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Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Cuddlemii: 7:43pm On Sep 17, 2012
octus2008: Hi cuddlemii

Hello Octus2008!
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by iammodel(m): 7:51pm On Sep 17, 2012
I wrote this for my girl last night. I changed the name here.

Mimi!
What is it about the name
That rings so much a bell?
Is it just the name
Or the personality of the owner?

Mimi!
She's the prettiest of pretties
She's sweet like nectar
Peaceful like dove
Pure like unicorn

Mimi!
Powerful like polar bear
Charming like peacock
Strong like elephant
Very tender & irresistible in charisma

Mimi!
When she walks
She's like a flamboyant super-model
Elegantly & confidently priding the runway
Making her spectator's head swirl in response to her aura of gentility
Like trees
Bowing to the calmness of the breeze

Mimi!
Her voice can instantaneously make the most gallantly bravest of soldiers
On a rage drop his weapons
And enchant an angry mob to peace

Mimi!
The passion in her eyes
Can melt an ice
And make fire rise
She's the pride of every woman
The desire of every man

Mimi!
Her type unmatched
Flaws unmarked
The type that i want
The only one that i want
The best that i ever want
No other but, Mimi.

N.B: CORRECTIONS ARE WELCOME
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Cuddlemii: 7:53pm On Sep 17, 2012
sigmundfreud:
'Figure it out yourself'...James Hadley Chase.
ow r u today?
Can i see something u ve written....pleaaassee?

Lolz, I have only hand written sturvs, I will have to convert them to softcopy

On nl, I have only experimented and not really written. I was so into romance then that i goofed arnd a lot.

Most of the things I wrote were just for fun/jokes/matchmaking

I will scout for them later
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Cuddlemii: 8:05pm On Sep 17, 2012
i_am_model: I wrote this for my girl last night. I changed the name here.

Mimi!
What is it about the name
That rings so much a bell?
Is it just the name
Or the personality of the owner?

Mimi!
She's the prettiest of pretties
She's sweet like nectar
Peaceful like dove
Pure like unicorn

Mimi!
Powerful like polar bear
Charming like peacock
Strong like elephant
Very tender & irresistible in charisma

Mimi!
When she walks
She's like a flamboyant super-model
Elegantly & confidently priding the runway
Making her spectator's head swirl in response to her aura of gentility
Like trees
Bowing to the calmness of the breeze

Mimi!
Her voice can instantaneously make the most gallantly bravest of soldiers
On a rage drop his weapons
And enchant an angry mob to peace

Mimi!
The passion in her eyes
Can melt an ice
And make fire rise
She's the pride of every woman
The desire of every man

Mimi!
Her type unmatched
Flaws unmarked
The type that i want
The only one that i want
The best that i ever want
No other but, Mimi.

N.B: CORRECTIONS ARE WELCOME

Was expecting you to express something deep about your girlfriend
Is her physical attribute the only thing that trips you about her?
You can do better describing a lady you love.
It's still a good poem though, GOOD JOB!!!
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by iammodel(m): 8:27pm On Sep 17, 2012
Cuddlemii:

Was expecting you to express something deep about your girlfriend
Is her physical attribute the only thing that trips you about her?
You can do better describing a lady you love.
It's still a good poem though, GOOD JOB!!!

Noted. Thanks!
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by sigmundfreud(m): 8:38pm On Sep 17, 2012
Cuddlemii:

Lolz, I have only hand written sturvs, I will have to convert them to softcopy

On nl, I have only experimented and not really written. I was so into romance then that i goofed arnd a lot.

Most of the things I wrote were just for fun/jokes/matchmaking

I will scout for them later
i love the 'do u believe in love' and 'the unpleasant goodbyes'. Wanted to go thru them again and discovered they ve been hidden.
Reading someone's poem is like aving extra access into their person. I used to be scared of what i was writing then. Its was mainly on death and love then...until i kinda evolved and could write almost anything i want.
thanks for sharing...
next level...i share one, u share one? Then u can ask me the thots behind it and critique it too. Now...thats a lot.
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Cuddlemii: 8:56pm On Sep 17, 2012
sigmundfreud:
i love the 'do u believe in love' and 'the unpleasant goodbyes'. Wanted to go thru them again and discovered they ve been hidden.
Reading someone's poem is like aving extra access into their person. I used to be scared of what i was writing then. Its was mainly on death and love then...until i kinda evolved and could write almost anything i want.
thanks for sharing...
next level...i share one, u share one? Then u can ask me the thots behind it and critique it too. Now...thats a lot.

