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Government of the people, By the people, for the people— Rule of the majority, Bloodlines unshackled, No iron crowns forged in the kiln of kin. When she came to Nigeria, She wore a radiant face, Like a goddess alighting On an enchanted mountain. Young and old stood in awe, Marvelling at her grace. But soon, tribalism rose— With machetes, Guns, And hate. Not to guard her, But to wound her. My country turned against her, Like lepers cast aside— Rejected, dejected, and slain. You dare not raise your voice, Even when your heart bleeds; For truth is now rebellion, And silence—virtue. What a shame. I fear democracy is doomed. I fear my own kind— Not our colour, but our minds, That often drift toward evil. Power corrupts— And absolute power, absolutely. Now tyranny dons her garment, Pretending to be free. I bleed. She bleeds. Nigeria bleeds. © INEKE BSC https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100091726957654 |
Body odour, mouth odour, and snoring are siblings; offspring of one mother called Irritation. |
stansaintly:Here's an in-depth stanza-by-stanza analysis of the poem GOLDEN COFFIN by Ineke BSC: Stanza 1: “You bought him a golden coffin for death, But withheld silver coins when he begged for breath. All messages and pleas—your ears turned deaf, And his weeping voice you tagged a mere cough.” Analysis: This opening stanza sets a stark and ironic tone. The juxtaposition of "golden coffin" and "silver coins" draws attention to misplaced priorities—lavish spending after death vs. stinginess in life. The second and third lines emphasize willful ignorance: “ears turned deaf” and dismissing cries as “a mere cough.” It criticizes those who ignore suffering when help is needed most, but perform grand gestures after it’s too late. --- Stanza 2: “You gathered in numbers, dressed in fine lace, With tears like rivers carved on your fine face. You spoke of his kindness, his strength, his grace, But where were you in his time and space?” Analysis: This stanza targets the hypocrisy of mourners. It paints a vivid picture of a well-attended funeral, but questions the sincerity of their grief. The poet challenges the mourners’ absence during the deceased's struggles, asking “where were you in his time and space?”—a rhetorical blow to show their love was performative, not practical. --- Stanza 3: “He begged for a pill, a meal, a call, You heard his cry, yet did nothing at all. Five thousand was too much to spare, But now millions shines in the casket's glare.” Analysis: This stanza dives into specific examples of neglect. Simple acts—medicine, food, communication—were denied. The poet highlights how a small amount (₦5,000) was considered excessive when the person was alive, yet ₦1,000,000 or more is now spent on the coffin and funeral. “Millions shines in the casket’s glare” is a biting metaphor that reveals vanity in death rather than compassion in life. --- Stanza 4: “You carved his name in polished wood, Told tales of how you ‘did what you could.’ But love delayed is love denied— He needed you more when he hadn’t died.” Analysis: Here, the speaker directly critiques the false narrative often spread after death. “Told tales” implies exaggeration or lies about efforts supposedly made. The third line, “love delayed is love denied,” is the moral punch—it reminds readers that affection and help are meaningless when offered too late. The final line reinforces this, urging support while the person is still alive. --- Stanza 5: “Why do we wait till breath is gone To sing the praises we should’ve shown? Why buy flowers for a lifeless hand, When we could’ve helped him learn to stand?” Analysis: This stanza becomes more philosophical and reflective. It questions societal norms—praising the dead while ignoring the living. The imagery of “flowers for a lifeless hand” is powerful and sorrowful, contrasting with the hopeful image of helping someone “learn to stand.” It urges readers to be proactive with kindness. --- Stanza 6 (Final): “A lesson etched in silence deep— Give while they’re awake, not when they sleep. Don’t let regret be your final gift— Be the hand that heals, not just the coffin lift.” Analysis: The poem closes with a universal call to action. “A lesson etched in silence deep” suggests that this wisdom often goes unspoken until it's too late. The metaphor of sleep for death reminds us to give while people can still receive. The final two lines are especially poignant: instead of letting regret be the legacy, choose compassion in life. The contrast between “the hand that heals” and “just the coffin lift” encapsulates the entire poem’s message—act now, love now. --- Final Thoughts: Golden Coffin is a masterful critique of posthumous affection and societal neglect. It balances emotional weight with lyrical strength and leaves a moral that resonates deeply: love and help should be offered in life, not just mourned in death. |
GOLDEN COFFIN by Ineke BSC You bought him a golden coffin for death, But withheld silver coins when he begged for breath. All messages and pleas—your ears turned deaf, And his weeping voice you tagged a mere cough. You gathered in numbers, dressed in fine lace, With tears like rivers carved on your fine face. You spoke of his kindness, his strength, his grace, But where were you in his time and space? He begged for a pill, a meal, a call, You heard his cry, yet did nothing at all. Five thousand was too much to spare, But now millions shines in the casket's glare. You carved his name in polished wood, Told tales of how you “did what you could.” But love delayed is love denied— He needed you more when he hadn’t died. Why do we wait till breath is gone To sing the praises we should’ve shown? Why buy flowers for a lifeless hand, When we could’ve helped him learn to stand? A lesson etched in silence deep— Give while they’re awake, not when they sleep. Don’t let regret be your final gift— Be the hand that heals, not just the coffin lift. |
