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It seems the naira is still going to fall more.

What business is best to invest in now?? Importation and other services bought abroad is going to be very dicey. i pity cyber-cafes and ISPs cause they buy their bandwidth in dollar and charge users in naira.

Guys check this out. It happened in enugu once, now in america

http://news.yahoo.com/s/ap/20090309/ap_on_re_us/church_shooting

am not rich but i am ok, i have a girl i have given her all gifts i can lay my hands on except a car which she currently mentions, and for some reason she complains about this or that in me, and i been faithful to her, she has been faithful to me too. so laura, all men are not the same.

I just decided to start cheating on her, or rather give her the booth, i have endured it enough. More than a year.
But i wish u luck in ur search.

Yes you can, i started like that. now i have an office and my firm is growing bigger. I now have 4 staff. But i must tell you that it wont be easy. Just stay determined focused and keep updating ur knowledge.

Cheers

It is very sad that most nigerians are pessimistic about nigeria. Yes its true that most things dont work in this country, and there are ranks in the nigerian force police and army that wouldnt risk their lives. The truth is that Nigeria has such brave and capable persons in the force. I have a friend who is a soldier, he is a sniper, thats what he specialise in. He has gone to combat in 4 african countries, and recently he went on training course outside the country.

I dont know why it pains some nigerians to hear any good news about nigeria. Besides what would the woman gain by lying?? Please Ibime tell me that recent reports of gun duels between naval patrols and millitants which have resulted in death of at least 24 millitants is a lie. But when they kill soldiers its true. Go and check Nigerian soldiers are about the best in africa. Everyone knows it only u.

Umm ,
Can i ask a question please?? what have they (PHCN) been doing?? i thought they been on strike
Please i wana know

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Remember him as an accident that happened to nigeria. As was said by danjuma, nigerians elected obj and now they have kingkong in their hands. But he has dug his own ,

Sometimes one cant help to wonder about this country. Why are we so different?? why do things always work in reverse direction??

Big shame to Naija. And the worst is that the PDP is insulting nigerians by promising us uninterrupted power if voted for office. When they wasted our 8 YEARs.
But true nothing we hear surprises us anymore. i think i have heard everything possible and impossible in nigeria, so its not surprising.

I believe there will be trouble in that city following the match. and i blame PHCN and the stadium administrators for it.

@olawa20

Thank You. End of Thread.

We should all just look for a credible candidate. Period.

@Ugodaniels

You still havent told us y atiku is telling us OBJ is corrupt now. y is he fighting now?? is he waking up from coma?? Ok i get it. Atiku just got born again

When you talk of corruption, you see it has 4 corner stones, which are IBB, OBJ, Atiku and PDP.

If a blind man shoots an arrow at corruption, i bet you he wont miss atiku.

Keep waiting for facts, you will be sympathising with him in jail with ur facts. Cause thats where he is landing next. Trust OBJ (constitution or no constitution).

Yea i need it cause Atiku is out to syphone the ones he couldnt get as VP

And since we dont have that kind of spirit, we do honest work to earn our living, Atiku should learn that too.
Too bad he can picture life without Aso rock. Y is the crook so agitated now?? he better leave the country while he still can. Else the long Arm of the law will also come with its long legs, to put him in that hole.

Every one knows he will land in that hole, its just a matter of time, but b4 April.

Take care.

Atiku defender of Nigeria lol.

And why is he fighting now?? has he been in coma for eight years or what?? Y didnt he start fighting the corruption and atrocities of OBJ like 5yrs back?? The guy is fighting for his family.

Well let me go do something to make my life better.

F***k ATIKU; F***K OBJ; F***K ALL OF THEM THAT ARE SCREWING THIS COUNTRY. MAY GOD PAY THEM BACK HERE ON EARTH AND IN HELL.

Assuming its proven beyond reasonable doubt by say God that Atiku is not corrupt. I and millions of nigerians can not forgive him for being a part of corrupt government, and still refusing to leave the corrupt government. its like going with the gang for robbery, and when caught you would say i only accompanied them, i didnt take part, i only drove the car, i didnt point the gun.

Atiku is corrupt. and stands corrupt in the eyes of God. If he is so righteous, let him resign and leave the corrupt Government. This is what any man with a clean heart would do. you dont need to give him 3 reasons to do that.

