Poems For Review › Re: Time by StephenP(op): 8:04pm On Jun 28, 2008 |
@daphoenix, thanks mami. By the way, where are you? I haven't seen you in a long ass time. |
Forum Games › Re: Be The Last Person To Post Here: by StephenP(m): 8:27am On Jun 28, 2008 |
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Literature › Re: Write Your Own Very Own "drabble". by StephenP(m): 8:03am On Jun 28, 2008 |
Different Drabble
Her mind was chaotic. I saw in her eyes that she loved me, but I also saw a mystery in her that I couldn’t unfold. It felt unsettling to know that she could be dangerous and without a scale of measurement I couldn’t prepare myself for her disaster. I felt it when she changed. I could feel it in her touch, in the way her eyes wandered off, in her blank stare comprised of empty emotions and burdensome thoughts. Constantly walking on eggshells, I would always wonder how I drove her into such a dark pit and why I always found myself there with her. It all drove me crazy, but I also saw her efforts to please me. She was always insistent on trying, asking about my well being and attempting to nurture me, but she had no idea what she was doing. I could see it was driving her insane. If only she realized that the only competition she had was the girl staring back at her in the mirror, then maybe . . .just maybe, she would relax and be herself. I wondered how long I would have to continue trying to convince her to let go her fears, and tell me everything. We were driving each other off the cliffs of sanity, but neither of us wanted to hit the brakes. No. Not yet. I would let go if I could . . . find another . . . but I loved her. In each of our reckless lives, we found common ground together. Apart we were a mess, together we were just as messy, yet somehow we had inner peace. Somehow, we were meant to be one. |
Literature › Re: Write Your Own Very Own "drabble". by StephenP(m): 7:41am On Jun 28, 2008 |
StephenP: I don't know why peeps were arguing but I guess it's all cool now. Since some of you guys liked the first story, I decided to continue it.
Caution: This is R rated. Reader discretion is advised.
I was inside her. She bit her bottom lip in fixation of what was to come. She said that I knew her body more than anyone she had ever met. . . and I believed it. I took my time to find what made her arch her back and grab my skin. Sometimes she dug her nails into me unknowingly, but I didn’t complainI . . . liked it. I liked when she squeezed tighter and pulled me farther inside her, begging me to either quicken or slow the pace. She melted in my arms. Temperatures increased, positions were explored. I had entered a sinful heaven. I loved the look on her face, the pleasure in her eyes. I grabbed her hips and flipped her. Her head hung off the bed; her hands grabbed the sheets to prevent a fall. But it was inevitable, and I was wild. . . Continued. . . It felt like an earthquake, except I wasn’t afraid and I didn’t want to hide. Random objects flew off the nightstand. She had one leg on the TV Screen and the other leg slightly touching the corner of the bed. No matter the lustful madness occurring, I kept my focus and so did she. She was untamed, her heat brought sweat pouring down my body. She was unquenching, pure energy, pure fire. To me, this was both a blessing and a curse because though she was always ready and eager for me, I was not always the same for her. But let no mistakes be made, I was still the son of Zeus and her body treated me that way. |
Romance › Re: Distant Relationships by StephenP(m): 6:03am On Jun 28, 2008 |
@ poster, that long distance shit don't work at all. Pull out while you can. |
Poems For Review › Re: I Said Yes - Please Criticize by StephenP(op): 4:38am On Jun 28, 2008 |
nonso3k: cool.kind of like the poem,it makes some sense Thanks |
Romance › Re: Alert! Men. What Physical Features Turns You Off In A Woman by StephenP(m): 8:28pm On Jun 27, 2008 |
Girls with sideburns thicker than mine like Ashanti. |
Romance › Re: Attention! Ladies. What Physical Features Can't You Stand In Men. by StephenP(m): 7:13pm On Jun 27, 2008 |
Damn, with all these new threads, one would think today is "Hate Naija Men" Day. |
Romance › Re: Cocktail Of Men: The Type Of Brothas Who Turn Us Off! by StephenP(m): 6:51pm On Jun 27, 2008 |
@Topic, ROFL!! Damn that list was hella funny! |
Poems For Review › Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(op): 7:54am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Mesmerize: Good, bring your hands. . now Imma cut it with knife and add a little salt and pepper to it, but dnt be afraid  LOL |
Romance › Re: Why Do Guys Strare\look Sooo Much!? That Shit Can Be Very Embarrassing! by StephenP(m): 6:53am On Jun 27, 2008 |
really that's what I thought  |
