory.' Gosh! See the definition of beauty + intelligent. She is also a no-nonsense lady. Abeg may na vote this girl in o- the crown really fit her very well. I vote LUPELICIOUS. |
adexsimply: yeahI have seen it, thanks. |
[quote author=frank3.16]All right guys, the story ends here. funny I feel Chigozie smile down at me... I think she likes it. thanks guys for reading. I must be honest, I wouldn't have finished this story by now with out you guys. you all are my inspiration and you have made me understand that I can rule my world. I am proud to let my lost love know that I have finished the story I started because of her. I will take my time and work on all your critiques and ensure that the story comes out much better than you all have seen. you can also read my other stories: Cyber Lover, Tenth Generation, and The Lost key. thank you.[/quote]Eeyah, I'm definitely sure that Chigozie will be proud of you, and that you are definitely God's beloveth. Frank, thanks for sharing this beautiful story with us. Before I finally unfollowed this thread, pls permit to ask my final questions probably tomorrow, ok? |
Dan Brown is one of my favourite author. It was when I read 'deception point' that I realised Nigeria educational system is messed up. I also started asking questions during bible study when I read 'Angel and demon.' He made theology, algorithm,art and history fun. He is a total package. |
adexsimply: ok..but I'll need your mail nowok thanks |
Op, pls I don't mind if u can send to me 'the lost symbol' and 'inferno.' |
Great questions. Kudos to the panel of judges. |
'Lamentation' or 'Song of Solomon' |
[quote author=frank3.16]ok, i will have do more talkng on that, but i want you to visualize her lookin shabby, perhaps part of her boobs was exposed... but i will do some more work there thanks on the discreet angle, thats a mistake on my part... Frank 3.16: for God so love the world, that he sent frank, that whosoever beliveth in him, shall not perish in boredom but shall have everlasting fun.[/quote]Eeeeehn! Na u biko. Well done. Comment reserve until the final update. |
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