I went to benin to do an installation some time ago. A commissioner was kidnapped because he refused to sign papers awarding dubious contracts. He told them to let him resign and they should spare his life. the man resigned. and he was later released. Thats moral for u.

Does atiku have morals?? (Mind you am not for the federal gov anyways.)

and when did atiku become a court to say what obj has looted?? which court has OBJ stole those funds u mentioned

ugodaniel:
@ Stiyke, i won't respond to you because your post is full of objective illusions and hyper allegations. The court are yet to tell us that Atiku is coorupt and until they do, you cannot stay in front of a PC and state categorically that Atiku is corrupt.

As per Obasanjo, Atiku stated the following:

The Vice-President, Alhaji Atiku Abubakar, has listed the shady deals of President Olusegun Obasanjo since the president assumed office in 1999 to date. According to the vice president, notable among the shady deals are the alleged N84 billion Nigeria Port Authority scandal involving Chief Olabode George, PDP South Deputy Chairman, allocation of oil wells to his cronies and fronts and the N12 billion presidential library. Atiku further listed the 220 million TransCorp shares, N2 billion agriculture loan and another N2 billion bribe distributed to remove Ghali Umar Na’Abba, former Speaker of the House of Representatives. He added that the president spent N40 billion as bribe on the aborted third term project as well as having multi-billion naira farm projects across the country.

The vice president maintained that President Obasanjo is a dictator, given the Odi massacre, Zaki Biam massacre and his penchant for disobeying court orders. Atiku revealed that, apart from promulgating a self-serving land use decree through which he acquired communal land for his personal use, Obasanjo ran a detention camp at Ita-Oko when he was the military head of state between 1976 and 1979, The AC presidential candidate said that Obasanjo could not claim ignorance about high profile killings such as Bola Ige, Marshal Harry, Funsho Williams, A.K. Dikibo and Ayo Daramola among others, that took place under his watch as the chief security officer of the Federal Republic of Nigeria since 1999. He posited that the murder cases remained unresolved because of the backing of the Presidency in such cases, as the police are tutored on the investigation by the president himself.

YET, Obasanjo hasnt answered any of them because they're true. If he's sure he didnt do all those, he should sue Atiku to court for Libel

You saying Atiku should resign from office, can you tell me why he should resign! There are only 3 ways He can resign and none of them has happened yet, so why should he resign? _{you don't have to answer that!}

Ohh Righteous Atiku, where was thou when OBJ did all this?? Under his arms i suppose. Why did u not talk then. why did you not let us know what is befalling the beloved country??
Why are you telling us now?? and also choose to insult us by not resigning from the Government you are castigating??

@ugodaniels

So Atiku has now become a court?? If you can take what Atiku is saying about OBJ, that means he would do the same were he in OBJ's shoes. Why are you so biased
Are u  being paid to campaign for Atiku??

@folnath

Please looting is wrong, no matter what the money was used for. its just wrong.

Is Atiku corrupt?? is Obj corrupt?? is the sun real?? do you breathe??

The first two questions havent been proven. I wish i could just let this thread go on without contributing, but wait a min.
If Atiku isnt corrupt and OBJ is corrupt, and Atiku knows OBJ is corrupt, why did he remain in government for 8yrs and still doesnt want to leave the corrupt government??

I too curse OBJ but i curse Atiku too. To all you Atiku fans, can u guys give us a good reason why Atiku wont resign from office?? Given the fact he said his boss OBJ is corrupt, and OBJ has committed a lot of attrocities. If you arent proud of the government, its simple moral to just resign. Why doesnt he want to resign??

Is he scared of Jail?? Mandella was in Jail you know. Atiku and all of them are just selfish, like OBJ said its do-or-die affair.

If i may ask, who can tell how this election would go?? what would happen b/w now and April??

I feel OBJ will put Atiku where Balogun is one way or the other. The election if it ever holds, would be mainly Yaradua again Utomi. Now who would you guys vote for?? Maybe we should open a new thread for this.

why is NIGERIA different?? why do things work backwards?? Why cant this country be any better

Hi Nairalanders,
I dont know if to say this is a problem or what, but it goes like this. I have some female friends, some of them are very close and intimate to me. But for some reason, i cant seem to say the phrase "I love you" to any of them. I cant think of mentioning the word LOVE even to the ones i gone to bed with. Infact the one or two i ever told 'i love you" , i often keep feeling guilty that i am lying to her. So i always avoid such words. I cant say that any of them is my girlfriend. Is there something wrong with me?? what should i do?? a friend said i havent found the right one, but am tired of this.
Your suggestions are welcome.

