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Beautiful and engaging story, Silver1996. You're amazing.

From the look of things all thanks to the rebels and Matthew, I feel there's going to be a sequel or a spin off. But anyways, that's that for that.

Thanks for this amazing story


#Xavier

Well, Silver1996, all I can say is, amazing and glorious story. But in addition to that, I will also have to point out that the ending was rushed. To be candid with you, I was thinking you were setting the ground for a sequel only to find out that the story ends right there.
What about Maggy and the monsters, what happened to them? Nothing was said about them.

Anyways, a radiant story, I must acknowledge.

#Xavier

I wanted to say beautiful ending, but hey!! This isn't an ending, this is a cliffhanger, now I can't help fantasying about shits .

Amazing story Rosemary33. More Pentecost experience to your writing . I'm amazed at your dedication at completing your stories, that's thrilling.

Thanks so so so much for this glorious adventure .

Abeg, just holla at your boy when another one dey start mbok.

From a fan and lover (not the Scarlett-Paul kindish )
#Xavier

Rosemary33:
He's my Twitter friend, he knows I'm writing this story but not aware I will be posting his picture. I will delete it by tomorrow, except I ask him and he's okay with it. �

The story is based on him.

Is the story loosely based on him (fictional content inclusive) or closely based on him (no fictional content)?

Me forming Voldemort right now , he doesn't fit our Paul's portrayal


#Xavier

Blesstar:
You don come o

What I do na!?

Rosemary33:
Here is Paul

To be sincere, I never expected him to look like this. Going with your portrayal of him, I expected him to have a cute look, you know, the good boy kinda look, not one that reeks of intimidating or masculinity aura


#Xavier

Rosemary33:
See ehn, erotic scenes are one hell of a difficult scene to write and I wasn't expecting so much but mehn, you wowed me .

Swears, add horror and action to the list

What?

The initial plan shock you bah. Don't blame a nigga for wanting more of James and Chioma

Dude, this is good.

Thanks so much. Coming from you means a lot.

Hope you don't mind a little something (not as much as 5k )

No tell me say this woman take this thing serious .
I'm gladden by your generosity but I will have to say no. See it as my tiny tweeny contribution to the story


#Xavier

Blesstar:
You never can tell...

Shey you dey whine me ni

Blesstar:
Yes o
Come and write epilogue o

And pls make it juicy and steamy

Why do I have this feeling that you know me from somewhere

My initial plan for the epilogue was to recreate the party scene at the beginning of the story with the intention of setting the ground for a sequel.

The event would have taken place at the 10th marriage anniversary of James and Chioma when a charismatic and sultry lady from James' past will come into the scene, sending shock and tension to James and Chioma respectively.

But this was the compromise after the cerebral Rosemary33 said she wanted a happy ending. It's her story, everything must be in line with her plans for it, that was why I asked about her epilogue ideas. So here you have it.

Rosemary33, that's 2500 words, I charge #2 per words. So elele, my 5K

When this beautiful story started, I never thought I will end it, but all thanks to Rosemary33, that's the reality, and I'm grateful for that privilege.

For followers of Xav-Verse, we continue next year, had to use this year to write the stories. They're ready now

Xavier out


#Xavier

EPILOGUE



With their lips locked with each other in a sensual, sizzling kiss, James' fingers stroked Chioma's pussy. She's sitted at the edge of the bed, her lacy black stockings adorned legs kept apart, her hands placed backwards on the bed while she tilted her frame slightly backwards. On and on, the dexterous fingers of James glided on the surface of her vagina and clitoris creating sweet sensations which spread across her body. In response, she moaned, moaned on his lips as they kissed sloppily. Her lips were a source of euphoria to him, so soft, so wet, so fleshy, so ecstatic. Gosh! His desire for it... her lips hasn't diminished this five years of being married, not a quantum of it, rather it has augmented, augmented in direct proportionality to the addition of seconds to space-time. Aside that, the oral treat she gave his lips were mind blowing, the absolute testament to her adeptness. They stirred and increased the fire, fire of passion for her in him.

They let out moans of pleasure, their lips passionately gliding against each other. The way she rocked her nectareous lips against his, sucking and tickling his tongue with hers, tremendously showed her passion and hunger to be bleeped and pleasured by him. The feeling was mutual, it has always been. On and on, they kissed. On and on, he stroked her pussy and clitoris. On and on, the room absorbed their moans.

