Ann2012:


We are here with you, don't stop posting pls
I can't wait for Charlotte's first change

neither can I

nightcrawler123:

There is no motivation from you guys and that's not helping

I'm sure I speak for everyone when I say your story is thrilling. More power to your elbow.

Seriously? Please don't stop. That would be another unfinished story.

Wow. I was wondering where sheila was all this while. Thumbs up Oyin. Where the hell have you been? You've been absent for a while. Awesome update as always. You rock

Thrilling story. Waiting for the next update.

I think Levi has some kind of history, and he's running his life based on the scars or lessons. That should be why he's so reserved and hard. Kudos to you writer.

As usual Oyin, the suspense never ends. Keep it coming prince, following

chii8:


My sister,wetin person no go read for...

Spill it sis, I don't understand you.

Nice storyline Vicky, although it needs some more touches. Taking note to all skyblueking's observations will make your story easier to read. I'm sure it will be interesting, following.

skyblueking:
Huh?

I couldnt even read past 3 posts and became disappointed at what i saw..
Wrong pronounciation...
Improper spacing...
Punctuation marks misapplied..

You have to proofread your works before rushing down here...
You've gotten a nice storyline but try to expound more on it...

Much lucks!

Wrong pronunciation?

I like this episode. It gives me a better understanding of the werewolf stuff. Kudos to you writer.

I love Deep Thots novels, following.

izaray:
Sure babe've got some popcorn for us even, lets enjoy the story together in peace jare

couldn't be said any better darlin’. Let's roll.

Treasure17:

Lol.. Spill it out. I was being sarcastic because such don't exist.

uhn-uhn

I love vampire and werewolf stories, and this is the start of an awesome one. Keep it coming, n’ I'm following.

Treasure17:
Prince please we need Henry and Co to curb insecurity in Nigeria.


Thanks for the update prince.

For Nigeria to need characters from a fiction to help us, comment reserved.

izaray:
Cha!! Oyinprince this ur story too make sense, i swear after u, na u


Thanks plenty

you are right izaray, after oyin is definitely oyin

Beautiful... thrilling story. I love it. Nice work.

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enm:

In that case take your time and cook it well.

will do, thanks

enm:

Am seriously waiting for you to come and continue your story.

What a way to meet my reader. I'm making some changes in the book so it might take a while. I'm glad you like it though.

OMG

drewsman:
Thanks for the update


I guess the next update will come by October?

seriously?

More power to your elbow oyin. This story is rocking

iamgprince:
op hope you are not in South Africa

also wondering

I'm sorry guys, been very busy. I'll try to update soon.

Chapter Seven

'Okay, two things', Bessie said 'One, your plan sucks. Two, its going to take very long'.

'Well, I guess you need a long term plan when you are dealing with civilized kidnappers' Taylor replied. 'Brenda?'

'I don't know T' she sighed 'I don't think it will be easy to walk up to a criminal and say hey, what do you say we be friends? So I have another plan, why don't you do it? You've got guts', She looked at her sister.

'Guts? Yes. Patience? No. Come on Brenda. We all know only you can make someone be your friend against his will. We just need the info. You don't need to do something you don't want to'.

'And what makes you think so?'

'Instinct'.


Brenda sighed. Taylor was asking her to get close to one of them. It was dangerous. She could get into trouble. Before that, she may have to do things she really didn't want to think of to get close. Was she ready for that?

'I know what you are thinking Brenda' Taylor said, 'But we are here for you. We'd break his head before he tries to hurt you'.

'Okay I'll do it but only because there is no other way'.

'Good enough'.

'So what about us? What do we do?' Bessie asked.

'I don't know. Act like you hate them and then they start to grow on you as time goes on? I think that's cool enough. I'll continue the calm and collected behavior', Taylor replied.

'If you are calm and collected', Brenda asked, 'Then what is Nikki?'

Taylor laughed, 'That I can't say'.

Nikita coughed, 'I'm still here'.

Bessie sighed 'I still think your plan sucks Taylor'.