Most men know nothing, very few know a whole lot more than u can imagine.

BTW its hard to master a woman or a horse. Both behave alike.

Mr Smano,
Take my advice, first decide what u want to use ur programming skills for. Is it for making $$$ or for fun?? if the second is the case well learn VB.
But if u want to make $$ from programming, first decide the kind of applications you would like to be creating it will help you choose a good language that can do it well. My advice to you, learn c/c++ learn PHP and maybe ASP. You use the last two to develop web applications (like nairaland is a web application).

If you go learning VB, you are wasting ur time. you may learn it cause ur school want u to learn it, but to make a leaving, do PHP and or ASP. Peace.

@ kunz
Thats a nice one.
But did anyone notice the author of this thread is male?? is he a gay?? or is it a mistake??

could u put a picture?? what are the specifications??

@Oke amu

Thats the way to go brother. Nothing like trust in business. just put enuff checks and balances, and create a win win situation, (theres something for everyone). But if ever u get screwed, then u didnt look well and kind of deserve to get screwed so u learn ur lessons.

I too felt sad as i watched the video, but Sadam is so evil that one wonders why he is still alive. Please you guys should remember he was tried under iraqi laws and iraqi law says capital punishment goes for a murderer, and its a fact he is a multi-murderer so why are people making noise??

All you US haters, you guys should thank God that America is in the millitary position it is now. Americans are humans and make mistakes. Have you ever wondered what could happen if the table was rotated and countries like iran and north korea or nazi germany etc were in the posession of america's millitary might. The thought of it would give u sleepless nights. If some countries had america's might, half of the world would have ceased to exist.

You think america is bullying and invading countries with no cause?? Think what Iran would have done if it had america's might, isreal would cease to exist, america would cease to exist, half of europe would have been wiped out, and all you guys that are none muslims would have been gassed, in the name of jihad or that u are infidels.

I think if any of you were in Bush's shoes, given all the events going on and the security threats, you wouldnt have wasted time to invade iraq and afghanistan. These are two things that had to be done by america. 1 for their security and 2 to show their enemies what they can do.
Kudos to Bush.
I know he got faults but so does every human.

within u, you know you should bust the whole thing, but u came to nairaland for us to give u the go ahead. My brother dont put urself thru that misery, let her go. am sure u will find a younger gal that you would fall in love with. Or has ur time passed??

going by nigeriaone,

I think national population comission were stupid to have gone for the census. They should have used them SATELLITES. do these satellites cound people that are inside the houses can it see us inside taking our baths??

nigeriaone, i think you need to understand that the satellites cant make much meaning of what they see down here without human help. Therefore if the humans helping(interpreting the images) the satellites arent informed about the population densities and distribution, and also the cultures of the people they are looking at, the satellite figures/informations could be largely missleading.
I dont know which cities are more populous than the other, i think the census result should show that. but wait a min, coming to think of it, i wasnt counted too. my whole neighbourhood werent counted. this CENSUS is a fraud!!!

Thank You all for your contributions, all points noted. Nairaland would be the first place to see the preview when its done. I would try to fix everything noted. i know its not gonna be perfect to please every one but i wanted to know the things to take care of from an educated audience like nairaland.

Thank you all, am still at work on it.

Proposed Movie Script, Comments Needed

Hi guys/gals,
Please am new to nairaland. I am in the process of making a nigerian movie, so i was wondering if you guys would be kind enough to comment on the proposed script. All comments are welcome. Thanks here is the script below.

SC1 Ext picnic location day

Shot opens on Nonye, Chike and Ikem. They were talking about there picnic.

nonye

I love it here. Chike you chose a nice location for our outing. Am just wondering how you were able to discover this place.

Ikem

Yea me too. Anyways you know Chike and his ways. He always gets to know all these hidden places.

CHIKE

Ahh. Comeon Guys so am now a bad guy cause i brought you guys here?? This is my first time here you know.

IKEM

But you have always been a bad boy. Thats why your girlfriend left ,

CHIKE

Ehh. Ehh. Bros hold it there. No just talk reach that side!

NONYE

Give him a break. I don't think chike is bad boy. Cynthia left him cause she couldnt discover the great man in him.

CHIKE

Yea she couldnt. OOh but i miss her, am always unlucky in love.

IKEM

Because you love too many at once.