Moving from her lips, he journeyed downwards on her body, kissing and lapping her bare skin eventually arriving at her boobs. The sight of it was electrifying, they were so firm, thick and full. He gave a tongue swipe at her hardened nipple simultaneously sliding two fingers into her steamy pussy. Chioma let out a pleasure squeal at his acts. Her pussy welcomed his fingers into its moist, warm and soft haven. Back and forth, he thrusted and stroked her pussy, his thumb rubbing her clitoris. Sensually and passionately feasting on her boobs and nipples, the intensity of his finger action on her pussy augmented. With ferocity, he finger fvcked her causing Chioma to growl with so much might. On and on, with sensuality and dexterity, he boob feasted and finger fvcked her pussy, his thumb stroking her clitoris.

James lapped and twirled his tongue on her nipple while his fingers slithered in and out of her creamy pussy. Chioma shut her eyes, squirmed and moaned, relishing the sweetness that overwhelmed her. He was good, scratch that, he was exceedingly amazing. God! The feeling of her massive boobs and firm, hardened nipples in his mouth was the experience, the euphoric experience. On and on, he sucked and fingered, taking her to the threshold of orgasm but preventing her from going in. He kept her at the edge, dishing out the perfect blend of pleasure and torment to her. Chioma squirmed and moaned passionately, begging to be relieved from her ecstatic torture.

Finding himself at her pussy, he took a moment to admire the juicy organ before him. It was so enthralling, its thick, swollen and beautiful frame, to its wet and fleshy view, and its musky fragrance, were sensational, they were absolutely sheen, the literal definition of glorious, and thank goodness, it's his for the ravaging, it has always been for five blissful years of marriage, and it will always be. Her shifted g-string added to her sultriness. Parting her pussy with his hands, he glided his tongue deeply on her exposed pussy surface, terminating at her clitoris which he gave brief sensual tongue stroke to. Chioma shivered and groaned. Taking his time, he ran his lips on her racy thighs decked with a luscious, lacy black stockings, kissing, sucking and lapping. He took his time to relish the sweetness of her thick, luscious thighs. This woman, his Chioma, is the goddess of sultriness.

Groping her racy hips, he buried his face in between her gorgeous thighs, flicking and stroking her pussy with his tongue. Relentlessly, effortlessly, he sucked and feasted, relishing the electrifying feeling her alluring musky, juicy pussy gave to him, it was raw hedonism. Her pussy, its musky taste and fragrance, its fleshy, thick and sloppy sensations on his tongue, was electrifying. He grunted in pleasure, his tongue making a slurpy sound as he sucked and ate her pussy with immense passion and intensity. Occasionally, he tickled and lapped her clitoris with his tongue. Groping his hair, with her eyes shut, Chioma squirmed and moaned with so much delight.

Knowing she's about to hit orgasm, he increased the momentum of his oral action. With ferocity, dexterity and sensuality, he sucked, feasted and tongue stroked her pussy and clitoris, eventually ushering her into the blissful atmosphere of orgasm. Agape growled, squealed and twirled as her body submitted to the domineering power of orgasm which swept through her like a tsunami leaving in its path, enormous pleasurable sensations.

With her lying on the bed with her stockings adorned legs spread apart, he vertically positioned in between her legs on his knees. Holding his dick, he ran it on the the slickly surface of her vagina causing them to moan at the sweet feeling it created in them. Such act filled him enormously with the urge, the rush to be buried in her. James shut his eyes and bit his lips, relishing the slickly euphoric feeling of his rigid shaft gliding against her moist labia. On and on, he tickled her pussy and clitoris with his dick.
Moving his waist, he slowing ushered his dick into her electrifying, juicy vagina. They, especially James, moaned deeply as his dick slowly filled her. Biting his lips, he relished the sweetness of her pleasure hole as it enveloped his dick. Slowly and sensually, he thrusted and twirled his dick in her juicy pussy, basking in the euphoria of it. On and on, he fvcked, picking up pace. They moaned in pleasure. Resting her stockings adorned enthralling legs on his arms, he fvcked with profuse passion and energy, occasionally twirling his dick. He took in the erotic view of her lusciously bouncing boobs, pleasure filled face, shifted g-string and squirming body. The sight of his dick slithering in and out of her pussy was glorious. On and on, he fvcked, leading them, especially her, back and forth their orgasm. The sight of her shifted g-string was fiery. He refused pulling it off, he loves the erotic view it gave and intensified. Fvcking his sexy wife with such added sexiness was thrilling, it was a beautiful fetish.

