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Heh. Why would anyone want to apply for such a dangerous job? |
Di you write this yorself? |
Yo didn't think it was necessary to indicate the title of your book? |
Congrats. Wishing your marriage the very best. |
Yo ave all obviously been affected by your parents' quarrels. Would you have preferred it if they separated? |
That fairy tale was written by misogynistic men to justify their treatment of women as inferiors. Ignore it. |
Nasty. Sorry about that. |
Wrong question. The right question is "how can I contribute something tangible to my husband's life?" |
StephenP:I've decided to review that story as a submission to give people an idea of what I'm looking for when I say the short story must be "cinematic" or "filmable". Paragraph 1: “Give me all your food!” He yelled at me and my roommatesNice. Dramatic. Implies a confrontation. Will look good on screen. [quote author="Original"]This was the fourth night in a row a damned senior had come into our room to “obtain” us. We constantly reported to the school administrators but they said they wanted solid evidence as if the finger and belt prints on our chests and back, our cut lips and swollen faces on those of us who did not submit themselves were not enough. We knew they were afraid to punish the seniors because of what they might do. But who wasn’t? It seemed like we would rather do as they wished than fight for what is rightfully ours, yet no matter how hard we try, we just cannot do enough to please them instead it only became worse.[/quote]Not filmable. (1) You're talking about the past, and (2) You're not being specific enough. What would work: at the beginning of the story, before this paragraph, write about what happened last night. Write about how the students attempted to report it. Let the students tell the principal "this is the third night in a row they have demanded something from us". Let the principal reply "where is your evidence?". Let the students point to their cut lips, swollen faces, and belt prints. And let the principal respond by saying, "that doesn't prove anything". Or something like that. For example, 3 nights ago I was woken up by a senior at about 2 am and he wanted me to wash his clothes (boxers included) and make sure they were dry before breakfast time, 7 am. I unconsciously thought out loud, “How the hell am I supposed to do this at night? There is no freakin’ sun!” and I got three hard slaps across the face. I saw his lips moving but I could not hear a word of what he was saying; all I could hear was what seemed like static and that is the last I remember because I blacked out.When I saw "for example", I was very happy. This is precisely how to do it. Images, dialog, and sounds. Now this bastard has come to make sure we die of hunger again tonight. I would have felt a lot better if they actually ate the food they took from us rather than throw it away or leave it out to rot like they did.Unfilmable in this form. The first sentence won't be necessary. The second could be shown elsewhere. I saw him go from locker to locker collecting food and any other thing that he fancied while the owner of the locker just stood beside him…watching…looking like he did not know that he was being robbed. The closer he got to my locker, the faster my heart beat. [s]Even though I had been through this many times before, every time felt like the first time except now[/s] I was angryLovely. Actions, words, images, sounds, feelings that an actor can portray. . Angry that none of the seniors could control themselves and treat us like their brothers not slaves, that the fucking school will not listen to us and come to our aid, that my parents brought me to this fucking school in fact this bleeped up country to suffer when I wanted to stay with them and the rest of my family in the US.Unfilmable. But now was not yet the time to get angry so I calmed down and put my camera in the pockets of my boxers that I had recently sewn in Home Economics class and walked up past the senior to a boy who had already been obtained and passed the camera to him and told him the signal.100% Filmable. Eventually, the senior got to me and said, “Oya comot all the food for your locker.” “No” I replied and looked at him defiantly in the eyes. He looked at me and backed up, “O boy, se you dey craze? My own slap no go be like that other senior’s own o, if I wooze you, you go land ICU fast fast. Now move!” “No,” I yelled walking closer to him, “you are going to have to either push and/or beat me first.” He dropped all the food and was about to hit me then there was a flash. He froze and turned his head to the side and saw the boy holding my camera and turned back at me and I smiled. I grabbed the camera and pulled out the memory stick. I yelled for someone to lock both exits, then, I pulled out my belt and to join me in beating him with no reservations. He begged so helplessly that one would think we were the evil onesInteresting. 100% Filmable. but we know his pride would not let him report us. Ain’t so tough now, huh?Unfilmable. I think the best way to write a cinematic story is to first write the story as it comes to you and then go through it a second time, rewriting the unfilmable parts of your story to make them filmable. It's easy. The principle to follow is "show, don't tell" and it applies to every kinds of writing. I hope to start getting official entries in about a week. Technically, StephenP is winning this competition right now since his entry is the only entry so far. Note that you can submit as many entries as you like, and I'm going to send a private review of each one to the writer. Seun has clearly stated he's simply looking for original ideas to use as a basis for a script.I'm not looking for a script, and I'm not looking for ideas. I'm looking for a self-contained and complete story. |