CHIKE

Craze dey worry you. You wan show yoursef here?? Where the too many dey?

NONYE

Guys Guys. We don't need to go through all this. You guys should find something better to talk about.

Shot focuses on a lady coming out of the hotel door and walking towards the picnic pack.

NONYE

Guys check her out. You know who she is?

IKEM

No i don't i think she is one of the guests.

CHIKE

Yea she is a guest. i saw her checking in.

IKEM

I knew you would have seen her checking in and even talked to her. Laughs. So is she game??

CHIKE

i go soon cure you your craze.

NONYE

Guys.

IKEM

As if you don't like her. Come on tell me you don't find her attractive.

CHIKE

Yea i find her attractive so what??

NONYE

I think she is coming here.

New girl comes introduces herself as Ann.

Ann

Can i join you guys??

NONYE

Sure you are welcome. Am Nonye, thats chike, and thats Ikem.

ANN

Am Ann and its nice to meet you guys.

CHIKE

So Ann what could have brought you out to this hidden risort??

ANN

Well lets say i was so bored in the city i wanted to have a break and fresh air. Besides i have been working myself too hard recently.


Ann walks towards Chike to play with the swing.

ANN

Can i have a swing on that??

CHIKE

Sure i can push you to get u started.

Chike helps her on.

ANN

So whats the deal with you guys? You guys are friends or brothers or what.

CHIKE

Yea we are friends. Ikem is my cousin, and Nonye is his girlfriend.

ANN

Thats interesting and you? Why didnt you come with your own girlfriend?

CHIKE

We broke up.

ANN

Ohh i understand. So have you noticed that we seem to be the only guests in the hotel??

CHIKE

Yea seems so too. Hey Ikem, you realised we are the only guests here??

IKEM

Yea i know but thats good

NONYE

Yea i hate crowds. Its better like this.

Alarm sounds. "Please all guests are requested to come to the dinning hall for the buffet" Thank you.

NONYE

Well guys am starving lets go and eat and then we see actually how many new guests we can meet.

The party now got up and moved towards the hotel.

SC2 INT Dinning hall.

They got seated in the tables. Waiting for the waiters.

ANN

Well where is every one and the food??

IKEM

I think we are the only ones here.

Lights go out

NONYE

What the hell??

Lights come back.

CHIKE

Thats power holding for you.

Lights go out again

ANN

Whats wrong with Nepa??

NONYE

Did i hear you ask whats wrong with them?? Come on this is Nepa or power holding at its best.

Lights come back again.

CHIKE

Hey is there going to be a buffet or not here??

Water can speaks up "there is buffet alright. you guys are the food, you will be eaten. Ohh Nepa please.

Lights go out again.

NONYE

Something strange is happening here.

Lights come back. but dim.

The spoons and forks stand and chorus "Nothing is happening its always like this in Resort Alive!!!" Heeheeheeeheee.

The four jump out of their seats.

ANN

Lets leave we got to leave this place.

The four run to the door.

Sc3 int reception

Receptionist backs the counter and is bent over.

IKEM

Excuse me, theres something strange going on in this hotel. All those things inside dey talk.

Receptionist turns (with out-grown canines and, bloody teeth and scary eyes.

reception

Do you really think so?? huhuhuhuhuh

NONYE

Ahhh noo!

ANN

Lets leave this place now.

The receptionist shrinks and bats start flying out of her desk. They turn to run to the door. on getting to the door, the door is locked and they head upstairs. Ikem locks the door to the staircase behind him shutting off the bats

SC4 int hallway

They get to their room door and its locked. Chike tries to force the door open. But no luck.

IKEM

We can't open it. We got to collect the key from the reception.

NONYE

Ohh no we can't go back there.

CHIKE

I think theres another way out of here.

They head down the hall. At the end of it is another staircase going downstairs. Lets try to leave through the back door. They rush down the steps.

Sc5 int basement

Getting to the bottom of the staircase, they open the door. It opens into a dark place. Chike lights a candle nearby, they start walking into the space unknown.

ANN

This place is scary. I don't like it. I think we should go back.

CHIKE

No we can't. We will be eaten alive by those bats.

IKEM

I think i can see some thing over there.

They walk to a door, and push it open. A skeleton falls out with arms stretched. A scroll falls off.

CHIKE

Hey look!!