Bending towards her with her legs on his shoulders, he engaged her lips in a deep kiss. God! Such position gave him deeper access in her tight pussy, the feeling was amazing. To show his appreciation, he fvcked her hard, deep and good. Relentlessly and enormously, his dick deeply thrusted and twirled in and out of her sloppy hole. Moving his lips to her firm, round boobs, he sucked with immense pleasure and dexterity, his dick not relenting in gracing her titillating canal with its hardness and passion. She held tightly to him, their pleasure grunts and moans filled the atmosphere of the room. Chioma's moans increased in intensity and irregularity, a sign of her upcoming orgasm. In response, he fvcked harder and deeper, leading her ecstatically into her orgasm, but at the brink of it, he pulled out causing her to groan deeply in displeasure and torment. In response, James gave a naughty smirk. What's the fun in not being beautifully tortured.

"Ahhh... yes... James... baby... fvck me... fvck me hard... fvck me good... fvck me deep... yes, like that... God! How I love your dick... give it to me... give it to my pussy so good... James, darling pound that pussy so hard, it's all yours. Yes... ahhh... ahhhh... ahhhhh..." She moaned with passion and energy, his dick swimming skillfully, hard and good in her titillating pussy as her beautifully sculptured ass graced his groin in doggy. She gripped the bed sheet and moaned passionately into it. On and on, he fvcked harder and deeper, driving his hard, thick dick to the very edge of her pussy. In and out, round and round. In and out, round and round. In and out, round and round, his dick graced her pussy with dexterity, intensity and pleasure. James visually feasted on her sultry jiggling ass cheeks, moaning and basking in the sweetness of her tight, wet, fleshy, juicy canal, likewise the feeling of her jiggling ass cheeks against his groin. This was amazing, it was ecstatic.

"Babyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!..." Chioma screamed loudly, increasing her grip on the bed, her body quaking enormously as her orgasm rocked her body. Her pussy opened its heaven's gate, letting her squirt gush out immensely, soiling his dick and groin. The experience was raw euphoria.

"Chi darlingggggggg!!!..." Simultaneously, James growled lowly but intensely as his orgasm washed over him. He spilled massively into her as her squirt graced his dick and groin. This was heavenly. He collapsed on her who collapsed on the bed as they both gasped for breath, relishing the beautiful feeling of their just concluded orgasm.

"The nectareous effect you have on me is unexplainable, mind blowing. I can't stop desiring you. A thousand of you isn't enough for me," James purred, nozzling and kissing her afterwards. In reaction, Chioma squirmed and giggled, her hand stroking his hair.

"The euphoria feeling is mutual dear. It is. Every moment with you is raw bliss," Chioma replied and adjusted her frame to contain his weight on her. Still stroking his hair, and with a light tone, she said, "I love you James."

"I love you too, my Chi," James reciprocated and led them into a gentle, passionate post coital kiss.

Can a anything good come from Nazareth? That is a popular question ever since the historical and Biblical Nathanael first asked it. Can anything good come out of Nazareth? A very simple question but with a lot of severity in its answer. Can anything good come out of Nazareth? That has been one thought that has dominated Chioma's mind and of course life. It all started over nine years ago when the villain of the story, her story, James, popped into the scene with one intention of desecrating her marital bed. Of course as a committed wife, she would be damn if she ever allowed it. Yes, there were times she was at the brink of yielding, but she always had a way of shifting off the edge. To her, her marriage and home was worth the commitment, protection and honour. She definitely was in cloud nine at the awareness of her committment to her marital vow.

Don't believe everything you think, that statement was more than true in her life. Her perfect life came crashing and squashing like an over ripe pawpaw fruit falling from its tree onto a rocky surface when she found out her marriage of 20 good solid years was nothing but a fraud, the biggest fraud, in her opinion, in human history. There was an enormous flip in roles, the hero became the villain, and the villain, the hero. Her darling George was the embodiment of fraud, lies, wickedness and murder. Unfortunately she was cut in the cross fire of the whole drama, but fortunately, she got her salvation although not without the emotional ailment that rocked her soul, not excluding her children.

If she ever thought that was where the curtain of her story would be drawn, then she has made a pact with self deceit. One thing led to another that led to another and approximately ten years later, she's married to the alleged villain of her story, James.

For the five years she's married to him, it's been a rollercoaster ride of love, passion and euphoria. At the beginning of her romance, she was apprehensive that her children and parents would object to her romance, but to her surprise they gave their consent and approval of it. She never thought they would be open minded, or was it because of the story surrounding the whole thing? Did they consent because of their empathy for her, because they felt she needed the solace after getting her heart shattered like a broken glass? She couldn't really tell, but be it empathy or liberality, she has her children and parent's support, and of course James'. With her family's support, she gave the critcizing public the middle finger.