i dnt have poems on nl but i will love to read urs.
i will keep scouting to see if i find some to trade.
i have promised to write before d year runs out, i am just busy!
so lets see more poems smiley
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by HumbledbYGrace(f): 9:41pm On Sep 17, 2012
Cuddles wa Nkele

How r u doing everyone?Silkmoth33? Wr u @ Brother?err Sigmo...ur name is so hard to spell.missed ya'll

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Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 11:03pm On Sep 17, 2012
I woke with something shiny in my eyes,
just like fire it burnt to the touch.
But it was so tiny, and non-motile, if only it could reduce or increase 2 heat up my pot.
Confused and bewildered at this i opted to ask my mommy: "Mama, mama, what is this?", I said

Totally ignoring me bereft of this thing's nature i resort ignorantly 2 wat boys normally do: escort mom deceitfully out first, then play with the toy.

Drunk with curiosity, locked the doors: i tried to heat it up with a hand-fan, then tried heating my pot on a tripod on it.

What kind of light emanated from this thing, though not as dull as fire or her cousin lightening.
The Burn sensation,feels like warm sun.

Then the light stopped, it was as though my world went with it. I cried bitterly knowing my one treasure was gone...I organised an obituary for the round creature i later christened to be obito

That i later figured out to be called THE LIGHT BULB.
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 11:06pm On Sep 17, 2012
smiley i'm present ma, plz mark attendance.
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 11:10pm On Sep 17, 2012
HumbledbYGrace: Cuddles wa Nkele

How r u doing everyone?Silkmoth33? Wr u @ Brother?err Sigmo...ur name is so hard to spell.missed ya'll
miss johannah did you miss me. God i'm dumbfounded. smiley how are you doing?
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 11:42pm On Sep 17, 2012
My diamonds, crude, yet precious. Nothing will set us apart including food and delicious confectionaries.

My diamonds, brilliant and transparent. No one will i share you with, not even grant nor my parents.

My diamonds, so shiny and glittery. There's no occasion i won't wear you to, including that iv to visit chile's military.

My diamonds, there's no day i won't cuddle you in my arms or polish you more often; you don't believe me, ask cuddlemii.

My diamonds lovely diamonds there ain't noday that i won't humbly sing gracious songs to you; if you don't concur go and ask humbledbygrace

diamonds diamonds diamonds i'll right aristocratic theories about thee; one worthy of emulation by the great sigmund freud.
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 12:00am On Sep 18, 2012
God i slept off.
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by HumbledbYGrace(f): 5:53am On Sep 18, 2012
Silkmoth33:
miss johannah did you miss me. God i'm dumbfounded. smiley how are you doing?
Morning Johannah Man.

I dropped by lastnight but I couldn't find u
Where were you?Who were you with And what were
You doing?
I came to your house but you were not there
Knocked but only hurt my fingers!

I dropped by to say hello
I missed u through out the day
I stopped by because you mean the world to me
But I guess its one sided love affair

I dropped by only to realise that love is Insanity
The accient Greeks knew that
It is taking over of a rational lucid mind
By delusion and self distruction Iam lost in you
I can't even think straight
I dropped by to say good morning!
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 6:44am On Sep 18, 2012
HumbledbYGrace: Morning Johannah Man.

I dropped by lastnight but I couldn't find u
Where were you? I was right here

Who were you with And what were
You doing with them?
No one, if you think off me as an i*nfidel, i pray time tells my innocency.

I came to your house but you were not there
Knocked but only hurt my fingers!
Oh those poor fingers, hope you didn't break a nail. Here let me kiss them to make them feel better.smiley

I dropped by to say hello, god knows i waited 4 ur return

I missed u through out the day, god knows i cried because you were not here

I stopped by because you mean the world to me, and nevertheless, you to me

But I guess its a one sided love affair.
Don't say that, it is a mutual commitment that i admit i rarely show, but i can change you never can tell and you never know when.

I dropped by only to realise that love is Insanity, it can be made to comply.