Chike picks up the paper and reads: This hotel was first built by a powerful priest. He sacrificed a lot of human blood to build it. It served for home for the colonial masters and lots of slaves were traded here and lots died here too. On the death of the priest, his son Egbum refused to take his thrown. The son demolished the old building and built a hotel in its place. This angered the priest. His spirit then took control of the building. His passion for slave trade made him take anyone that lodges into the hotel as a slave. Either to work for him for eternity, or to be sold as a slave, though no longer to the white man, but his soul is sold to the devil for eternity. Hence till he is driven out. All guests that have their names written in the hotel have just entered into eternal slavery. I was once a guest here. By the time you are reading this i would have been dead, and you about to die, unless you find the key to solve this. To escape, you must find the memoir of Jimmy the American warder that once lived there. There he wrote how to escape this , Else, you are doomed to DIE!!!!

ANN

ohh noo

NONYE

what are we going to do??

IKEM

We must find the book, Jimmy's memoir.

CHIKE

What if it doesn't help us??

IKEM

Well we don't have any other thing to try do we??

ANN

ohh men how do we know the book? We are going to die here.

NONYE

Maybe we should call for help.

IKEM

theres no service on the phone. is there in yours?? We must find this thing to leave here alive.

They start looking along the walls and on the floor.

CHIKE

I think we should split and search for it. Me and Ann this way and you two to the left.

Ikem and Nonye finds a chest and are searching in it. Then Chike is checking some books on an old table. Then Ann yealls

ANN

Guys i think i found something.

Ann points at a book. She moves to lift it up as the others rush towards her. As ann picks the book, raises it up, a swam of insects fly towards her. The rest of the crew moves to her rescue, then the floor of the hall breaks into two.

The insects fly about her, Ann screems and tries to wave them off.

CHIKE

Ann watch out watch your steps.

Ann falls off the floor, and hangs on to a rope on the floor. One hand on the rope and the other on the book.

ANN

auchh help

IKEM

hold on ann.

Chike brings a rope and and ties it to himself. They turn a table upside down and push it across the void. chike walks across the table cautiously and tries to reach ann.

CHIKE

Take my hand ann.

Chike stretches his hands. He stretches more and stretching thin. Ann tries and screams

ANN

Take the book.

Ann tries one more time with great effort and her hand reaches chike but she slips off. Chike tries to catch her but manages to get hold of the book only. Ann falls off

ANN

Ahh help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chike Nonye and Ikem shouts "Ann!!!!"

Chike crosses over to Ikem and Nonye. they start looking at the void below.

NONYE

What do we do?? Do you think she is dead??

IKEM

I don't know we have the book, lets read it and get out of here, then we can find help for her.

CHIKE

I believe She is alive. we have to get her out of there first.

IKEM

Now how do we do that??

CHIKE

The rope is still tied to my waist, just hold on to it let me move down to look for her, as far as the rope reaches.

They start lowering chike into the pit. Lower and lower and lower. Soon chike is so low in the pit, He hears ann calling. He stretches his hand and

CHIKE

come on i will take u up

He lifts Ann holding her tight. and calls on IKem and Nonye

CHIKE

Guys pull.

The rope starts pulling them up and making cranking sounds

CHIKE

Faster guys faster.

The rope slips, chike and ann starts falling, Ikem and Nonye tries to steady the rope and they are all drawn into the pit as the hit the bottom with force.

NONYE

Now we are in a deeper shit than we were before.

IKEM

you still got the book? we just got to look it up and see how to get out of here.

There comes a hissing sound and a cracking sound and then brushing and dragging.

CHIKE

whats that?

The sounds increase, then a rock breaks out and the spiderman comes out. It moves toward the four. takes two step forward and one step backward. measures the four and then moves towards them and then breaks into a race ,

IKEM

Oh my God. make we clear oohh

SnakeSpiderman gets close and pits a ball of net at them. As they try to escape it. they start racing away from it.

They get to a wide space with lots of pillars. They start hiding and moving by the pillars, snakespiderman comes closer and is searching for them. Chike signals them to come over to a rope ladder he finds.

Meanwhile Ikem finds an axe and starts wielding it at the creature. It responds by blowing fire at him and dashing towards him, he falls to the ground and struggles to crawl away from the beast. Chike runs to his rescue and the girls keep climbing the ladder. Chike and Ikem race to the ladder and start climbing. Ikem still wields the axe at the beast as they climb higher and higher. Soon they get to the top of the void and are breathless.