Talking about James'children, she never knew he had them, twins to be precise, Alex and Alexa. According to him, after the whole tragedy of their mother's death, he had to keep them off grid for their protection. The kids, according to him, weren't present on the night of their mother's death because they were on vacation with his cousin's --- Janet --- family in the United States. As for his mentally unstable mum, she is still responding to treatment with improvements.

Our past experiences can influence our behavioral pattern. Chioma due to her George experience has been tense and skeptical regarding her marriage and the person of James. What if he turns out to be like George or worse? What if he turns out to be a fraud either now or in the future? This thoughts that sends the fear energy hovering over her coursed through her mind lots of time. But what if he is sincere? She knows his story, does she? She thought she knew George's story but how did things turn out? But hey because George was Darth Vader doesn't mean James is or will be, but what if he turns out to be? Well, what if he continues to be the world's best husband and father? Ponderings like this made her head ache but after times of trying to put uncontrollable circumstances under her control, she finally decided to leave things to the universe to handle. James might end up being Geoge 2.0 or he might continue to be the amazing man, husband and father that he is. But whatever the case maybe, she will just have to relish the euphoria of the present, not minding the past or the future. The past is what has been, the future is what will be, but the present is what is, and breaking news, she lives in the present, so she should glory in it, and that will she do.

In addition to that, James has very well progressed in his Christian journey, a decision he made five years ago before he made his marital proposal known to her. She wondered if it was because of this decision that made him not have sex with her in that room that day, or because he felt guilty which made him not want to take "advantage" of her, or because he was was sincere with his feelings and desire for her in wanting something real, committed and lasting. Whatever the case, he is her husband now, something real, committed and lasting huh, and he has grown in his Christian life, good for her.

So once again, can anything good come out of Nazareth? Yopsy dopsy. At least, Chioma's story is a testament to that, from crisis to bliss.


#Xavier

Rosemary33:
who wants to get creative? Can anyone here write the epilogue for us? I would like to read someone write the epilogue of this story

I think I'm interested. So what's your idea for the epilogue so that I can write in line with it. You know everything have to be in line with the story plan.

Beautiful, beautiful and beautiful story dear, so impeccable

#Xavier

Blesstar:
That'll be fun sha
Where's Xavier5 ? come o

Me sha will be waiting in the reader's club

Present ma, anything for the boys?

queenemelda:
I totally get you. However, in my opinion, Chioma is a soft daddy's girl, she can't go through this alone. She'll need James' help. Besides, all that attraction between them can't just go to waste.

Lol

She doesn't need James. She has her children and family for emotional support, and even if she's to need James, it will be on platonic grounds. Whatever feelings that exist or that we think exist will and should wait for later.

You don't jump into a relationship immediately after an emotionally tragic relationship. Such move doesn't always end well --- super high probability. She should take her time to heal first before she thinks of going into any relationship, and of course with no other than James


#Xavier

In as much as I'm team Chioma and James (don't blame me, I'm fluid in nature. I easily switch sides ), Chioma better remain single for now ohhh. She's emotional unstable, and aside that, it's too soon. Make she better padlock that feelings.

Nice chapter Rosemary33


#Xavier

Rosemary33:
While we are here, please let us know that this is a raw draft. As usual, every chapter of this story was written the day it was posted.

And you know how first drafts are– always raw and full of holes. So if and when I will decide to professionally publish this work, it will come out rewritten, polished, and oiled.

Please, if you are posting this story on another platform or website (I don't want this to happen, but I know humans will be humans) Please give me the credit as this is my brainchild. It takes a lot to write an original story. And bearing in mind that I will publish this work someday, don't take my glory.

For movie directors and producers, please don't see this work as your movie script and take the glory. I have seen one of my works "His neighbor's wife," on ROK TV (In fact it was my sister who even called my attention to it.) and That story is about to be officially published this December as "Akwaugo"

Can you imagine! This is sorry and tragic, I hope you were able to sort it out with them.

This is exactly why I was telling my fellow writers in my WhatsApp writer's group to make sure they copyright their books/ stories before they upload or release it/ them on any platform, be it Amazon or Nairaland or whatever.

And the goodnews is, writers don't need to pay to do it. The Bearne Convention Treaty, which Nigeria is a part of, ensures that. All a writer needs to do is just create a copyright page/ part in his book/ story and save it properly --- advisable to a cloud --- for evidence purpose incase of issues like this or to prevent issues like this.

It is advisable you create a copyright part at the beginning of this story to avoid stories like this. The issue of intellectual property theft is fvcking gory.