The accient Greeks knew that
It is taking over of a rational lucid mind
By delusion and self destruction Iam lost in you
I can't even think straight neither can i miss johannah
I dropped by to say good morning! And so did i
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by HumbledbYGrace(f): 8:52am On Sep 18, 2012
SilkMoth33+HumbledbYGrace= ?

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Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 8:53am On Sep 18, 2012
HumbledbYGrace: SilkMoth33+HumbledbYGrace= k*issing on a treesmiley
lol!
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 10:33am On Sep 18, 2012
If i was prince charming you would be my barbie princess decorated with priceless ornaments that enchant my world. You would be my queen of sheba my one beloved.

If we were chinese, oh what joy it would bring to pull you on my human chariot bare-footed across the seven seas munching carrots that grow from rice plants commercially used to make teas, commonly called ginseng.

If i was samson you would have been my delilah, feeding me with berries until i para and thou fate decides i perish at your feet; we'll still meet in valhalla

if wishes were horses beggars could ride. I would give my all so you could ride cos in this world there's nothing more precious than my ravishing bride? smiley
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by HumbledbYGrace(f): 11:33pm On Sep 18, 2012
Silkmoth33: If i was prince charming you would be my barbie princess decorated with priceless ornaments that enchant my world. You would be my queen of sheba my one beloved.

If we were chinese, oh what joy it would bring to pull you on my human chariot bare-footed across the seven seas munching carrots that grow from rice plants commercially used to make teas, commonly called ginseng.

If i was samson you would have been my delilah, feeding me with berries until i para and thou fate decides i perish at your feet; we'll still meet in valhalla

if wishes were horses beggars could ride. I would give my all so you could ride cos in this world there's nothing more precious than my ravishing bride? smiley
She spoilt my night
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by sigmundfreud(m): 4:10am On Sep 19, 2012
HumbledbYGrace: She spoilt my night
lol...*singing* 'we dont stand a chance, in this wild romance..'
She or He?
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by sigmundfreud(m): 4:20am On Sep 19, 2012
Cuddlemii:

i dnt have poems on nl but i will love to read urs.
i will keep scouting to see if i find some to trade.
i have promised to write before d year runs out, i am just busy!
so lets see more poems smiley
Okay.
Will send one soonest.
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 6:46am On Sep 19, 2012
HumbledbYGrace: She spoilt my night
hey what's wrong? Who spoilt your night?
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:38am On Sep 19, 2012
Silkmoth33: hey what's wrong? Who spoilt your night?
y ddnt u reply my pesrsonal message?
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:41am On Sep 19, 2012
Silkmoth33: If i was prince charming you would be my barbie princess decorated with priceless ornaments that enchant my world. You would be my queen of sheba my one beloved.

If we were chinese, oh what joy it would bring to pull you on my human chariot bare-footed across the seven seas munching carrots that grow from rice plants commercially used to make teas, commonly called ginseng.

If i was samson you would have been my delilah, feeding me with berries until i para and thou fate decides i perish at your feet; we'll still meet in valhalla

if wishes were horses beggars could ride. I would give my all so you could ride cos in this world there's nothing more precious than my ravishing bride? smiley
I'll think bwt it
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by HumbledbYGrace(f): 7:44am On Sep 19, 2012
sigmundfreud:
lol...*singing* 'we dont stand a chance, in this wild romance..'
She or He?
Its not WILD romance,how can 2 people,one up there in west africa be jolling with someone down here in south Africa
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 8:40am On Sep 19, 2012
HumbledbYGrace: y ddnt u reply my pesrsonal message?
i just did! Have you received it yet?
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 10:47am On Sep 19, 2012
HumbledbYGrace: Its not WILD romance,how can 2 people,one up there in west africa be jolling with someone down here in south Africa


never say never. smiley i could come visit sometime soon.
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 10:50am On Sep 19, 2012
And maybe you could teach me some afrikaan slangs. smiley
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by HumbledbYGrace(f): 12:13pm On Sep 19, 2012
Silkmoth33:
never say never. smiley i could come visit sometime soon.
Ýea right unfortunately Iam not An AFRIKAANER iam a Mosotho.
Re: Literature/Writing Section's "Chat Central!" by Nobody: 12:33pm On Sep 19, 2012
Wow! Isn't this grand, i'm in love with a mosotho-tribe-speaking individual who happens to be a partial nun and has other attributes that i've never seen before of in my entire life. :-)

tell me how did you do it? I mean: make me love you? smiley

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