They get up and survey where they are. Chike moves towards the wall rackets and said guys lets read that book and get out of here.

Ann starts going through the pages of the book.

ANN

The book is empty, looks like the pages have been torn out. Ohh i see one. It says: This memoir is the key to leaving this place. its cursed and should be destroyed. Once you close this book, you must proceed imediately to the south gate of the building. After passing the gate, you would have to pass through the tunnel of bones. Many souls have been lost here. If you are able to pass this tunnel, you would be at the base of the temple hill. This hill was where the priest performed his sacrifices. His shrine is at the base of the hill. You would see it cause its covered by mat from sunrays and water. So to kill the priest finally, you must stab a sword into his heart. You do this by pouring in enough water to drown the shrine down below. Take all you need here and good luck.

They start gathering the ancient weapons they could find in the room. Chike and Ikem take swords and axes. Ikem takes a bow and quiver. The girls take some small swords. Chike rolls some rope by his waist and they all move up to the south gate.

The gate opens and they pass through to drop lower below and proceed into the tunnel. They look into it, the tunnel is wide with so many fires burning and lamps. They proceed cautiously and keept moving forward. Then eyes started moving watching them advance. But it decides to wait before it can unleash its terror. They get to a narrow bridge and then the eye comes out into open, flying gracefully towards them, making a screaching sound.

ANN

lets go back!!

CHIKE

No move forward keep moving forward.

Ikem lights one of his arrows and aims at the beast. He shoots out the arrow, it pierces the beast's heart, it screams and burns up. They then hear lots of screams and winds flapping as scores of bird beasts swarm towards them.

IKEM

lets run for it guys

They break out into a race towards the other side of the tunnel, they suddenly reach the end of the tunnel. At the tunnel end, Chike pushes a yatch out, the girls walk/crawl past it, Chike moves past and Ikem tries to move through too as the flying beasts approach. He wields his sword and slashes the face of one, just as he drops out of the tunnel, they then latched the yatch close.

SC6 ext evening base of cliff.

They then realised that they were at the base of the hill. They proceeded cautiously along the walls, towards the hill base. At the end of the side walk, they realise there is a dead end, a hollow void below.

NONYE

we are trapped. what do we do now??

Ikem looks around and finds a rope. we use the rope guys. He picks it up and attaches it to his arrow and aims and aims and fires towards the hill.

Arrow soars high and high and high and glides towards the hill, finally anchoring on a rock.

Chike and Ikem pulls on it hard and anchores it on says come on girls. They hang on the ropes with some hooks and then swing towards the hill. Chike was last. As he was getting towards the hill, the arrow started giving way, itpulled off and Ikem dived to catch it, they started pulling chike up steadily. soon he was with them and they started climbing the hill slowly. A dragon fly comes toward them, flying unsuspectingly low, getting closer and closer. Then it buzzes away with speed.

Getting to the top, they could see a tent far away. They started moving towards it, just then a rope trap swings past them it hits Nonye and swings her into the air as she shouts. They try to run towards her, the rope lands her on a wheeled cart. Then the monsters (6 in number) emerges, shouting "Hum!! Hum!! Hum!! Hum!!". They pull the cart away toward an old temple.

The other three hide behind banana leaves. Then the dragonfly comes again, then it speaks fraily

Dragonfly

Do not let them see you. they are the servants of the priest. You should use the drum, over there.

Chike and the rest goes over to the drum to start beating a tune. Ikem continues the beating as the monsters start dancing. Chike and Ann rush to Nonye and released her. They then went over to the tent.

On top of the tent is the pot of water and below is a hole with a glowing heart in a well. Chike tears the tent and starts cutting the water support with his axe. He cuts and cuts and cuts till the wood was so thin. Then Ikem abandons the drums and run towards them.

The monsters stop dancing and looks to see the four, they rush towards them as the pot of water falls. They stop short and bend down and start crying

Monsters

Master forgive us, master forgive us.

The pot falls with a big splash as the water gushes down the well. The ground starts shaking as the four rush towards a giant rail cart, they run into it and lay still. The hill begins to crumble and erupt in many places.

Chike and Ikem gives the cart a push and push and push. The cart starts rolling as they jump into it. It rolls down the hill as the hill top bursts into a fire ball and is coming down fast towards them. The rail leads below the ground and keeps speeding through old train tunnel. ,

Please let me know what you guys feel about the script (particular the story). Any advice is welcome.