'You've got some other plan?'

'No, but - '

'Then stick to this one'.

*
'So, of all the girls in the city, you chose Brenda Johnson', Charlie said, not believing.

'I don't understand what you mean by chose, but if it means what I said then yeah' Kelly replied.

'Hey you could confuse other people with your smartness, but not me. If you're thinking what I'm thinking, then forget it and focus on the job' Charlie said.

'I don't know what you are thinking. If you are thinking I'm trying to get her or something, then shove that thought up your ass. I just like the aura coming off her. I think she's smart. Just quiet'.

'Smart?' Charlie laughed, 'what about the girl who sat like a queen and asked me to introduce myself? If you ask me, that's the best smart-ass statement I've heard in a while. Reminds me of me' he grinned again.

Kelly smirked 'You wish'.

'Do we have to go through this again?' He stood 'its ten o'clock. Let's get to Ernie's'.

*
'Home sweet home' Jones said stretching. They had returned to the cottage after a long day. They walked up to the door and opened it to meet the girls sitting. Just sitting.

'Welcome back guys', Taylor greeted disinterestedly.

'How was your outing?' Bessie added sarcastically.

'Oh I'm sure it was fine', Taylor said 'Could you get them water?'

'Sure' Brenda replied 'Come on Bess' she left with Bessie towards the kitchen.

'Why are you all standing? You must be tired. Please sit'.

The confused boys sat warily. 'It appears you have made yourself comfortable' Charlie said.

'We don't have a choice. How would we get away easily if we are indisposed?' Taylor replied.

Charlie raised a brow 'I advise you not to pull a silly stunt. This location is very strategic'.

Taylor looked around idly 'Maybe you are right. But my sister over there always says something', she looked at Nikita 'There are many ways to get out of a room than through an open door'.

Charlie looked at Nikita. Cold grey eyes stared unblinkingly at him. He looked away quickly, shaken. Okay that was creepy. One of the twins handed a glass of water to him. He gulped it down and handed the glass back.

Brenda watched him quietly. She had already decided he was too complicated for her. She was more interested in the one sitting beside him. He portrayed simplicity. Even his eyes shone with cleverness. Just her type of person. She had only one shot at it. She hoped Taylor's plan worked.

Treasure17:

Invite ghost readers.

That's exactly what I'm doing.

Chapter Six

In the middle of the woods stood a fairly large cottage. Voices could be heard discussing this early morning.

'Bessie I'm still wondering what made you ask them to bring us back' Taylor probed.

'I just said what came to my mind okay? I didn't even think about it'.

'Yeah right. Typical Bessie'.

'Don't crucify her T' Brenda said wearily, 'it's not like we could get away'

'And who says we couldn't?' Taylor retorted.

Brenda stared at her.

'Fine. I'm just saying we shoulda given them a hard time'

'I honestly don't understand why you are babbling Taylor' Nikita said, 'Don't you know the saying, there are different ways out of a place than through an open door?'

Taylor grinned, 'Well I've never heard that'

Nikita snorted, 'Well I'm telling you now'

*
Charlie, Kelly, Jones and Walter were four friends. And the kidnappers. They didn't look like it.

'We don't need the eldest sister do we?' Jones asked as they got dressed.

'I guess not', Walter replied, 'But our job would be easier if we have the four of them' he shrugged.

Jones turned to Kelly 'what do you think, smarty?'

'I don't know' Kelly replied. They filed out of the room.

The girls were in the sitting room. They stopped what they were doing and looked up in sighting their abductors coming.

'Good morning girls' Charlie began. They shot him murderous glares. He ignored them. 'We are not going to harm you I assure you but that is if you cooperate'. He looked at their faces 'we do not need anything from your parents, anything at all and we won't release you soon', he smilled seeing their puzzled looks. 'Nobody would want to harm gorgeous girls like you, believe me' he leveled his gaze on Taylor, who matched him with a glare of the own. He winced inwardly. If glares could harm, I'd be a frog by now he thought.