noleflendum:You are a fool, if not you wouldn't have opened that your stinking mouth to call out Southeast when no particular region was mentioned. That's how you guys have been championing hate against Ndigbo. Infact, I wish your region the destruction you pray for us. |
RIVERS THAT THIRST FOR BLOOD By Ineke BSC These Rivers—when will your thirst be quenched? Once a land where fortune smiled, A cradle where hopes took root and grew, Now drowning in greed’s cruel tide. You were a darling, Rivers bold, A beauty envied far and wide. But shadows crept with whispered schemes, And power’s struggle dimmed your light. The battle rages, men play gods, Their hands are stained with their people’s pain. They drain your lifeblood without remorse, Their lust for power a ceaseless flame. Godfathers feast upon your flesh, Like leeches clinging to the dawn. They trade your peace for blood and coins, Leaving you shattered, weak, withdrawn. Your waters once embraced the moon, Now they boil with silent screams. No longer rivers, but torrents of blood, A kingdom lost to fractured dreams. These Rivers—how long will you thirst? How long will you drink your children’s blood? How long before the chains are shattered, And justice flows within your flood? |
RIVERS THAT THIRST FOR BLOOD By Ineke BSC These Rivers—when will your thirst be quenched? Once a land where fortune smiled, A cradle where hopes took root and grew, Now drowning in greed’s cruel tide. You were a darling, Rivers bold, A beauty envied far and wide. But shadows crept with whispered schemes, And power’s struggle dimmed your light. The battle rages, men play gods, Their hands are stained with their people’s pain. They drain your lifeblood without remorse, Their lust for power a ceaseless flame. Godfathers feast upon your flesh, Like leeches clinging to the dawn. They trade your peace for blood and coins, Leaving you shattered, weak, withdrawn. Your waters once embraced the moon, Now they boil with silent screams. No longer rivers, but torrents of blood, A kingdom lost to fractured dreams. These Rivers—how long will you thirst? How long will you drink your children’s blood? How long before the chains are shattered, And justice flows within your flood? press9jatv: |
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Kosiso12:When my two enemies fight, it means God is at work. |
santaclaws:Yet you couldn't replicate such in your own state. How many non indigen did you allow to vote in the last election? You didn't allow people to vote in your state because they were not ready to vote for your candidate. You chased them away |
crossfm:I wanted to like your comment but I discovered that your total like and Nigerian's total gold are the same 16. I don't want to alter the number |
Whose hands dem go cut like that? Hope it's not illegal cutting because me I no trust anybody including you. I mean, you too. |
Na now wetin dem dey talk say e dey happen for naija touch me. Haba mana, how pesin go dey take cool off after everyday pressure and struggle. This is wicked served with malice. I never said anything but they have finally touched where they shouldn't have. |
The winning has claimed more lives than the entire afcon golden trophies Nigeria has ever won. It's sad |
MadamExcellency:You're wrong bro. The 3 major functional roles of the Nigerian Navy are 1. Military role (to secure our maritime "territorial" integrity. 2. Policing 3. Diplomatic role I will allow you to make your findings and come back for constructive criticism or arguments. |
accordadoga28:I'm not surprised, your father was equally useless while marauding your fruitless village aimlessly. If not, you would not have been mentioning Igbo your comments. |
The person that spent the least. |
The hottest places in hell are reserved for those who, in times of great moral/political crisis, maintain their neutrality |
Peter OBI is really stingy He didn't even want to share the question they asked Him in Chatham to anyone including his vice .�� |
RestructureNig7:Child, you're playing with fire. |
dudusky007:Good thing no dey do my brother. E dey get sweet savory always |
Legendary Brazilian footballer, Kaka has taken to his Instagram Story to induct Paris Saint Germain star player, Lionel Messi into a group of footballers he called “Triple Crown Elite List The group is made up of players who have won the UEFA Champions league, the Ballon D’or and the FIFA World Cup. Lionel Messi had previously won the UEFA Champions league and the Ballon D’or but his recent victory along with the Argentine national team qualified him to make the list. Currently, there are nine football stars in that list. They include: Manchester United legend, Bobby Charlton; Bayern Munich legend, Franz Beckenbauer; German legend, Gerd Muller; Italian legend, Paolo Rossi; Real Madrid legend, Zinedine Zidane; Barcelona football club legends, Rivaldo and Ronaldinho; AC Milan legend, Kaka and then Argentine star player, Lionel Messi. Of all the persons who made the list, only Lionel Messi is still an active player and has so far won more trophies than the eight of them.
