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MrBachelor:
Why? Is it because he used "big English"? Isn't that what most people have saying to you in simplier terms?

Maybe I understand big English context than pedestrian criticism
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Eyiwunmi33:
You are a bit grandiloquent, and the preamble is fraught with extraneous words. You need to refine it.

Thanks for this constructive criticism.
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This must be the most positive, sensible and reasonable critique

Nebulax:
That's why Obi should be good for that position not the presidency.

Buhari is also stingy as well but not the level of Obi

U compare an unaware, vegetable to a an expert economist and expert financial manager....it shall not be well with u and ur generations...
U actually compare this deadbrain Buhari to Obi...ur idddiotic existence actually think Buhari is better and worthy of presidency why efcc is better for Obi...
It shall not be well with u ..write it down...it will be hard for u and ur generations to make it in life....iiiidiot

Nebulax:
Let him go and apply for EFCC chairman then

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U are a useless human being for this statement....it will be hard for you to make it in life if u will keep supporting evil and badmouthing good people
Uselless goaat

Most gals u were once raped at younger age are generally promiscuous growing up....Very basic if you understand women very well
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Na mumu Men full this life pass. See the kine fairy tale ordinary 23 year old dey feed you

4words:
When did you start and have you started earning.

I set up a blog since last year, and I haven't paid attention to it. I was thinking of the strategy to used when I came across this post.

I am targeting audience from US, UK, Canada and Australia as my primary audience.

I have everything I need to start. I have just been dragging and getting distracted by different other hustle.

Work on your content and SEO......
Make sure it's relevant to your audience
Use a writing style that your audience will find professional and relatable.
You can outsource the writing if you have money.
Check out other websites/competitors in your niche who are doing well and try to analyse their site , and get inspiration from them to tweak your own...
Research about the ad that matches your site content u intend to monetise..
Grow your traffic with ur consistency and SEO
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U keep learning Sha...
Use a .com domain since u are targeting those countries....
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You can also research your hosting to be sure they have nodes close to those country.....
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Work on your site loading time too..cos people from that country expect a site to load within 2sec max....if your site lags in loading .it can seriously affect your traffic ........
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Just keep learning and never think u haev arrived. Thanks.

Portable Zazuu now up for a national award....I know Headies will not Zuzu...cos Zazu don Zeh..he owns the best street Hiphop award

There is definitely sense in nonsense.
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The moral lesson is don't be quick to dismiss nonsense. You might come back to bow apologise to same nonsnese.

tayo60:
U are very wrong with this.

Give your reasons.

ruggedtimi:
After all your grammar you still no fit spell "hierarchy"

Hmmm....dat word can actually confuse sometimes... Meanwhile, that's the reason proofreaders or editors exist to correct occasional spelling or grammar slips.
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Thanks for pointing it out...I just checked by dictionary to confirm the spelling

MrBachelor:
So are you writing strictly for those in higher institution and passed GES/GST, or for a general audience?

You've been constructively criticized by some, what you ought to do is take the criticism with good homour rather than this subtle insult.

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Nairaland audience is majorly an audience of poly and Uni graduate....uni grad are actually more in my opinion.
Secondary schl are very few

tayo60:
When reading a script or story, you want to quickly read, digest and maybe comment, but in a situation whereby one needs to first understand d meaning of any vocabulary being used in the script will make anyone looses interest in reading further. As a writer, your writings should be something understandable, even by someone who is a SSCE holder. U write to pass out information, and not to show your audience the credibility of your writing. Shalom!

Not all story have the same purpose and difficulty level.
If u can't comprehend this, ur vocab bank is poor and ur sentence construction is as basic as junior secondary schl grad

richfriendsng:
Op I must tell you the truth, I used to speak more grammar than you , I am a graduate of English language, what you did here is what we call "violation of maxim's law". My dear right now, I don Park those grammar dey pursue money. Too much grammar in this kind of economy can get you mobbed someday stay safe. Leave grammar for now

funny. Sha....
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Even though I don't understand what you all mean by grammar, for real, I don't see those words as difficult at all.......they are not even high sounding strange words......apart from some of my long sentence and failing to go straight to the point I can't see any grammar with the write up o

tayo60:
Always write in a layman's English if you wanna pass across an info for proper understanding by your audience. U can write grammar when sitting for a Cambridge exam.

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I don't think there are difficult words in the write up for anyone who attended higher institution and passed GES/GST....Anyway, I get the message, however, it will do you great good if you can also expand your vocabulary bank because it's obviously poor for someone who went to higher institution with degree.

Unless you are a secondary schl drop out.
Thanks for your input anyway

falcon01:
Some are jealous because they can't comprehend your yarn

Are you sure? Cos I have not seen one single person who made anything close to positive remark....
I have typed the story..but I'm sceptical about posting for further backlash, even though I've tried to fine-tune it countless times...to make it readable

It is true if redpill is conscientiously swallowed, a man will see his self esteem skyrocket, that it gives him more control of his emotions and relationship.
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Redpill will also constantly embarrass you with the charge that you have to own your shit, work on yourself to earn the title of being called a man. Otherwise don't even bother.
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Because being a man entails being responsible for yourself, making things work for your own life and people who look up to you.

Thus self dependence and personal achievement are ingredients to boost your redpill credentials, without which u will probably feel powerless and in less control of your life and by extension, it will seep down into your relationship with women that the application of redpill truths become difficult or unrealistic.

For instance, abundance mindset come from knowing u have enough wherewithals to make things happen, to make people gravitate, either men or women, towards you and to make people see you as a magnet where fun and goodness is found. A trait or air women can smell from afar.