Her name is Cauleen Smith. She acts, directs, writes, produces, et cetera. Cauleen Smith , I’m waiting anxiously for her film as well.http://transition.turbulence.org/blog/2008/08/06/unusual-collaborations-at-creative-capital/ Someone should tell these people that Nollywood is no longer the unregulated, dynamic industry it used to be. ![]() |
Click the "ADD POLL" button at the bottom right corner of your thread. |
It's not a script. It's a short story upon which the script will be based. A solid foundation to build upon. |
Sussicorn is the mother of all humanity. |
except that I hate having constraints in my writing, like it has to be set in high school or it has to be 7500 words long or things like that. I wish I could participate but I cannot write anything close to 7500 and still make a lot of senseYou guys are getting me wrong, actually. 7500 words is the maximum length. There is no minimum length. |
Best friends. Boyfriends. Hmmm. People deceive themselves a lot. |
[quote author=ice_zik link=topic=157754.msg2618505#msg2618505 date=1218034471]Shouldn't we just write a screenplay or script if we can?[/quote]Yes, that is allowed, but not preferred. Writing prose allows you to concentrate on the story and not the format or dialog. UNLEASHED:I strongly recommend the story format, but you can use any format you are comfortable with. joyblinks:You will get a story by credit. e.g. "STORY BY: Joyblinks." or "Based On The Short Story 'Loverboy' Written by Joyblinks". The actual screenplay may or may not be written by you. If it is, you will also be paid and credited for that. Chaoga:"Cracking your brain" is not a bad thing because it makes you a better writer. Practice makes perfect. Ask Adichie. Moyola:No, but like every good story, it should be believable. Beline:I'm looking for an compelling original story, not a script. Many good storytellers can't write scripts. adekennis:That's the spirit. Sisikill, thanks for the support jare. I'm not looking for ideas, I'm looking for a story that I can make a movie with this year. If one could just throw random ideas together to get a good story, I would have done so with imdb. |
The contest is over. The winner is: Tuneh. A story about two sisters. UPDATES: |
[quote author=$$Rhino link=topic=157703.msg2617707#msg2617707 date=1218025851]Then un-shy them now, if you see prob in being shy, but don't come back here whining that same partner is lousy.[/quote]You can't "unshy" your partner any more than you can "unshort" a short partner. Don't waste your time with anyone you can't accept without reservations. Chikena. |
If someone indicates interested in you and you accept to have him/her, the next step should be to go for a HIV test (even if you have done it before).Wrong. The right time is when you've just decided to sleep with the person. It'd be silly to ask for an HIV test when you're still getting to know each other. |
How is that a problem? |
In October, a delegation from India’s film fraternity plans a trip to Lagos, Nigeria, to forge closer links. The Indians hope to tap a new overseas market for their movies, while the Nigerians are trying to better organize their production houses and gain more technical expertise, as they look to evolve along the lines of India’s fledgling studio system.Source: http://www.bytcs.com/anng/2008/8/6/india-eyes-nigeria-as-new-market-for-films.html What's your take on the above news? Does Nollywood have anything to learn from Bollywood about film-making, or are our constraints more economic than technical? Will Nigerian filmmakers improve when they interact with Indian filmmakers? |
http://del.icio.us/seunosewa/adichie -- read some of her shorts on the web; they are awesome. |
Otherwise you'll hunt us down and Taliban us? |
What part of Africa did they take over and when? |
Any luck? |
Me ra mo pe omo Ujesha n'be lu bee. |
Which company? Call them up and ask them. |
A new ministry would be nothing more than an avenue for more money chopping. Let the president handle the Niger Delta; it's a national emergency. |
The director's work involves more risk, that's why they earn more. If a scriptwriter messes up a script, all he/she has wasted is his/her time. If a director messes up a movie, millions of dollars or naira would be wasted. Also, a director's work is a management job. Management jobs always pay more. |