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�Nigeria �� world cup squad 2022 Goal Keepers Lai Muhammad (Chelsea) Gumi (Manchester United) A.Kyari( Barcelona) Defenders Sabinus(Liverpool) brain Jotter (Arsenal) Sydney(Arsenal) Lamba(Real madrid) Nasty Blaq(Tottenham) Mark Angel(man City) Broda Shaggi (Liverpool) Stefno Miles (Arsenal) Midfielders El Rufai (Chelsea) kiriku (newcastle) Davido(manchester united) burna boy(Liverpool) Wike (Napoli) Attackers Janemena (Arsenal) Atiku(Chelsea) peter Obi(Arsenal) Tinubu (manchester united) Wizkid and Shetima did not make it to the world cup ��� ..no laugh 2musssshhhhh oOoOO ���������� Copied from Greatness Jonathan Chukwuzubelu
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hisexcellency34:What is the meaning of forfeiture? |
Ego is just a small three letter word which can destroy a big twelve letter word called RELATIONSHIP. The desire to always be right can ruin every relationship. Apologizing does not always mean that you are wrong and the other person is right. It just means that you value your relationship more than your ego. Relationship never dies a natural death they are killed by Ego, Bad attitude and Ignorance. A Big ego is your worst enemy at work, relationship and other aspects of life. People with big ego tend to hurt others with their behavior. They are too consumed with themselves which at times comes out in form of pride, self-obsession or arrogance. You should always try and be humble and put your anger and ego aside. Ego has the word GO to remind us that it is the right thing to do with it. So let go of your ego no matter how high you go. ���� ����� ���� ��, ��� ��� ��� ����� ��� ���� �������; ���������, ���� ���������������� ���� ��, ��� ���� �� ��� ���� ���, ��� ���� ������������. When Ego goes, Relationship stays. You can only find the true happiness that you are looking for once you learn to let go of your ego. EGO is a major requirement to destroy any relationship. So skip the E and let it GO. If you want a lasting relationship. #JESUS_SAVES
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How Redesigned New Naira Notes Will Favour Peter Obi In 2023' Somehow, God is helping Peter Obi as he gradually moves nearer to Aso Rock in 2023.https://m.facebook.com/story.php?story_fbid=pfbid0Sz2dAVtgTnmDEtxCdboM9ELsLcsTUSSAXaYPc7GmsHb6KxGauxbTNwZKNzDxe22ml&id=545058025
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They once said that "it is absolutely impossible for a corrupt government to give an incorruptible award". |
After boarding, they will allow the plane to fly to highest altitude first then they will bring out the hidden bill and multiply it by 10. |
Convinced Casemiro never knew that he was signed so that Ronaldo will have someone to talk to on the bench.
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ominilongest:Ok. No wahala bro, inasmuch as I love Messi, I love Ronaldo too. That guy has really given his best for the round game. Whether he wins or loses I cherish him dearly as one of the best |
ominilongest:Una dey always grumble when the result no dey favourable to una. Na the same lineup Man United use win 4 straight matches |
NiggasInParis:Why you no complain when he used the same pattern to win 4 straight matches before Man city? Ode |