But if u are so destitute, in confusion of where ur life is headed, or being unable to carve an headway for your life, no matter all theories of redpill u swallow, your mind will be burdened by the contradiction of deprivations and lack of purpose which aren't congruent with redpill

This will manifest in your carriage, decision making, self esteem and ur obsession with the female gender. It will also affect the quality of men u move with, which are usually essential for preselection.
But when in control of ur life and economic means, u have so much going that women take less centre stage in your psyche, and applying redpill knowledge to ur advantage becomes easy, while disillusionment, as seen in naive, young, confused Redpillers, is shattered.
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Good morning

Dailytrust dey report una dey believe....a newspaper that's is openly dedicated to Northern agenda. What do you all expect mumu country of mumu people

How una see this preamble? Should I continue or just forget about it.
It's an incident that happened y'day though.

While on the whole issue we still diplomatically tried to find a nonexistent common-ground, for my poise and carefree disposition anyway, just to continue our usual camaraderie and friendly banter. However the experience had already etched its mark on where I would place him in the heirrarcchy of friendship and how I will forever relate with him.

Not that I was naive or have a huge expectation of people in general, I was only disappointed because my benefit of doubt about a long time friend was abruptly shattered. To be frank though, in my usual way of quickly letting go or excusing people's misdemeanor because I fancy myself as one who understands human behavior and the whys of their motives, I sort of process the whole encounter like some trifles.

After he dropped me off and pulled off, I immediately, instinctly wanted to open the car and dash home, cos obviously the time was gone at 10pm, he drew me back into the car and joked about why I was rushing home without sitting back to exchange trivial gist. We truly do enjoy each other's company and yappings the very occasional time we had met after our separation in secondary school. So, we gisted for another 20 mins on random stuff, giggled and finally separated at last.
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I honestly have relegated the whole encounter buried somewhere else deep within my cortex, even forgetten it I had thought, until i woke up around 4am and left surprised the whole earlier friction was creeping back to the surface to torment my sensibility.

In that thoughtfully ruffled state the best way to process this thought was to write on the incident pestering my emotions in a way of refining and dealing with the flashbacks.

I began to write. I had written way beyond but all of a sudden a mistyping and mis-highlighting of the whole text got me delete it mistakenly. I was deflated. I gave up. Maybe it was not meant to be written. Even while writing I was thinking I might send the friend the piece so he could read and be able to process his own failings. I still couldn't get back to start all over again.

The flashback won't stop. I had to painfully drag myself to start all over and I'm writing from a completely different style and angle which I consider poorer than the deleted attempt. The need to process my thought and have some closure got the better part of me.

As it wasn't easy to begin all over, beforehand, I had tried to chat a good friend if I could just lazily narrate the incident so as to discuss and analyse in my way of achieving closure. He's probably still sleeping or busy; we are on different timezone as he's presently in Turkey.

He's one of the emotionally mature friend I have, full of tact, consideration and human understandings. We share a number of values and worldview, I think it had been so since our University days. And we are still keeping up. I respect him for that and happy he's doing well for himself in his endeavors.

Since I couldn't strike a conversation, I will really have to drag myself to start all over. This time though I jettisoned the idea of typing on the note app that came with my phone. Since it failed me and couldn't help retrieve the deleted piece, I opt for a note that automatically saves its typed content almost every 2 secs at interval, it's called 'Standard Notes', an open source writing app with privacy and security frame work much more better than most third party app that compromises one's data and user privacy.

With this typing precaution that saves itself automatically, I should start.

To be continued..........make una no vex o
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How una see this preamble? Should I continue or just forget about it.
It's an incident that happened y'day though.


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You dey mind them....I hope they can just stfu for once. Arrrgh!..but..no...very low esteeem people. If e no easy why can't they fly back to 9ja where their mumu sef all believe it's easy.

Always complaining abroadd ain't easy....never grateful they can eat what they want., Wear wot they want, drive better cars than we do, better road, electricity, and quality things and better schl and opportunity to be what they wanna be......
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They only have to pay their bills...and job is ready all over the place for them to do just that in a good working condition with humane terms and condition with off and bonuses....

People work 7 to 6 in Nigeria with no salary or bonus for months in one of the worst wworking conditions in the world...
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. ...Yet those idioootas always complaining all the time. Any one forces u people to take up 100.jobs in a day? Out of ur greed or whatever u do 50jobs perday as if Dem force u....and it's not as if most of u help people or your family down here....but working for ur own needs and greed and to appear successful..yet complaining........ nonsensical ungrateful beings.

You don't have to come out. Do you live with them.?

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Algeria in same situation..now they just scored their own winning goal to kill the match....
But Naija, na so so High BP Dem dey give us

So if this people score us now, na like dis we no go go worldcup be dat?
....Why we never score abi craze dey worry dis people ni

You people should keep updating us...some of us are watching it on Nairaland. for one Nepa reason or the other

That ass is big
The guy is handsome, like 30 year old
The girl is probably his fling or babe
The video is staged

Most gals do suck the life out of a hardcock...they should find this preeq delicious to munch

Say RIP to your relationship.
Say RIP to your sense...
And start reading Redpill thread for 1 month to get sense

This one dey use code find gaybriel clients....may God fire da ur yansh

DeusMagnus:
Omo, if I spend upto10k for chills and I never Bleep, I'll feel like I've been robbed at gun point on the highway.

....I tell you

Bro. Stay strong pls.
I'm so sorry for what u are going through.
This country is messed up, and the odds are stack against most smart people who would have found it easy in saner climes...Pls hang on.
I believe you, even if u can't express the full details of your mind.
Xenry!

CaptainAyub:
I ignored mine thinking it'll get better.
Now,its X 100.
Regretting

I'm telling you, sometimes we want to be considerate of their feelings, meanwhile, they never care about our own feelings,and the headache is usually worse after they get in....
......A couple of friends who are married reported same thing