I knew I haven't shared the emitted script with anyone but the raw is on Nairaland. Please don't deprive an author of the opportunity to make money with his or her work.

If you love a story, contact the author and strike a deal.

I haven't been around that's why I haven't been active but I'm thrilled at the twist of things. You proved my theory wrong and I like that.

I also like how you cleared up the loopholes like the concept of Fola murdering her own husband that she loves or claims she loves, Fola's statement of Chioma being lucky to have George, and others. It shows how adept, attentive and strategic you are as a writer, that's beautiful.

All i can say is you're a copacetic writer and this story, Impeccable.


#Xavier

Rosemary33:
Absolutely beautiful and excellent story you have here Dr or soon to be Dr Rosemary33. More Pentecost experience to your writing. But abeg, when Line In Between go return from vacation nah?



#Xavier Okie, I like you, really

Rosemary33:
Nice one, you are simply amazing

jullyrosy:
You and long note 5 and 6

All na cruise, and e deh sweet ehhhhh

I'm surprised that some people now thinks George is the bad guy, not James. Dearies, James is the bad guy. What you're just seeing is James being a good gamer, and Rosemary33 dancing buga with your heads --- it's typical of writers, I do it a lot.

If James isn't the bad guy

* Why wasn't he interested in exposing George from the beginning? Why was he interested in seducing Chioma, and stalking her on Social Media.

* Why is the whole casting doubt thing coming after the failure of his seduction and stalking?

* Explain the "Ride or Die" call with Fola's pic on James phone.

* If George was the one that made the call, explain how George wasn't fiddling with his phone when that call popped up on James phones? Also, explain Fola's pix.

* Explain why Fola will tell chioma to;

--- tell Oliver to stop, a pointer that she knows James is in Chioma's life.
--- save herself all thanks to her being in the web.

* Explain what the Nissan Altima that picked up Fola was doing in James' office.

* Explain the "bleep" exclamation from James after the "ride or die" revelation from Chioma.

* Explain James' anger and demand for Chioma to leave his office, the same lady he has been dying to see?

* Explain James' subtle threat to Chioma to back off Fola's case.

* But what if George sexed, raped and killed James' wife, and dropped the "ride or die" message on the scene which had made James to return for revenge with the intention of doing same to George's wife?

Good angle, but if that's the case, explain the "ride or die" call with Fola's pix on James'phone. Shouldn't that be on George's phone? Also, explain George anger, "bleep" statement, and subtle threat to Chioma, after her revelation.

* This story is told from Chioma's perspective, and from the looks of things, it's Chioma recounting her experience, and this recounting of hers started with James being LECHEROUS. That's a pointer.

James is the fvcking bad guy, Rosemary33 is just being a good writer with her twist, but also, in being a good writer, she has dropped Easter eggs or teasers... pointers to the villain of the story.

James is attempting to cast doubt on Chioma's mind because his seduction failed. His plan was simply, seduce, if that fails, stalk, and since that failed, next is cast doubt on her mind about her husband, and if that fails, he will utilize threats.

As a matter of fact, from the story so far, James is playing the doubt game on both George and Chioma. He is casting doubt on George about the infidelity of Chioma, and to Chioma, the character of George. And of course, if he is casting doubts on their minds, definitely, he will plant the evidence.
The aim is simply to create problems between the couple in other to leave Chioma vulnerable to his ambition.

In other to properly nail James, Chioma should show or send a picture of James to Fola for confirmation. If yes, which it is or will be, she should walk up something from there especially since she's involve. But if no, she should manipulate Fola into getting the info since she's also involve, all thanks to Fola's statement/ warning.

I suspect that James killed his wife because,

* He caught her cheating, which made him angry, driving him into commiting such abomination. The "ride or die" message on the crime scene was to pass the message that his wife is his and his alone and not another.
The awareness, hurt and anger must have pushed him into developing an obsession for married women. If they fvcked his wife, he has to fvck other people's wife

Or

* He had the fetish of dating and marrying women, either single or married, whom he subjects to enormous sexual and abusive practice, as he is doing with Fola. This sexual and abusive practices eventually leads to the death of the women which affirms the "ride or die" message.

It's difficult for writers and filmmakers to take me unawares. Only few of them have been able to do so, this is because as a writer, I read and see films from a writer's perspective. So let's see if Rosemary33 can take me unawares, but what are the odds?

Absolutely beautiful and excellent story you have here Dr or soon to be Dr Rosemary33. More Pentecost experience to your writing. But abeg, when Line In Between go return from vacation nah?



#Xavier