Market Report 1 August, 2008 Source: Nigerian Stock Exchange (via InvestorDelight.com) A turnover of 3.11 billion shares worth N38.16 billion in 72,680 deals was recorded this week, in contrast to a total of 4.05 billion shares valued at N43.75 billion exchanged last week in 73,782 deals. There were no transactions in the Federal Government Development Stocks, State Government Bonds and Industrial Loans/Preference Stocks sectors. The Insurance subsector was the most active during the week (measured by turnover volume), with 1.3 billion shares worth N2.05 billion exchanged by investors in 10,433 deals. Volume in the Insurance subsector was largely driven by activity in the shares of Investment and Allied Assurance Plc. Trading in the shares of the Insurance Company accounted for 811.8 million shares, representing 62.7% of the subsector’s turnover. The Banking subsector, boosted by activity in the shares of First City Monument Bank Plc and Fidelity Bank Plc, followed on the week’s activity chart with a turnover of 1.2 billion shares valued at N24.65 billion in 37,592 deals. Last week, the Insurance subsector led on the activity chart and was followed by the Banking subsector. Price Movement: The All-Share Index rose by 4.04% to close on Friday at 52,641.55. The market capitalization of the 209 First -Tier equities closed higher at N10.55 trillion. Eighty (80) stocks appreciated in price during the week, higher than the nineteen (19) in the preceding week. Mobil Oil Nigeria Plc led on the gainers’ table with a gain of N33.80 to close at N254.00 per share while Julius Berger Nigeria Plc followed with N25.91 to close at N146.24 per share. Other price gainers in the Top 10 category include: • Flour Mills Nigeria Plc - N8.05 • Unilever Nigeria Plc - N4.97 • Benue Cement Company Plc - N4.85 • Cadbury Nigeria Plc - N4.70 • UACN Plc - N4.42 • PZ Cussons Nigeria Plc - N4.13 • Guinness Nigeria Plc - N4.00 • UACN Property Development Co. Plc - N3.99 Twenty – Six (26) stocks depreciated in price during the week, lower than the ninety-two (92) in the preceding week. Three Petroleum (Marketing) Stocks led on the losers table. Chevron Oil Nigeria Plc led dropping by N46.05 to close at N213.76 per share while Oando Plc followed with a loss of N17.99 to close at N170.01 per share. Other price losers in the Top 10 category include: • Total Nigeria Plc - N9.50 • Nig. Enamelware Plc . - N8.61 • Nestle Nigeria Plc - N4.24 • 7-Up Bottling Co. Plc - N2.58 • G Cappa Plc - N1.47 • PlatinumHabib Bank Plc - N1.46 • Neimeth International Pharmaceuticals Plc - N1.43 • Ashaka Cement Plc - N1.00 Two equity prices were adjusted for dividend as recommended by the Board of Directors. Access Bank Plc was adjusted for dividend of N0.65 per share while NEM Insurance Plc was adjusted for dividend of N0.05 per share. COMPANY NEWS CONOIL PLC: Audited result for the year ended 31st December 2007 shows Turnover of N86.85 billion as against N90.52 billion in 2006. Profit after tax stood at N2.6 billion compared with N2.81 billion in 2006. The Directors are recommending a dividend of N2.75 per share. The date of closure of register of members is August 4, 2008 while payment date is September 19, 2008. PZ INDUSTRIES PLC: Audited result for the year ended 31st May 2008 shows Turnover of N65.94 billion as against N54.22 billion in 2007. Profit after tax, exceptional items and minority interest stood at N3.95 billion compared with profit after tax and minority interest of N3.51 billion in 2007. The Directors are recommending a dividend of N0.62 per share. The date of closure of register of members is August 25, 2008 while payment date is September 11, 2008. CAPPA & D”ALBERTO PLC: Audited result for the year ended 31st December 2007. The Directors are recommending a dividend of N0.50 per share. The date of closure of register of members is October 2, 2008 while payment date would be advised later. ASSOCIATED BUS COMPANY PLC: Audited result for the year ended 31st December 2007 shows Turnover of N3.13 billion as against N2.71 billion in 2006. Profit after tax stood at N141.25 million compared with N143.01 million in 2006. The Directors are recommending a dividend of N0.08 per share. The date of closure of register of members is August 7, 2008 while payment date is September 7, 2008. ASO SAVINGS & LOANS PLC: Audited result for the year ended 31st March 2008 shows Gross Earnings of N7.1 billion as against N2 billion in 2007. Profit after tax stood at N1.1 billion compared with N276.62 million in 2007. The Directors are recommending a dividend of N0.05 per share. The date of closure of register of members is October 6, 2008 while payment date is October 24, 2008. LASACO ASSURANCE PLC: Audited result for the year ended 31st December 2007 shows Gross Premium of N1.84 billion as against N1.6 billion in 2006. Profit after tax stood at N678.11 million compared with N171.35 million in 2006. The Directors are recommending a dividend of N0.08 per share. The date of closure of register of members is August 8, 2008 while payment date is September 4, 2008. The 28th Annual General Meeting (AGM) of shareholders is scheduled to hold on Thursday, September 4, 2008 by 11.00a.m. The venue would be advised later ROYAL EXCHANGE