Hmm... Many people complaining about the way the story ended. I'll explain everything, including those who happen to be confused in some areas.
Myra left with anger and hate in her heart.
And certainly, she must have been planning her revenge and keeping tabs on them all this while.
When the wedding didnt go down well, she must have been very happy. And then when she got to know that they were taking a DNA test, she knew she had to do something.

Of course she didnt know that they wouldnt have turned out to be siblings, but she just wanted to make sure.

And then with the help of an insider, she was able to find out the results stated Negative. And then she faked a Positive result and had it switched in the Laboratory, tho she was caught escaping the hospital.

As for those saying Nathan shouldnt have died, well, life is never a bed of roses. Shits happens. People go through so much pains and misfortunes.

U havent heard of newly wedded couples dying on a plane crash for their honeymoon.
You havent heard of Brides sleeping on Friday night and not waking up when Saturday happens to be the day of their wedding?
You havent heard of Coupls being murdered in cold blood in their hotel room on their wedding night? What are we not saying?

What happened to Kainene and Nathan is just part of life.
Not everyone has happy endings. I'm just trying to portray real life situations in the story.

This is Naija. This is the 21st century. We're living in a wicked world. So shine ur eyes!

What av wonderful story buh honestly am still surprised about the ending part I mean the twist is too much putting everyone off guard you shouldn't have killed Nathan just like dat now that they have started enjoying their relationship (union). Coming to who is to blame, Chuks is the architect of all these things where Kainene is to blame comes at her inability to control her temper like they always say "two wrongs can't make a right". Myra shouldn't go scot free ooo, let her own karma visit her because she indirectly contributed to Nathan's death....... All the same is a very nice and educative story Kudos to ya wishing you safe delivery, you will give birth in a favour room like the Hebrew women and not in labour room.....

Thanks for a great story Mummy Chumzypinky, God bless you... please let there be a sequel because Myra can't go unpunished oo.

Tragedy

Lemme Just cry

Thanks chumzypinky for the mind blowing story. I enjoyed it. As for Nene.. I always knew her stubbornness would cost something precious.

Wow!!!
Nice story and the ending is great. At least someone believes (happily ever after )does not always happen.

nice story.i think kainene should be blamed.if she had showed patience d story wouldn't have ended lyk dat

wow... the end, finally
this is the most lovely piece I've ever read.
mummy pinky.. God bless u real Good

Nathan my real Gee
kainene.
kaka
mummyM
mummyC

Chuks is the cause of everything
not blaming Kainene cos that situation wud have been very frustrating for any one in her shoes..
the Chuka of a man made life miserable for her and finally took all she lived for.



Mummy pinky... u Re just wonderful.
and true, life is not a bed of roses.

enniewest:
Wow!!!
Nice story and the ending is great. At least someone believes (happily ever after )does not always happen.

i'm happy someone else believes dat as wel

hey Chumzypinky kindly avail us of the Epilogue. i wanna know what would happen to that selfish and desperate bitch Myra. she wanted Nathan to herself and she ended up making Nathan lose his life and Nene will be a single mother until death because she'll never be able to marry due to the blood oath, belive it or not blood oaths are binding and is unbreakable.

I can't deal with the tragic ending....so,I choose to imagine a beautiful one.Thanks for the story.

Hadampson:
Let leave her 4 now.. u knw she has been away 4rm nairaland 4 decade nw..

owk dear

well... Finally the story comes to an end. Not jst an end but a tragic one at that.... Nice one. Looking forward to another story.

Prettyhurts:


Mummy verere like seriously 7.5?? Wawuu!! If you're a lecturer you go stingy with mark.
Is not easy for someone(especially a mom of 3 & expecting 1 with a hubby to take care of) to combine her family chores and still come online to write. You're a mom too, one pikin self na work.

Na true U talk prettyhurts. It's not her effort I am rating but the story itself. She really tried and I know she will do better next time. But I think Chumzy rushed the end of the story.

to you my dearest mummy pinky...
THANKS SO MUCH...
truly...life is not a bed roses...and like you said..."this is naija ..we are in the 21st century.." people are indeed wicked!!...

I pray you safe delivery ma'am...GOD BE YOUR STRENGTH..


the twist of this is just so unbelievable and amazing!!


truly I was imagining how this story will end ..cause of the title..RED ASHES..