'You should know our names', Taylor began calmly 'So an introduction is unnecessary. How about you tell us yours?'

Charlie blinked, taken aback. He recovered quickly 'For a girl you have a lot of courage', he said slowly. Jones whispered in his ear 'Gotta get going girls, sit tight'. The girls watched their abductors leave and lock the door behind them.

'So you want to tell us what that was about?' Brenda said as soon as she heard the car zoom off.

'I was trying to figure out the other way to get out our room', Taylor replied, shrugging.

Brenda stared at her 'well?'

'I've got a plan, a crazy one, but I think it'll work'.

*
'Ok so those girls are super gorgeous or I'm dreamy' Walter said.

'Leave them alone Walter', Charlie growled.

'I was just saying', he replied defensively.

Charlie turned to Kelly, 'You're moody this morning, what's up?'

'Nothing', Kelly replied simply.

'Tell me is it a girl? Even though that's going to be weird. You don't do girls'. Charlie grinned.

'Hey, stop saying that', Kelly grinned back 'Just because I don't pay attention to them doesn't mean I'm gay. Although', he smiled wistfully 'I might have noticed one'.

'I knew it. Which one?'

'Brenda Johnson'.

Charlie blinked 'You don't mean that, do you?'

'I definitely do'.

Chapter Five

'Kate, you are not going in there unless you tell me why', Mr Johnson said firmly.

His wife stopped short of opening the door. The were parked in front of a police station.

'I'm sorry darling, I'm just too anxious' she relaxed with a visible effort.

'Well what are we doing here?'

'Remember this?' She took his palm and placed the necklace in it.

Her husband peered at it, 'Why, this is the necklace we gave to Taylor on her sixth birthday'

'Yes-'

'Wait is this what you picked on the lane back there?' He cut in.

Kate nodded eagerly.

'Taylor couldn't have dropped it, could she?'

Kate was surprised at the question. She grabbed the necklace fom his palm. 'You are unbelievable John, do I have to explain that too?' She slammed out of the car.

'Good afternoon how may I help you?', A cop behind the desk asked Mr and Mrs Johnson.

'We are here to report a case', Mrs Johnson replied.

He took a sheet of paper and a pen 'Your names please'

'Mr and Mrs Johnson'

'Where do you live?'

'16 Lani Street, New York'.

'OK. Why do you need my help?'

'Like I said, we are here to report a case', Mrs Johnson began calmly, 'I have four children. They live here on 7, queens avenue. The were supposed to be in New York yesterday but we didn't find them at the airport. My husband and I arrived here this morning and we discovered they went out, but they never got to the airport. All our efforts to reach them have failed. I'm here because I believe they might be in danger. They would never abandon a holiday without informing us'. She concluded, tears in her eyes. Her husband held her hand comfortingly.

The officer pondered for a while. 'What are their names?'

'Nikita, Taylor, Bessie and Brenda', Mr Johnson said.

'Their ages?'

'Nikita is twenty two, Taylor is nineteen, and Bessie and Brenda are seventeen.

'I think this might help' Mrs Johnson said, bringing out the necklace, ' I found it on the roadside this morning on queens avenue where they live. It belongs to Taylor', she handed the broken necklace to the necklace to the officer. He collected it wit a gloved hand and placed it on a clear plastic bag.

'Please be calm, a detective will get to work on your case and we will find your children as soon as possible. We would need their pictures to create public awareness just in case anyone has any information. Please do inform us if there is anything else you think we should know'

*
'We might have to stay here for a while you know', Mr Johnson said jolting his wife out of her thoughts.

'Right. That's obvious', she muttered.

'Honey, there is no need to worry' her husband said seeing her mood, 'we will find our children. Our kids are very determined and something tells me wherever they are they have not lost hope. So please don't loose hope Kate, we will find them, okay?'

Kate nodded 'Okay'.

'Great' he parked the car in front of the house, 'Now if you don't mind, we need the spare key to the door'.

Please feel free to make corrections if you feel the need to. To all ghost readers: I can see you, continue.

I'm totally loving this, carry on big brother