Romance › Re: Why Do Guys Strare\look Sooo Much!? That Shit Can Be Very Embarrassing! by StephenP(m): 6:45am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Mesmerize: For the kitchen na. . what were you thinking?  exactly what I thought lol |
Romance › Re: Why Do Guys Strare\look Sooo Much!? That Shit Can Be Very Embarrassing! by StephenP(m): 6:43am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Mesmerize: keep that for the _________  lol. . . the what? |
Poems For Review › Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(op): 6:40am On Jun 27, 2008 |
I guess I want to find out. |
Romance › Re: Why Do Guys Strare\look Sooo Much!? That Shit Can Be Very Embarrassing! by StephenP(m): 6:36am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Mesmerize: Let's not go with either maybe or maybe not. Let's go with Yes  hmm |
Romance › Re: Why Do Guys Strare\look Sooo Much!? That Shit Can Be Very Embarrassing! by StephenP(m): 6:18am On Jun 27, 2008 |
maybe, maybe not |
Romance › Re: Why Do Guys Strare\look Sooo Much!? That Shit Can Be Very Embarrassing! by StephenP(m): 6:08am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Mesmerize: So tell me what's on your mind when you stare at a woman you think is attractive I don't stare  |
Romance › Re: Why Do Guys Strare\look Sooo Much!? That Shit Can Be Very Embarrassing! by StephenP(m): 6:04am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Mesmerize: lmao!! nawa o na real wa |
Poems For Review › Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(op): 5:55am On Jun 27, 2008 |
What are you gon' do with them? |
Poems For Review › Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(op): 5:12am On Jun 27, 2008 |
lol. . . not tryna be corny or anything but show me what you got. |
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Poems For Review › Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(op): 2:48am On Jun 27, 2008 |
I'm not afraid. |
Poems For Review › Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(op): 2:38am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Thanks for the info I'll make sure that I wear my metal boxers. |
Romance › Re: She Rejected Me But Wants Computer Lessons by StephenP(m): 2:30am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Mesmerize: fwb? ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! stephen!!  lol |
Romance › Re: She Rejected Me But Wants Computer Lessons by StephenP(m): 2:19am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Mesmerize: ahhhh. you peeps need to stop dreaming! nah . . . not to me. We are just FWBs right?  |
Poems For Review › Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(op): 2:17am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Mesmerize: make me!  Quit frontin' I know you will. It's somewhere on my bed. |
Poems For Review › Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(op): 2:15am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Mesmerize: ashewo, I bet it is! and am sure you'll be a gentleman enough to go and get it for me  LOL!! No Ma'am, you'd have to go get it yourself. |
Romance › Re: She Rejected Me But Wants Computer Lessons by StephenP(m): 2:08am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Sorry Doc, She remarried. |
Poems For Review › Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(op): 2:03am On Jun 27, 2008 |
stillwater: Oh my, . That makes me breathless [s]control yourself he's too young, too young[/s]   |
Poems For Review › Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(op): 1:52am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Rawdeal: Okay stephen, do d craziest thing ever. i dare you to drop your mobile number and address on this post right now Address: 234 Yahoo-Yahoo St. Apt. 419 NY, NY 10014 Tel: 718-419-1419  |
Romance › Re: Should Men Be Allowed To Have A Right Over Their Unborn Babies? by StephenP(m): 1:48am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Damn sometimes I don't understand some women at all. If the dude had made the woman abort the baby, they'll be like "how can he kill his own unborn child?" Now here's a dude who's telling her not to abort and now the story changes to "he has no right over the unborn child." WOW
Since we all are for equality, I think both the man and women should have an equal right in determining the fate of the unborn child |
Poems For Review › Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(op): 1:04am On Jun 27, 2008 |
Rawdeal: Stephen lock up. that number is too much for a normal person. Was it u who applied for more girlfriends? LOL I'm a stunna Mesmerize: stephen this is hot!! mehn, i suggest you copyright/ publish your poems. just too good  ok, where's the application? the girlfriend application jk but since my eyes are dark brown. .  Thanks by the way, the application is in my apartment and up in my bedroom. |