WE your readers .and followers just want to beg you for one last favour....PLEASE. we need an epilogue. to know what will become of Nene and Myra...and also Kaka..


once again..THANKS FOR THIS MASTERPIECE!!!

#I duff my respect..bad bad..

YOU'RE GREAT!!!

Gloria007:
I can't deal with the tragic ending....so,I choose to imagine a beautiful one.Thanks for the story.

lol, i luv ur style

For those asking what later happened to Myra, you read when the doctor said she had been caught, so naturally, she would be handed to the police and you know whats going to happen.

.

mummy mummy welldne o.b4 i say any fin let me first tank our God for seeing us thru this story.....


mummy chumzy d end of this story is so emotional..."" nathan death pain me o..."" ....

wish u a safe delivery mummy nd more ink to ur pen.....

I already gave myself another ending

Nene is so stupid and I feel like to strangle her with my feet

Azeequeen:
I already gave myself another ending

i luv ur style

And now I have to crawl out from hiding. It made a nice read. The ending though took me by surprise. Kudos to you.

OMG! Mummy Chumzy you are the best . Wehdone Man. I knew Myra was planning something and the end no be here. It's just outta the world. Tragic! I love tragedies

I blame nene for evrytin. She's t oo quick on taking decision and she has never gotten 1 right. Nice work chumzy it ws really grt reading ur work. May God continue to strengthen u n giv u d grace to reach higher ground

Wow, when the trigger went boom, I thought it would have been MozB o, but nevertheless Nathan had to pay the price. Just like Mummy Chumzypinky said, life isn't a bed of roses. Chumzypinky, is one in a million, of an ideal woman. God bless you and keep our Little Baby in the womb. I dedicate this story to Chumzypinky's unborn baby. God Bless Us...

I Know Dis Story Iz Nt Gonna End Well When I Saw D Title.I Have Been Thinkin And Wondering How The Title Will Corroborate With D Story Bt Sha Welldone.*Though Nt Happy Because Am Still Mourning Nathan Death*And Mabel Is To Blame Why Wnt She Knw Who Impregnated Her In The First Place,as For Myra The Thunda Dat Wil Fire U Is Stil Doing Pressup*but Wait O Myra Is Free Nd We Did Nt Hear Anyth Abt Chuks Oda Pikins Abeg Tory Has Nt End Joor Miracle Must Happen O

Nene is too impatient joor, must she take it the rascal way. What happen to her crying alone in her room not wanting to talk anyone.

[quote author=sexy377 post=54274640]I Know Dis Story Iz Nt Gonna End Well When I Saw D Title.I Have Been Thinkin And Wondering How The Title Will Corroborate With D Story Bt Sha Welldone.*Though Nt Happy Because Am Still Mourning Nathan Death*And Mabel Is To Blame Why Wnt She Knw Who Impregnated Her In The First Place,as For Myra The Thunda Dat Wil Fire U Is Stil Doing Pressup*but Wait O Myra Is Free Nd We Did Nt Hear Anyth Abt Chuks Oda Pikins Abeg Tory Has Nt End Joor Miracle Must Happen O We Did Nt Hear Anythn Abt Mozb Or Even Xavias Nd Kaka's Marriage Wit Her Guy Abeg Let There Be A Sequel O Nene Born Boy Nd Call Him Nathan Mum Chumzy Do Smth

Mummy pinky eeeh,u ar d no2 psn dt is mkin me weep@the tragic end of a story dts supposd 2end happily eva afta.we knw say we dy 4naija wey oyinbo romance no dy exist,dahz y we surf dz happily ever afta stories online cus we knw say im no go appen 4real lyf.u rili burst ma bubble wid dz endin oooo,u shuld av@least cut we hopeless romantics sm slacks.infact eeeh,ayam so vexn for u nw oooo.maka y did u do dz 2ma nathan nahsee chuks wey suppose die jst kum here kum dy dab anyhw in front of my back.if u want ma vexn 2reduce to 20%,kukuma gv d story anoda (happily ever afta)endn.lemme kukuma run away b4 d realest ppl in d oux wil strt prayn 4me 2receive sense.U MA SPECIAL WOMAN CHUMMZYPINKY,u rili av talent nd skills.less i frgt,wich syd of east u dy cus i wn mk u plait me free hair