ASSURANCE (NIG) PLC: Audited result for the year ended 31st December 2007 shows Gross Premium of N2.7 billion as against N2.14 billion in 2006. Profit after tax stood at N543.64 million compared with profit after tax and exceptional items of N178.71 million in 2006. The Directors are recommending a bonus of 1 for 10. The date of closure of register of members was June 30, 2008. GREAT NIGERIA INSURANCE PLC: Audited result for the year ended 31st December 2007 shows Gross Premium of N608.04 million as against N289.74 million in 2006. Profit after tax stood at N90.25 million compared with loss after tax of N155.35 million in 2006. GREAT NIGERIA INSURANCE PLC: Unaudited result for the half year ended 30th June 2008 shows Gross Premium of N563.7 million, as against N425.2 million in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N85.4 million compared with N75.85 million in 2007. NEM INSURANCE PLC: Unaudited result for the half year ended 30th June 2008 shows Gross Premium of N2.32 billion, as against N1.31 billion in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N560.92 million compared with N213.8 million in 2007. OASIS INSURANCE PLC: Unaudited result for the half year ended 30th June 2008 shows Gross Premium of N521.35 million, as against N158.01 million in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N138.05 million compared with N17.11 million in 2007. CORNERSTONE INSURANCE PLC: Unaudited result for the half year ended 30th June 2008 shows Gross Premium of N2.13 billion, as against N1.7 billion in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N438.7 million compared with N330.52 million in 2007. ASHAKA CEMENT PLC: Audited result for the year ended 31st December 2007 shows Turnover of N16.5 billion as against N16.8 billion in 2006. Profit after tax stood at N1.6 billion compared with N3.4 billion in 2006. The Directors are recommending a bonus of 1 for 6. The date of closure of register of members is August 25, 2008 ECOBANK TRANSNATIONAL INCORPORATED: Unaudited result for the half year ended 30th June 2008 shows Gross Revenue of N61.3 billion, as against N38.02 billion in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N9.0 billion compared with N6.6 billion in 2007. OANDO PLC: Unaudited result for the half year ended 30th June 2008 shows Turnover of N124.41 billion, as against N106 billion in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N3.7 billion compared with profit after tax and exceptional items of N2.31 billion in 2007. STERLING BANK PLC: Unaudited result for the third quarter ended 30th June 2008 shows Gross Earnings of N27.1 billion, as against N16.01 billion in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N4.6 billion compared with N2.5 billion in 2007. RT BRISCOE (NIG) PLC: Unaudited result for the half year ended 30th June 2008 shows Turnover of N9.03 billion, as against N8.01 billion in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N391.1 million compared with N326.04 million in 2007. IKEJA HOTEL PLC: Unaudited result for the half year ended 30th June 2008 shows Turnover of N3.22 billion, as against N2.5 billion in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N555.61 million compared with N397.84 million in 2007. LAFARGE WAPCO PLC: Unaudited result for the half year ended 30th June 2008 shows Turnover of N22.2 billion, as against N19.9 billion in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N4.75 billion compared with N5.82 billion in 2007. TRIPPLE GEE & CO. PLC: Unaudited result for the first quarter ended 30th June 2008 shows Turnover of N225.6 million, as against N161.82 million in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N26.14 million compared with N16.9 million in 2007. FIRST ALUMINIUM NIGERIA PLC: Unaudited result for the half year ended 30th June 2008 shows Turnover of N4.28 billion, as against N4.3 billion in the comparable period of 2007. Loss after tax stood at N13.82 million compared with N171.7 million in 2007. INVESTMENT & ALLIED ASSURANCE PLC: Audited result for the year ended 31st December 2007 shows Gross Premium of N675.7 million as against N159.2 million in 2006. Profit after tax stood at N304.65 million compared with N54.64 million in 2006. The Directors are recommending a dividend of 0.8 kobo per share. The date of closure of register of members is August 8, 2008 while payment date is September 8, 2008. INVESTMENT & ALLIED ASSURANCE PLC: Unaudited result for the half year ended 30th June 2008 shows Gross Premium of N611.93 million, as against N354.2 million in the comparable period of 2007. Profit after tax stood at N252.9 million compared with N136.8 million in 2007. REPORT ON THE OTC MARKET FOR FGN BONDS A turnover of 371.63 million units worth N368.14 billion in 3413 deals was recorded this week, in contrast to a total of 232.62 million units valued at N232.6 billion exchanged in 2001 deals during the week ended July 24, 2008. As in the preceding week, the most active bond (measured by turnover volume) was the 5th FGN Bond 2018 Series 2 with a traded volume of 34.85 million units valued at N31.51 billion in 287 deals. |
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